Everyone can post a page from their website (please give the exact URL) that they want comments on here within this discussion. Please post ONE page at a time and also spend the time to make at least 3 comments on others posts. Lets keep this post rolling at all times and don't abuse this. This is a community project remember, so please do post your page, but also take the time to offer your comments and questions on other peoples websites. I'll start things off... Can you please offer your comments/questions/opinions on the following page on my website: http://waystoavoidscamsonline.com/build-a-successful-website Make sure you keep it relevant to the topic. Thanks everyone!
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wendaone Premium
Hi WA family, just finished my post and I was hoping you'd have time to comment. Please private message me if you leave a comment and provide me with a link so I can return the favor. :)
http://how-to-make-money-with-blogging.com/4-secrets-making-full-time-income-blogging

P.S. I asked for a private message, because I want to make sure that I return the favor.

have an amazing day!
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Nrichards Premium
Hello, I left you a comment. Great job.
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botescu123 Premium
Hello, I like your site.
It has a lot of information with good structure.
Well job done!
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Nrichards Premium
Thanks a milliom
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Toml82 Premium
Hi Wenda,

Great post. I have left you a comment and I will give you a PM.

Tom
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Afrocatz85 Premium
Hi Guys,

It would be great if you could leave a comment on my site :)

http://startingyoursidehustle.com/beginners-guide-setting-website-minutes/

Let me know if there is anything I can help you with and thanks for all your comments so far!

I'll make sure to reciprocate and have a great day!

Thanks

Sean
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Suehila Premium
Hi Sean,
I can only give you my personal opinion because I am not an expert. When I open the page, there is just so much text on it that it's a bit overwhelming for me. It's too much for me to take in at once, especially if I am a beginner.
The content is really good especially in the beginning. It is easy to read and well written.
By the time I get to the graphs I am starting to get a little distracted. For me personally, I am reading your text and less interested in the graphs themselves.
Also there are too many choices and I just feel I don't know where to start with all of them. I'm not sure when looking at it which one you are the most focused on.
I really like the content and I think you have a very good page. I am just trying to give you a little constructive criticism from a newbie :)
The headings on the left seem to merge too much with the main content, I just don't feel there is enough space.
I don't know if you need that much information on word searches either, maybe you could narrow that down a bit or condense it?

I know it seems like I am making a lot of points but all in all your content is really good, you just need to tweak it a bit and refine it, take a look at @RynMarcel's page above, maybe you could fine a happy medium, somewhere in between?
Thanks for sharing your page with us.
Suehila
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Nrichards Premium
I left you a comment.
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Afrocatz85 Premium
Hi Norman, thanks! Let me know if I can help in any way, by PM might be best :) thanks Sean
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Afrocatz85 Premium
Hi Suehila,

Thank you very much for the feedback, I will take it on board :)

Sean
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Suehila Premium
you bet, anytime, send me a message and I will look again if you'd like :)
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Toml82 Premium
Hi mate,

I have left you a comment on your post. Really good post by the way, a wealth of information for any newbie that they can use.

If you have a few minutes I would love for you to comment on my post: http://affiliatemarketingstars.com/is-it-possible-to-earn-money-in-affiliate-marketing

All the best and keep it up.

Tom
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Afrocatz85 Premium
Hi Tom, thanks for that, just left you a comment :) Sean
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HCM Premium
I have been told in my reviews that my site was hard to understand. The one question I need answered is what do you see when you look at my site, what is the main topic? Any comments are welcome here. It's great to be a part of the training here at WA. If I can help anyone just drop me a line.

Thank you Heather

https://bluerainbowboutique.com
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PaulChatwin Premium
Hi Heather,
Your site is obviously something you are passionate about, but it did take me a while to work out it was a transgender site.

There's nothing showing up on your home page that greets the visitor or makes it obvious or welcome.

I think I'd spend some time creating a home page that welcomes the visitor, puts them at ease, explains the purpose of the site and what you hope to achieve.

Some nice friendly pictures would help and have your product page elsewhere.

Also, the red is totally dazzling to the points where it becomes uncomfortable. The site is Blue Rainbow so why the block red everywhere? Tone it down with much softer colours that represent the site.

I know all this sounds harsh, but I believe you have a passion, commitment and a message that you want to share, and I think you will make it work.

Good luck.

Paul
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DerekSmith Premium
Hi gang,
My WA affiliate site is on the theme of 'fire your boss and work from home'. Here's the URL:
https://www.fire-your-boss-work-from-home.com/
It also tells about some of the dreadful bosses I've had, the ones that you really want to fire. There are also amusing stories and anecdotes (all 100% true) that details exactly why these bosses are considered to be so very bad.
A word of warning: if you don't like those bad words that adults use to display emotion, you should probably stick to the first page and read the affiliate blurb only.
Genuinely interested in your feedback.
Derek
PS: the site will grow over time
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HCM Premium
very well thought out and very readable. I like the way you don't pressure people for the sale, you lay it out to the reader for the to decide if it's right for them. Great job.

:) Heather
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Suehila Premium
Your style is kind of like my style Derek, in terms of your posts (but I don't curse! lol). I use in-text links too. I haven't gotten to the point where I have added any ads and I'm not sure if I will, but I do like your approach as well. I still need to do the rest of the training to see if I will need to push ads a bit more, but I do like it. Not sure about the green background - kind of hard for me to see the heading (but maybe I'm just getting old). Also - how do you know that the boss is a "he"? I was a boss once! And is this site more geared toward a particular group?
The "Fire Your Boss" line is great. Love the scrabble pieces! That's fun.
I posted my link above, if you want to take a look at it.
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CBustillo Premium
Hi there Derek,
I like the concept of your site.
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Daymo Premium
Wondering if we can offer some comment juice to each other.

If you get a chance to look at this page -

https://quitratracelife.com/getting-started

to see if it is designed well enough to help new or beginner level marketers, I would certainly appreciate, reply and return the favor to anyone that helps me out.

Cheers Everybody
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Cscotsman18 Premium
Hey Damian! Your page is very well thought out and put together. However, you didn't leave a comment section on the bottom. You can do so by going to "edit page," then in the screen options menu, check the "discussions" box. (And of course don't forget to publish)
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Daymo Premium
Thanks for the heads up Cscotsman. I had my comments enabled in my cusotmize options menu for my theme. I have now also ticked the comments box within screen options in WP.

I cant actually see a comments section from my back office on any of my pages, maybe thats because i'm the admin user.

If you could check the page again and let me know if its appeared that would be great
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Daymo Premium
comment done cheers buddy
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Nrichards Premium
Tried to leave a comment but got and error, great job on your post
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Toml82 Premium
Hi Damian,

Great article. I have left you a comment.

If you have a few minutes I would love for you to comment on my new post: http://affiliatemarketingstars.com/how-to-use-seo-and-keyword-rankings-in-affiliate-marketing

Keep up the good work.

Tom
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Daymo Premium
Comment left buddy - appreciate your help
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