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if any of you lovely people fancy looking at my site an giving me some inspiration please feel free ;o)

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I want to look at your website, what is the address?

acelures.com

Hi Stiggey,

I've just had a look at your website and as On My Own Terms states, it is visually strong.

What is lacking is content, a few one liners are not enough. What are lures? Not everyone is aware of fishing terms, so perhaps you could write a thorough background into lures (this is also a term for flying falcons and catching rabbits so it's not just for the fishing community.)

What was the type of lure that was used to catch the fish in the picture? Why not include a photo or image of that alongside the photo of the catch to further illustrate

The text in the box regarding the history of the lure doesn't work for me scrolling across the screen in that method. There are a few typos and capital letters missing.

I think the concept is great, I love the theme you have chosen but just feel that it needs work - something that gives an air of knowledge and assistance.

These comments are intended to help you to grow your online potential.

With best wishes for your success in 2017.

Kaz

thanks for the feed back im really struggling with the content at mo....doing my head in

Hey, please don't struggle to the point where it's doing your head in - you've got a good idea going on in your website.

Look into getting 'speech to text'. Use the top search bar in WA as other people on here have discussed this. You talk to your computer as if you were talking to someone about fishing lures and you can then edit the text. It kind of types as you talk.

Another suggestion if you are finding content hard to write is take a look at Loes' training here: The other way to look at this is what would you like to see on a website? When you are looking for your fishing lures, what makes you visit one site over another? What would make you buy from a store? Have a look at other websites within your niche, don't copy but take ideas, the best bits and combine them onto your site.

There's no hurry on this, it's not a race, it's about personal achievement - look how far you have come already!

Good luck with your online success - I'm sure you will achieve your potential!

Kaz

cheers mate im gonna go for it tomorrow

Pleased to hear it! Let me know how you get on - there's a lot of very helpful people on here who can support your journey.

All the best,

Kaz

Looks good, but I know NOTHING about your subject matter. Visually it is strong.

thanks

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