What and Who do we live for?
Hey everyone, so I just wrote a new post on my site. I encourage everyone to check it out when you can. Let me know about your thoughts and whatelse you may be thinking in the comments section on the site. Id Really appreciate your feedback! Check it out! http://saynotojob.com/who-do-you-really-live-for
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To be very honest, The title and start of the article tend to lean towards a whole different topic then the second part of the article is about. People who search for these kind of things end up on your page, expecting to receive info on the question, but instead are lead towards an affiliate offer of a business opportunity. Some, if not many people may find that misleading and will steer clear from it.
You might want to alter the last part to reflect the topic that you started and promote WA at the bottom of the article. Or totally rewrite the article and make it solely about WA.
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Appreciate the companies and I answered the question a little more directly, just updated it. But I intended to make it a point that most of us work for the corporations/businesses that control our schedules and to that we live to make our JOBs better which in turn our own lives suffer and what Im showing with this article is that there is not need to suffer, break out and work for yourself and build your own life and I offer Wealthy Affiliate as the solution to that problem. I'll review it some more and make sure I get that across better. Newbie here, thanks for the advice.
What you could do is first start about the benefits of having your own home based business. And a while after that you could talk about why you choose WA for that. Just an idea :-)
You might want to change the text as follows (i put the changed text between hooks)::
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"You will read in the community how many are earning and making a good income within the first 3 months in their business. Absolutely amazing" (This is not needed, advice is to remove that line)
"my website ranked in Google in just days of building and Wealthy Affiliate walks you through it from day 1." (you might want to change that into: wealthy Affiliate shows you how to do proper SEO, they helped me rank my website within the top 10 of Google for my chosen keyword with in days, how cool is that!)
"I will be quitting my job soon, thanks to Wealthy Affiliate and (will take) back my life (to do) what I love each day and when I (don't use cuss words in a sales text/article) please. No more working for emotionless corporations!
(remove: I hope you) Think about where (you're) at and what you want in life? (remove:Perhaps) Do you like the hamster wheel (you're) running on? (remove: so be it) (remove:If not, why not join me in the pursuit of freedom) (change into: "This is your chance to break free of the rat race and give Wealthy Affiliate a try. "Click here":hyperlink that line to your affiliate page) and create a FREE account today,") you won’t regret it. I look forward to helping you and seeing your new site.
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