Here is it my first article is on the road
I want to post just a quick message to get your opinion on my first article.
Here is it http://www.streetarticles.com/home-health-care/benefits-of-a-healthy-eating
Please use as much productive criticism as you can in order to learn. What is my mistakes and take note about them?
Thanks!
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Right I have to fix some language errors what was pointed from BIS and then after I edit my article it's status get back to pending ... I will let you know when it is up and running again. Thank you for your interest.
Hi Nick
Well done for getting your first article published.
I don't know whether you have any one who can look at your articles before you publish them. You have quite a few language errors which actually make your writing hard to read in places- including changing tense mid sentence. This is a pity. You don't have to write perfect grammar but you do need to make sure that readers can easily read your writing.
Beverley
Hi Beverley, thank you for comment.
Nope I don't have no one who can look at my articles and english is not my mother language. So I'll have to learn this too in the process of writing. I hope I'll do it better next time.
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OK, I think the article is very informative and a good idea, there is still a lot of grammatical errors which distract the reader from the point. For your next article can you get it proof-read or checked by a friend, or send it to me, I am a proof-reader. Don't give up though, it's a good article.