Revamp of my website about page
Hey fellow WA,
Would need your feedback, as I recently just revamp the page completely. My previous about page would feel a bit too personal, that's why I try to improve with some form of structure and objective.
http://stressproofyourmoney.com/about
Let me know how do you think.
Jeremy
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Should add a bit about how your visitors will be empowered with knowledge, mindset change and how the path to the top will enfold in the prccess if they follow your guidelines etc. Arouse their desire and curiosity. Make them feel this is what they really need, and they are about to start a new journey they have never before walked. Give them a guarantee that success is possible fro them from this moment onward etc. etc. How you formulate it is up to you, your creativity, the trust they will have in you.
Very nicely done Jeremy. It is concise and well perceived. I really cannot see any faults.
But then, who am I? I haven't even got a site up myself yet!
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Hi,
I love it, knowledge is power. I learned something from your about page too.
Blessings in abundance
Linda
haha, thank you, took me some times to come out with that.