About raygurung
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2017 is going to be a fun year i'm hoping. I just want to succeed so bad and be financially free. My ultimate goal is

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can you comment in my site, and get some engagement or even tips on how to get more engagement with people?http://fitmenforlife.com/best-ways-to-lose-weight-fast-for-men

In my opinion, the article is overall fine and has good subheadings, but needs a little extra meat under most of the subheadings. For example, when you say "coffee boosts your metabolism and so does green tea", you might add more information like if there was a research study or something like that. I personally heard somewhere that weightlifting (unlike walking or non-strength training exercise) continues to burn calories longer beyond the duration of the workout. You could elaborate on the extra benefits from weightlifting for losing weight.

OMG thank you for your insight. That really helps.

Hi there:

I took a peek of your website. The featured image does not show up in Google Chrome, so you will want to work on that.

Also, your font size is way too small....so increase the size of your font.

Be sure to utilize the SiteFeedback too. That is a place where you can give feedback and earn credits and then get quality feedback in return.

I hope that helps a little.

Steph

thank you stephanie for your feedback , and i did change the font in my article.

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Can you give me feedback on my article on diet for men?

Can you give me feedback on my article on diet for men?

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Social Engagement & Marketing
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can you comment in my site, and get some engagement or even tips on how to get more engagement with people?http://fitmenforlife.com/best-ways-to-lose-weight-fast-for-men

In my opinion, the article is overall fine and has good subheadings, but needs a little extra meat under most of the subheadings. For example, when you say "coffee boosts your metabolism and so does green tea", you might add more information like if there was a research study or something like that. I personally heard somewhere that weightlifting (unlike walking or non-strength training exercise) continues to burn calories longer beyond the duration of the workout. You could elaborate on the extra benefits from weightlifting for losing weight.

OMG thank you for your insight. That really helps.

Hi there:

I took a peek of your website. The featured image does not show up in Google Chrome, so you will want to work on that.

Also, your font size is way too small....so increase the size of your font.

Be sure to utilize the SiteFeedback too. That is a place where you can give feedback and earn credits and then get quality feedback in return.

I hope that helps a little.

Steph

thank you stephanie for your feedback , and i did change the font in my article.

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