Hi Everyone. I’m working on my website and going over training following each step. My questions is, How can I improve my writing? How can I make my content more alluring to my readers? I’m a hit on Facebook and I have lot's of followers and likes but this is different this information needs to be written in a professional manner? I write from my feelings and sometimes it can get personal. I will take all advice.

KoKo :)

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JHermes Premium
Hi Koko,
You are correct. Some comments I read discuss getting a pro to write or re-write their article. AWAI teaches copywriting and has people to edit, write or whatever for you.

I have 3 vocabularies: 1. my talking vocabulary, 2. my reading vocabulary, and 3. my writing vocabulary. I just sorts out that way.

There are a couple of writing programs that I use. Grammarly and Owl.

I know of a very successful marketer that uses writers and he is doing well. I believe you can buy websites already set up and written.

Good luck with your decision.
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KoKo777 Premium
JHermes. Yes I use Grammarly and Owl throughout school. I read a lot of blogs and see the different writing styles. Thank you for the encouragement. One of my passions are exoffenders coming home. They deserve second chances after serving time. I want to thank you for giving so much time to a population that is sometimes forgotten. I'm a survivor and very ambitious so I'm going to soar on this platform. I'm happy that people like you are here with me.
KoKo
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JHermes Premium
I believe you will do well.

Here is a little more content of my experience:

Introducing Jeffrey Hermes to the BloggersHQ group.
I am in the boomer’s generation by birth. I grew up in a military family. Two brothers and no sisters. My older brother passed away more than 10 years ago; aplastic anemia. He used brake cleaner to clean his hands over the course of his auto mechanic career. My younger brother is retiring in a month from Oregon State University; a professor of genetics and avian science; (poultry). My mother is still alive at 93 near my younger brother’s home in Oregon. I am a Viet Nam era Navy veteran; submariner.
I live on the Island of Oahu in the state of Hawaii. My wife, a sailor, was stationed at Barbers Point in 1989. We decided to stay in Hawaii when I was recruited to build a Parole Violator program for repeat offenders. After 3 years, the prison administration changed their minds on the efficacy of the program and shut it down. I was transferred to another in-prison substance abuse program as the supervisor. I’ve worked in the Hawaii Paroling Authority and in Prison-based programs for 25 years. I also founded a non-profit, The Institute for Criminal Rehabilitation.
I taught philosophy, religious studies, and substance abuse counseling at Jr. Colleges and Universities in California and in Hawaii. The first 15 years I taught philosophy and religion and the next14 years I taught the Certificate Program for Substance Abuse Counseling. I have re-certified many times as a Certified Substance Abuse Counselor, Certified Clinical Supervisor, and Certified Criminal Justice Addiction Professional through the Department of Health, Hawaii. The International Certification and Reciprocity Consortium recruited me as a Subject Matter Expert in Clinical Supervision and Criminal Justice Addiction professional.
I graduated in three bachelor programs and a Masters in Divinity in 1983 and published my dissertation through Argosy University in 2014. My experience and education provided me with a working knowledge of MS Word and MS Excel. I got my first computer in 1992 and remember thinking, “I have to learn how to make a living using my computer”. 22 days ago I became a Premium Member at Wealthy Affiliates. I will drain all of the education I can get from the WA program and BloggersHQ. I will begin by blogging about “how family members can reach a loved son or daughter caught in addiction to vices”.
I recently beat T2 Diabetes, which was diagnosed in 1995. Taking responsibility for my health moved me toward my aberration of the Keto plan, I love baguettes and beer. I have not used Diabetes medication for the last 2 months.

Autonomy is the psychological need to experience self-direction and personal endorsement in the initiation and regulation of one’s behavior.
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KoKo777 Premium
Dr. JHermes.. It is a honor to meet you. You have lived an astonishing life. I would like to follow you. Having you in this platform is awesome. Addiction has haunted my family for many years. I have family members who are struggling daily with addiction. I will send you a private messsage. I have a question for you. I'm so glad that I connected with such a brilliant individual as you. What a phenomenal life!!!!!!
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feigner Premium
if you are a hit on fb with your style of writinng then cary on with that style- what makes you think you need to make your writing more 'professional' - write for your audience.
if you are going to be sending visitors from fb to your site then they will expect to see the same style.
don't try to write to everyone
find your own voice and use it
good luck
phil
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KoKo777 Premium
Phil. Thank you I needed to hear that! I actually have a following of over 400 women on Facebook. I started a woman's group in 2009.
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feigner Premium
if that is who you are targeting then carry on writing for them
just make sure it is long enough and seo'd for google and problem solving for your niche.
have fun
phil
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KoKo777 Premium
Will do Phil, Thank you for your positive reply.
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TheCatherine Premium
you need to fully understand the problems which people face in your niche so hang out where your prospective purchasers are hanging out and finding out what their problems are and how you can solve them. This will expand your ideas for writing but will also expand your ideas how you can help people. Forums Facebook are both good places to investigate where your prospective customers are
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jojocinq Premium
Great advice Jeff
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KoKo777 Premium
Yes. It was great advice!!!
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jeffklayo Premium
Constantly learning you niche and applying what you have learn to your content. It may be new apps, books, or online webinars or videos that help your audience.
What allures them is your take on your Niche. Get to know your audience. Is it constantly changing, look at your competitions websites to see what they are attaching people to. Put your spin on that.
Don't overthink the professional side of it. No one is a complete expert on stuff. Just be you. If you feel you need to improve on your writing skills, Try to searching for books, audiobooks, or youtube videos that help improve your skills.
If you think its not effective, you could hire someone to write content on Fiverr. It really not that expensive.
In any business, having the competitive advantage means we have to constantly improve us. We are not all good on everything but when we can improve on are weaknesses, we become better.
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KoKo777 Premium
Jeffklayo. Thank you so much for that awesome reply. I believe that I'm going to master this!!!
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