My Coffee Shop Review
I thought of having a convenience corner store online. I thought of possible things that everyone would like to have. I thought of my morning Coffee. I love my morning coffee. A good cup of coffee makes my day. It keeps me awake throughout the day as I work. I do not know about you?
So I created e store online, a coffee shop. I love my coffee shop and I will be its first customer. I welcome you all to my coffee shop to look around and buy your favorite coffee. I have a good deal for you. Besides coffee, look around and see other things that go with coffee, those would serve you as well.
Please read this with open mind and give me your honest comment. Thank you.
http://louicoffeeshop.com/my-coffee-shop-review-2
Louis
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Your idea is good , but you need to expand your review and your other content. I agree with everything that Liz had to say.
Loui, it's a good idea! So it will be a store selling coffee and coffee-related products? On the home page you have the "Review" which is really more of an About page. I would also change the title of your site (on the home page) to Loui Coffee Shop instead of louicoffeeshop.com, which is the same as the URL.
The reviews would be for coffee products you yourself like and products you’re selling in the store. You could have information about the particular coffees you like, where they’re from, the type of beans they are, how they’re grown, the flavors, tastes.
The screenshot looks awkward. It looks like you wanted the photo itself of the cups and maker? We can help you with that if you don't know how to add it.
Good start!
I think your idea is wonderful!! I "LOVE" coffee too. I am new here but I will let you know what I noticed. The picture on the front page, I think it's of a coffee cup on a table, I can see it's from another website, and is a little small. If it was me I would either have a picture of myself with a cup of coffee, since you are the "Coffee Shop" owner so to speak, it makes it more personal to me. Or you could download a bigger picture that you like, something that represents coffee. Not sure if this is just the start, but I also noticed that I kinda had a hard time finding the products, when I did the same picture from your front page was on there, I would take that out and just have your products on the page. One more thing you should add more products that you would see when you walk into a coffee shop like, espresso machine, coffee beans, maybe even some biscotti, all the things one would see if they were actually in a shop. Hope this helps, like I said I'm new here, still working on my 1st site. Good luck, I think your on to something great :) I have the same theme as you do on my site, I like it a lot.
Thank you so much for your interest in my coffee shop. I am only getting started, Your suggestions will help me a long way to expand this as I build and get all my products in.
Thanks again NLYNCH
Louis
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The coffee shop looks good but I did not see any review and I thought I would see one so that was disappointing you need to give a review of the coffees you enjoy also your post is way to short you want to be around 500-1500 words and you need visuals . I hope I did not insult you but that is what I see a online store instead of a review all the best