Beneath the Last Fire

byJDGresham

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(A Samhain vignette for those who keep the lights low)

The fire had almost gone out when I realized I was not alone.

I had stayed behind after the others left, telling myself I wanted to watch the embers. That was true. What I didn’t tell them was that I had heard something breathing through the flame.

They say Samhain is when the veil thins, when the harvest ends, and the old ones cross the fields to see if we still remember them. I thought it was a tale for children—until the wind began moving like it had a pulse.

The last logs glowed like ribs beneath ash. The air turned colder, though no wind touched my face. The dark beyond the fire’s ring thickened, gathering itself as if to listen. I whispered a name—not anyone I knew—and the night repeated it back to me.

It wasn’t an echo. Echoes come from walls. This came from nowhere at all.

I should have left then. I should have walked home, shut the door, told myself it was the wine or the weariness. But the fire bent toward me, as if curious.

Something moved inside the coals. Not shape, not sound—only the suggestion of movement, like a thought someone else was thinking. The air smelled of rain on iron. For a moment, I felt warmth behind me, the kind you only feel when another body leans close.

I didn’t turn. Turning felt like permission.

They tell you the dead walk on Samhain night. I think they kneel beside whoever still believes enough to wait.
The flame dimmed, folded in on itself, then opened again like an eye.

There was nothing in the clearing. Nothing to see, nothing to name. Only the fire, and the space it left when it blinked.

When I finally rose to leave, I heard it—soft, like a sigh against my ear.

“We remember.”

I walked home without looking back. The moonlight followed but didn’t touch me.

And when I reached my door, I saw the same small fire still burning in the hearth, though I hadn’t left it lit.

I should have felt safe.
Instead, I waited for it to breathe again.