On a roll...
Encouraging news... second article slips neatly into place over at Street Articles without a murmur. The hold up on my first article was me being dumb, so with a jink* and a swerve I avoided dumbness this time and did it properly. This one is about why I don't have a full time job.
If you think you're unemployable like me, go and agree -- http://www.streetarticles.com/copywriting/i-am-unemployable-thank-the-lord and leave a comment. if you disagree, get on with your work. Somebody is watching you.
* Jink -- a fast step right then left used to mislead a tackling opponent in rugby, the sport of gentlemen. A bit like an uncompleted swerve. I can't describe a swerve without waving my arms about, but I'm guessing that you understand it.
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Hey Paul, one of my favorite lines from your article...
"After remodeling my home and creating a dedicated office I have cut my commuting time to under 30 seconds."
That's awesome. Congratulations and keep up the inspiring writing!
- Jeff
Just got done reading a few more of your articles. Very good Paul.
OK WA PEOPLE THIS IS THE GUY YOU WANT TO FOLLOW, IF YOU WANT TO LEARN WHAT A GOOD WRITING IS. READ HIS WORK AND LEARN!!! BEST WRITER I'VE SEEN AT WA SO FAR.
Notice how smooth it flows from word to word, and the sentences have a cadence, the paragraphs have a rhythm from one to the next. That's how a good writer does it. No big fancy words, or backwards written sentences that you have to read twice. I can almost speed read his work because it's so smooth... You are taken from point "A" then to point "B" throughout the writing process... not like that Yoda critter from Star Wars.... "had a Lamb, Mary did, and little".... there's nothing worse than reading backwards crap!
I'm not going to point out the other awesome things I liked, only that we should be looking at the basics, like how Paul does it.
Just sayin
Thanks Paul
I really don't know what to say Randy, but I couldn't let a glowing testimonial go without comment. So, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much.
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Came to the same conclusion when I became disabled, unemployable. Would get the interview, but when they saw me....So now am their competitor, online teaching to help those wanting to challenge the high school exit exam without the commute and college students the same with upper division classes. Now expanding as internet marketer, thanks to the WA. Your article was so very well written, but you already know that! Only thing though, am a 'spinning Jenny' and a Macgirlz. LOL. ^_~