Critique my fledgling site
Published on July 30, 2013
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I took a break from writing my About Me because it didn't sound quite right the night I wrote it. As a writer, when that happens, I know it is time to back off and come at it with fresh eyes.
With all that said, I just published the About Me page, so according to the Getting Started Level 1 course, I am finished. Would you be willing to let me know what you think of it so far? As scary as this is to put my "stuff" out there, I know I will only be able to improve if I can get feedback. Anything - is fair game - the theme, run-on sentences (I tend to have problems with those! lol), grammar, spelling, etc.
Here is my site:
http://buildyourbusinesswithgreetingcards.siterubix.com
Thanks!
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