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Hi guys,

Just wanted to drop a line that I have put up my first blog post on my own website here http://yearnlearnearn.org/online-income-could-be-a... and invite you all to celebrate the milestone with me!

Also more than glad of any comments anyone may have on it:)

Adios!

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Left a comment on your site Leigh

thank you garymoorey1! appreciate it:) all the best!

Way to go Leigh , well done you will be very pleased . On ward and upward from here .

thank you for your comments:) all the success here on your journey also!

congrats

thank you:)

Good afternoon Leigh,
I looked at your page and also dickw's.
I appreciate how long this process takes to produce so, I dislike saying anything negative. But, in order for you to really find out how one feels about the site (you wanted) I have to be honest with you.

1. I think it is not splashy enough to attract attention when you first open the page like dickw is.
2. It is too wordy without an explanation and examples as to what message you are trying to get across.
3. I feel you should try bringing more attention as to what WA is all about (give examples) and how it will provide income.
4. It would be good to explain: this is a teaching program for internet marketing and how it works. Give examples. Make the reader curious
and want to read more
Explain the cost and how it is NOT A SCAM. Low cost to begin.

I'm sorry to let you down. You are a good writer but, I feel if it were going to attract me, there needed something more to draw me in.

Lora

hi lora, thank you for your honest comments:) i really appreciate constructive feedback and you should feel sorry that you have let me down! feedback is the food of champions and helps improvement massively. i have some tweaking to do:) once again, thank you and all the best!

Congrats!

thanks 2Al!

Site looks great! Good luck promoting and making money

thanks for your comments:)

Hi Leigh,
Good start. I left some comments on your website. Nice job. Liked the Seal touch. Love those guys. If you get a minute, take a peek at my site......http://learnbigandearnbigonline.com/a-review-wealthy-affiliate.

Great job Leigh.
All he best
Victoria

thanks vic62, all the success:)

Congrats...Awesome...Now there will be no stopping you, hahaha. To your success.

thanks shazzN, same for you:)

Congratulations! Way to go!

thanks Ron!

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