Got a new page up live....could I interest anyone in a critique?

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I just got one of my first pages up live. So, I could use some input. It is freshly painted with content, so it may need some tweaking. Let me know if it works.

Thanks all! Cheers!

www.greenwithoutblues.com/work-from-home-jobs

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I just went to your site and I see you have been taking the advice offered. It is looking great! On my PC I miss seeing the G in GREEN. Just thought you might like to know! Blessings, Christa :)

Oh okay gotcha. Thank you for letting me know...I'll check it out. Thanks for taking the time to have a looksee =]
-Rawb

I like the header as well, but it flows out of the end of the screens when I view it. So you can't see the whole title. Looking good otherwise, keep it up.

I'd lose the WA banner my friend. It doesn't look right, to me, amongst what've you've written. Looks like you're trying to sell something to them (which you are, but you want to look like you're trying to help them).

Instead, turn the last part of the paragraph "you can even register for free" and link that you WA or to your review of WA instead of the WA banner

Plus it's not aligned right and that's a pet hate of mine ;)

Ok thanks a bunch man for taking the time to check it out. Yeah you guys are right. I def see how it is coming off now and I don't like it. I will be fixing this right away.

Thank you!
-Rawb

I really like your header! Your site is well laid out and easy to find your way around. The pages are appealing and easy to read. I do agree with Jim about having a centralized page for your WA affiliate links. Check out the training he mentioned because Kyle explains it very well.

Thank you so much for the time and comment! Yeah, Jim is definitely on to something. Will do
-Rawb

Hey Rawb,
I love the name of the site and the header. Very appealing. The navigation is easy which is important. You may want to consider moving your privacy policy menu item into the footer which will free up top navigation real estate.

As you start filling you website with content, remember to keep a centralized approach meaning have only a few pages that contain your affiliate links (like a review page) and then the majority of posts will link to those pages. Websites that plaster all of their pages with affiliate links usually get penalized by Google.

Kyle covers this in the training:

https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/training/wa-affiliate-bootcamp-content-keywords-and-conversions/properly-using-affiliate-links

My approach I like to take when I create a new site is to not include any affiliate links at all in the beginning. This helps in a couple of ways. First, my readers will see that I am not simply trying to sell them something and increases trust with them. And second, it gives Google no opportunity whatsoever to penalize my site due to excessive affiliate links. Then as the site gains in the rankings I will slowly add some review pages and link to those review pages, again taking advantage of that centralized approach.

People think that they will miss out on affiliate sales by taking this approach. But remember that it takes time for new sites to elevate in the ranks. So if it doesn't rank it's not going to be making too many sales anyway.

Nice job on your site. You just need to consistently and steadily add content and you should be good to go.

Best Regards,
Jim

Great advice Jim!

Thank you so much Jim for taking the time to check it out and leave your advice. You are so right man. I definitely see now how it is coming off. I don't like that so I am going to remove this stuff right away. I will check out the training you posted immediately as well.

Thanks a ton!
-Rawb

Hi Rawb, just visited your website and it looks really good. It is very informative about the WA program and gives a lot of insight about you as a person. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for visiting and for the comment! =]

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