Into the Abyss

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We walked into the abyss together. You held my hand and pressed your palm upon my back. Slowly and without warning you pushed me down in the ground. I couldn't breathe or gain control of my body. With outstretched hands and closed eyes, I reached out for you. But you weren't there. I soon realized that you left me there all alone.

You wanted me to fail. You wanted me to be punished. You wanted to make a mockery of me. One day I would prove you wrong. But it wasn't your love I wanted. It was mine. I didn't need you anymore. I knew I could do it all alone.

When the rain washed down upon me, I was born again. The light had finally come to me. The path was clearer than ever before, and there wasn't an obstacle in my path. I can't shine a nickel with my shoes, but I can walk.

I can walk. And with one foot in front of the other I will be okay.



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Hang in there. You can do this. Sounds like truly painful story. I hope you're well. All the best you.
-Evan

Thanks glad you liked it. It's my fiction practice. Did it evoke feelings?

I seem to have developed a penchant for dark dramatic fiction.

I thought,...and hoped it was fiction. Yeah I was honestly worried about you. It conveyed pain, frustration, and painted an abstract matrix like vision of self discovery. I love writing and would be happy to help you as best I can. You did a good job. Keep up the good work. Are you working on a book? I am working on one currently and plan to write and publish several.
Your new friend.
-Evan

actually I just did that in 1 minute. Trying to convince myself that I'm not good enough to write a book.

I was trying to convey unknown without the pronoun I too much :( I'm still working on my writing. Thanks for the concerns and sweet compliments. Would love to read you sometime.

Thanks. I'm working on a book currently. That being said I haven't written fiction since I was in school. Thanks for the reciprocation.

Well I hope you convinced yourself other wise. Often when I write my blogs for WA I spend around 20min start to finish, with the majority of the time being spent to create a more visually appealing post with pictures etc.

It's important to remember that things don't have to be perfect for them to be good, or what people need to hear. We all naturally feel limited by what we feel we can do, but sometimes we need to face the fact that no body is perfect and what matters is that we share our very best.

Keep writing. ;)
-Evan

Anytime I write stuff like that others like it. Scary to think I could write an entire book. I'm a huge procrastinator. I'd just want to start a simple website and make small steps. Just having a hard time deciding between 3 sites.

Fair enough. Here is a link to a blog I wrote on niche discovery. Truly hope it helps. You can definitely write a book. It just takes organization, vision, and commitment. You if you are writing a fictional book I would recommend you brainstorm the story and then break it into chapter and go from there. You don't have to worry about making money with it right away. You can do it for fun.

Problem is the story runs through my head non stop. :(

Wow! Sounds like you have story inside you begging you to let it out! You need to work on creating a frame work for the story on paper. Perhaps a time line, etc. I'd be happy to chat with you more on the issue. That's an awesome problem to have! Keep your head up. ;)
-Evan

Aww thanks. It's on the back-burner for now. But I do have an outline.

Awesome! Power to you! ;)

yea But I need to work on my websites first. LoL if I can't write a post on a site, how can I write a book, lol.

Fair enough. Do you know what you'll be writing about on your websites?

well i have 2 domains from last time on wa i purchased in November. But I want to do the money making niche for now.

Okay fair enough. Now you have to work out your unique angle.

well I think I found the perfect domain, just not sure. Ugh I just want to get it now. I wanna start right away come am.

It takes time, don't sweat it. Breath...just breath...true greatness can't be rushed. Actions can be, but not the vision the dream, or the achievement. Don't lose hope.

Spoken like a writer. ;)

Thanks...

Well we are WA buds now :D

No kidding! I'm cool with it. ;)

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