Lesson Accomplished - First Review on Wealthy Affiliate Done.
I've made it this far. I'm so excited about my progress. I know that it isn't perfect but I'm moving forward which is good. If anyone could give me an honest opinion on what I did I would really appreciate. Don't be gentle, be like Simon Cowell. I really want to become good at this. I might think that what I did is pretty good but it might not be so I will take every critic and apply what I will learn from you. Here is the link.
http://thepowerofgiving.siteru...
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I feel like your article was very well written. Especially for it being your first post and a new member with WA. Now, If I were to put my Simon Cowell thinking hat on. I only can see two suggestions, One for now, and the other to be done in January of 2018.
The inner links that you have in your content of the article which goes to your WA affiliate link are taking your reader off your page. I suggest you have it open a new link in a different window. You want to keep your visitor on your page.
Just a thought for the beginning of 2018, Remember to go back to that article and do a slight edit changing 2017 to the new current year. Possibly making small changes to keep it current for 2018.
Overall, great job! I was wanting to really criticize your article since you asked for constructive feedback. However, that is all I suggest.
Thank you so much for taking the time to check it out. I appreciate what you have said. I'm happy to know I'm on the right track.
I have just posted my first blog post today. Maybe you can tell me what you think about it. I'm really not sure of it. I feel the direction I took with this article is sketchy, What do you think.
http://themostpreciousgift.com/what-is-the-best-gifts-to-give-for-christmas-offer-the-most-precious-of-all
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Blue Mike, what an awesome article, I found it intriguing from the start, you probably touched
The heart of many. I myself having an entrepreneurial spirit, over the
years applied myself diligently to many opportunities, not until this past year did entertain the
Thought of online business opportunities, i found some that did the bait and switch, (get going for 100,then after the 2weeks of training, oh you need 2500 to continue) yes that was a shocker. There are a few that I checked on, and am still working with that are quality businesses, But None and I mean NONE, can measure up to W/A, the training is unbelievable
from building websites, seo, the training just never ends. Mike it was a, excellent job article.
You should be proud. Pat
Thank you so much for writing to me Pat. You're words made me very happy. I'm really looking forward to getting to know you as I move through this system.