About TerenceGlo
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I'm Terence, 25 years old. Living in Amsterdam, The Netherlands. I'm just tired from working for a boss, that's why I've decided to start

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Just wrote "my story" for my website but English is not my first language. Still improving. Can someone check it for me if everything is alright? Also the the composition?

If you need further help with English Grammar, let me know, I'll help you.

I would keep it just make the paragraph shorter break them down keep everything you have just break into small paragraph having content is key and both Kyle and Carson will tell you having conent with 1000 words or more is key . as for grammar im not so good at it but love you about me ..... It is great just break your thoughs up into paragraphs

Thank you for thoughts on this. I wasn't sure if it was a good article, but you confirmed it for me :) Will break into small paragraphs!

I hope you have an open mind...this is very long...too long. Some clues for you. The first paragraph should introduce yourself, only introduce the ideas that you will elaborate on in the next paragraphs that follow one idea per paragraph only. Any paragraph can have as little as 2/3 sentences. Each paragraph contains only one thought. I hope this makes a little sense.

HI I'm definitely open minded and I understand your point. The thing is that it took me more than 2 hours to write this. Now you're suggesting to write this over. That would make me crazyyy :P hahah For now it's oke and I'll change it later! Have a nice day and thank you for your advice.

No I am not suggesting you write it over and yes you definitely put a lot of work into it...the suggestions are only for your future endeavors which I only wish you the best...

Understood you wrong. I will take a look at it!

I can edit this for you if you want. It won't take me five minutes.

In the meantime, there are grammar checkers online that can help you. Try Grammarly: https://www.grammarly.com/ They were recommended by Forbes and every writer I know recommends it. It's probably the best grammar checker you'll find online, and it's free.

You actually did pretty good for someone who is still learning English. If you keep writing and using it you'll get better. So keep going.

Thanks again Kinya, check your inbox!

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Can someone help me with grammar checking?

Can someone help me with grammar checking?

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Authoring & Writing Content
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Just wrote "my story" for my website but English is not my first language. Still improving. Can someone check it for me if everything is alright? Also the the composition?

If you need further help with English Grammar, let me know, I'll help you.

I would keep it just make the paragraph shorter break them down keep everything you have just break into small paragraph having content is key and both Kyle and Carson will tell you having conent with 1000 words or more is key . as for grammar im not so good at it but love you about me ..... It is great just break your thoughs up into paragraphs

Thank you for thoughts on this. I wasn't sure if it was a good article, but you confirmed it for me :) Will break into small paragraphs!

I hope you have an open mind...this is very long...too long. Some clues for you. The first paragraph should introduce yourself, only introduce the ideas that you will elaborate on in the next paragraphs that follow one idea per paragraph only. Any paragraph can have as little as 2/3 sentences. Each paragraph contains only one thought. I hope this makes a little sense.

HI I'm definitely open minded and I understand your point. The thing is that it took me more than 2 hours to write this. Now you're suggesting to write this over. That would make me crazyyy :P hahah For now it's oke and I'll change it later! Have a nice day and thank you for your advice.

No I am not suggesting you write it over and yes you definitely put a lot of work into it...the suggestions are only for your future endeavors which I only wish you the best...

Understood you wrong. I will take a look at it!

I can edit this for you if you want. It won't take me five minutes.

In the meantime, there are grammar checkers online that can help you. Try Grammarly: https://www.grammarly.com/ They were recommended by Forbes and every writer I know recommends it. It's probably the best grammar checker you'll find online, and it's free.

You actually did pretty good for someone who is still learning English. If you keep writing and using it you'll get better. So keep going.

Thanks again Kinya, check your inbox!

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