Hello everyone here @ WA. I just finished a new post on my website and would like you to look at it and leave a comment behind. I included a video too !

I would appreciate if you took a minute to look at it and write down what you think of it.
URL: http://iappleproducts.com/the-true-story-about-steve-jobs-and-apple

It's about the life story of Steve Jobs - Founder of Apple Inc.
Thank you in advance and leave my your URL if you want me to comment on your post/blog/page.

With kind regards,
~Gregory~

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LoftusGuides Premium
Hi there! I checked it out for you; you need a really good editor, Gregory!! Your spelling has to be right, same with grammar - and the 'flow', as you read.. Your ideas are wonderful, and it's well written. Read a lot about writing a great post - there are lots of guides. I'm sure there are some cheap editing services - I wouldn't go dirt cheap, though - that's just me; find someone you trust, who does an awesome job. :)
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bsmith1222 Premium
Very good article and thanks fr sharing. On a side note when you started the article out you put this time I am going to write. I was wondering if you might start out like today I am writing about or some other way to seem more professional
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BigDaddyFred Premium
Great job. Left you a comment. Spelled "of" wrong, my bad.

Great Success to you
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Gregory57 Premium
Hi Fred, left you a comment on your site.
On the home page your sub title (Fight viruses - ) goes through your menu tabs. Just a detail.
Regards,
~Gregory~
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BigDaddyFred Premium
Thanks Pal. On it
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Gordon-D Premium
Hi Greg, great post and information, but a few grammatical errors
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Gregory57 Premium
Ok Gdodd. I will look into it right now.
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ollie1950 Premium
Hi Greg. The page will not load.
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Gregory57 Premium
Thanks I looked into it
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ollie1950 Premium
Hey Gregory. Left you a comment a brilliant job loved it. You need to check the grammar and spelling but that withstanding an excellent review.
Ollie
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Gregory57 Premium
Ok thanks. I will.
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