I would love to get some feedback on my site so far, If you guys could take a look at it and tell me what you think If I should change anything, add a few things or leave it the way it is. I would really appreciate it, I just want to make sure I am doing everything right. Thanks http://aworkathomebusinesses.com
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David (IMR) Premium
Hey there Scotti,
I like it Clean Cut Like the Theme Which one is it.. I would like to use it.. Honestly it is very good Content wise and very informative. But It is Way to Long!!!! You lay it all out. Which is Awesome answer tons of Questions.. But Like you asked in another reply is it to long. I have to say yes. I would break it up, into Topics know what I mean like the BootCamp Course itself.. you get to a stage and you get the breather click this here to continue. That way it keeps the reader engaged.. I have to say thanks for the tip though on Capturing Images. Cheers for now hope my tips help you out.. Have to say though I like it Clean Laid out well..
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Hudson Premium
Scott hi,
Really liked the site - well organised and full of information - well done. I would say you are definitely doing everything right.
Just a quick question, if you don't mind? What did you use to capture the images from Wealthy Affiliate please - they look very good.
Regards
Hudson
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scottdogg187 Premium
I simply did ALT+Prt Scn then I opened paint and pasted the image into there. That is a little trick I learned from Jay. Thanks for checking it out I'm glad you like it
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kiya05 Premium
A lot of very good information, but it's a LOT. The info is so good though, and with me just starting, I printed it all out, 23 pages of it, but there's so much to read, I can't do it in one sitting, and I know when I was looking for something to make money online, if it was too detailed, I'd end up saving it for later, which sometimes I'd forget about it, and never get back to it. It does answer about every question they could possible have though, so if they can get through it all, I doubt they'd have any questions as to what WA is all about, and would want to jump on it. Anyway, I think if I was genuinely looking for an online business, this would definitely tell me all I needed to know. Also, not to be petty, but your very first heading, "A Work At Home Businesses", starts out like a single business, but then businesses makes it more than one, it just sounds funny, and would sound better if you dropped the "es" at the end, since the next sentence talks about a single business. Anyway, I don't want to sound negative in any way, since this is very well written and easy to understand, which is more than I can say for most things I've read out there when I was looking, and while it's a lot of information, none of it is repeated, or fillers, just good info that people want to know. I only hope I can write something half as good once I get doing this.
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scottdogg187 Premium
In your opinion do you think it is too long and maybe people with a short attention span wouldn't be able to keep focused? I know if I am reading something that is long I will sometimes skip over half of it. Did you go over the whole site, because I know where is a bunch of information there.

The reason it says businesses is because when I bought the domain that was the only 1 with low competition the singular one had a high QSR. If I target the singular version in my tags and keywords maybe I will still be able to get good rankings.

Thanks for looking over it though and giving me some feedback, I really appreciate it
Scott
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kiya05 Premium
I think it's long, but it has a lot of information that people would want. I don't think it's a matter of having a short attention span, and staying focused, I think people just don't have time these days, but then I think because of that, most people skim these articles, like you do. I read everything, for fear of missing something I'd want to know, for that reason, I haven't read the entire article, that's why I printed it out, because it's something I want to read, hopefully I'll get to it later. I think it's VERY informative, and that outweighs length sometimes, so really, I wouldn't change a thing, I wish I had all this info when I first ran into WA, it would have made joining an easy decision.
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scottdogg187 Premium
Are you talking about my home page or the wealthy affiliate review? I know that both of them are really long, but you can't cram everything that WA offers in a few hundred words. If you want to tell them everything that they are going to get it's going to take a few thousand words.
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dwnovacek Premium
Hi Scott!

I took a look at your site and think you're doing awesome stuff there. You breakdowns of how to setup WordPress, etc. are nice and easy to follow. Gooooo Scott!
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scottdogg187 Premium
Thank you so much for checking out my site and giving me your feedback It is really appreciated.
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jghwebbrand Premium
Scott,

I reviewed your site. In the second to last paragraph, you have a typo. After the link change the i to an I.

I also checked all your links to see if they work and they all do. Excellent!

Great information. You provide the user with reasons why you joined WA and are telling them to try it out for free. Excellent.

Otherwise, great job!

George Haas
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scottdogg187 Premium
Thanks so much George, If that is the only thing you found wrong then I must be doing something right. Thanks a lot for taking the time to review my website, and offer your thoughts. I really appreciate it.
Scott
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