First Street Article Approved!!

Last Update: August 10, 2013

I'm very excited that my first street article was approved!! I have not had success with my website and I think it may be because I didn't chose a topic that I am most passionate about. I wrote my street article about parenthood and learning to let go and I believe that is my true passion. I love being a mom more than anything else in the world and I'm thinking about building a new parenting website.

This is my very first article and I would appreciate your comments and any advice on how I could improve my writing style or ideas for any additional parenting articles.

http://www.streetarticles.com/parenting/parenthood-building-strong-bonds-and-learning-to-let-go

Thanks in advance for your help!

Carol

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cena1975 Premium
Great..! Congrats..! Your 1st step towards success. :)
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cm8719 Premium
Thank you!
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jwgman Premium
Very nice! Well done, Carol!
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cm8719 Premium
Thank you
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GregRobs Premium
Hey Carol, that's an excellent first article, getting approval from street article's is always a good sign!
I think your idea for a new parenting website is a great idea as you seem to exude passion in that field!

A couple of article suggestions:

How do I bond with my child
Being your childs best friend
Bonding with your child at a young age

I haven't researched these keywords but I'm sure these will give you some ideas once you've put them through the keyword tool!

To your success

Greg
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cm8719 Premium
Thanks so much for the suggestions, I really appreciate it!!
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coolcity Premium
It's a great article in its own right without a doubt. My only reservation would be that the ultimate aim is to monetize your website and perhaps it's my inexperience showing but I'm not sure how easy it would be to do that using that article in comparison with, say, a product review where people would read that review then click a link to buy the product.
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choppydo Premium
I suggest going through the bootcamp. Talking about internet marketing both helps us learn better but I have found that it has a HUGE market. Literally room for everyone.

I left you a comment, I`m Chip.

Anyways ya I suggest sticking with this and also doing a bootcamp website. You`ll learn faster and have more earning potential down the road.
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cm8719 Premium
Thanks for the suggestions!
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AnnieB Premium
Congrats Carol. Just read it. I know how you feel. I just got my first one approved a couple of days ago.
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cm8719 Premium
Congrats to you too!
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