First website
Hi guys! I made my first website and wanted to get feedback from any. I wouldn't say that my website is fully accomplished but would already want to know if there is anything I missed or if you guys have any suggestions that I could use to improve my website better. I only got 4 pages at the moment. Thanks a lot guys in advance!
http://gamer4life.siterubix.com/about-me
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Hi Brian.Good start on your site.I play video games also. I am sure you when you done it will be a great site
Hey Bibo, I just checked out your website, and it looks great so far:). My kids would definitely hit it off with you as they are avid gamers, as well! Best wishes:)
Blessings:)
Suzi
Thanks Suzi! That's good to know as a start. I'll be improving my site as I get along the bootcamp. So far, I'm proud of what I had accomplished and hope become as successful as you guys!
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it's a great start, what I would also do for each style/type of game you talk about, instead of writing a paragraph or 2 about each one, I would break it up...personally I would be more inclined to read it this way if I'm looking at reviews about video games, such as:
multi player:
pros:
cons:
best part of the game:
why you should try the game:
etc etc.
I just think gamers don't want to read too much, they just want to know if its going to be a good game to play or not.
I hope this helps
Awesome! Thanks for the info! I actually did a common one and your idea is gonna make excellent! That way it's not just thorough reading but instead becomes a very detailed one which helps the readers pick up points to what they're looking for. This could also create a lot of conversations as well as I could use this as an advantage when advertising the games. Thanks again and let's keep in touch!
I happy to help, I look forward to seeing your website again in the future