Writing an Article, Take 2
Ok so i took what everyone said into view and tried to rewrite my WA review as though i was just chatting. Would like feedback on if its good or what else i could do to improve it. I'm just trying to get my around this so i can succeed. thanks for all the help everyone. http://2lazy-2quit.siterubix.com/wealthy-affililiate-the-begining-of-my-dream
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A nice human approach. I particularly like the so informative and concise table format of the two WA options. Very Good. I want to learn more about writing articles; friendly, informative, and not always promotional. Someone mentioned 80/20 another 60/40 (content/promotion) and another said start just being you and letting people get to know and trust you. I'll have to reflect on how to do things. Best wishes Jakoba
im going with 80/20. just give ur opinion then at the end add a banner, that way the get your opinion before seeing an option
That's more like it. It's you personal opinion and not a list of "things". Good work.
Good luck to you.
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I like the information. Know you're in the baby stages and the look needs a lil configuration makeover. I wouldn't put the money as the background for the simple fact a lot of people are looking for quick money and you want to train them the right way. Just saying what caught my attention in my early years. It's all about advertising. Overall good introduction chum; I give you a B!!!
hahaha thanks man. your the first to mention the background. what would you suggest as a themed picture for a review site? Im not sure what to make it really thatll match my niche
I think maybe something like hanging out with friends, good times, family. Something that will suport what is really important outside of money. We both know that money is important. LOL. You wanna pique their interest. You also want to keep people so you can get long term revenue. All the sites have money and the first thing they think is their gonna make money quick, not so. If you can change their mind at a glance, you got em bro. Changing their mind means changing your life. Know what I mean?
awesome thanks for the tips