This is what we are going with:)

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Thanks everyone who gave me some input. We have scrubbed it out and cleaned it up and made it as clear as we can do it. This is going live soon on the site!

You guys rock!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w753rXyu4bE

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I didn't see the first version but I'm really impressed with your vid. It held my interest from start to finish and the content, images, and audio is all very targeted. I'm sure it will generate some great leads/sales!

Thanks .. its my first venture into the video world. Its a funnel to the self-assessment that funnels to a call to action. Trying to copy some other sites out there. Im hoping for the best.

I think it looks good and Becky's voice is easy to listen to. Congrats

Thank you my dear:)

Great Job, Wayne! (and Becky :) I could hear the speaker fine now. Her voice was soothing and she didn't fumble once...Kudo's Becky! The music was great in the background...images on pages are spot on....content on pages and voiceover very well written. You should be very proud of yourself. Oh...and I like the title change..LOL....Super!!! Now you know how to do it!

Thank you my dear, still learning and have a bunch of revisions to do, but it depends on conversions. If it isnt broke Im not gonna fix it, but wont see for another few weeks:)

Looks much better. I still don't see that URL on the last page.

Thats coming .. still have to get the Self-assessment done and another video, then figure how the plugins will work together.

What Renni Said!

I think its a great start! Nicely done

Its a start .. and thank you:)

Looks good.

Thanks bro

Nice job! You should be getting traffic and sales very soon! Do not give up! Remember, you are trying to make a great first impression with your visitors. As you do this, you will get traffic and sales.

Thanks George .. working on the Self-assessment and RX video now, then its a matter of some SEO and a BUNCH of article writing lol

The revisions you made were great. It will attract traffic and clients for you.

Thanks! We will be shooting a little higher with the next one, but I think this is a good start holes and all!!

Wayne

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