Feedback on my website!
Hello everyone, I just finished putting my website together and I would like feedback on how it looks and where I need the improvement on. I really appreciated if you could help me out. Thanks! http://buildingyourwebsiteforfree.com
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I checked it out. I wasn't moved. The tree at the bottom may work better at the top. There wasn't anything there to make me want to read.
I clicked on the 10 reasons page and that's what your home page need to look like. Not the words but the look. I thought I was on a real site.
I didn't get that feeling at all when I first logged on to your link.
Keep at it, do well, Robert
Hello Judy
Congratulations on getting your first website up and running!! It feels really good huh!!
I like the design and feel of your site - it is clean and crisp and easy to navigate.
Once you get more content it will be even better!
Keep up the good work!
Danielle
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Hi Judy, You have some good work inside of this website - especially the pages on Getting Started Online. The first paragraph on your first page is too long. It made me think it was too much work to read so maybe you could break it up somehow and then it might work. The 10 things listed were too similar to decipher the difference. I'd make it maybe 5 instead and put a small paragraph underneath each one. But like I said, there was good writing that would interest people so keep going for sure!
Thank you LeAnn for the feedback!