Reconnecting...
As we are building out our websites, it is always nice to get some feedback and insights from "others" as to how we are doing. It can lead to us getting a better understanding of the process and it will lead to a much higher quality website.
If you are needing a website review, post your website URL here for feedback.
Example:
Hey guys, I am just building a website in the weight loss niche and am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website. Here is my domain:
http://howtolosebellyfattoday.com/
Thanks!
But remember, this is a community here at Wealthy Affiliate and don't just post your link and leave. Offer others the same sort of help you are about to get. Whenever you post your website here, make sure that you offer your opinions and insights on at least two other websites.
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Noreen101
Premium
Hi everyone,
I am currently trying to build an online clothes and apparel website and would appreciate your feedback on how I can improve it better. I have got the links yet where I can start providing selling stuff but if you can also help me on where to start and how to start please feel free to drop a line here or message me. Every little advise helps.
https://wiltshirefashion-uk.siterubix.com/
Cheers!
Best regards - Noreen
I am currently trying to build an online clothes and apparel website and would appreciate your feedback on how I can improve it better. I have got the links yet where I can start providing selling stuff but if you can also help me on where to start and how to start please feel free to drop a line here or message me. Every little advise helps.
https://wiltshirefashion-uk.siterubix.com/
Cheers!
Best regards - Noreen
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DianeScorpio
Premium
Hi - obviously its a work in progress, but before you start adding any links, you need to add more content.
I see you have added categories to your menu, but these just lead to empty pages at the moment. Google doesn't like to see blank pages, so it may be better to remove them until you have added some articles.
I see you have added categories to your menu, but these just lead to empty pages at the moment. Google doesn't like to see blank pages, so it may be better to remove them until you have added some articles.
andrea87ms
Premium
Hello all,
I would be really grateful if you could provide some general feedback on my website. It's about natural and organic skincare:
https://skinawesomeness.com/
The most recent post is about a great natural ingredient for skin, Manuka honey.
I know that the images are very big on all my posts, so if you know a tool I can use to reduce the size (without having to cut the picture), please let me know about it.
Many thanks in advance.
Andrea
I would be really grateful if you could provide some general feedback on my website. It's about natural and organic skincare:
https://skinawesomeness.com/
The most recent post is about a great natural ingredient for skin, Manuka honey.
I know that the images are very big on all my posts, so if you know a tool I can use to reduce the size (without having to cut the picture), please let me know about it.
Many thanks in advance.
Andrea
NurseAngela
Premium
Hi Andrea,
I love your website! I really like the clean, white background & sort of minimalist theme. I, too, have struggled (& stil do struggle) with acne. At first, I expected the website to be about products, but I love that you are offering great natural recipes as well as lifestyle changes to address acne from its many different causes.
Your articles are broken up just enough. Not too much information at a time, & the photos are nice. It looks professional & there is continuity of design & layout.
Looks good!
Angela
https://www.chopshopwrestling.com
I love your website! I really like the clean, white background & sort of minimalist theme. I, too, have struggled (& stil do struggle) with acne. At first, I expected the website to be about products, but I love that you are offering great natural recipes as well as lifestyle changes to address acne from its many different causes.
Your articles are broken up just enough. Not too much information at a time, & the photos are nice. It looks professional & there is continuity of design & layout.
Looks good!
Angela
https://www.chopshopwrestling.com
andrea87ms
Premium
Hi Angela!
Many thanks for your comment, and for taking the time in checking my website :) The minimalist and clean theme is definitely something I really like about my website. I've tried to change the theme a few times recently, and despite trying different ones, none of them convinced me like the one I'm using now.
Indeed, I think the best way to organising my posts would be making them a mix of informative and review articles.
Regarding the structure of them, I think I should make them a bit longer, as they are around +800 words, but the ideal thing would be 1000 words. However, I've been stuck with the writing and I've only been able to write an article per month (and there is a gap in between).
I will be reviewing your site soon!
Regards,
Andrea
Many thanks for your comment, and for taking the time in checking my website :) The minimalist and clean theme is definitely something I really like about my website. I've tried to change the theme a few times recently, and despite trying different ones, none of them convinced me like the one I'm using now.
Indeed, I think the best way to organising my posts would be making them a mix of informative and review articles.
Regarding the structure of them, I think I should make them a bit longer, as they are around +800 words, but the ideal thing would be 1000 words. However, I've been stuck with the writing and I've only been able to write an article per month (and there is a gap in between).
I will be reviewing your site soon!
Regards,
Andrea
andrea87ms
Premium
Hi Christine!
Thank you for taking the time in reviewing my website ;) I have responded to your comment and will take a look at your site soon.
Regards,
Andrea
Thank you for taking the time in reviewing my website ;) I have responded to your comment and will take a look at your site soon.
Regards,
Andrea
HarryCheema
Premium
Hey guys,
I am just building a website based around the spirituality niche. Posted a new article on "How to Be Happy", wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am doing so far.
https://soulmuzings.com/happiness/
I'll be happy to do the same if you can send me your link.
Thanking you in advance.
Regards
Harry.
I am just building a website based around the spirituality niche. Posted a new article on "How to Be Happy", wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am doing so far.
https://soulmuzings.com/happiness/
I'll be happy to do the same if you can send me your link.
Thanking you in advance.
Regards
Harry.
NurseAngela
Premium
Hi Harry,
I love the concept of your website! If there's anything we can use more of, it's positive, thoughtful, & motivational content for personal growth.
I like that you incorporated video content into your site as well.
Looks like you are on the right track. I would consider breaking the content up a bit more & incorporating some more photos.
I enjoyed reading your articles. So much truth & valuable wisdom!
If you wouldn't mind offering your feedback as well? Thanks in advance.
Angela
https://www.chopshopwrestling.com
I love the concept of your website! If there's anything we can use more of, it's positive, thoughtful, & motivational content for personal growth.
I like that you incorporated video content into your site as well.
Looks like you are on the right track. I would consider breaking the content up a bit more & incorporating some more photos.
I enjoyed reading your articles. So much truth & valuable wisdom!
If you wouldn't mind offering your feedback as well? Thanks in advance.
Angela
https://www.chopshopwrestling.com
HarryCheema
Premium
Hi Angela,
Thanks for your valuable feedback and appreciation for the content.
Some good points you have mentioned there...would break up the text a bit and add some more images for sure. Thanx again..
Going to look at your website now and get back to you. Have a great day.
Kind Regards
Harry.
Thanks for your valuable feedback and appreciation for the content.
Some good points you have mentioned there...would break up the text a bit and add some more images for sure. Thanx again..
Going to look at your website now and get back to you. Have a great day.
Kind Regards
Harry.
SPranzetti
Premium
Hi there,
I am in the process of building my website in the eco-friendly/zero waste shopping niche. I would be super happy about your feedback. Any thoughts are welcome, thanks so much in advance for any feedback you can provide. Very happy to return the favor!
Silke
This is my domain: http://ishopnsavetheplanet.com
I am in the process of building my website in the eco-friendly/zero waste shopping niche. I would be super happy about your feedback. Any thoughts are welcome, thanks so much in advance for any feedback you can provide. Very happy to return the favor!
Silke
This is my domain: http://ishopnsavetheplanet.com
DianeScorpio
Premium
Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate using Site Manager.
lindseyt1181
Premium
Hey everyone!
Im on level 3 of training and have just added affiliate links to the 2 posts I have. Please let me know what you think so far. Im not happy with the theme but I haven't figured out how to change it or add pictures to the home page. Thanks so much!
www.teacherwellness12.com
Im on level 3 of training and have just added affiliate links to the 2 posts I have. Please let me know what you think so far. Im not happy with the theme but I haven't figured out how to change it or add pictures to the home page. Thanks so much!
www.teacherwellness12.com
AJTrimble1
Premium
Fist, as far as the theme, I always recommend that you use the Hiero theme like Kyle has in the training. That way every time you do something you can immediately see if it looks like what he has and know if something got missed.
As far as the content, it's well written, although I would certainly recommend you make it longer. Kyle recommends a minimum of 1000 words, the health and wellness niche is extremely competitive, so you may need even two or three times that in order to compete.
You're off to a good start. Just beef up the content some more and you'll do great. :-)
As far as the content, it's well written, although I would certainly recommend you make it longer. Kyle recommends a minimum of 1000 words, the health and wellness niche is extremely competitive, so you may need even two or three times that in order to compete.
You're off to a good start. Just beef up the content some more and you'll do great. :-)
Sharriv
Premium
hello I do like the theme. Keep it simple and your pages have great pictures. Where did you get them from?
Also have to agree with AJtrimble1 that your post need to be way longer. all of the points given on the benefits of exercise you can elaborate each of them. It does take time to do some research but it will help you in the end.
hopes this help and good luck with your website.
cheers
Also have to agree with AJtrimble1 that your post need to be way longer. all of the points given on the benefits of exercise you can elaborate each of them. It does take time to do some research but it will help you in the end.
hopes this help and good luck with your website.
cheers
lindseyt1181
Premium
lindseyt1181
Premium
Thanks so much for the feedback! It is a competitive theme, but im hoping the angle is somewhat unique. I will definitely add more to each article.
DianeScorpio
Premium
Twack
Premium
Hello everyone, I'm just about half way through Level five of the OEC training, I 'd like to get it wrapped up before the next assignment...not necessary, I know...but those unticked boxes grate me. Here's the site, obviously a work in progress but any and all feedback gratefully received...There are some image issues that I haven't resolved yet...'related posts' at the bottom of each post are just blank..any ideas would help. It's a 'Sierra' theme. Muchly thanking you.
www.niches4u.com
www.niches4u.com
Twack
Premium
All good, not harsh at all. I just appreciate someone else having a look and being honest. We see our own stuff differently and it's good to have a view through someone else's eyes. I had toyed with the idea of another 'image' instead of the big blue mountain range but as yet I'm not brave enough to try messing with what's there.
Thanks again.
Thanks again.
DianeScorpio
Premium
Dylan2504
Premium
Hi all,
I'd love some feedback on my site thus far. I'd especially like feedback on my content in particular, but any other points raised will be appreciated.
I've already left feedback on a number of other people's sites. Please pay it forward and do the same.
https://organiseguy.com/
Cheers WA fam,
Dylan
I'd love some feedback on my site thus far. I'd especially like feedback on my content in particular, but any other points raised will be appreciated.
I've already left feedback on a number of other people's sites. Please pay it forward and do the same.
https://organiseguy.com/
Cheers WA fam,
Dylan
Bern-M
Premium
Hi, you have nice website and content. Images were all good. You are like someone who has been with WA for a long time creating articles. Just want to ask if where did you get your images. Thanks
Could you please review my website as well? Thank you
http://newlosebellyfat.com
Could you please review my website as well? Thank you
http://newlosebellyfat.com
Twack
Premium
Hey Dylan, I love the look of your site, it feels like it reflects the 'niche'. Very clean and organised. Left you a comment...took away some tips. Nice one, thank you.
Dylan2504
Premium
Twack
Premium
No worries, enjoyed my time there...I'm a bit OCD so organising is both a pleasure and a necessity. Be well.
RodandShell
Premium
Hi Everyone,
Shelley and I just finished commenting on 3 sites. It's interesting to read all the different sites, see the hard work people are putting in, and how they are starting to incorporate affiliate links. Nice work!
We aren't quite at that point yet, as we are still working to build out content. Any feedback on this two part series we did on Core Exercises for Low Back Pain would be really appreciated:
http://youtrainyou.com/core-exercises-for-lower-back-pain-brace-for-impact-part-1/
http://youtrainyou.com/core-exercises-for-lower-back-pain-part-2/
As we continue to work on our site, we will certainly keep checking in on as many sites as we can.
Rodney and Shelley
Shelley and I just finished commenting on 3 sites. It's interesting to read all the different sites, see the hard work people are putting in, and how they are starting to incorporate affiliate links. Nice work!
We aren't quite at that point yet, as we are still working to build out content. Any feedback on this two part series we did on Core Exercises for Low Back Pain would be really appreciated:
http://youtrainyou.com/core-exercises-for-lower-back-pain-brace-for-impact-part-1/
http://youtrainyou.com/core-exercises-for-lower-back-pain-part-2/
As we continue to work on our site, we will certainly keep checking in on as many sites as we can.
Rodney and Shelley
DianeScorpio
Premium
Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate using Site Manager.
RodandShell
Premium
Thank you! We weren't aware of this. We just switched on our SSL Certificate.
RosanaHart
Premium
Like your subtitle!
It looked odd to me that all the comments in the sidebar on the page you sent us to were by Rodney, so I clicked through and saw they actually were not. I'm not sure how to fix this, look at the comments settings in your theme.
Book titles should stand out by being italicized.
Coles notes is not a common phrase in the US. I could guess what it means so it's not a big deal.
Very professional articles! Long, with the videos, explaining clearly, good theme, good work!
It looked odd to me that all the comments in the sidebar on the page you sent us to were by Rodney, so I clicked through and saw they actually were not. I'm not sure how to fix this, look at the comments settings in your theme.
Book titles should stand out by being italicized.
Coles notes is not a common phrase in the US. I could guess what it means so it's not a big deal.
Very professional articles! Long, with the videos, explaining clearly, good theme, good work!
RodandShell
Premium
Thank you for the feedback.
I think it only shows my comments in the sidebar because we received all 7 comments before I started offering feedback. I guess that means the 7 most recent comments are all by me, even though it's me responding to the comments people made. At least, I think that's why it happened.
Sorry about the Coles notes thing, I changed that so people won't get confused.
We were a little worried about the length of some of the posts, but sometimes it's hard to get the message across in around 1000 words. We will work on that.
Thanks again!
I think it only shows my comments in the sidebar because we received all 7 comments before I started offering feedback. I guess that means the 7 most recent comments are all by me, even though it's me responding to the comments people made. At least, I think that's why it happened.
Sorry about the Coles notes thing, I changed that so people won't get confused.
We were a little worried about the length of some of the posts, but sometimes it's hard to get the message across in around 1000 words. We will work on that.
Thanks again!
MichaelGore
Premium
Hey everyone, hope you're well.
If some of you would be so kind as to leave some comments that would be great:
https://chartxgames.com/ea-origin-security-flaw
Please let me know with a PM and give me a link and I would be more than happy to provide some comments for you.
Thank you,
Michael.
If some of you would be so kind as to leave some comments that would be great:
https://chartxgames.com/ea-origin-security-flaw
Please let me know with a PM and give me a link and I would be more than happy to provide some comments for you.
Thank you,
Michael.
VEhret
Premium
Hi Jordyn,
Your site is beautiful, I love your website theme. It's very visual as it should be, with large hi-resolution pictures that invite to go to the beach.
I only see a couple of things to suggest at this point:
1. I see you are set with your affiliate links going to the advertisers' pages. I would prefer these pages to open in a new tab, so the user may come back to your blog/ menu easily.
2. Your about Jordyn page is very nice and personal. It makes your visitor feel like connecting with you. A detail, if I may: you could change the back ground of your portrait picture from a brick wall (too urban) to something more beach-like? Perhaps you could also wear sun glasses on your head ... or showing an accessory suggesting you are actually on the beach ... beach bag, and wearing less dressy clothes.
My website is far less advanced than yours, but please I would welcome any comments, suggestions you have. I realize I still have a great deal of work before reaching the point where you are.
Thanks in advance.
www.thepurebrewer.com
Cheers,
Vincent
Your site is beautiful, I love your website theme. It's very visual as it should be, with large hi-resolution pictures that invite to go to the beach.
I only see a couple of things to suggest at this point:
1. I see you are set with your affiliate links going to the advertisers' pages. I would prefer these pages to open in a new tab, so the user may come back to your blog/ menu easily.
2. Your about Jordyn page is very nice and personal. It makes your visitor feel like connecting with you. A detail, if I may: you could change the back ground of your portrait picture from a brick wall (too urban) to something more beach-like? Perhaps you could also wear sun glasses on your head ... or showing an accessory suggesting you are actually on the beach ... beach bag, and wearing less dressy clothes.
My website is far less advanced than yours, but please I would welcome any comments, suggestions you have. I realize I still have a great deal of work before reaching the point where you are.
Thanks in advance.
www.thepurebrewer.com
Cheers,
Vincent
NurseAngela
Premium
Hi Vincent! I was fascinated by the information you provide on your website. I didn't think I would be much interested in beer & brewing, but I stand corrected. I had no knowledge of the brewing process, but as it turns out I enjoy fermented foods & drinks (Water Kefit, Kimchi, Kombucha), so this is actually right up my alley.
It was pleasant to read, with an organized feel, & a steady growth of content. Nice!
I'd love to hear your feedback on my site as well. Thanks!
www.theworkathomenurse.com
It was pleasant to read, with an organized feel, & a steady growth of content. Nice!
I'd love to hear your feedback on my site as well. Thanks!
www.theworkathomenurse.com
VEhret
Premium
Hi Angela,
I love all kinds of fermentation processes: Kefir, Kombucha, yogurts ... I'll be happy to check out your site and give you my opinion.
Cheers,
Vincent
I love all kinds of fermentation processes: Kefir, Kombucha, yogurts ... I'll be happy to check out your site and give you my opinion.
Cheers,
Vincent
VEhret
Premium
Hi again Angela,
I find your business model very interesting - helping people in a professional circle you know first hand: nurses to start a career online through WA. Clearly this is what you promote, it's brilliant.
I like the upbeat, busy feel about you pages.
A couple of suggestion/ question:
On your page "Free Training", the link/ picture "Free Training, start today" should be bigger and in the middle in the page. It's easy to miss it on the left.
In the Amazon books Ads you feature in the banner at the bottom of your page: is the story of Coca-Cola relevant to online business?
Cheers,
Vincent
I find your business model very interesting - helping people in a professional circle you know first hand: nurses to start a career online through WA. Clearly this is what you promote, it's brilliant.
I like the upbeat, busy feel about you pages.
A couple of suggestion/ question:
On your page "Free Training", the link/ picture "Free Training, start today" should be bigger and in the middle in the page. It's easy to miss it on the left.
In the Amazon books Ads you feature in the banner at the bottom of your page: is the story of Coca-Cola relevant to online business?
Cheers,
Vincent
AmandaCayen
Premium
Hey guys. I was told in the training to ask for feedback on my new post. Honestly it's not my favourite one so far but I feel like I'm running out of stuff to write about. Please comment on it and I will do the same for you!
https://neptunes-world.com/brachycephalic-syndrome-dogs
https://neptunes-world.com/brachycephalic-syndrome-dogs
Christian986
Premium
Honestly I would write according to a schedule. DON'T write everyday. try 1-3 posts a week, heck 1 or 2 posts every other week. Think about topics that pertain to you site. Grooming, Dog breeds, pet toys, pet food, reviews of aforementioned topics etc. It might not be your favorite, but you never know it could be a winner. Message me if you need more help!
oscarndayiz
Premium
Hello everyone, I need some insightful ideas about my website.
I have been working on it for a while and would like to hear from other community members. How does the house I'm building daily look like?
I recently use a new theme --OceanWP---to make it simple.
But there is the copyright thing in the footer 3 and "Place your content here" in the top...I failed to edit these....Here is my website url:
https://21stcenturyresearchers.net
I have been working on it for a while and would like to hear from other community members. How does the house I'm building daily look like?
I recently use a new theme --OceanWP---to make it simple.
But there is the copyright thing in the footer 3 and "Place your content here" in the top...I failed to edit these....Here is my website url:
https://21stcenturyresearchers.net
Nkaujzeb
Premium
Hi, Oscar, I like that you have a lot of content which is wonderful plus it's simple to navigate, however, it could need a few images just to make it pop a little not too much two images per 1000 words.
Other than that it looks great to me. Keep building your house it's on a solid foundation.
Kelyee
Other than that it looks great to me. Keep building your house it's on a solid foundation.
Kelyee
keishalina9
Premium
hey hi Oscar & welcome to Wealthy Affiliate (WA) Premium!
Yes, of course, a house needs to be built on a solid foundation ... looks like some good beginnings .... just a wee suggestion -- to engage your audience --your 'about me' looks more like a c.v. or a resume of some kind .... you might want to have a look again at that ...
encourage you to keep moving forward and onward with building your Success!
all the best, cheerio .... :)
Yes, of course, a house needs to be built on a solid foundation ... looks like some good beginnings .... just a wee suggestion -- to engage your audience --your 'about me' looks more like a c.v. or a resume of some kind .... you might want to have a look again at that ...
encourage you to keep moving forward and onward with building your Success!
all the best, cheerio .... :)
oscarndayiz
Premium
oscarndayiz
Premium
Hello...Thank you for stopping and looking at my house!
I'm going to reshape my about me page and wanna learn house to write a catchy "static page."
Thank you again for your time.
Oscar
I'm going to reshape my about me page and wanna learn house to write a catchy "static page."
Thank you again for your time.
Oscar
EllieMisc
Premium
Hello everyone,
May I please request feedback on the following link if anyone has a few minutes to spare? I'm currently waiting for the Site Feedback section to have websites available for me to comment on.
I already have a list of things I would change about this site, but don't have the skills/training yet to do this (change fonts, add photos, etc). I've had an attempt at changing a few bits then freaked that I would ruin what was already built and left it as it was ha ha!
http://pluspinkpearls.com/
PS shouldn't I now be able to have Plus Pink Pearls as the header on my website????
Many thanks
May I please request feedback on the following link if anyone has a few minutes to spare? I'm currently waiting for the Site Feedback section to have websites available for me to comment on.
I already have a list of things I would change about this site, but don't have the skills/training yet to do this (change fonts, add photos, etc). I've had an attempt at changing a few bits then freaked that I would ruin what was already built and left it as it was ha ha!
http://pluspinkpearls.com/
PS shouldn't I now be able to have Plus Pink Pearls as the header on my website????
Many thanks
JohnCrossley
Premium
Hi Ellie, I think your website is coming along nicely. Would like to have seen some images. One of you on your about me page and some images on your first post.
But the structure of your website looks ok. I would also recommend you turn your SSL on. It is free as you a premium member. have linked to the training for this below: How to turn your Website SSL On hope that helps
John
But the structure of your website looks ok. I would also recommend you turn your SSL on. It is free as you a premium member. have linked to the training for this below: How to turn your Website SSL On hope that helps
John
EllieMisc
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delimarod
Premium
Hey everyone!
I am just building a website in the empowerment niche and am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website. You can PM if you like I would do the same. Here is my website:
http://growth-digger.com
Sincerely,
Delimar Rodriguez
I am just building a website in the empowerment niche and am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website. You can PM if you like I would do the same. Here is my website:
http://growth-digger.com
Sincerely,
Delimar Rodriguez
AJTrimble1
Premium
I didn't have time to look too in depth, but a quick run through looks like you're off to a good start. You will need to secure your site, though. In the menu on the left, go to Websites > Site Manager. Find your site and click on "Details" on the lower right. Scroll down until you see SiteSSL (HTTPS) and make sure it is turned on.
EddieSand
Premium
I like the clean look and good flow to your topic. it makes it personal with your picture on the sidebar. good job!
Another small thing to add could be a call to action, like a report to download. It will start building your brand and you will start building your list. And another thing could be adding some images to your future articles, it will help the visualization of your inspirational content.
Another small thing to add could be a call to action, like a report to download. It will start building your brand and you will start building your list. And another thing could be adding some images to your future articles, it will help the visualization of your inspirational content.
Mattd4288
Premium
Hey there Del, definitely need to secure your site like AJ said. Also, I noticed a few sentence mistakes, not misspelled words, but content that may be confusing. The same thing happens to me sometimes when a publish a post. Lately, I've been proof-reading my content after I publish it two or three times, and I look for areas where I can use different words to better get my point across.
Other than that I enjoyed your site a lot, and I found it to be very helpful on a personal level.
-Matt
Other than that I enjoyed your site a lot, and I found it to be very helpful on a personal level.
-Matt
ayockson
Premium
You've so much work on your site am so impressed with the background and the theme you used it's a great sight to behold.
I noticed your post are uncategorized and no tags, you need to categorise and tag your post so they can be SEO friendly.
Wish you more success on this journey
I noticed your post are uncategorized and no tags, you need to categorise and tag your post so they can be SEO friendly.
Wish you more success on this journey
gartenl
Premium
Mattd4288 I had a visit. It looks like you have been in business for a while. Do you sell sound products mostly? The site looked wonderful with all your special effects. But when scrolling down I saw exercise equipment. Was it a change in the product or was there special headphones to wear? Sorry, I am not very used to your niche. I am probably just confused because of that.
Duckman4
Premium
I too wold like some feedback on my site. It's still in its infancy and I am building out more content, but my friends are telling me its not too good.??? So, with your learned expertise and feedback, perhaps I can improve it so it can be discovered by Google and get indexed.
JagiR
Premium
From what I see you should add a header photo which represents your site.
Get rid of the search bar for now. Put it back in later when you have more to search for
Move your privacy policy down into a footer widget. Don't forget to add a disclaimer in there as well.
Change the color of the menu, the color you have now does not work with the font you are using in the menu.
Keep adding content :), the more full it starts to look the better it will be for you.
Add some widgets into the right sidebar, and pop in some attractive pictures or link to your about me page in there. Don't forget to add your picture in there.
Get rid of the search bar for now. Put it back in later when you have more to search for
Move your privacy policy down into a footer widget. Don't forget to add a disclaimer in there as well.
Change the color of the menu, the color you have now does not work with the font you are using in the menu.
Keep adding content :), the more full it starts to look the better it will be for you.
Add some widgets into the right sidebar, and pop in some attractive pictures or link to your about me page in there. Don't forget to add your picture in there.
Duckman4
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Duckman4
Premium
Thank you for the feedback. I can't seem to get a header photo added??? Hmmm. Don't know what I'm doing wrong. Also, there is no way to remove the search bar from the header area. I have tried everything to get that out but to no avail. Anyone know what I have to do to get that gone??
FlorianHoff
Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/25-tips-for-a-motivated-mind-that-will-change-your-life/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/25-tips-for-a-motivated-mind-that-will-change-your-life/
FlorianHoff
Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-develop-a-mindset-about-success/
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
BTW. This Blog is about a Success Mindset. I think it will help you if you have a hard time to write a lot of blogs and believe in it!
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-develop-a-mindset-about-success/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-develop-a-mindset-about-success/
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
BTW. This Blog is about a Success Mindset. I think it will help you if you have a hard time to write a lot of blogs and believe in it!
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-develop-a-mindset-about-success/
RoyB2
Premium
I like your post, even signed up for your ebook. It is very well written, and very helpful content. The topic is very well chosen, and should help everyone that reads it.
Roy
Roy
LouiseBT
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Hi there
Great article - thank you so much for sharing.
I left a comment for you :-)
You are welcome to return the comment favour for me at my How To Discover Your Why article https://latebloomerwealthyaffiliate.com/how-to-discover-your-why-why-its-important/
Blessings
Louise
Great article - thank you so much for sharing.
I left a comment for you :-)
You are welcome to return the comment favour for me at my How To Discover Your Why article https://latebloomerwealthyaffiliate.com/how-to-discover-your-why-why-its-important/
Blessings
Louise
csamson21
Premium
Good afternoon WA community,
I have two new published posts that I've been working on the last few days. Any feedback/comments would be great! I will most definitely do the same for you if you message.
Here are the links:
https://odrbackpacking.com/the-yeti-30-oz-tumbler-a-backpacking-coffee-lover-review/
https://odrbackpacking.com/mountain-house-freeze-dried-food-a-feeding-backpackers-since-1969-review/
Thanks in advance!
I have two new published posts that I've been working on the last few days. Any feedback/comments would be great! I will most definitely do the same for you if you message.
Here are the links:
https://odrbackpacking.com/the-yeti-30-oz-tumbler-a-backpacking-coffee-lover-review/
https://odrbackpacking.com/mountain-house-freeze-dried-food-a-feeding-backpackers-since-1969-review/
Thanks in advance!
smmcinto
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madcab
Premium
Hello there! I have a new post on my website, and I would appreciate some feedback. Here is the link:
https://getwoodentoys.com/
If you left me a comment, please leave a reply here so I can return a favor!
I wish you all nice and successful day!
Marko
https://getwoodentoys.com/
If you left me a comment, please leave a reply here so I can return a favor!
I wish you all nice and successful day!
Marko
denkweise
Premium
Hello awesome people.
I know this site needs work, but I miss things.
I would love to have your constructive criticism of the following:
https://truetechtalk.com
The definite purpose of the website is to educate people on news, skills, and other topics in technology. Not all posts have affiliate links.
You are all people who use technology. This site should be helpful to you. Please PM your blunt and honest feed back. If you want to see research or an article done on a topic please pm that as well.
I know this site needs work, but I miss things.
I would love to have your constructive criticism of the following:
https://truetechtalk.com
The definite purpose of the website is to educate people on news, skills, and other topics in technology. Not all posts have affiliate links.
You are all people who use technology. This site should be helpful to you. Please PM your blunt and honest feed back. If you want to see research or an article done on a topic please pm that as well.
Hello everyone! I just created my first post to my website. I took me so long to really write what I wanted to express for my niche and would be awesome to hear opinions about it as things I can improve:
emmaalcedo . siterubix. com/who-am-i/
Thank you so much in advance!
Happy Friday
emmaalcedo . siterubix. com/who-am-i/
Thank you so much in advance!
Happy Friday
Mathessa40
Premium
hi cant click on your site its wrong (sorry)
need to look like this: https://householdappliances.siterubix.com/wp-admin/
so we can click and open it
need to look like this: https://householdappliances.siterubix.com/wp-admin/
so we can click and open it
Hi. Yes can't put it directly as that because I'm not premium yet so I can't put links on comments. But is that all together
FlorianHoff
Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/concentration-techniques/
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/concentration-techniques/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/concentration-techniques/
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/concentration-techniques/
imyuve
Premium
I liked the way you linked your post to Facebook, Pinterest and Twiiter. And the anothers.
Nelcea1
Premium
Hello everyone.
I have posted my post on my website and would greatllllllly! appreciate it if you would take a look at it and tell me what you think .
I know I need help so speak. I will listen.
I will also pay it forward and do the same for you.
https://veggiesoverfifty.com
I have posted my post on my website and would greatllllllly! appreciate it if you would take a look at it and tell me what you think .
I know I need help so speak. I will listen.
I will also pay it forward and do the same for you.
https://veggiesoverfifty.com
JAM83
Premium
I left a comment on Is Avocado Brain Food. I like the information and how you share your personal experience. There is some misspelling throughout your content, including your topic headings, you misspelled brain. The grammar needs some work as well. While you're working on your post, you should be able to see the spell and grammar option before you publish the post. You could use more images as well but you'll get to that as you go through your training and build your site. Other than that, its looking nice. You're doing great. Veggies are an important thing in our life that a lot of people take for granted in this world that is regularly trying to feed us things that can harm us and damage our body's and brain. You've got a great thing going. Keep it going. I almost forgot, hahaha, this is my site if you could choose a post and leave a comment, I'd appreciate it. Thanks.
BabyBooksWorld.com
BabyBooksWorld.com
ronz83
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csamson21
Premium
Good morning, WA community!
I have a couple new review posts that I would love to get some feedback or comments on. I will most definitely return the favour. Just message me if you have done so.
https://odrbackpacking.com/the-trangia-cook-set-outdoor-cooking-made-easy/
https://odrbackpacking.com/msr-elixir-2-review-a-reliable-durable-backpacking-tent/
Thanks in advance!
Cheers!
I have a couple new review posts that I would love to get some feedback or comments on. I will most definitely return the favour. Just message me if you have done so.
https://odrbackpacking.com/the-trangia-cook-set-outdoor-cooking-made-easy/
https://odrbackpacking.com/msr-elixir-2-review-a-reliable-durable-backpacking-tent/
Thanks in advance!
Cheers!
Kuppinger
Premium
I will leave comments and feedback on both of your posts. Will you leave comments on any post of mine? allrescuedogs.com.
Kuppinger
Premium
Your article on the Trangia cook set was very thorough. You included everything I could think of to ask about it. You seem like you are an expert camper so I would trust your opinion and buy from you. You laid it out in an organized manner and it was easy to read. Nice job!
Kuppinger
Premium
Again, looking at the tent post...nice job! Very easy to read, you seem like an expert so I would trust to buy from you. Very thorough and loads of information. The only thing I would suggest is putting a picture right by the title, I was so interested in seeing a picture of it, I scrolled down immediately. That's a good thing!
FlorianHoff
Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/concentration-techniques/
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/concentration-techniques/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/concentration-techniques/
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/concentration-techniques/
smmcinto
Premium
Looks good. Like the layout of the posts, and your integration of different photos and videos within the post really liven it up.. good work! I left you a comment as well!
Check out my page here
seanmmcintosh.com
Check out my page here
seanmmcintosh.com
smmcinto
Premium
Hello everyone!
I am brand new to this whole website thing, so I started out by making a more personal blog page than a specific niche page. This way I can learn as I go and then start making some new pages after. I started a few days ago with the site so let me know what you think,....be gentle!
Looking mainly for some pointers just on design and layout of everything on the site, again I am new, so placement of everything is foreign to me.
Thanks!!
https://seanmmcintosh.com/
I am brand new to this whole website thing, so I started out by making a more personal blog page than a specific niche page. This way I can learn as I go and then start making some new pages after. I started a few days ago with the site so let me know what you think,....be gentle!
Looking mainly for some pointers just on design and layout of everything on the site, again I am new, so placement of everything is foreign to me.
Thanks!!
https://seanmmcintosh.com/
AJTrimble1
Premium
Hey, Sean... there is nothing to be "gentle" about, my friend. The site looks great. I don't think you give yourself enough credit.
So, here's the thing. There is absolutely nothing wrong with a so-called personal site. It is harder to do if you don't already have some kind of celebrity name? Sure. But it's not impossible. In fact, many people have done it.
As far as a "niche", I'm assuming all of the photos and videos are yours, yes? If that is the case, they're amazing and you might want to promote something to do with photography. They look very professional, and I'll bet you could not only have affiliate links for products, but you might even consider putting together an ebook, course, etc.for beginners on how to take vacation photos.
Everything is looking great. :-)
So, here's the thing. There is absolutely nothing wrong with a so-called personal site. It is harder to do if you don't already have some kind of celebrity name? Sure. But it's not impossible. In fact, many people have done it.
As far as a "niche", I'm assuming all of the photos and videos are yours, yes? If that is the case, they're amazing and you might want to promote something to do with photography. They look very professional, and I'll bet you could not only have affiliate links for products, but you might even consider putting together an ebook, course, etc.for beginners on how to take vacation photos.
Everything is looking great. :-)
smmcinto
Premium
Thanks for the reassuring words. I like your ideas of doing some type of ebook or something on photography!
AJTrimble1
Premium
Absolutely. You clearly have an "eye" for it (and, yes, the pun was intentional. lol.)
Seriously, though, your photos are incredibly well done. Your biggest challenge will be that photography in general is an extremely competitive -- indeed, saturated -- so you can't really come at it head on with just another generic site.
By coming at an angle like I suggested, however, I think you can really have something. Most sites I've seen are either of the general photo type, or for more advanced photographers and editors. I think by working just with "average joes" who just want to take a decent vacation pics for memory purposes is a great way to go and ties into the direction your site is already going.
If you have any more questions or need anything, just give me a shout.
Seriously, though, your photos are incredibly well done. Your biggest challenge will be that photography in general is an extremely competitive -- indeed, saturated -- so you can't really come at it head on with just another generic site.
By coming at an angle like I suggested, however, I think you can really have something. Most sites I've seen are either of the general photo type, or for more advanced photographers and editors. I think by working just with "average joes" who just want to take a decent vacation pics for memory purposes is a great way to go and ties into the direction your site is already going.
If you have any more questions or need anything, just give me a shout.
FlorianHoff
Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-reduce-a-stress-signal/
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-reduce-a-stress-signal/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-reduce-a-stress-signal/
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-reduce-a-stress-signal/
tbloom
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csamson21
Premium
Hello WA community,
I have a new post that I'd love to get some feedback on. Just direct message me if you do and I'll return the favour. Here's the link:
https://odrbackpacking.com/nekteck-solar-charger-a-dependable-energy-source-for-backpacking/
My website is also in the beginning stages but I have had some time to fool around with format through Elementor today. Feel free to comment on that, as well!
https://odrbackpacking.com
Thanks in advance!
Chad
I have a new post that I'd love to get some feedback on. Just direct message me if you do and I'll return the favour. Here's the link:
https://odrbackpacking.com/nekteck-solar-charger-a-dependable-energy-source-for-backpacking/
My website is also in the beginning stages but I have had some time to fool around with format through Elementor today. Feel free to comment on that, as well!
https://odrbackpacking.com
Thanks in advance!
Chad
rasyied
Premium
Hi, I've visited your website, and leave a comment.
Your site is very minimalist, easy reading & eye-catching.
but if I may suggest, add pagination for long posts so we don't have to scroll way down too far.
But how can I imagine the stuff you talked about?
There's no picture at all. please add some pictures to describe.
besides that, you can add your affiliate link on your images.
Thanks.
please leave a comment here too:
https://myearningonline.siterubix.com/earn-cash-from-myprofitland
Your site is very minimalist, easy reading & eye-catching.
but if I may suggest, add pagination for long posts so we don't have to scroll way down too far.
But how can I imagine the stuff you talked about?
There's no picture at all. please add some pictures to describe.
besides that, you can add your affiliate link on your images.
Thanks.
please leave a comment here too:
https://myearningonline.siterubix.com/earn-cash-from-myprofitland
ASullivan1
Premium
Hey Chad,
Just left a comment on your article. Ops, the comment should have been here as a reply. My comment is really not meant to go on your website, hope your can see that it does not. It was just meant for you as feedback.
Andy
Just left a comment on your article. Ops, the comment should have been here as a reply. My comment is really not meant to go on your website, hope your can see that it does not. It was just meant for you as feedback.
Andy
LadyLou
Premium
Hi Chad,
I have left a comment on your article on your website.
Great idea the solar charger and your post is interesting and reads really well.
I like your website, its easy to navigate, has some lovely visuals and will engage visitors.
I have left a comment on your article on your website.
Great idea the solar charger and your post is interesting and reads really well.
I like your website, its easy to navigate, has some lovely visuals and will engage visitors.
TCH60
Premium
Hello Fellow Affiliators,
It's that time again to ask for your input as to how my website/posts are shaping up. As per the model here, I will give my thoughts to your progress as well.
So here we go .......
https://buybracesforhealth.com/back-braces-improve-posture-5-different-ways/
https://buybracesforhealth.com/reasons-for-using-braces/
https://buybracesforhealth.com/right-wrist-braces-for-carpal-tunnel-are-you-looking-for-one/
Thank much!
Tom
It's that time again to ask for your input as to how my website/posts are shaping up. As per the model here, I will give my thoughts to your progress as well.
So here we go .......
https://buybracesforhealth.com/back-braces-improve-posture-5-different-ways/
https://buybracesforhealth.com/reasons-for-using-braces/
https://buybracesforhealth.com/right-wrist-braces-for-carpal-tunnel-are-you-looking-for-one/
Thank much!
Tom
rasyied
Premium
I've visited your site and leave a comment.
I've found some valuable info, especially about the Carpal Tunnel Syndrome. Cause it's still happening to me.
Your writing style is good, easy to read and eye-catching. Well done. And I see you're ready to monetize your site, just add your affiliate link for the stuff you're reviewed.
Thanks.
please have a look at my website too.
give some correction on writing or spelling,
so I can correct them to improve my English writing.
https://myearningonline.siterubix.com/earn-cash-from-myprofitland
I've found some valuable info, especially about the Carpal Tunnel Syndrome. Cause it's still happening to me.
Your writing style is good, easy to read and eye-catching. Well done. And I see you're ready to monetize your site, just add your affiliate link for the stuff you're reviewed.
Thanks.
please have a look at my website too.
give some correction on writing or spelling,
so I can correct them to improve my English writing.
https://myearningonline.siterubix.com/earn-cash-from-myprofitland
TCH60
Premium
Hi Rasyied,
Thank you for your remarks on my post - I appreciate it!
I like your page as well. It's amazing to me how many ways there are to make money online, and you just showed me another one with gaming. I hope this isn't the cause of your carpal tunnel syndrome?!
Anyway, a nice concise layout and description of your niche. the one thing that I noticed was a grammar related thing. In the first paragraph, the last sentence: "or sell your medals which you’ve got from wars", I would replace "got from wars" with "received" from wars.
Best of luck with your endeavors!
Tom
Thank you for your remarks on my post - I appreciate it!
I like your page as well. It's amazing to me how many ways there are to make money online, and you just showed me another one with gaming. I hope this isn't the cause of your carpal tunnel syndrome?!
Anyway, a nice concise layout and description of your niche. the one thing that I noticed was a grammar related thing. In the first paragraph, the last sentence: "or sell your medals which you’ve got from wars", I would replace "got from wars" with "received" from wars.
Best of luck with your endeavors!
Tom
TCH60
Premium
Actually, I went back and took another look at your site, and noticed there is a second page.
In the first paragraph of that one as well, I saw a small grammatical error, quite small, but if you change - 'I will be happy to help you for playing this game." to read "I will be happy to help you play this game", it will read better.
I'm guessing English isn't your first language, and if so, you did remarkably well! The grammar correction tool is a great feature, and yet it isn't able to pick up everything.
Carry on - you'll do very well!
Tom
In the first paragraph of that one as well, I saw a small grammatical error, quite small, but if you change - 'I will be happy to help you for playing this game." to read "I will be happy to help you play this game", it will read better.
I'm guessing English isn't your first language, and if so, you did remarkably well! The grammar correction tool is a great feature, and yet it isn't able to pick up everything.
Carry on - you'll do very well!
Tom
rasyied
Premium
Yes, Sir,
it's a really big help. This is what I need from the community.
I'm Indonesian, who try to challenge my outside world.
I typed them first in Indonesian then translate with Google Translate. But often Google translate makes a chaos sentence.
so add "Grammarly" Chrome extension to make a correction.
Yes, it helps me too, at least 80% from what I typed are corrected.
I wonder if you could read all my posts, they only 6 posts and 3 pages. Ha haaaaaa, sorry.
Thanks again for your correction.
it's a really big help. This is what I need from the community.
I'm Indonesian, who try to challenge my outside world.
I typed them first in Indonesian then translate with Google Translate. But often Google translate makes a chaos sentence.
so add "Grammarly" Chrome extension to make a correction.
Yes, it helps me too, at least 80% from what I typed are corrected.
I wonder if you could read all my posts, they only 6 posts and 3 pages. Ha haaaaaa, sorry.
Thanks again for your correction.
SaoriKonish1
Premium
Hello, Friends.
I just completed a post on a product review for the first time. I've reviewed it several times but I'm sure there are improvements I can make.
Can you please give me feedbacks on it? Criticisms are welcome.
I will definitely return the favor.
Here is the link:
https://healthsecretlife.com/kettle-fire-bone-broth-review-is-it-worth-the-money/
Thank you in advance!
I just completed a post on a product review for the first time. I've reviewed it several times but I'm sure there are improvements I can make.
Can you please give me feedbacks on it? Criticisms are welcome.
I will definitely return the favor.
Here is the link:
https://healthsecretlife.com/kettle-fire-bone-broth-review-is-it-worth-the-money/
Thank you in advance!
CodyEllison
Premium
Hi just got done reading your article I really enjoyed it and left you a comment.
TCH60
Premium
Hello SaoriKonish1,
I think you put together a great review of the bone broth. Well laid out, thorough, and detailed info.
One thing I found in a couple spots was sentence/word structure errors. The grammar tool for creating posts/content is great, but it has limitations. For instance, you might want to edit the 2nd line: "As I’m not a quite (quite a) chef myself, I researched for a high quality but money-worth bone broth I can (is "I can" supposed to be part of that sentence?). I then found Kettle & Fire Bone Broth that has received great reviews."
Minor things I know, but there were a few other spots as well.
I think your website is fantastic though and you're presenting some great topics! Keep up the good work ;)
I have a post that I would also like feedback on if you choose to:
https://buybracesforhealth.com/right-wrist-braces-for-carpal-tunnel-are-you-looking-for-one/
Cheers!
Tom
I think you put together a great review of the bone broth. Well laid out, thorough, and detailed info.
One thing I found in a couple spots was sentence/word structure errors. The grammar tool for creating posts/content is great, but it has limitations. For instance, you might want to edit the 2nd line: "As I’m not a quite (quite a) chef myself, I researched for a high quality but money-worth bone broth I can (is "I can" supposed to be part of that sentence?). I then found Kettle & Fire Bone Broth that has received great reviews."
Minor things I know, but there were a few other spots as well.
I think your website is fantastic though and you're presenting some great topics! Keep up the good work ;)
I have a post that I would also like feedback on if you choose to:
https://buybracesforhealth.com/right-wrist-braces-for-carpal-tunnel-are-you-looking-for-one/
Cheers!
Tom
SaoriKonish1
Premium
Thank you so much for reading my article and leaving a comment! I truly appreciate it. Please let me know if you'd like me to check out yours too :)
SaoriKonish1
Premium
Hello, Tom. Thank you so much for your feedback. I greatly appreciate it. I'll be checking my content again for grammatical errors!
Thank you also for letting me check out your article. I read it in a PC view and mobile view. They are both reader-friendly, clean and easy to read.
I enjoyed reading your article because I do have light chronic pain on my right wrist from heavy use of a mouse in the office and I do wear a brace when I go to bed to relieve the pain (although it seems temporal). It's good to know that it can be corrected.
Now your article made me wanna read your next article that talks about "how" to take care of the problem without surgery. If you have an article about "practical wrist management", I'd be clicking it.
At the end of your article, maybe you can add a section for "related post" or "next" that encourages visitors to click so that they don't have to look for articles within your website.
Thank you also for letting me check out your article. I read it in a PC view and mobile view. They are both reader-friendly, clean and easy to read.
I enjoyed reading your article because I do have light chronic pain on my right wrist from heavy use of a mouse in the office and I do wear a brace when I go to bed to relieve the pain (although it seems temporal). It's good to know that it can be corrected.
Now your article made me wanna read your next article that talks about "how" to take care of the problem without surgery. If you have an article about "practical wrist management", I'd be clicking it.
At the end of your article, maybe you can add a section for "related post" or "next" that encourages visitors to click so that they don't have to look for articles within your website.
TCH60
Premium
Hi Saori,
I'm glad you found my critique of use. Sometimes I hesitate to come across as too picky.
Thanks for letting me know that my site is mobile friendly. That's something I was wondering about but didn't get around to checking into it.
This technological age we are in now lends itself towards more wrist trouble unfortunately. I hope you can correct it before it gets out of hand (sorry for the pun ;)
If I were you, I would take some natural supplements to get the inflammation down (turmeric, cat's claw, boswellia to name a few) while using a wrist brace to restrict movement and strain.
I like your idea for the "next" button to take readers to the next article - many thanks!
It will be fun to see our progress over the coming weeks/months. Stay tuned .......
Tom :)
I'm glad you found my critique of use. Sometimes I hesitate to come across as too picky.
Thanks for letting me know that my site is mobile friendly. That's something I was wondering about but didn't get around to checking into it.
This technological age we are in now lends itself towards more wrist trouble unfortunately. I hope you can correct it before it gets out of hand (sorry for the pun ;)
If I were you, I would take some natural supplements to get the inflammation down (turmeric, cat's claw, boswellia to name a few) while using a wrist brace to restrict movement and strain.
I like your idea for the "next" button to take readers to the next article - many thanks!
It will be fun to see our progress over the coming weeks/months. Stay tuned .......
Tom :)
FlorianHoff
Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
BTW. If you're stressing or worrying right know and can't focus on your Mission these Tipps in this Post will help you to get back on track! :)
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-reduce-a-stress-signal/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
BTW. If you're stressing or worrying right know and can't focus on your Mission these Tipps in this Post will help you to get back on track! :)
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-reduce-a-stress-signal/
davidpaul303
Premium
Hello FlorianHoff:
The layout is good and makes your site easy to read.
However, I think your intro to the article can be shortened considerably. Go straightaway into your reduce stress solutions. That's where you list what people are probably looking for - ways to reduce stress.
A list by itself is always intriguing. My guess is that people will skip your intro and go straight into your list.
Good luck.
The layout is good and makes your site easy to read.
However, I think your intro to the article can be shortened considerably. Go straightaway into your reduce stress solutions. That's where you list what people are probably looking for - ways to reduce stress.
A list by itself is always intriguing. My guess is that people will skip your intro and go straight into your list.
Good luck.
wantanewlife
Premium
hello ladies and gents I am looking for some feedback on my site, it is still in the early stages but I would like to know what you folks think. I would like to be able to collect emails for email marketing but not sure where to go with that yet but any thing you can suggest would be appreciated.
https://homeautomationwizards.com/what-can-google-home-do/
https://homeautomationwizards.com/what-can-google-home-do/
rasyied
Premium
I've visited your site and leave a comment.
Your site is good, minimalist & eye-catching. But it's a little bit slower to load, you might need to optimize it from your WP Admin Panel. you can use some plugin to do that.
Your writing style is good, well managed & easy to read.
Please have a look at my website, give me some advice or even your correction, so I can improve my writing in English.
https://affiliatebusiness.siterubix.com
Thank you.
Your site is good, minimalist & eye-catching. But it's a little bit slower to load, you might need to optimize it from your WP Admin Panel. you can use some plugin to do that.
Your writing style is good, well managed & easy to read.
Please have a look at my website, give me some advice or even your correction, so I can improve my writing in English.
https://affiliatebusiness.siterubix.com
Thank you.
wantanewlife
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wantanewlife
Premium
I have just checked out your site and all is cool, I have seen many sites around that subject and they are very similar which I think is a good thing. I also wouldn't worry too much about your English I had no issues reading what you had to say and for the people wanting to get that information I don't think they will either. I couldn't find the comment section though?
rasyied
Premium
I've used many plugins at first learning, cause I'm interested in what they provided, but too many plugins make our site heavy. so, for now, I delete them again which not useful enough for my site.
You can monitor your site health here: https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/websites, and view details.
and please leave a comment on my site, thanks.
You can monitor your site health here: https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/websites, and view details.
and please leave a comment on my site, thanks.
rasyied
Premium
oh yes, I changed the web theme today, I just realize there's no widget for comment. but you can do that by following (click on other people name who has commented before).
many thanks for this info
many thanks for this info
Natalia777
Premium
Hey, guys !
I have published a new article on my website
https://trainyourbodywithvoicu.com/what-is-in-creatine-supplement-food-supplement-2-for-bodybuilders/
If you are interested in building out your body, please visit the above article and eventually, leave a comment.
Reply back with your links and I will be contributing to your articles/websites engagement as well.
Thank you !
I have published a new article on my website
https://trainyourbodywithvoicu.com/what-is-in-creatine-supplement-food-supplement-2-for-bodybuilders/
If you are interested in building out your body, please visit the above article and eventually, leave a comment.
Reply back with your links and I will be contributing to your articles/websites engagement as well.
Thank you !
DaliborT
Premium
My niche, I love it! Good review. Try leaving more spacing between the last paragraph and the new heading.
Consider adding one picture closer to the top so people can see what you are talking about right away.
Add affiliate link to the product if you are registered in affiliate marketing. You don't want to miss on commission if they decide to buy.
Dalibor
Consider adding one picture closer to the top so people can see what you are talking about right away.
Add affiliate link to the product if you are registered in affiliate marketing. You don't want to miss on commission if they decide to buy.
Dalibor
DonnaM2
Premium
Hi,
If you are interested in DIY I have just completed a review on a circular saw. I really need some honest comments on my blog and would appreciate your help.
https://topdollardiy.com/bosch-gks-18v-57-circular-saw-review-goodbye-cords-hello-quality/
Please DM me so I can help you out in return.
Thanks again.
I am shooting for 3 comments (much appreciated)
If you are interested in DIY I have just completed a review on a circular saw. I really need some honest comments on my blog and would appreciate your help.
https://topdollardiy.com/bosch-gks-18v-57-circular-saw-review-goodbye-cords-hello-quality/
Please DM me so I can help you out in return.
Thanks again.
I am shooting for 3 comments (much appreciated)
DaliborT
Premium
I like the fact you put real pictures in a review.
Personally, I would go with 1 more spacing between the header and last paragraph.
Many detailed mentioned about the product, however, I lack feeling do I REALLY need it. Yes, you mentioned characteristics, but I didn't see how this product can benefit me.
As much as I love the fact you were talking from your own experience, which is a BIG PLUS in any review, in my opinion, I did want to read what could that product do for me. Which is the reason what is a review is all about.
Above that, it is very good.
Dalibor
Personally, I would go with 1 more spacing between the header and last paragraph.
Many detailed mentioned about the product, however, I lack feeling do I REALLY need it. Yes, you mentioned characteristics, but I didn't see how this product can benefit me.
As much as I love the fact you were talking from your own experience, which is a BIG PLUS in any review, in my opinion, I did want to read what could that product do for me. Which is the reason what is a review is all about.
Above that, it is very good.
Dalibor
FlorianHoff
Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
BTW. If you're looking into a great morning with some helpful morning routines this is a Blog you should read!
You can click now the Link to check it out! Would really appreciate it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/21-morning-routine-ideas-for-an-energizing-mindset/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
BTW. If you're looking into a great morning with some helpful morning routines this is a Blog you should read!
You can click now the Link to check it out! Would really appreciate it 💙
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/21-morning-routine-ideas-for-an-energizing-mindset/
Uwayguy
Premium
Good Morning....I am a few weeks into building my first website and was wondering if I could get some feedback and help with it. I am not as young as I once was and was a little intimidated with the process. I do love to write and tell stories though. Once I get the website acceptable posting more information shouldn't be too hard for me. Thanks in advance for any help you can give me.
DaliborT
Premium
So, first I noticed is your site is not secure. You can fix that easily from your WA dashboard. PM me and I will explain if you don't find how :)
About us seems to be a post? It should be a page.
Try switching to Static page, where you would have a home page and all your posts would be on your post page, so you separate home page and post page.
Pictures are good, quality of posts also. I would suggest writing more than 1000 words if you can. Quality over quantity here :)
Also, where ever you can, break your paragraphs so it is easier to read. Try going for 2 or 3 lines of text and then break it to another paragraph. Max 5 lines.
I hope I helped. If you need anything, please contact me :)
Dalibor
About us seems to be a post? It should be a page.
Try switching to Static page, where you would have a home page and all your posts would be on your post page, so you separate home page and post page.
Pictures are good, quality of posts also. I would suggest writing more than 1000 words if you can. Quality over quantity here :)
Also, where ever you can, break your paragraphs so it is easier to read. Try going for 2 or 3 lines of text and then break it to another paragraph. Max 5 lines.
I hope I helped. If you need anything, please contact me :)
Dalibor
Aurelien
Premium
Hey everyone, I just released my first review article !
Please tell me if you find it relevant and what you honestly think, it would mean the world to me.
And of course I will gladly leave a comment on your website and do anything I can help. My website is about fitness and weight loss.
I really hope you can find some valuable content in it !
https://aurebefit.siterubix.com/metabolic-cooking-review-the-best-tool-for-your-weight-loss/
this is the review article, I put a lot of work into it, please give me your feedback
Please tell me if you find it relevant and what you honestly think, it would mean the world to me.
And of course I will gladly leave a comment on your website and do anything I can help. My website is about fitness and weight loss.
I really hope you can find some valuable content in it !
https://aurebefit.siterubix.com/metabolic-cooking-review-the-best-tool-for-your-weight-loss/
this is the review article, I put a lot of work into it, please give me your feedback
AJTrimble1
Premium
Site looks great, and the article is very, very well done. This is how a review should look. It's well written, with good use of images, and is full of information. Your review is a good length (over 1100 words), so you are nailing it. Enough links to make it convenient for your readers, but not so many that it comes across as "spammy", if you know what I mean.
Keep up the excellent work :-)
Keep up the excellent work :-)
DaliborT
Premium
I looked it from my phone. Your pictures aren't user friendly. They are braking up the text.
Either consider changeing their size or positioning them in between paragraphs.
Regards,
Dalibor
Either consider changeing their size or positioning them in between paragraphs.
Regards,
Dalibor
Aurelien
Premium
Thank you so much for the feedback, it is really helpful ! I will carry on implementing the good work :)
DaliborT
Premium
Hi all, slowly building up my site. Been a long time since I asked for feedback on it, I hope I can get honest ones :)
https://best4yourbody.com
What I would appreciate is general feedback from desktop view and if possible from mobile phone view, as I heard some phones having an issue with displaying the site as it should be.
If needed, I can return the favor :)
Thank you,
Dalibor
https://best4yourbody.com
What I would appreciate is general feedback from desktop view and if possible from mobile phone view, as I heard some phones having an issue with displaying the site as it should be.
If needed, I can return the favor :)
Thank you,
Dalibor
Shambavo
Premium
Hi Dalibor, what kind of feedback are you looking for? I can give my first impression when entering your site... it feels kind of busy, thinks moving constantly, difficult for me to focus, don't know where to look first or where to start... it's just my impression... not sure if that's what you're looking for...
all the best
Martina
all the best
Martina
JohnHorton1
Premium
Hi, Dalibor.
The website works on both the desktop and the mobile phone. Plenty of color in the photos which catch the eye and draws attention.
Actually, I liked the mobile version better. It operated very smoothly and the small screen limited the amount of eye strain from trying to take in all of the colorful ads.
Your site will definitely get someone's attention.
The website works on both the desktop and the mobile phone. Plenty of color in the photos which catch the eye and draws attention.
Actually, I liked the mobile version better. It operated very smoothly and the small screen limited the amount of eye strain from trying to take in all of the colorful ads.
Your site will definitely get someone's attention.
Aurelien
Premium
Hi everyone, I hope you are all having a great day, I already created few posts myself and wanted some feedbacks if that is possible ?
I would like to know what kind of affiliate products you would expect to find on a fitness blog like mine.
Please be honest, I know how to receive criticism as I want my website to be a helpful source of information for the viewers and a perfect affiliate money making machine for me and my future plans.
Thank you so much for taking a minute of your time in order to help me reach my goals, I will of course gladly leave a comment on your website and leave you some feedback to help you thrive and reach your goals. We are all in the same boat here :)
https://aurebefit.siterubix.com/ is my website :)
I would like to know what kind of affiliate products you would expect to find on a fitness blog like mine.
Please be honest, I know how to receive criticism as I want my website to be a helpful source of information for the viewers and a perfect affiliate money making machine for me and my future plans.
Thank you so much for taking a minute of your time in order to help me reach my goals, I will of course gladly leave a comment on your website and leave you some feedback to help you thrive and reach your goals. We are all in the same boat here :)
https://aurebefit.siterubix.com/ is my website :)
ayockson
Premium
Really appreciate your opinion about jogging isn't the best way to lose weight. I've left a comment on your site.
You can help check my site and leave me a comment and feedback.
https://bit.ly/2TrZWZu
Thanks
You can help check my site and leave me a comment and feedback.
https://bit.ly/2TrZWZu
Thanks
TheresaHorn
Premium
Aurelien
Premium
Thank you very much for all the ideas. Because I know what I want from a website but it's good to know different point of views.
I will make sure to check your website.
Would you leave me a link ?
I will make sure to check your website.
Would you leave me a link ?
ADodson1
Premium
https://savorthemomlife.com/how-to-start-a-mom-blog-today/
Hey, ya'll I just posted about WA! Hoping to possibly get some takers to join us here. I am looking for comments but mostly just feedback. I am going to be updating by the end of the week hopefully with more details like numbers and such. I'm trying very hard to get it to flow with the rest of my site and niche. So it's focused on moms and starting a blog like mine. Plus I have included no money making testimony since I haven't hit that goal yet 🙄Even Google Ad Sense doesn't think I'm ready.
Anyway, I feel like its missing things, looking for some input, please. I will return the favor later this evening to anyone who drops me a link below. TIA!!!
Hey, ya'll I just posted about WA! Hoping to possibly get some takers to join us here. I am looking for comments but mostly just feedback. I am going to be updating by the end of the week hopefully with more details like numbers and such. I'm trying very hard to get it to flow with the rest of my site and niche. So it's focused on moms and starting a blog like mine. Plus I have included no money making testimony since I haven't hit that goal yet 🙄Even Google Ad Sense doesn't think I'm ready.
Anyway, I feel like its missing things, looking for some input, please. I will return the favor later this evening to anyone who drops me a link below. TIA!!!
roxydog1312
Premium
rafikkarim
Premium
Hi comments on your website
1.website is not secure
2.the picture of your different products seems to be isolated from your contents. I would rather like a smaller picture on the side of the content while I'm reading the content
3.There seems to be too many options, does not keep reader interested
4.I would prefer one product and an in depth review on that product
I hope this helps
good luck
Rafik
1.website is not secure
2.the picture of your different products seems to be isolated from your contents. I would rather like a smaller picture on the side of the content while I'm reading the content
3.There seems to be too many options, does not keep reader interested
4.I would prefer one product and an in depth review on that product
I hope this helps
good luck
Rafik
ahearst
Premium
FNS0
Premium
Hey everyone, we've just started out our outdoorsmanship niche site, our first "official" so to say. We'd love to get some feedback on what we can do to improve and how it's looking so far. The link is https://mudlarkers.siterubix.com/ Thanks a million, and I'd love to share my thoughts on your works as well.
AJTrimble1
Premium
Looks like your off to a good start.
You're content looks okay for now since you are just building the foundation (About page, etc.). Just be aware that as you progress and start to target specific keywords to attract traffic, you're posts will need to be much, much longer.
Kyle recommends a minimum of 1000 words; and you may even require more than that depending on the level of competition you have for that particular phrase.
Keep up the good work. :-)
You're content looks okay for now since you are just building the foundation (About page, etc.). Just be aware that as you progress and start to target specific keywords to attract traffic, you're posts will need to be much, much longer.
Kyle recommends a minimum of 1000 words; and you may even require more than that depending on the level of competition you have for that particular phrase.
Keep up the good work. :-)
bossmomkisha
Premium
Hello Everyone! I would love your help with comments on my most recent post. I will be happy to return the favor if you drop your links here. Please refrain from placing link in your comments. Also, I’d rather you provide any constructive feedback here and not in your comment. Thank you.
https://bossmomslife.com/fun-cheap-dates-movie-night/
https://bossmomslife.com/fun-cheap-dates-movie-night/
ChappyK
Premium
FrankG2
Premium
Hello my WA friends! I hope you all are doing well today!
As part of my training and website building experience, i would like to ask if you could give me some feedback on the latest post that i submitted on my niche website? Here is my latest post link:
http://solosmugglerssabacc.com/greedo-who-shot-first-why-it-matters-and-what-it-means-for-your-collection
Thanks!
Frank
As part of my training and website building experience, i would like to ask if you could give me some feedback on the latest post that i submitted on my niche website? Here is my latest post link:
http://solosmugglerssabacc.com/greedo-who-shot-first-why-it-matters-and-what-it-means-for-your-collection
Thanks!
Frank
DianeScorpio
Premium
ChappyK
Premium
The paragraph that starts with "Once there, Greedo grew up...
You might think of breaking it up into two paragraphs it is a little long. Do you have any other media for the page?
https://earningextramoney.siterubix.com/wealthy-affiliate-review-what-can-i-get-for-free/
You might think of breaking it up into two paragraphs it is a little long. Do you have any other media for the page?
https://earningextramoney.siterubix.com/wealthy-affiliate-review-what-can-i-get-for-free/
ahearst
Premium
Hi WA members.
Happy weekend. I just posted a product review on my site and any insight you could provide is appreciated. I'll return the favor 100% for sure. It make take a day or two for me to get to it, just be patient, since I am swarmed with my college assignments.
mymemoriesmine.com
Thanks
Happy weekend. I just posted a product review on my site and any insight you could provide is appreciated. I'll return the favor 100% for sure. It make take a day or two for me to get to it, just be patient, since I am swarmed with my college assignments.
mymemoriesmine.com
Thanks
DianeScorpio
Premium
Hi - Amazon doesn't allow you to put the actual price of the product within your review, as it can change. Imagine, for instance, if somebody was to read it in a couple of year's time, it would obviously be wrong.
If you look at the product page on your Amazon Associate's site, at the top, you will see that it gives you the option to get the code for "text + image". This is what you should be using in your review, as it shows the price under the image, and if it ever changes, Amazon updates it automatically.
If you look at the product page on your Amazon Associate's site, at the top, you will see that it gives you the option to get the code for "text + image". This is what you should be using in your review, as it shows the price under the image, and if it ever changes, Amazon updates it automatically.
danmanskie
Premium
Everyone, Thanks in advance for looking :)
I have been building my first website (in the Electronic cigarette zone) and learning quite a bit of valuable skills. My site is still in it's infancy but I would definitely welcome some constructive criticism! Here's a link to one of my posts.
https://vapepodmods.com/what-makes-salt-nicotine-juice-different/
I have been building my first website (in the Electronic cigarette zone) and learning quite a bit of valuable skills. My site is still in it's infancy but I would definitely welcome some constructive criticism! Here's a link to one of my posts.
https://vapepodmods.com/what-makes-salt-nicotine-juice-different/
Weenie
Premium
Hi
I have had a look at your site and think you have made a good start. I'm just wondering about your word count on your articles perhaps being a bit short and the lack of 'white space' on the left & right margins. I know it's a theme setting but a bit more space on the edges would make it easier to read.
I have had a look at your site and think you have made a good start. I'm just wondering about your word count on your articles perhaps being a bit short and the lack of 'white space' on the left & right margins. I know it's a theme setting but a bit more space on the edges would make it easier to read.
FrankG2
Premium
Hello Dan,
I took a look at your site and I think you have a very good start here. You do a great job explaining the science behind the e-cigarette. For example, your post discussing salt nicotine juice vs. freebase nicotine is very informative to someone who is looking for a nice, brief explanation of how a combination of Benzoic Acid and Salt Nicotine is a highly desirable form of vaping. Also, the links to what is in E Juice and what are Nicotine Salts is appropriately placed. Your photos and graphics are well-placed in relation to the text to which they refer. Your captions and prompting questions are engaging. Overall, you are off to a great start! Keep on writing and posting!
Frank
I took a look at your site and I think you have a very good start here. You do a great job explaining the science behind the e-cigarette. For example, your post discussing salt nicotine juice vs. freebase nicotine is very informative to someone who is looking for a nice, brief explanation of how a combination of Benzoic Acid and Salt Nicotine is a highly desirable form of vaping. Also, the links to what is in E Juice and what are Nicotine Salts is appropriately placed. Your photos and graphics are well-placed in relation to the text to which they refer. Your captions and prompting questions are engaging. Overall, you are off to a great start! Keep on writing and posting!
Frank
jeanetteobas
Premium
Hey guys, it's been a while since i've asked for feed back here. I would love for someone to take a look at my site and tell me what you think.
Honest opinions please.
Is it too cluttered, do I need to change anything, any general feedback will help.
Thanks so much!
www.thebabycrush.com
Honest opinions please.
Is it too cluttered, do I need to change anything, any general feedback will help.
Thanks so much!
www.thebabycrush.com
DianeScorpio
Premium
Hi - your social media icons take me to my own pages on Facebook/Twitter etc. I would have expected them to go to yours.
I can't see that you have an affiliate disclosure policy which is mandatory. There is a template in Site Content you can adapt.
I can't see that you have an affiliate disclosure policy which is mandatory. There is a template in Site Content you can adapt.
jeanetteobas
Premium
Ok, thanks I will change that. I dont know how to change the social media accounts. I'll figure that out also.
jeanetteobas
Premium
Thanks again, I was able to fix that stuff you mentioned and I figured out the social media. Since I only have an instagram for my page I added it and removed the rest, not it goes straight to my instagram feed.
Again, thank you.
Again, thank you.
Weenie
Premium
What a cute site! A real welcoming place for mumma's to hang out and with content being added to regularly, I think its a site you should be proud of.
I have left a comment on your bottle feeding page and if you're feeling inclined, my site would love a visit from you. Any feedback or comments would be most welcome.
All the best for the future,
Coreena
I have left a comment on your bottle feeding page and if you're feeling inclined, my site would love a visit from you. Any feedback or comments would be most welcome.
All the best for the future,
Coreena
ahearst
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I left some of my thoughts on one of your post . Very relatable to most people, men or women.
If u could leave a comment or two on my post I so appreciate it.
Thanks
Mymemoriesmine.com
If u could leave a comment or two on my post I so appreciate it.
Thanks
Mymemoriesmine.com
FlorianHoff
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Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/21-morning-routine-ideas-for-an-energizing-mindset/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/21-morning-routine-ideas-for-an-energizing-mindset/
BScarlett
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I have left a comment on your and I have shared it on Facebook. I would be very happy I you would look at my latest post belindascarlettscreativecorner.com/how-to-start-writing/
OHargers
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Hi FlorianHoff, just saw your site, 21 inspiring ideas for your morning routine had me reading. I feel you did a great job. I was really drawn in with a few of your topics. 4). Visualize Your Day, 5). Write Down Three Things Your Thankful For, 10). Drink a warm glass of Lemon Water. These three topics really got me thinking. You know it is good yo have a positive mind set and your content was very clear and nicely written. I will be trying out some of the topics i mentioned earlier. You have done an excellent job with content. Very positive and inspirational information. 👍👍🙂
CKing77
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Hello everyone, I was wondering if anyone would be able to take the time and provide some feedback on my site.
It's in the fitness niche. Below is a link to my latest post, but feel free to browse the site entirely if you wish.
https://fullfitnez.com/does-music-help-with-exercise/
Many thanks in advance
Chris
It's in the fitness niche. Below is a link to my latest post, but feel free to browse the site entirely if you wish.
https://fullfitnez.com/does-music-help-with-exercise/
Many thanks in advance
Chris
OHargers
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Hi, I just looked at your site and i love it. Your content is clear and efficient. I am one of those people who loves to listen to music. When I was in high school, we had music playing when we workout for athletes. I enjoyed reading your site, and I feel you did a great job.
P.S. I also left a comment on your site!!
P.S. I also left a comment on your site!!
quints
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Hello Chris, I read your article. Great information. I am also a fitness junkie! I listen to music when I workout. I totally agree with what you had to say. I never thought about listening to slower music after a workout. That is something new to me and I will try it. Your content is very clear and understandable. I like your niche! You have a lot of great things to say. Your pics go along with your content Everything flows along together. You did a great job! I will follow you! Have a good day! -Matt
N56
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Hey Sefeshefe. Your site really caught my eye. For 20 years I was a watchmaker and a jewelry appraiser. I liked your site but I thought your articles were to short. You could easily make your invest in a watch article into a 4 part series.
I personally own 40 watches including 3 Omegas. Omega is perhaps the best deal in collectable watches. You might also mention that if someone buys a watch that doesn't run they can often get a spectacular deal for the price of a cleaning.
Your articles have a good look and the pics are very nice. Watch your verbiage. It gets a bit repetitive in places.
Your site has a good foundation to build on. Lengthen those articles by adding more info. A lot of people who know there stuff will be reading.
I personally own 40 watches including 3 Omegas. Omega is perhaps the best deal in collectable watches. You might also mention that if someone buys a watch that doesn't run they can often get a spectacular deal for the price of a cleaning.
Your articles have a good look and the pics are very nice. Watch your verbiage. It gets a bit repetitive in places.
Your site has a good foundation to build on. Lengthen those articles by adding more info. A lot of people who know there stuff will be reading.
Weenie
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Hi guys and gals here in this WA community.
I'm slowly (very!) buidling out my site and would really appreciate if anyone can spare a few minutes to visit my new post and leave a comment. I'll do the same for yours in return.
https://budgiesforbeginners.com/caring-for-a-budgie-tips-for-the-first-few-days/
Thanks so much.
I'm slowly (very!) buidling out my site and would really appreciate if anyone can spare a few minutes to visit my new post and leave a comment. I'll do the same for yours in return.
https://budgiesforbeginners.com/caring-for-a-budgie-tips-for-the-first-few-days/
Thanks so much.
CKing77
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Hi. I posted a comment for you. perhaps you could do the same for me when you get the chance?
https://fullfitnez.com/does-music-help-with-exercise/
I enjoyed viewing your site. I think yo have been running it about the same amount of time i have mine.
I liked the theme and how it's laid out with the colour coded tiles which i thought complimented the colours of the budgies in the images. A nice touch.
On this post 'Caring for a budgie – tips for the first few days' it might be a nice idea to scale down the size of the title image so it displays a full image of a budgie, like in your other images.
I enjoyed how you design your content layout. It's easy to read because of that and to the point but nicely written. I think the inclusion of lists within the content is helpful but also clever in how it breaks up the content still making it easy and comfortable to read.
Very best of luck to you.
Chris
https://fullfitnez.com/does-music-help-with-exercise/
I enjoyed viewing your site. I think yo have been running it about the same amount of time i have mine.
I liked the theme and how it's laid out with the colour coded tiles which i thought complimented the colours of the budgies in the images. A nice touch.
On this post 'Caring for a budgie – tips for the first few days' it might be a nice idea to scale down the size of the title image so it displays a full image of a budgie, like in your other images.
I enjoyed how you design your content layout. It's easy to read because of that and to the point but nicely written. I think the inclusion of lists within the content is helpful but also clever in how it breaks up the content still making it easy and comfortable to read.
Very best of luck to you.
Chris
Weenie
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Hi Chris
Thanks for the comment. Appreciate it. I have had some issues with image sizing with this site theme and have been trying to get everything consistent but the image in the post you mentioned above just won't play nice!
Now to your site - love it! I really like your content and the consistent layout of your posts. The inclusion of video on some posts is great too.
I didn't see any affiliate links etc - how much more content are you planning before you start 'affiliating' (is that even a word?)
Coreena
Thanks for the comment. Appreciate it. I have had some issues with image sizing with this site theme and have been trying to get everything consistent but the image in the post you mentioned above just won't play nice!
Now to your site - love it! I really like your content and the consistent layout of your posts. The inclusion of video on some posts is great too.
I didn't see any affiliate links etc - how much more content are you planning before you start 'affiliating' (is that even a word?)
Coreena
gcress72
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Hi everyone. I've been working hard on putting together my website and content. I have Amazon affiliate and did one review. Now I need to work on traffic. Would love some overall feedback and comments if anyone can help. I will be glad to return the favor. Thanks. https://www.thebalancedcat.com
gcress72
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Thanks so much. Trying to leave a comment too but for some reason, it is not going through. I will also respond to yours as soon as I can.
gcress72
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Oh good, on my end it said I was timing out. It didn't seem to go through. Glad it did!
DianeScorpio
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Kuppinger
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Hi Everyone! I just finished my first review of vacuums for pet hair on allrescuedogs.com. The post is something like...Best Vacuums to remove pet hair....(My brain is fogging...I spent a lot of time writing it!) If someone could please view it and leave me feed back I would appreciate it! This is my first product review.
DianeScorpio
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Hi - the review is quite short. The generally accepted guide for affiliate links is to add 1 for every 500 words. You have actually got 4 links in just over 500 words, which will make Google see it as a "spammy" selling site.
As regards, your images, you only use the single 1 which Amazon provides for your link, you can't use any different ones.
I can't see that you have an Affiliate Disclosure, which is mandatory.
Cheers, Diane
As regards, your images, you only use the single 1 which Amazon provides for your link, you can't use any different ones.
I can't see that you have an Affiliate Disclosure, which is mandatory.
Cheers, Diane
DHobson1
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Joined all four of the Affiliate Networks for another site and am waiting for approval from CJ for my WA site. Not sure if they approve with so little content but... Amazon is there. Also using VigLink. Trying to aim for high ticket items. Traffic will tell. :-) The following is my newest post: https://cassoletterecipes.com/scalloped-potatoes-with-maroilles-unique-cheesy-goodness/
Would appreciate any feedback on this post or any other. I do have an Adsense place marker in the sidebar. They have not approved the site yet. Thanks, everyone. :-)
P.S. Ooops. This page may not count toward the Affiliate lesson task.
Would appreciate any feedback on this post or any other. I do have an Adsense place marker in the sidebar. They have not approved the site yet. Thanks, everyone. :-)
P.S. Ooops. This page may not count toward the Affiliate lesson task.
roxydog1312
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Bkirchner2
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FlorianHoff
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Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-increase-the-brain-power/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-increase-the-brain-power/
SherryS88
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Hello All! So I am getting close to finishing my training - I am about to go into the last lesson. I just recently got established on some social media platforms and my email newsletter up and running. I have also been editing and tweaking my prior posts (because I have OCD lol). I would love feedback on my website so far. Thank you in advance! :)
https://inpursuitofgoodhealth.com/
https://inpursuitofgoodhealth.com/
AJTrimble1
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Looking great, Sherry. You have a nice clean layout that is easy to scan. And your articles are amazing. Very well done. Great job overall. I think at this point the only feedback I can give is to keep doing what you're doing... it's only a matter of time now. :-)
MikeLanning
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Nice simple neat and clean, unlike mine that is pretty sporadic and hard to navigate through LOL Not sure I can give you much insight, sorry, nothing really stands out to me.
Not sure if that is because I am so tired right now or if your " OCD " has it so perfect that I'm not finding anything. Will look over it again when I am not as tired to see if I notice anything that would help.
Not sure if that is because I am so tired right now or if your " OCD " has it so perfect that I'm not finding anything. Will look over it again when I am not as tired to see if I notice anything that would help.
DrSDm
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This is a very nice and clean website as already told by the earlier reviewers. The contents are nicely written too.
One thing I like to mention. You have text arrangement has been centered in most of your posts. Maybe you intentionally kept the text in the center orientation. But I personally like the text to be from left. I think this is general and looks better. The bullets may be centered, but not all other text.
Otherwise, this is a great web. carry on and best wishes.
One thing I like to mention. You have text arrangement has been centered in most of your posts. Maybe you intentionally kept the text in the center orientation. But I personally like the text to be from left. I think this is general and looks better. The bullets may be centered, but not all other text.
Otherwise, this is a great web. carry on and best wishes.
SherryS88
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Thanks! It's funny you mentioned the alignment because right before I came back to see responses, I changed it back to the left lol. I totally agree - the paragraphs themselves are easier to read when they are on the left. I like the headings centered and images alignment depending. Thanks so much! You validated my gut instinct! :)
SherryS88
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Lol well thank you! I appreciate any and all feedback, criticism and compliments. It's much appreciated! :)
Laurengillan
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Hi all, if I could get a comment on my new post that would be great. I’ll be going down the list and commenting on a few peoples sites who don’t yet have comments. Hope you’re enjoying your weekend, keep up the hard work!
https://festivalbumbags.siterubix.com/music-festival-activities-do-something-different-discover-yourself/
https://festivalbumbags.siterubix.com/music-festival-activities-do-something-different-discover-yourself/
Raquel14
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Hi Lauren. I just visited your website. I like the overall layout and it’s easy to navigate. I am a newbie here and not an expert in giving comments about other issues. Hope you will visit mine too.
myhealthbeautyconcerns.com
myhealthbeautyconcerns.com
rubyandally
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Hi Lauren, I really enjoyed your site, it's very different to a lot of sites on WA which is no criticism of them, just a refreshing change and it is evidently your passion which really shines through. I think there is a heck of a lot of potential in your subject matter and once you get this onto the right social media I think you could become huge, especially over the summer as the festival season takes off. I would only suggest that you get some more images on there because I bet you have loads of photos from festivals you have been to. The bonus is of course that they are your own royalty-free original pics. Well done!
rubyandally
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Hi everyone
Would you be so kind as to offer feedback and comments on my website and a couple of posts in particular please?
My website is -
https://unicorneverything.co.uk/
and the posts I need feedback on are -
https://unicorneverything.co.uk/top-10-ways-to-be-a-unicorn
and
https://unicorneverything.co.uk/unicorn-flower-bouquet-perfect-gift-for-unicorn-mums-this-mothers-day-2
Happy to return the favour :-)
Thank you
Would you be so kind as to offer feedback and comments on my website and a couple of posts in particular please?
My website is -
https://unicorneverything.co.uk/
and the posts I need feedback on are -
https://unicorneverything.co.uk/top-10-ways-to-be-a-unicorn
and
https://unicorneverything.co.uk/unicorn-flower-bouquet-perfect-gift-for-unicorn-mums-this-mothers-day-2
Happy to return the favour :-)
Thank you
roxydog1312
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bernicekcf
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Hi @Rubyandally,
Wow, unicorn represent! You website looks cute and fun! Just noticed though, the ads or links you included in the about page was not really a good fit, e.g. bitcoin or financial advice. Would be great if you included related and relevant links/ads in the post itself.
Wow, unicorn represent! You website looks cute and fun! Just noticed though, the ads or links you included in the about page was not really a good fit, e.g. bitcoin or financial advice. Would be great if you included related and relevant links/ads in the post itself.
Laurengillan
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Hi I have just posted a comment on your post, mother’s day flowers. I absolutely loved it! It really did get better and better. I love how you explain the meaning behind different flowers. And not only did you explain how rainbow flowers are made, but how to do it yourself which I think is great. Also the tone you use is really good. Very impressive :)
rubyandally
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Hi Lauren, thank you so much for your lovely comments, I really appreciate your help. I'll pop over to your site now and take a look.
rubyandally
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Hi RhondaLeigh, great site and fab niche. I've left you a couple of comments. My only advice really is that I think you have got the basics down very well and I would want to see you branch out into more specific topics now. I look forward to watching this one go from strength to strength, well done.
rubyandally
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Hi, I haven't as yet included any ads or links in my site. I think what you are seeing is generated by your browser and based on products and services that you have looked at and have cookies for. Thank you for bringing this to my attention however, I will look into why this is happening.
roxydog1312
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Howdy, I haven't included ads or links yet either. I guess I'm waiting for training to tell me how to do it? Anyway, I'm in the same boat as you, Rubyandally. RhondaLeigh
FlorianHoff
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Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-increase-the-brain-power/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-increase-the-brain-power/
Jeedajoy
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Oh wow... Enjoyed to max and even commented and subscribed with love... Amazing work!
FlorianHoff
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Hello everyone! 🙋
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-increase-the-brain-power/
I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙
And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)
Thank you and keep pushing for 2019 people! 💰
https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-increase-the-brain-power/
Shambavo
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Hello.
First, let me start with some 'translation' issues.
- when you talk about procrastination, you use they saying (I know it too in my language) which you haven't translated very correctly. Something like 'whatever you can do today, you can postpone till tomorrow? I'm not sure myself about how it should be translated correctly into English, but your translation is a bit strange, maybe you could look into it, get some advice from WA members.
Also, I find it very interesting post but towards the end, you write 'Moments in which one leaves one’s tunnel vision and is willing to pay attention to trivial things are the incubator for ...'... I do not understand... the word 'trivial' does not make sense to me in the context. Then I just couldn't put the ideas together. (not sure if you understand what i mean). I found it interesting and wanted to understand but couldn't somehow.
some more typos : How it works (not 'work's) and book summaries (not 'summarys)... just a few things I picked up.
Generally, I love your website, very interesting and interactive, maybe individual posts are a bit too long for me (also attention span issues there for me).
If I go to 'How it works', there are 3 categories which I assume, people should be able to click on to get more information, which is not available ( you might want to look into it).
Also when I go to 'Courses', there's no navigation to go back to the main menu and also the pop up box is a bit annoying if I do not want to chat. Might be good if visitors could disable it.
Great site and I wish you all the best with it
Martina
if you'd like to have a look at my blog (much simpler than yours), and let me know what your thoughts and impressions are, I would be grateful
www.greenfoodlove.com
First, let me start with some 'translation' issues.
- when you talk about procrastination, you use they saying (I know it too in my language) which you haven't translated very correctly. Something like 'whatever you can do today, you can postpone till tomorrow? I'm not sure myself about how it should be translated correctly into English, but your translation is a bit strange, maybe you could look into it, get some advice from WA members.
Also, I find it very interesting post but towards the end, you write 'Moments in which one leaves one’s tunnel vision and is willing to pay attention to trivial things are the incubator for ...'... I do not understand... the word 'trivial' does not make sense to me in the context. Then I just couldn't put the ideas together. (not sure if you understand what i mean). I found it interesting and wanted to understand but couldn't somehow.
some more typos : How it works (not 'work's) and book summaries (not 'summarys)... just a few things I picked up.
Generally, I love your website, very interesting and interactive, maybe individual posts are a bit too long for me (also attention span issues there for me).
If I go to 'How it works', there are 3 categories which I assume, people should be able to click on to get more information, which is not available ( you might want to look into it).
Also when I go to 'Courses', there's no navigation to go back to the main menu and also the pop up box is a bit annoying if I do not want to chat. Might be good if visitors could disable it.
Great site and I wish you all the best with it
Martina
if you'd like to have a look at my blog (much simpler than yours), and let me know what your thoughts and impressions are, I would be grateful
www.greenfoodlove.com
Kuppinger
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I think your post is very relevant to our life and times right now. You covered it all very well. I like the layout of your website. I don't like websites that have too much going on (that have too many distractions!) Nice job!
Can you review my site please? allrescuedogs.com
Can you review my site please? allrescuedogs.com
Klaird90
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Hey guys,
I've not long started building my business in the baking niche and wondered if you'd mind giving me some feedback on my latest post.
It might not be of too much interest if you're not interested in baking lol and also I'm based in the UK so metrics are different for baking.
This is the link to my latest post https://bestforbaking.com/moist-vanilla-cake-recipe/
Thanks,
Kirsty :)
I've not long started building my business in the baking niche and wondered if you'd mind giving me some feedback on my latest post.
It might not be of too much interest if you're not interested in baking lol and also I'm based in the UK so metrics are different for baking.
This is the link to my latest post https://bestforbaking.com/moist-vanilla-cake-recipe/
Thanks,
Kirsty :)
Leevinc
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Hey guys,
I am building a website in the krav maga niche and I hope you are able to provide me some critics and feedback on how I am doing with my website. Here is my domain:
https://kravmagarock.com
Do PM me for your website in exchange.
Thanks!
-Vinc
Founder of kravmagarock
I am building a website in the krav maga niche and I hope you are able to provide me some critics and feedback on how I am doing with my website. Here is my domain:
https://kravmagarock.com
Do PM me for your website in exchange.
Thanks!
-Vinc
Founder of kravmagarock
fotarderrick
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Hi Guys,
New article. Since St Patrick's day is around the corner, I figured I would repost an article I had previously written about the origins and cultural impact of the St Patrick's day celebrations here in Dublin. Enjoy and please leave some feedback for a brother :)
https://the-write-guy.com/st-patrick/
New article. Since St Patrick's day is around the corner, I figured I would repost an article I had previously written about the origins and cultural impact of the St Patrick's day celebrations here in Dublin. Enjoy and please leave some feedback for a brother :)
https://the-write-guy.com/st-patrick/
DianeScorpio
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Hi - as you still have the original article on your site, Google will see this as duplicate content.
Hanif3
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Hey guys would appreciate some of your feedback on my website, here is the link. https://allgamefreaksrock.siterubix.com/please let me know what I missed out or what I can add to it. If anyone need feedback on their site I'd be glad to share. Thank you very much.
bernicekcf
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Hi, the site layout is basic, minimalist which can work well, assuming you'll be adding more photos and ads or links to your pages. It does look bare at the moment as a result so adding some posts, categories and maybe a cover photo will help at this time, unless you can fill it up fast to make it look more ready.
Hanif3
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Hey thanks. That's what I need help doing. Trying to find videos and pics to fill it out. I tried but I was having problems with the pic size. Can u send me a site where I can find game videos and pics etc. I'll appreciate your help alot
Mathessa40
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Hi Datsik,
I want to take a look of it to see all your hard work, unfortunately there is no actual link in your post. Sorry can`t rate your website need to copy and paste you website starting with https://website
Maria
I want to take a look of it to see all your hard work, unfortunately there is no actual link in your post. Sorry can`t rate your website need to copy and paste you website starting with https://website
Maria
LeonorLemos
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Hey WA!
guys, I´m working on my website about mediattion and chidren´s behavior.
Can you guys check it out and give your opinion, to help me with your feedback? to ave an ideia how I´m going on.
https://childrenmeditations.com/
I apreciate your help!
Thank You a lot!
guys, I´m working on my website about mediattion and chidren´s behavior.
Can you guys check it out and give your opinion, to help me with your feedback? to ave an ideia how I´m going on.
https://childrenmeditations.com/
I apreciate your help!
Thank You a lot!
bernicekcf
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Hi Leonor, I see you've already filling it up with good content. Keep it up!:) . I noticed though some grammatical or writing errors which could easily be checked by using spell check or grammarly.
Paul119
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Hi Leonor
i still find it funny giving fed back as i have only been here a month but here goes lol, i love your content thus far and your content is interesting to read. some food for thought i put all my headings in bold just so they sand out from your content and to break up the page a bit to make it look more palatable for the reader, i also put a few pictures into my content to try to break up the content a little
doing an awesome job keep it up have a great day Paul
i still find it funny giving fed back as i have only been here a month but here goes lol, i love your content thus far and your content is interesting to read. some food for thought i put all my headings in bold just so they sand out from your content and to break up the page a bit to make it look more palatable for the reader, i also put a few pictures into my content to try to break up the content a little
doing an awesome job keep it up have a great day Paul
LeonorLemos
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hey @bernicekcf thank you so much!
ohhh i do it every time, with grammarly but maybe it is not enough.
Thank you again!
ohhh i do it every time, with grammarly but maybe it is not enough.
Thank you again!
LeonorLemos
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Hanif3
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Hey guys I'd like to share my site to everyone here at WA. http://gamefreaksonline.com/
I need help around it, would really appreciate some feedback here in the community. Where did I go wrong ?
If you also need feedback on your website i would be glad to share. Thank you very much.
I need help around it, would really appreciate some feedback here in the community. Where did I go wrong ?
If you also need feedback on your website i would be glad to share. Thank you very much.
LeonorLemos
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Hanif3
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mnewman001
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Good morning from AZ! I would love to get some feedback on my site so far. I see someone mentioned below about having a static home page. I have stationary information on my home page- but then my articles/blog posts show up at the bottom. Would love your feedback on my site overall- and anything that could potentially be a huge roadblock to success. Thanks in advance! Here is my site: azcampingexperience.com
ClintBullock
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Hi, I just looked at your site and I was very pleased with what I saw. It reminded me of the old days when I use to take my children camping. Your pictures were great and also your blog post.
ATB2019
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The look and feel of this website is of high quality. Great job so far! Keep going!!
Kuppinger
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I really like your site! Nice and clean. Well organized. Not too busy. Looks like a lot of good information!
310pilot
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http://101prestigiousappliances.com/high-end-kitchen…learn-the-basics/
Here is a page from my site. I'm trying to give info and help on building kitchens that reflect the individual cooks and their flavor for the type of cooking they want to do. Please let me know how you feel about this page. Thanks!
Here is a page from my site. I'm trying to give info and help on building kitchens that reflect the individual cooks and their flavor for the type of cooking they want to do. Please let me know how you feel about this page. Thanks!
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aaronashley
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Hey everyone! For FOUR DAYS have been trying to use the site feedback section to earn credits, but it keeps saying "There are no more sites to review at this time."
Would any of you beautiful people mind giving me some brutally honest feedback?
Also, if any of the material speaks to you, I'd love any comments you can leave on the site and I will of course return the favor. Thanks so much WA fam.
http://syringestosobriety.com
Would any of you beautiful people mind giving me some brutally honest feedback?
Also, if any of the material speaks to you, I'd love any comments you can leave on the site and I will of course return the favor. Thanks so much WA fam.
http://syringestosobriety.com
AJTrimble1
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No worries. That's pretty normal. There are just so many new members looking to give site reviews that when one does become available they go pretty fast. Just move on with your training and check back in now and then.
Robert-A
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A lot of members who are perhaps strapped for cash use the Comments and Feedback sections to earn some money to pay their monthly subscription.
This being so they are pretty quick of the mark.
I actually ask for comments two or three times a week and set the time limit to 14 days but they are always given within an hour of my request.
Perhaps if you have a closer look at your preferences then make sure the relevant box(s) are ticked you will be more likely to get access to comments or feedback.
Enjoy your day.
Robert-A
This being so they are pretty quick of the mark.
I actually ask for comments two or three times a week and set the time limit to 14 days but they are always given within an hour of my request.
Perhaps if you have a closer look at your preferences then make sure the relevant box(s) are ticked you will be more likely to get access to comments or feedback.
Enjoy your day.
Robert-A
Crazyhaggis
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Great site and really brave of you to share the way you have. Wishing you every success with your ongoing sobriety.
I'm not sure if your site could be classified as medical. I have a health site myself and I have a medical disclaimer on it in the footer area. You might want to just check if you need one.
I left a comment and would appreciate if you could return the favour http://quitchronicfatigue.com
I'm not sure if your site could be classified as medical. I have a health site myself and I have a medical disclaimer on it in the footer area. You might want to just check if you need one.
I left a comment and would appreciate if you could return the favour http://quitchronicfatigue.com
feigner
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hi ashley,
thanks for writing about a topic which is difficult for a lot to deal with.
i like your site - please keep it clean and don't get tempted to 'jazz it up'
i would try to design a logo
and possibly change your tag line to something like from heroin addict to ....: experience real life as a recovering addict.
checj out what your site looks like on a mobile - you may find that the blocks of text look more like walls.
try to give your words a bit more breathing space (white space)
the actual writing is good and hopefuly you can help not onlt addicts but the families of addicts to understand a bit more.
i like moving images, but they do distract a bit and you miss some of the writing.
i hope you carry on recovering and this time with the help of the site you manage to stay off for a looong time.
a book i am reading may help a bit with habits and how the brain works -anatomy of success saleem bidaoui.
but good luck on both your site and staying off.
phil
thanks for writing about a topic which is difficult for a lot to deal with.
i like your site - please keep it clean and don't get tempted to 'jazz it up'
i would try to design a logo
and possibly change your tag line to something like from heroin addict to ....: experience real life as a recovering addict.
checj out what your site looks like on a mobile - you may find that the blocks of text look more like walls.
try to give your words a bit more breathing space (white space)
the actual writing is good and hopefuly you can help not onlt addicts but the families of addicts to understand a bit more.
i like moving images, but they do distract a bit and you miss some of the writing.
i hope you carry on recovering and this time with the help of the site you manage to stay off for a looong time.
a book i am reading may help a bit with habits and how the brain works -anatomy of success saleem bidaoui.
but good luck on both your site and staying off.
phil
aaronashley
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Comment done and you are right about the disclaimer. Been working on it! Thank you so much for your help!
DonnaM2
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I always judge a blog by how far I read into the content and yours aaronashley had me wanting more. You're About Me page was inspiring and brutally honest not to mention well written. It is simple in design but does it need to be anything more? I look forward to following your journey and congratulations on climbing out of your dark hole and joining WA.
EdwinBernard
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My website has been expanding and I just added a new page.
https://myonestoplegal.com/how-to-make-money-with-network-marketing-online/
I would much appreciate some feedback on it. I will be happy to do the same for you. My feedbacks are in depth and I hope you don't mind that.
All the best.
Cheers!
https://myonestoplegal.com/how-to-make-money-with-network-marketing-online/
I would much appreciate some feedback on it. I will be happy to do the same for you. My feedbacks are in depth and I hope you don't mind that.
All the best.
Cheers!
EvangelineY
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Hi Edwin, Your website looks brilliant, great job and thanks for sharing! Best Wishes
adewolfe92
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Howdy,
I see you definitely have no shortage of content on your page, and that is great. Sometimes I struggle to think of what else to say, but your post flows very well, going from topic to topic very nicely. I love that you have your paragraphs split up, it does make it easier to read. I also like that you have some sentences alone and italicized - this draws a lot of attention to that particular sentence which is actually a great strategy, so great job on that. It was also nice to see that your goals were in a nice, simple list. It makes it easy enough to read that someone reading your site could easily think, "wow, those goals are attainable. I can do that too!" Other than that, one feedback I have is that having a legal ad at the very top of the page was slightly confusing since this was a post promoting marketing, so maybe you could try and put that in the side, but that could also just be me. I also recommend that adding some pictures might make it a little easier to read through as well. Overall great job though! Keep up the good work.
I see you definitely have no shortage of content on your page, and that is great. Sometimes I struggle to think of what else to say, but your post flows very well, going from topic to topic very nicely. I love that you have your paragraphs split up, it does make it easier to read. I also like that you have some sentences alone and italicized - this draws a lot of attention to that particular sentence which is actually a great strategy, so great job on that. It was also nice to see that your goals were in a nice, simple list. It makes it easy enough to read that someone reading your site could easily think, "wow, those goals are attainable. I can do that too!" Other than that, one feedback I have is that having a legal ad at the very top of the page was slightly confusing since this was a post promoting marketing, so maybe you could try and put that in the side, but that could also just be me. I also recommend that adding some pictures might make it a little easier to read through as well. Overall great job though! Keep up the good work.
EdwinBernard
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I found your comments very helpful. Thanks for the many compliments. I was not sure what you meant by a legal ad at the very top. Did you mean a link to my business website?
I went back and checked and couldn't find any. Perhaps it was in another page as I have set up a fixed page to appear as my Home Page. In the past, WordPress placed my latest post on the Home Page. So I will go back and check my other pages and posts to see where I had an ad at the top. If you have the time to clarify this point that would be awesome.
My next task is to fund appropriate pictures to pepper the posts and pages that have none. I started to do that when I was going through the lesson on placing images on the pages. Legal based pictures are hard to come by so I will need to be creative.
I am going to follow you now. Thanks once again for your valuable comments!
I went back and checked and couldn't find any. Perhaps it was in another page as I have set up a fixed page to appear as my Home Page. In the past, WordPress placed my latest post on the Home Page. So I will go back and check my other pages and posts to see where I had an ad at the top. If you have the time to clarify this point that would be awesome.
My next task is to fund appropriate pictures to pepper the posts and pages that have none. I started to do that when I was going through the lesson on placing images on the pages. Legal based pictures are hard to come by so I will need to be creative.
I am going to follow you now. Thanks once again for your valuable comments!
yomomgifts
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Ok I'm lost my website is not looking like I'd want it to and I'm so stuck on how to get things together. It's like everything I'm typing is right on home page and lots of Read More stories. I just don't like the way it looks. Please find it in your heart to check it out and kinda guide me in the direction I need to go. I've been at this all day.. Muah
http://fancy-gowns.com/
http://fancy-gowns.com/
KSagendorph
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Your content seems to be coming along slowly. Try not to get discouraged. Keep following along in the WA program. You need to add some images within the "Featured Images" section of your posts. These images will be part of your post roll giving you some breaking of the posts.
Eventually, things will start coming together. Be patient try not to over think things.
Eventually, things will start coming together. Be patient try not to over think things.
EdwinBernard
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Hi Yolanda, you only just joined WA so don't fret that your website doesn't look the way you would like it to. At this stage the most important thing is to focus on informative content. And you are doing that.
As you progress through your training you will learn about how to structure your content using headings and small paragraphs. I suggest that at this stage you do not center your script. It makes it hard on the eyes and doesn't do anything for clarity.
The zooming out of the page appears gimmicky and takes away the focus from the content. One of the lessons you will learn is to write using small paragraphs. This provides the reader with breaks that makes it easy to read. Adding sub-headings is also a good idea.
Oh one more thing. Please use a picture of you where you are smiling. That would attract more visits. I think you made a great start. Keep up the good work!
Cheers!
Edwin
As you progress through your training you will learn about how to structure your content using headings and small paragraphs. I suggest that at this stage you do not center your script. It makes it hard on the eyes and doesn't do anything for clarity.
The zooming out of the page appears gimmicky and takes away the focus from the content. One of the lessons you will learn is to write using small paragraphs. This provides the reader with breaks that makes it easy to read. Adding sub-headings is also a good idea.
Oh one more thing. Please use a picture of you where you are smiling. That would attract more visits. I think you made a great start. Keep up the good work!
Cheers!
Edwin
DianeScorpio
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Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate using Site Manager.
Hels04
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Hi,
I've been working on my home page for my bootcamp website.
I like a website that's clean, simple and not too busy but gives a clear message about what it's promoting, without being too pushy or salesy. Hoping I have achieved that?
My page is built using Elementor, for anyone that wants to know :)
https://follow-your-dreams.com.au/
Thank-you
Helen
I've been working on my home page for my bootcamp website.
I like a website that's clean, simple and not too busy but gives a clear message about what it's promoting, without being too pushy or salesy. Hoping I have achieved that?
My page is built using Elementor, for anyone that wants to know :)
https://follow-your-dreams.com.au/
Thank-you
Helen
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Mangwin
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Hi everyone! I'm still dutifully following the training step-by-step and so I'm after some feedback on my site now please. My niche is high quality and handcrafted toys. I have yet to add any affiliate links but I would like some constructive comments please.
The majority of content is in the "Our Blog" section - but you could also check my home page! Many thanks
https://oldwillowlane.com/our-blog/
The majority of content is in the "Our Blog" section - but you could also check my home page! Many thanks
https://oldwillowlane.com/our-blog/
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Lanie7
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Hello Mangwin,
Your site is clean and very informative especially for those parents looking for toys for their children. They are good info for those looking for gifts too. The images are of high quality too.
After reading some of your contents, I think I want to buy one. And I would like to know its price and where to buy :-)
Overall, your site is nice and interesting!
All the best,
Lanie
Your site is clean and very informative especially for those parents looking for toys for their children. They are good info for those looking for gifts too. The images are of high quality too.
After reading some of your contents, I think I want to buy one. And I would like to know its price and where to buy :-)
Overall, your site is nice and interesting!
All the best,
Lanie
CSebastian
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Hi everyone!
I finished the first articles for my blog and I'm so curious to see what do you think about my website called bestskilltoys.com.
Do you have any suggestions related to the color scheme, content, and images ?
What other features should I add to my website?
Thanks!
Sebastian
I finished the first articles for my blog and I'm so curious to see what do you think about my website called bestskilltoys.com.
Do you have any suggestions related to the color scheme, content, and images ?
What other features should I add to my website?
Thanks!
Sebastian