Another first new article by a WA member has been approved on Street Article! :)
Hi everyone! My first article has been approved! I just became a member here about one month ago. Please, take a look at my article and give me some suggestions. I feel excited. But I still need a lot of work to do. I have my own website now. But still not getting traffic.
I am just a beginner here. I also need your suggestions and opinions on my website. And I thank to all of you guys. You guys are so helpful. If I want to know something, I can just type in the search box and look at it. You are awesome!
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Hi. Well done for getting your site up and running. I would change your blog roll over to your home page. I think you home page is a little bland and it would be interesting to be able to see at a glance your updated blogs.
If you're using images then you need to add a caption - otherwise there's no point in them being there. It's a missed opportunity to grab someone's attention. Most people look at headlines, images, captions, subheadings before they bother to read anything else.
Where you have images on the left - eg make your body stronger at home - move them to the right. It breaks up the text.
I don't think you're making enough use of subheadings and bullet points to break up some of your text and make it easy for people to skim read.
You need to go through and edit some of your pages - they have a few odd sentences that are difficult to read.
Just give it time. You have a nice site and you will get more visitors. Just keep adding content.
Beverley
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The article is good. I opened up a pinterest account to pin my articles and web posts to. Hey, it will get to more eyes who might click to your article and website. I don't like the info links. I took them off my sites because they are distracting to the viewer. It wasn't worth the pennies they pay out. Otherwise, good start and keep plugging away. Good luck!
Thanks! Yes. I have been thinking like that about info links. But I still don't know how to remove them. I will figure it out.