“Call me Ishmael”.One of the most iconic opening lines ever

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Today i want to tell you about a simple tool I learned about in my mastermind group. More about that freebie tool below.

Don’t discount how simple this tool is because it’s super effective.

Kinda like a “Moby Dick” secret to profitable copy.

At the opening sentence of the American classic, Moby Dick is:

“Call me Ishmael”.

Short. Yet it works.

This is definitely one of the most remembered, iconic, opening address in any book ever.

Have you ever read Moby Dick?

The 3 words “call me Ishmael” bring about intimacy and is immediate.

In neuro-linguistic programming, we call that an “embedded command”. A most powerful persuasive thing.

Important in anything you do right now to get your stuff sold online today.

Having a call to action is like an embedded command. You probably see me starting a caption to an IGTV or FB live with “watch this video to learn”...

Note the first 3 words.

Or you may have seen me ending a video or a Facebook Live with something like:

All you have to do is click on that button below to grab it.

Powerful.

Try that yourself in your next email, social media post, video, tweet, etc.

Even better. There’s a simple tool (you can google it as “Hemmingway app”) that copywriters use.

When I run “Call me Ishmael” through the Hemmingway website it comes back and tells me it’s a grade 3 level.

THIS IS HUGE.

Looking further I learned from my mastermind an interesting statistic about…

What makes a pop song hit #1 on the charts?

From Beyoncé, Foo Fighters, Adele, Eminem, and others here’s an interesting study that shows…

Guess what?

The lyrics of recent No. 1 singles average at a third-grade reading level.

You can read about that study here on the consequence of sound website.

It’s kinda neat to see song intelligence metrics right!?

Hmmmmm…

Interesting.

How does this relate to your Wealthy Affilaite training

Simple. Use the tool and make sure your headline or start to your copy is at a grade 3 level



The Hemingway app is a distraction-free writing and editing tool designed to help you polish your writing. It focuses on identifying common errors that bring down the quality of your prose: confusing sentence construction, overuse of weak adverbs, excessive passive voice, and the like.

The free app can be accessed below

http://www.hemingwayapp.com/

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Good morning Catherine,

I hope you're doing well and that business is good.

Thank you for your very thought-provoking post and wise information. How does the Hemingway app compare with Grammarly? Incidentally, I have just cancelled my subscription with Grammerly as I wasn't using the paid features. I had a special discounted price for the first year, I can't justify the cost for the second year.

Have a great day.

Roy

It is not like Grammarly it stops you writing in the passive voice

This is great. Thanks for sharing, Catherine. 😀👍
I read the post about song intelligence. It's interesting.

I thought it was very interesting and to be fair that was the point of the article I have written about the Heminway article before

Excellent Post and Share TheCatherine. Thank You very much.

Wow! This is awesome.

Awesome, Catherine. Thank you. :)
Paula

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