Can you read my blog and give me some feedback. I just edited it and need to know if I'm flowing good and getting my point across the link is: http://thorofundinggroup.com/thoro-credit-repair-lessons

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AGOgden Premium
It makes perfectly good sense...
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FrankieTrill Premium
appreciate it
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AGOgden Premium
It is easy to follow and it flows nicely...as a former English professor I would give it a solid B+...keep up the great work...
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FrankieTrill Premium
Thanks I'm going back to make it an A thank you so much
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annie58 Premium
Hi Frankie,
I followed you and also read your blog.
I really liked the layout and the information was fantastic. There were a few spelling error:
brake should be BREAK
to much to digest should be TOO
today's society
The individual and I is the grammatical correction
In lesson one you have mistakenly written to instead of the-my credit score TO 700-800
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I hope that this is comprehensible,
ANN
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FrankieTrill Premium
Yes this is what I needed thank you so much will go and correct thank you so much
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kwikev Premium
Hi Frankie, I think your site is more complete than when I saw it last time. Good work, coming along nicely in my mind.

I think having your menu part of 2 lines seems a little cluttered. See if you can shorten some of the titles or put one of the least important links in a side bar or footer.

I still couldn't find a comment box where I looked and would have left a comment for your page if it was there.

You are going to do just fine. Keep at it!
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FrankieTrill Premium
Thank you I was thinking the same thing in my header menu so I will make adjustments and I thought I had a comment box will have to check into that thanks
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kwikev Premium
You must have one some place, there are comments left but the pages I checked I didn't find it right off. You have to toggle it on for each page.
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VeronicasLuv Premium
Best place to request comments or feedback is to use the Site Rubix, Frankie.
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FrankieTrill Premium
I use that feed as well and thank for the advice will do again
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