I need some honest input folks.

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So, I'm still early on in my training. Currently I am on Course 2 Lesson 4 of my certification training and I'm having fun going through the process here at WA. I can tell there is real potential here and I feel the training is second to NONE.

Writing content isn't one of my strongest attributes, but as I started writing my first real content post, I found it getting easier. There is still a lot I will add to that post (and future posts) as my training progresses, but for now I would like some HONEST input from you all. Please, hold nothing back and be brutal if needed. I'm tough, I can take it. It's the only way I learn.

Please visit my site and post your comments, words of wisdom, and advice here? Thanks in advance and for being a community that allows me to feel comfortable enough to share my trials and errors.

www.wildcampfirecooking.com

Wishing you all the blessings in life,

Tom

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I think it looks and sounds great. And I'm not sure if your plan is to still add some picture but I think if you added some it would pop a lot. I always find that if I take my own pictures and add some sort of dry humor it goes a long way. Maybe even some fails to make it more personal for those who would appreciate the help after many failed attempts. That's just my two cents but again it looks great and keep up the good work.

My apologies I see Jerry had already mentioned the photos. Opps put the cart before the horse but would love to see it when it's all done. Cheers

Thanks Joshy. I definitely plan to add photos. Just waiting for the snow to melt so I can get outside and get it done.
I like the humor advise too. It's part of the plan.

Tom,

Great start! But the other thing you will want to make sure you do is to break your paragraphs up. Early on, I heard many people here in WA to say that you should only have 2 to 3 sentences put together and then there should be a space break.

Even if what you are talking about next has to do with the previous sentences, it has been proven that you will keep people more engaged to keep reading if you break it up.

You reviewed my site...if you go back and take a look again, you will see that is what I have done in all my posts. Then go back and look at yours again and I think you will see yourself that it's a lot easier to read if it's not all bunched together.

Keep going...you are doing great! :)

Fae

Thanks for the feedback Fae. I am hearing that from others as well. I appreciate it very much. Thanks again

when you get the opportunity add some more photos. awesome job I am doing a website on grilling. maybe we can share some recipes in the future. Jerry

Absolutely Jerry! And photos will be up soon. Thanks for the input.

Great information for starting and taking care of a campfire! Keep going, you're doing great!

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