Hello- any ideas ?
I just tried a little different approach to my latest page and would appreciate any views, thoughts .I need to touch it up a little but I had to write it down as it was in my head , and research I did . Thank you . https://millerscamperworld.com...
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You've got a great start. Personally, I think there's too much going on with your information, which leaves your audience a bit overwhelmed.
I would shorten up (if you can) the posts/pages you have listed (topic links) at the top of your page. It's very wordy, for example..
About Me
Camping World or Camper World
Typical Day for Me
Privacy Policy
Family Camping Night
Phases of Camping
Can categorize it any way you want.. But I would personally categorize it as...
The World of Camping or Camping World of Camper World
Typical Day in Camping
Family Camping Night or Family Camping
Phases of Camping
About Me
Privacy Policy
I would break out your blogs that pertain to each topic from above and use correct grammar/spelling just to target your audience a bit better. Make sure you use the right keywords for SEO as well when people searching for camping. Especially when it comes to being indexed by Google and other search engines.
Good luck!
--Luna
Thank you . I will see what I can do . Appreciate it . Not sure what to correct with grammar . I never did ace that subject. Thanks again.
I don't mind helping you if you want? :) I can give you a draft of all your blogs tomorrow.
Thank you . If you would I can go from there .
Sure I can take another look and give you an update soon. What's your best e-mail?
Err I'll message you privately with some info.