The Doorway Chronicles: The Way to Keyword Haven! The Lost Boy!

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December 16, 2017

Dear fans, as promised, here is chapter 2 of The Doorway Chronicles. Enjoy the suspense and mysterious chapter, in addition I created 2 artistically photos by myself for this extra ordinary story for you! Unfortunately the black doesn't appear to be black completely although in my painting programs it does. No idea why it looks different here in the WA editor, perhaps someone here can tell me why, it is a mystery. Enjoy!

The Doorway Chronicles: The Lost Boy!

Chapter 2!

Just after I entered the room, the door shut behind me and I was standing in a dark room. I said: “John, can you turn on the light please?”, but John was not there, it seemed I went through alone. I tried to focus by not moving and to see if I can see at least some light somehow. But it was all black, blacker than black, like nothing existed at all. The air felt cold and I could feel a light breeze blowing in my face. What to do next, I thought, what is this room, why is it so dark in here and why did John let me enter this room? Then I remembered I smoked a good cigar yesterday, perhaps I got my lighter with me. I felt in my pockets and….. yes, I got lucky. When I turned it on and tried to look around the only thing I saw, was the burning flame in the room. I decided to follow the direction of the breeze; it was good to have my lighter with me as it gave me an indication where to go. Then I heard a voice from the direction I was walking too. It sounded like a little boy mumbling around. While I walked in the direction of the voice, it felt like the room expanded and got bigger, my footsteps gave a light echo and for a moment I had the idea I was not alone as if there would be someone here walking with me. Or was it really only the echo? The closer I came I noticed Stars appearing shimmering in the dark, they were everywhere. The voices of the boy got louder: “where am I …. Help….. I am afraid…..I don’t know…. Why….”. The nearer I came the more stars were appearing and before I knew it I was walking inside a universe with thousands of stars. It was unbelievable beautiful. The colors were bright pink, purple and everything looked so bright. Is this how it looks when we travel with a spaceship through the universe? The voices went louder and louder and while I was walking towards the voice, it looked like a shade or form was flying in front of me. “Help me…. Help me…. I am …. I don’t know …. Where am I …. I am afraid….. help me…” The closer I came the bigger the kind of shade appeared in front of me.

The shade formed into a kind of ghost form and I saw a part of a little boy floating in front of me. It was a bit frightened seeing this boy, his face had black eyes and only a part of his body was visible. “help me ….. help me…. I do …. Where am I …. What ….” Standing in front of him I looked up and asked him: “Who are you? Where are we?” The boy reacted on my voice, looked at me and said: “Are you the savior? Will you save me? I am … I don’t know …. I am lost …… I cannot remember …. Afraid …. Please help…” The boy sounded frightened so I asked “How can I help you, where are we?” The boy got silent as there was a sudden noise sounding like a horn. Then the boy said: “Oh noo…. Noo… he is coming ….. help help me…. You need to help me….” I didn't understand what he meant, but I saw his shade was fading, he said: “I remember…. I am lost …. I was wrong …… sorry …. Help me…. Look …. Look for the Garden of Whispers…. Save me…. S a. a…v.je p jl…” His voice and his shade started to fade away and all the sudden he was gone. I wondered what he meant with the Garden of Whispers and what happened to him, who was he, where did he come from and why was he a kind of ghost? While I was thinking what just happened, I got all the sudden interrupted by another boom and saw a kind of black darkness with orange shimmering fluctuating circles on my right. I decided to walk over to investigate what just happened. The closer I came I could see that those orange fluctuate circles looked like a kind of portals. Then a voice appeared from the black darkness where the portals appeared: “In the light of darkness, I am the keeper, come closer stranger”

While I walked into the direction of the portals, all the sudden a strange being appeared out of the darkness. He looked like humanoid but worn a strange mask with stones or were it eyes? I asked: “Who are you?”, he said: “My name is Caecilius and I am the Keeper of Whispers, you have come a long way, tell me what do you seek?”. I asked him where I am and who was that boy who appeared to me. He spoke in a mysterious way to me and told me that the boy is not of my concern. He is the keeper of whispers and I need to choose if I will take the portal of silence or the portal of the realm, both will lead you to the answer, the answer where you want to be, but choose wisely or you shall never return to the world you know. Thinking of what he said, I tried to figure out how to get to the Garden of Whispers and help the boy. Perhaps it will lead to the disappearing of the other marketers. The portal of the realm sounded like my final destination, the heart of the realm? Could it be so easy or was it a trick? Better I take the portal of silence and so I went through.

When I stepped into the portal I felt like falling through time seeing the many different colors around me changing continuously and before I knew it I landed in another room. It was a beautiful room with all kind of antiques and beautiful paintings. Then out of nowhere a beautiful woman appeared and greeted me. She said: “You arrived, welcome my name is Annabel, we have been waiting for you….”

End of part 2

If you like me to continue in writing a part 3 of this chronicle novel, click like, when the like score reaches 35 I will continue and write part 3 for you up to 1000 words, if the like scores reaches 50 likes I will write up to 2000 words.

Let me know what you think of Chapter 2.


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To paraphrase Arte Johnson of Laugh-In fame in his German soldier costume "Veeerrryyy interesting"
Frank

Love at First Bite, I remember that movie, watched it when I was a kid. :))

Thanks for tuning in, I am happy you enjoyed.

The Joker ツ

Great story! I hope you know what you are doing. None of us can help you in there Stefan. We are out of our realm. Do you need a hand?

Thanks David, that means a lot to me, you are a talented writer too. Who knows, is the portal a time tunnel, will he be able to beam you inside the story to team up and solve the mystery? Stay tuned my brother and time will tell soon.

The Joker ツ

Very good, can't wait for next instalments. What happens next.
What does the girl have for our hero. Hello, maybe or not.

Thank you Joker

Hi James,

Welcome joining in, in mysterious ways another story will take you all in a ban in chapter 3 coming to you near soon, if we reach enough likes, you can expect chapter 3 in a week.

The Joker ツ

Ooh can't wait, more please
Jae

Hello Jae, glad you enjoyed it, which part of the story did you like most?

The Joker ツ

Beautiful pictures....what does Annabel have in store for us.......

Debbie

Thanks Debbie, glad you enjoyed it. Annabel is special....

The Joker ツ

Ooh mysterious story... awesome writing! Pictures are fabulous. The 2nd pic is black by the way. Curious to know what happened to the little boy. Is he manifesting in a vision or travelled through time and space?

Are you going to be the next CS Lewis because the story reminded me of that :)

One suggestion: break up text into shorter paragraphs so its an easier read...

Hope you get your 35 or 50 likes so i can go on reading :)

Hi Moon, nice you dropped by and you enjoyed the story. I just saw my second screen shows contrast and brightness too high so there I see the difference. With normal settings all is ok.

I know Jerry Lee Lewis.... if CS Lewis is famous and you tell me I write similar, woooeeeee you make me very happy Moon.

Take a marker Moon and draw some break up lines on your monitor, that helps too...:P

See you at chapter 3

The Joker ツ

Hi Stefan, that was excellent!

Just as I finished reading " we have been waiting for you...." and I saw 'end of part 2' I thought NO! now I can't wait for part 3.

You know I like your creative writing and for me, this is the best so far :D I like your pictures, and your painting looks amazing really mystical and daunting like..intimidating. I'm not sure exactly where the black should be but it looks great.

I'm hoping for 50 likes to come overnight, it's after midnight here, so we can have 2000 words next time.

This cliffhanger has me wanting more ;)

Hi Patsy, thanks for your kind words. Chapter 2 was a different style from chapter 1 and so shall chapter 3 be. It is my intention to get my readers wanting for more, is that not the idea of writing a good book? I love to write comedy, but I can also write suspense. More skills to come..... If the readers of WA like me to continue here.

If you get bored, just read this chapter again.

The Joker ツ

You are welcome.
I always prefer suspense over comedy so this is great.
I'm also looking forward to your other project on your website that you will be launching later on xx

I prefer comedy over suspense or combined, but this way I can show I am capable to write this way as well, should any website owner ever need my services in the future.

The Joker ツ

When someone is a good writer they can write anything.

I haven't started to look for a place to write for yet, but maybe later on once I add more articles to my own website xx

No I disagree, if someone is a good writer it surely does not mean he or she is good in everything concerning writing. Writing has many different areas. It is the same as fixing cars, you might be good in fixing a Mercedes, but that will not say you are that good in fixing a formula one car...

The Joker ツ

Well...I still think they can.
I guess with vehicles if there is a part that is custom made for example not all mechanics can fix it if they don't have the specific tools for it. We all have our own experiences :)

I am an experienced professional writer in technical security documents for computer networks and Information Security, and I can guarantee you that that is a skill you need to learn before you can write something like that.... therefore I know.

The Joker ツ

Hi Stefan,

I saw my end of it with my experiences.
You had the experience with the other work you did.

Hi Patsy,

So what do you think, I wrote a bit more under Taetske's reply..

Great writing Stefan, well done. It is very intriguing and mysterious! Keep it up. :) great way to keep the suspense going. :)

Carl

Thanks Carl, that means a lot to me. Here is part one should you have missed it: Seeing you back at part 3.

The Joker ツ

I did not read part one, I am going to go through all my back emails to find it. Yes, You should continue with writing your story. Just Chapter two alone is very good.........Donna

Hello Donna,

Many thanks, I really appreciate your opinion and I am happy you liked this chapter. This is my first Novel Chronicle I write and is different from my blog I wrote in the past. It is a new experience for me. I love to write and entertain others, so if you all love it too, then nothing stands in the way to write more for all of you.

The Joker ツ

I also love to write. Keep it up. Sounds great so far!....Donna

Thanks Donna! :)

Let me know if you have something interesting to read for me, what you wrote, I am curious.

The Joker ツ

Great. Keep on Stefan. I love this universe!

Thanks Mike, did you like the story? Any critics, any tips? :)

The Joker ツ

Perfect I love curiosity based mysteries

Thanks Mike, it is my pleasure to write for you, and I really appreciate your support. You are a great example for me and a great teacher too.

The Joker ツ

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