Lindaw gave you some good pointers but remember you are a new site and on the average, a person will go to a site several times before taking action. Think about how your behavior when you're researching. ~Debbi

Hi Daniel, I always feel you are a little rushed. Remember nothing is ever perfect, you can not build your site, sit back and say 'Done'.

I think you are doing well. Just take your time. Honestly, give it a year. Think a year ahead and if things start happening for you quicker then you will be really encouraged. You just can't force this process. There is lots of help here, you will never be stuck, so enjoy everything and look back at what you have done so far.

Yes, I have felt that way and do all the time. This is new and we are learning. No one just jumps in, knows everything, and makes a million in their first year. Well, no one I know of :) You will find errors and go back later and read something and think "What was I thinking?" It is okay. This is a process. Building the foundation is the most important part. I haven't met one person on here yet that isn't continually working on their site. Even if they aren't ranked and even if they aren't making any money. Just have faith, do your best, and enjoy what you are doing!

You have a nice site and quite a bit of content would agree with Lindaw's comments, once we have the main frame up it is about refining it and continually adding content

I am currently on your website and the first thing I notice is there is no introduction, you just jump right in and start to explain things. I find this confusing.
This is your first sentence.
What I wanted to give you some information about is what your first day will be composed of.
May be change it to:
What I would like to do is to give you some information about what to expect when setting up your website.

Here you can make it two sentence's get rid of the word (and.)
A lot of this is just filling in the blank and there is a complete video tutorial on how to set up your account.

Here you should use (Tasks that you will be given)
Within the four steps above you will have task that you will given (and shown) how to do.
Seperate this sentence to a better place on your page.
You will also see that it really is import to ask questions and stay ahead. ( important)

All you need to do isto click on the question button.

you have (All you need do is to click on the question button )

Not sure what you mean here. ( and some go all the way through with a built, working website.)

Rethink rewriting this paragraph. You jump into many topics here.
So here is day one, no credit card and you are getting set up to start your build. I say day one but you can go at your pace. I have found that some days I can only do but so much and others I have plenty of time just depends on my schedule!

Take some time and go over my website to give you some more ideas.

http://online-income-from-home.org/how-to-build-a-website-for-free/

You have talked about the community more then how to build a website. You have the right idea, just need to work with it some.

Take your time and work with your site. Don't be afraid of making changes.
I go through my pages and post daily, just to make improvements.
Please get back to me so I may look at your site again. We want you to start making money.

I know it's frustrating but you just need time. My opinion. I joined mid-July and I just got my first $1 yesterday. It's a start. I'm happy. Good Luck for yours to turn around SOON!