Show Your Personality

You've heard this in the training, and it's important enough to repeat it. Write like you speak. Don't try to act all professional with words you don't use. It sounds fake, and often is off putting.

If you would normally say "Hey" instead of "Hello" then write

"Hey everyone! Welcome to my site."

Don't write "Hello everyone."

There can only be one you. This is the moment to let yourself shine! Be you!


Grab Their Attention & How Can You Help?

Your first paragraph needs to hold the readers attention. Why did you create this site? Be sure to be their answer for help, right off the bat. Your first few sentences should look something like this.

"My name is (name) and I’m a (what you do / job title). I help (your ideal customer) to (solve their problem) by (your solution)."


So if you're promoting WA through Bootcamp, yours would read something like this

"My name is Stephen and I’m an internet marketer. I help folks in retirement, make a residual income working online, by creating free video tutorials on my blog."

In 2 sentences you've told your ideal customer exactly what he was looking for and how you can help him/her. Great job!

And remember, this is just like any other page on your site.
Go ahead and add photo's or a video!
Your About Me page doesn't have to be boring.

Lets move on to where I tell you not to talk about yourself on your About Me page.

Wait. Say what?

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whitsunday Premium
Hey BM, this is a great training. I am going back to check and fix my about me page. The points you made on why I should fix it are very important. Thanks.
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BigMook Premium
Glad you found this helpful :) Thanks for your comment. You know I appreciate it.
- Stephen
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KrisS8 Premium
This article couldn't have been timed better, as I am currently on this step in the training. You've mentioned a lot of great tips that will definitely help me in my writing process. Thank you!
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BigMook Premium
I'm so happy this helped, Kris. You're welcome :)
All the best!
- Stephen
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JohnMks Premium
Great training man! Thanks!
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BigMook Premium
Thank you John! Appreciate your feedback my friend!
- Stephen
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MrAmazinBlue Premium
Great info! I think quite a few people will be editing after reading this. Me included!

Thanks!
James
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BigMook Premium
Thanks James! Let us know how it turns out :)
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Timard Premium
Now I got to go back and check my About Me page and maybe clean it up. Thanks for the training on about me.
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BigMook Premium
You're welcome! Go get em Tim
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