Changed my Bio

bypaulgoodwin

5.9K followers

7 years ago

Hi Guys and Gals,

This i something for you all to think about.

When we first write our Bio at WA and on out website how good are we at writing?

If anything like me then not very good at all!

So how was your Bio?

Probably not very good at all Right?

I actually updated my Bio at the beginning of this year as I had made many improvements in my spelling and word positioning and so was big step up for me.

One thing I have learned is to remove many unnecessary words which makes the sentences flow much better (I was going to write "flow so much") But the "so" is not necessary and this has really helped.

Now this is important - a new member was reading my first page on my website and came back to me with three suggestions that I have never thought about before.

The first suggestion was - Do not use "I" too much in marketing and blog writing. So perhaps your first sentence could read "My passion" or "My life" has been spent...

The second was - Instead of "I make the cables", simply say "the cables are made to order". It sounds more professional and more like a business and less of a hobby.

The third was - a great tip for paragraphs. Limit them to 1-2 sentences and then create a new paragraph.

OK The first one was great and I changed my about me page and my home page , The second one was again great and I changed my Home page. The third one I do not agree with as I think it is better to use three and four line paragraphs.

Thank you to Pattie - PatriciaF1 who I think will do great here at WA!

So once again we are learning something new every day!