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Last Update: February 25, 2014

here is a little content that i just came up with; check it out and let me know what you think. http://dubbedduke.siterubix.com/building-trust

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Charkeya Premium
nice site great content, keep up the good work.
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bodie1 Premium
thank you charkeya.
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bodie1 Premium
thanks fred.
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Starcreator Premium
Good start with your page. Check your grammar and read it out loud. This helps when your editing your articles, to see if you got your points across in the right way.
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bodie1 Premium
thank you, i will do this.
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yancbren Premium
Looking good I agree with Fred. Add some pictures to your site, and break up the paragraphs with Headings. Hope this helps.
Brenda
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bodie1 Premium
im sure what you mean by break up the paragraphs with headings? could you fill me in.
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Fred Chong Premium
Hi LaMarr, A good start...after reading your page, i'd suggest you need to tell and show your visitors what you can do for them - more on "you" than on "I". You can sum it up at the About-me page. Then if you follow the Get Started lesson, you will be taught to prepare a few pages before you put in your Theme/Topic pages relating to your niche. Just my thoughts and best wishes.
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bodie1 Premium
thank you Fred.
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