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Wrote a new post regarding how to improve credit scores. Would love to know what you all think of it? http://stayathomemomincome.siterubix.com/
Hi,
I read you post, there's a lot valuable information that is helpful. If I may offer one suggestion, use subheadings to break "chunks" of information, this way the readers can see what you offering and how you can help them. Great post!
Thanks for the suggestion. I'll take a look at that tomorrow Getting kind of late here for me and I need to start getting the kids used to "school bedtime" again. Will take a look at your suggestion first thing tomorrow! Thanks again!!!
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Would love to know what you all think of my new post?
Wrote a new post regarding how to improve credit scores. Would love to know what you all think of it? http://stayathomemomincome.siterubix.com/
It looks good but it does need some improvements , like more paragraphs to be created. Could be longer as well. :)
Hi,
I read you post, there's a lot valuable information that is helpful. If I may offer one suggestion, use subheadings to break "chunks" of information, this way the readers can see what you offering and how you can help them. Great post!
Thanks for the suggestion. I'll take a look at that tomorrow Getting kind of late here for me and I need to start getting the kids used to "school bedtime" again. Will take a look at your suggestion first thing tomorrow! Thanks again!!!
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My website is based on selling WA memberships. However, I have a big interest lately in helping people clean up their credit score as that is a big hurdle that my husband and I
The smaller paragraphs is a good suggestion. Plugging through long paragraphs seems to put a lot of people off. (short attention spans)
I would suggest that you align justify so the paragraphs are even Aan uniform. If you align it won't look so choppy.(see image)
Also the link you inserted here;(see second image) would definitely look better as a hyperlink like this(see third image)
I understand you have a degree in journalism but have you ever written for a website before? It might be a little different than what you are used to.
Thanks for your input. It's still a work in progress and you make some good points. I will try working on it some more today!
Hi Tina, just because you promote Wealthy Affiliate, you don't have to go down the usual route of scam reviews as Kyle shows in his example. Target Audiences for Wealthy Affiliate There are a ton of people who could benefit from WA so if you have an interest in helping people improve their credit score and/or pay off their debt, you could dedicate your whole site to these people and promote WA as a way for people to make more money to improve their current situation.
Hope that helps.
Thanks for the input! That helps in the way I write the post since that is essentially the reason I joined WA in the first place. I need to edit my post to add that aspect to it. Thanks for the idea.
It is loosely based on your website if you think about it - when people have trouble with their credit score, it generally means they have current or past debts. When someone had debt, they want to earn money from home - see? It can work well! :)
Thanks JudeP. I should have thought of that reasoning because that is exactly why I am trying to make money from home.
Would you do me a favor and read my new post? I had an opinion from another member and literally rewrote it for a suggestion to me. I feel like his rewrite is really choppy - he made a lot of my paragraphs smaller. I do have a degree in journalism so I do know how to write so I'm having a hard time accepting his rewrite. I guess that's why I'm asking for your second opinion - because i know you write a lot of posts. I'd really appreciate your opinion. He also discouraged me from putting my link in the post. What do you think about that? Here is the link to the post http://stayathomemomincome.siterubix.com/
Thanks for your opinion!!
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Can my posts be about anything I want?
My website is based on selling WA memberships. However, I have a big interest lately in helping people clean up their credit score as that is a big hurdle that my husband and I
The smaller paragraphs is a good suggestion. Plugging through long paragraphs seems to put a lot of people off. (short attention spans)
I would suggest that you align justify so the paragraphs are even Aan uniform. If you align it won't look so choppy.(see image)
Also the link you inserted here;(see second image) would definitely look better as a hyperlink like this(see third image)
I understand you have a degree in journalism but have you ever written for a website before? It might be a little different than what you are used to.
Thanks for your input. It's still a work in progress and you make some good points. I will try working on it some more today!
Hi Tina, just because you promote Wealthy Affiliate, you don't have to go down the usual route of scam reviews as Kyle shows in his example. Target Audiences for Wealthy Affiliate There are a ton of people who could benefit from WA so if you have an interest in helping people improve their credit score and/or pay off their debt, you could dedicate your whole site to these people and promote WA as a way for people to make more money to improve their current situation.
Hope that helps.
Thanks for the input! That helps in the way I write the post since that is essentially the reason I joined WA in the first place. I need to edit my post to add that aspect to it. Thanks for the idea.
It is loosely based on your website if you think about it - when people have trouble with their credit score, it generally means they have current or past debts. When someone had debt, they want to earn money from home - see? It can work well! :)
Thanks JudeP. I should have thought of that reasoning because that is exactly why I am trying to make money from home.
Would you do me a favor and read my new post? I had an opinion from another member and literally rewrote it for a suggestion to me. I feel like his rewrite is really choppy - he made a lot of my paragraphs smaller. I do have a degree in journalism so I do know how to write so I'm having a hard time accepting his rewrite. I guess that's why I'm asking for your second opinion - because i know you write a lot of posts. I'd really appreciate your opinion. He also discouraged me from putting my link in the post. What do you think about that? Here is the link to the post http://stayathomemomincome.siterubix.com/
Thanks for your opinion!!
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It looks good but it does need some improvements , like more paragraphs to be created. Could be longer as well. :)