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Hi folks! I had just completed a post this evening and thought I'd ask for a little bit of feedback on it. Any constructive criticism works for me as well. Thank you in advance.

I liked the site, great niche, good luck!

Hi Brad, thanks for visiting my site and thank you for the warm wishes. I like video games of course but with kids it's always good to go the high touch approach with the board games as opposed to just high tech.
Mike

Nice clean Site keep up the good work

Thank you Bill, I appreciate you reading it and your feedback
Mike

It seems fine for now, but you might consider writing a review for each game that you listed and have each of those links lead to your review article rather than your affiliate links.

I'm not sure how far you are into the course, but you will learn the basics of writing a product review, where you will discuss the pros and cons and give your overall verdict on whether or not the product warrants a purchase.

The review articles would therefore be a good place to deposit your affiliate links.

Went back and done one again hope its there this time :)

Thank you Katie, as I have replied back
Mike

Nice job Mike!

Thank you very much for your input. Although I haven't written a whole lot yet on my posts but I know I have to get the gears working in my head again to get some more ideas (just got to finish brushing off the cobwebs...lol) and get the creative writing going. more will follow. I would ideally like to help people make certain decisions on games out there and hopefully steer them in the right direction; making a few dollars in the process. Thank you again
Mike

Hi enjoyed your site and the posts have many happy memories with my children growing up one of our favorites was scrabble,left a comment not sure it worked as it came up captcha error

Hi Katie, thank you for taking the time and reading. Glad it helped give you some good memories to look upon and perhaps create some new ones with family again. never too late. I did not see any comments but thank you anyway. I always appreciate any feedback and please do drop in to visit my site any time; I am currently adding more items based on suggestions too.
Mike

Really great site Mike. Much info and great illustrations. I left you a comment.

Hi Patricia, thank you so much for your feedback, always appreciated. I saw your site as well and like how you have it set up. Keep up the good work and stay healthy
Mike

Great post Mike. I left you a comment. I'm happy to see you have my favorite travel game of LCR. Not only is that game so easy to transport, it can fit in your pocket, it is super easy to play and very addictive. Every person I have turned on to LCR has loved it!

Hi Robert, thanks for your comment and taking the time to read, especially coming from someone who is a bit of a gamer himself. By the way I included the LCR game based on your last comment on my site, and just purchased it as well to give it a try. Please feel free to drop in there anytime.
Mike

That's awesome Mike! And when you try LCR remember you need at least 2 other people to play it.The more people that play the more fun and longer the game will last.

Me and my friends add a money aspect to it. Everyone who plays puts a dollar in (can be any amount) and whoever wins the game wins the money. :-)

I guess you could call it "Poker Light'...lol. Yes I plan on at least 3 people to try it. Thanks again.
Mike

Just checked out your website. I like it. It's simple to navigate. There is a mistake in your sponsor links, in side bar. Sponsor is spelled with an "o", and not "sponser".
Left you a message

Hi there Gordi, thank you for your input and my spell check as well. I have rectified it Thanks again for your feedback and drop in anytime
Mike

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asked in
Authoring & Writing Content
Updated

Hi folks! I had just completed a post this evening and thought I'd ask for a little bit of feedback on it. Any constructive criticism works for me as well. Thank you in advance.

I liked the site, great niche, good luck!

Hi Brad, thanks for visiting my site and thank you for the warm wishes. I like video games of course but with kids it's always good to go the high touch approach with the board games as opposed to just high tech.
Mike

Nice clean Site keep up the good work

Thank you Bill, I appreciate you reading it and your feedback
Mike

It seems fine for now, but you might consider writing a review for each game that you listed and have each of those links lead to your review article rather than your affiliate links.

I'm not sure how far you are into the course, but you will learn the basics of writing a product review, where you will discuss the pros and cons and give your overall verdict on whether or not the product warrants a purchase.

The review articles would therefore be a good place to deposit your affiliate links.

Went back and done one again hope its there this time :)

Thank you Katie, as I have replied back
Mike

Nice job Mike!

Thank you very much for your input. Although I haven't written a whole lot yet on my posts but I know I have to get the gears working in my head again to get some more ideas (just got to finish brushing off the cobwebs...lol) and get the creative writing going. more will follow. I would ideally like to help people make certain decisions on games out there and hopefully steer them in the right direction; making a few dollars in the process. Thank you again
Mike

Hi enjoyed your site and the posts have many happy memories with my children growing up one of our favorites was scrabble,left a comment not sure it worked as it came up captcha error

Hi Katie, thank you for taking the time and reading. Glad it helped give you some good memories to look upon and perhaps create some new ones with family again. never too late. I did not see any comments but thank you anyway. I always appreciate any feedback and please do drop in to visit my site any time; I am currently adding more items based on suggestions too.
Mike

Really great site Mike. Much info and great illustrations. I left you a comment.

Hi Patricia, thank you so much for your feedback, always appreciated. I saw your site as well and like how you have it set up. Keep up the good work and stay healthy
Mike

Great post Mike. I left you a comment. I'm happy to see you have my favorite travel game of LCR. Not only is that game so easy to transport, it can fit in your pocket, it is super easy to play and very addictive. Every person I have turned on to LCR has loved it!

Hi Robert, thanks for your comment and taking the time to read, especially coming from someone who is a bit of a gamer himself. By the way I included the LCR game based on your last comment on my site, and just purchased it as well to give it a try. Please feel free to drop in there anytime.
Mike

That's awesome Mike! And when you try LCR remember you need at least 2 other people to play it.The more people that play the more fun and longer the game will last.

Me and my friends add a money aspect to it. Everyone who plays puts a dollar in (can be any amount) and whoever wins the game wins the money. :-)

I guess you could call it "Poker Light'...lol. Yes I plan on at least 3 people to try it. Thanks again.
Mike

Just checked out your website. I like it. It's simple to navigate. There is a mistake in your sponsor links, in side bar. Sponsor is spelled with an "o", and not "sponser".
Left you a message

Hi there Gordi, thank you for your input and my spell check as well. I have rectified it Thanks again for your feedback and drop in anytime
Mike

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