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Hi Megan, Very good post and a great idea for a much needed site. My only suggestions to you would be to read your posts out loud. By doing so, you will discover any missed words or grammar issues. You will also notice sentences that are too long.

My final suggestion would be to break your paragraphs up a little more. Look at a couple of my recent blogs and you will see what I mean. Unlike regular writing, like I am doing now, a blog post has to be where people can skim or glance over your content. Many times you only have a few seconds to catch and hold their attention. Breaking up the reading helps with this. Let me know what you think. Dave.

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