You site looks great. Nice layout and your articles are well written.

The only thing you should be aware of is your niche itself.

You have what is commonly referred to as a "lifestyle" blog. Now, there is nothing wrong with that, and many such sites are extremely popular. And yours looks to be shaping up as one of the better ones I've seen, so well done.

Just understand that such sites are less "nichy", for lack of better term, so it can take longer to build up an audience. BUT...

On the plus side, if you have the patience required for such a site, once you have an audience, in my experience they tend to be extremely loyal.

For a good example, take a look at Tim Ferriss' site (https://tim.blog/). His is a bit more sophisticated because he's been around so long, but look past the look of it and focus on his content and, even more importantly, his interaction with his crowd; you'll see that his audience is filled with raving fans.

Another example that is a bit more business focused, but no less a lifestyle style blog, is Seth Godin (https://www.sethgodin.com/) Again, he's built so much loyalty with his audience that now every book he releases is pretty much a number one best-seller as soon it's published.

Keep up the good work :-)

Your banner with the airplane that says "Create Memories for a Lifetime", memories is misspelled. Also the word victim in the 2nd paragraph is misspelled and the word advice in the first paragraph under "Avoid being a Target" is misspelled as well. In the 3rd paragraph of that same section, you have a period instead of a space between proper and copies. Definitely run the spell and grammar check as I'm seeing some other spelling and grammar errors other than those but I don't want to keep listing all of them.

This is a great informative article which I think would be helpful for people planning to travel. I left you a comment on your site as well.

Hi cassiespace! I looked into your website and honestly, this is the first time I saw a platform tackling on this issue or information. Or maybe I wasn't really exposed that much into that?
Anyway, looking into your layout, I found it very simple yet the content is very informative. There is a lot to tackle about travelling. One thing I noticed is there are grammatical errors which you can fix using the spell and grammar checkers. You can do that before publishing your post.

I hope you can visit my site too! www.stefideeblogs.com

Hi - the first thing I notice is that your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate using Site Manager. I personally find your font to be very small. Several of your articles are too short, you need to be aiming for 1000 words for each one. The articles are nicely written, but as the others have said, several spelling and grammar errors. All the best, Diane

I took a little poke around the website. I didn't leave any comments because I had nothing relevant to add.

However, could I make a few suggestions?

Changing between standard text and bold so frequently. Why? To me, it made it a little difficult reading.

You have a lot of images. All have your watermark on them. It was distracting.

Just my observations.

Wow! What a detailed article! I love the step by step visuals and instructions! I also love the relatable struggles put in there. We have all, at one point, had these issues! The only thing I can say is to use the grammar checker. (I am a retired teacher and catch grammar mistakes easily). Nice article!!!

Oops, thank you, Tammy.
Probably using WA grammar check and Grammarly could not detect. I had even asked my friend who is a teacher to check for me. Yet, I still have grammar mistakes. Ha.
Thank you for your time and advice, Tammy! :o)

Thank you, Kenneth, for your advice!
Bold it, so that it can stand out and help to save time on reading. Nowadays, a lot of people are very busy. The purpose is to cut down reading time on the whole article and to emphasize the main points.
As for the watermark, it is to protect my personal pictures. Copyright purpose.
Appreciate your time too, Kenneth! Thank you!

I read your article and it's interesting and has a lot of information. I do agree with K Sagendorph that switching between bold and regular type through out the info, especially when it's just a phrase in bold within regular type is distracting and doesn't look right to me. I did read your response with the reason why but I'm not sure this is the way to go.

Also, just one more suggestion is there is a lot of information and I understand that a lot of the pictures are needed to show how this device works but maybe you can use the pictures to break up the information more? Like almost all of your images are aligned on the left side, maybe you could change it up and do centered and right aligned as well. Maybe that wouldn't work either, I just feel like it would create a bit better user experience if you tweak the pictures and the bold/regular font issues.

Missy

Thank you, Melissa, for your advice.
I have received both good and bad comments about to bold or not to.
I will look into it.

In fact, I have spent more than 3 hours to resize and realigned all the pictures, after advice from our WA folks here.

The purpose of the website is also to provide real-life functional photos. I am those who want to look at pictures or the real item prior to purchase. Most of the website, it never provides detailed ones like what I have broken down.
Your suggestion, I will definitely take into consideration!

Thank you, Melissa! Have a great weekend! :o)

Hi Terand! I had a chance to thoroughly review your website and found it intriguing. Some honest suggestions:
Use a lot less bolded text and maybe larger font.
Watermarking your photos makes them difficult to see.
You need a nice handsome photo of yourself on the About page!
Add affiliate links and banners on the side to increase conversions.
Maybe put the About Terand, Privacy Policy & Affiliate Disclosure as a dropdown titled Site Info. and add a Reviews column and another category.
Keep adding more and more content---maybe some Reviews, HOW TOs and Articles.

You've got a great site going! Keep up the good work, my friend!

Erin :)!

Thank you so much for your review, Erin!

Affiliate links and banners on the side- Yet to work on it

As for my photo, I did not want to put it but reconsidering because I do not want people I know to discover me. I need to change my thoughts. Thank you for your compliment. Ha dropdown list & Category

Need to work on the dropdown list, reviews & Categorisation.

Ok, I will work on it!

Appreciate it a lot too and thank you, Erin!

Terand :o)

Hey I checked out your website and I like it. The choice of color is nice and warm, very inviting for a reader. By the way which theme did you use? I like it and I really want to try it out and see if it will work for me. I am just getting started and am not decided on the theme yet. My website is www.myromancetoyou.com if you wanna check it out.

She has the Ascent theme.

Wow, I don't know how you knew that, Ryan, but I'm impressed! And yes, you're absolutely right, I'm using the Ascent theme.

Thanks for checking out my website, Raquelle, and for your comments! As Ryan figured out, I'm using the Ascent theme. I'll check out your website. :)

Hi Raquelle,

I checked out your website, and I like it! Red is definitely a good color for romance.

Your articles are well written and interesting, and I like your use of pictures. I think if you add a few more, it will be even more appealing.

I think the niche you've picked will be very popular, and I wish you lots of success!!!

Joanie

Yes, I found an extension for Chrome called "Wordpress Theme Detector and Plugin Detector" and whenever you go to a wordpress site and wonder about a plugin or theme they might be using, you just click the button and it gives you the information. I've found it very useful, especially with nearly everyone here using WP sites, you can see what others are using and cut down research time in building out sites.

A few more pictures, got it! Thank you so much for the feedback and for checking out my website.

That's great information! Thanks, Ryan!

You're welcome, Raquelle! Happy to!

Hi - I know your site is a work in progress, but as it stands, it's a little bit pointless at the moment. Lists of books with a 2 sentence synopsis are not going to attract visitors. People like to see personal opinions and reviews. You need to think as to what you can offer that people can't get from going to the big guns like Amazon or GoodReads.

Hi Diane,

Thanks for taking the time to visit my website and offer feedback. I'm planning to add book reviews and more feature articles in the future. Thanks again!

Joanie

Hi! I just want to say I love reading thrilling novels and I was searching for recommendations. I got excited when I came across your site!
Anyway, the theme is plain simple yet I liked the heading and the images you put on each article. I just noticed that under your logo it is written "just another WordPress site". Edit that on your themes and put like a small tagline for your niche. That way it sounds pro. That's all! I hope you can give feedback on mine too! www.stefideeblogs.com

Stephanie, thanks so much for taking a look at my website and giving me your feedback! I really appreciate it. As you suggested, I took out the Wordpress tagline and put in one of my own.

Always happy to connect with someone who enjoys thriller novels!

I'll take a look at your site and give you some feedback too.

Kind Regards,
Joanie

Hi Stephanie,

I just visited your website and read all your articles, and I really like what you've done!

I like the theme and colors you chose. They are appealing and work well with your subject matter.

Your articles are well written and very authentic-sounding, so you come through as a real person who cares. Bravo! Also, your photos are excellent and look very professional! I especially loved the photos of the food... made me hungry, lol.

I think you've done a great job with this, and I don't have any suggestions to offer except keep doing what you're doing!

Wishing you lots of success!

Joanie

I like the website design and where you were going with waste management. I'll be interested to see where you go with gold investment.

I like the design of your website. It has an appealing look.

Your article on food waste was really interesting and well organized. The photos you used are very powerful, especially the first one.

Good luck with your transition to the gold investment niche. I wish you lots of success in 2019 and beyond!

Joanie

Hi Missy
I really enjoyed reading the 1st article
I would love to see a more colourful site with a softer look instead of black and read
Maybe Astra as a theme might be nice and you can go to Canva.com to make logos etc for your site for free if this helps
Well done
Vicki

Thanks for the input! I'm just using the first free theme I picked before I started the premium membership. I'll check out what I can get now that I'm a premium member tomorrow.

Hi Missy,

I love the name of your blog!

I just read your first article and I think it's excellent! It's beautifully written, flows so smoothly, and is chock-full of helpful advice. I had no idea there was so much to potty training little doggies, but you really sound like an expert!

I think the photos you chose for your article are great, very appealing. But I'd like to see more on the page, maybe just another one or two.

Also, I'd love to see some type of header at the top of your site to add color and interest. Maybe a pic of you and your "monsters" (ha!)?

You're off to a great start, and you've picked a really cool niche. I think you'll be very successful with it.

By the way, my sister is getting a new puppy on Saturday and looking forward (not) to potty training her. I'd love to share your article with her, if that would be ok with you. (If not, no worries.)

Wishing you lots of success in 2019 and beyond, Missy!

Joanie

Joanie

Definitely share my article with your sister! I will be writing an article about the different types of indoor potty training today so if she's getting a small breed dog she might be interested in reading that too.

Thanks for all the great advice, I really appreciate it!!!

Missy

Thanks so much, Missy! I will share your wonderful article with my sister, and I'm sure it will help her. The puppy she's getting is a small breed dog, so I think your new article will interest her also.

Glad my feedback was helpful. Best of luck to you!

Joanie

I'm actually writing that article right now.

Also, I added another picture to that article. Your advice really did help as I was on the fence and couldn't decide if it needed another one or not.

Missy

Oh, I took another look at your article with the new picture, and I think it's perfect!

I sent my sister a link to your article, and I'm sure she'll find it really helpful. Thanks so much for sharing your expertise!

Joanie

Hi Honor,
I am studying these cholesterol Myths myself. I do tons of research on this. The World and Doctors have us all fooled into "Lower Your Numbers." Bull. YOu know. I stopped cholesterol pills a few months ago and I have a few issues. These issues are becoming better now as we speak. You have good internal and external links to Amazon. I like you theme 'The Simplest'. Good Start.
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However, YOur Home page links to your "8 High Cholesterol Myths". Also, I would make a picture of yourself and Create an About ME tab. The site is SLightly on the Technical side for viewers. But then again the type of viewers your targeting just may go for that style. Hope this helps...........Scotty B ♫

Wow! That's quite interesting.
I will like to asked, from your article you state that cholesterol is a precusor for sex homones such as estrogen, progesterone and testeron. And I believe cholesterol are found in fat containing food. So my question is, does taking foot rich in fat boost your sex homones synthesis?

Hi Mishi,

The layout of the site is clean, professional looking and easy to navigate. As you build out your site, look at the tools available to help with your site (SEO, Rankings, Key Words, etc.. ) and build upon your foundation. Good luck and wishing you much success.

I think it's great! The picture on your "About Me" page looks like a nice photo but I cannot see it on one screen; I have to scroll and can only see part of it at a time. I wish you well on your coaching! I think your site feels very welcoming.

Hello. The site is coming along great. A couple things you might try and change, if possible, would be that on your About Me page your picture is quite large as is the picture on the hours and scheduling page. Also, the hours and scheduling box on your home page, could be eliminated and just put the link in you top navigation next to "Home | Blog | Hours and Scheduling | About Me". The content is great though! Keep writing and don't spend too much time on the pictures. I wasted lots of time with photos on my site so be careful. There is so much to do with a site, but you are off to a great start.

hahah oh nooooo! I'm not sure anyone needs that much of a close up of my face :D I've only viewed it in one browser so far, so thank you for that heads up. I will shrink my head sometime today LOL

Maybe my internet connection, but it loads slow. Overall not as bad as you think. Create a footer within the custom setting of your theme. Then place to the Hours, Privacy Policy, and Confidentiality in the footer. The top menu with the Home, About, and Blog on the top.

thank you. Yeah...that middle menu is the one I cannot figure out where in the code it is. There is no setting for it in configuration. It just auto populates it with any pages I create...which is really annoying. I know it's in there somewhere. Also, that navigation makes MUCH more sense :) thanks for the suggestion

Depending on the theme. In one or both locations, The Dashboard > Appearances or in the Customize > Menus

Nope, it's in neither location. I think I shall have to write to the theme support and see if they can steer me in the right direction

Ah HA! I tricked it into working by putting a blank menu in there! Work-arounds! Feeling rather proud of myself now LOL

I find your page pretty neat and organized. It didn't load slow for me. I agree that you should have a footer where you can place your privacy policy, disclosure page, etc.

You will want to set up some categories and move your posts to the related categories instead of having them in the default uncategorized. I'm not sure if you just haven't gotten to that point yet.

I like the header photo too. It's nice and big. Overall, I think your site looks good.

Hi Michelle,
Was trying to give feedback yesterday but my computer 'took a powder'(crashed). Anyway I like the theme 'excellent'. I do see you have no blogroll (recent posts) in what is supposed to be a right column. YOur design here may not call for that. Just sayin.
YOu may have intended this but your landing page is a series of read mores with your blog roll of posts. However your Home tab button at the top goes to so a slider with Confidentiality, Scheduling etc. Nice trick. Might work. You have social icons at the top which should be out of the way at the bottom. But ! they are very a subtle and Non-distracting. MIght just work here also. Great Clickable internal links with your pictures. Love♥ the phone number to call by clicking. How did you do that ?
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However I don't see too many External Links yet. Even to start with an informational one to Wikipedia would be good. Then on to Amazon, Etsy or Ebay etc.. But, this style of site may not call for those. Just a thought.
p.s. when you click on the phone number or your email it wants me to pick an ap from a drop down. It say "ALways open these types of Links in the associated App". Well hope this helps........Scotty B ♫

Thanks for the feedback! My computer takes powders frequently, so no worries :)

On to the questions...I do not see a right column on my screen. I am going to look at it in different browsers later and on mobile.

As for how the phone number works...no idea LOL I am not a coder. I just use the template and somehow it works :) Also, not sure about the whole ap business. I will get into that and figure it out. It doesn't do me much good to try to get clients if they have to download aps to access information or email me. Weird.


Again, thanks for the feedback. The site is only a few days old so not a whole lot on it yet. Plugging away slowly but surely

Thank you Wendy. Yeahhhhh I've just been playing with all the options on the template and seeing what they do. I'm not sure which version of it you saw :)

You are correct, no categories as of yet. It's on the list of the many things to do today! Like I said earlier, that front page is a hot mess and probably will be for a couple of days while I figure out what all the settings do :)

You have good looking site, Shashwat.

As you probably know, photography and equipment is an extremely competitive niche, and I think by focusing mainly on the sub-niche of tripods is a fantastic way to get your foot in the door.

Your articles are very helpful and well written. And, naturally, you are making good use of images.

At this point, the only suggestion I might have would be to insert a "read more" link into your posts after the first paragraph or so.

Right now you have each entire post showing on your home page which makes for a lot of scrolling to get to the bottom. Many people won't stick around that long. If you use the tag, though, you will be able to fit more posts in a reasonable amount of space; a much better experience for your readers.

Keep up the good work. :-)

Thanks a lot, I appreciate the help :)

Anytime. You're doing well, friend. Keep going. :-)

Thank you, I added the tags. Seems better now :)

I just looked. Definitely better... gives you a much cleaner look. Well done! :-)

Thank you

Just a quick question, should I continue with product reviews like the one on my website or should I include some informative posts like tips and tricks, something like that.

I recommend always leaning way more on the info side. Reviews are fine, but if you have too many compared to actual informative posts your site may start to look "spammy" if you know what I mean.

Hi Shashwat - your site is coming along nicely. The articles are well-written and easy to read, with paragraphs and images. My only suggestion would perhaps be to add some external links. For example, you mentioned the names of some photographers. I didn't know who they were and had to Google them.

Oh, okay, I get it.

But if I do that, how will I sell products? My last post was about the best tripod for beginners. In that I gave some information about what to look for in a good tripod, and I gave some information about the tripod which I think satisfies the criteria.

Should I write such articles or purely information based like different photography techniques, etc? I'm not sure as my niche is tripods so if I write about photography , wouldn't it be irrelevant to my niche ?

Great start with your website love the header image on point.
The theme is clean and easy to read and navigate.

Maybe the addition of a featured image on your blog roll will break up all the text and entice visitors to click through and read more.

When you are comfortable start using internal and external links this will help your SEO rankings and give more value to your readers.

Well done so far keep going :)

Thank you so much, but I'm not sure what do you mean by a featured image.

Where you edit your blog posts in the editor scroll down and to the right hand side you can add a featured image. Ad one here and it will show up on your blog roll.

Hey there,

I left you a comment, your site was refreshing and very informative. Thank you.

take a look at my latest:
https://bit.ly/2GCBP7M

Best regards,

Amanda

Okay, I'll check it out. Thanks for the tip.

Thanks for the comment.
I checked out your website too, its actually very useful.

Hope you are doing great!

Hi John,

There is loads of information, but if I didn't already know it was WA you probably would have lost me once I clicked the start exploring.

I would add in a headline before you get to the stats as at first I thought these related to your site.

The blue color stands out well.

Other feedback... I would explain from the start it is WA that you are talking about.

Lose either the learn more or start exploring as you don't need both.

Have your full review button open in a new tab so they don't leave this page.

There are lots of questions in the first paragraph maybe ask one question and then give the solution no body likes being bombarded with questions it may make your visitor leave the site.

Get your free website button - open in new tab so they don't leave your site.

Finishing on the pluses.. loads of great information, design looks good, and easy to read ....

Trust this helps you ... I tried to look at it as someone who doesn't know what WA is.

Martin

Thanks Martin, really appreciate you taking the time to critique.
So in terms of changes:
1. "I would add in a headline before you get to the stats as at first I thought these related to your site." What would be a good headline here - "Wealthy Affiliate" or something else?
I'm struggling for ideas here. Thank you

Looked over your site and here are my answers:
1. There is plenty of information. It was a bit confusing to find your articles with information.
2. I was left with the impression of training. However at first glance it was work at home.
3. Blue is the color of trust and professionalism. There is plenty of it.
4. There are a lot of images to click on your main page and got lost to get to your articles.

I like that automation typing style you've got on your header main page. That's cool! Good color too.

You have a very interesting site. I'm sure there are alot of people who will be looking at it. It's very easy to read and navigate. Keep up the good works!

Good work on the content. There is a lot going on with your website. That image of your dog is taking too much attention and not giving way to read your content. You're also right about the color of your text too light. Make it dark.

Since you're just starting, keep following the training lessons. And you mentioned the page is not quite the way you want it, then test with other templates. Look for something simple to look at and easy for you to make changes.

I have since changed my theme and there are no pictures on my homepage...just a blog roll! I knew the mistakes I was making before I made them but I was trying to make it colorful at first until I realized that it was too much lol.
Thank you for your feedback it was really helpful!

Hi Christine. I think you might have missed something. When I go to those links, nothing happens and they go nowhere. In fact, most of these .com domain names are still available. I did however find that those sites exist as .siterubix.com sites, but that there is no content available. So while you have created sites in .siterubix, if you want them to be .coms then you need to register those domain names and then move your .siterubix.com domains to those top-level .com addresses....Is this making sense? Also, 5 sites or 5 sites a week in Level 1 Lesson 6 is way to much, in my opinion. How will you manage content for these sites? Pick one and build it out with lots of content, links, insight, pictures, reviews, etc. Get traffic, make money, help people, then build another.

Hi Christine - I am not sure that you understand what you are doing. You can't just make up the names of websites and expect them to exist. Unless you are using the free sites provided here, you actually need to buy each of these website names, assuming they are available.

Your goals are somewhat unrealistic with wanting to create so many sites. Each site will need dozens of articles on it of at least 1000 words each. Please just build one site until you get the hang of it. Follow the training closely and complete all the tasks without missing out any steps.

Hi there! I think you may need to focus on one website at a time. I would never give out my info until I knew what the content was and if it was relevant to what I needed...hence...your first website. The rest of your websites didn't open.

First of all, I'm not usually a fan of the "Twitter" style background design on blogs, as they tend to be a bit too busy and distracting, but in this case I think it works with the niche you're in.

I think your articles are very well done. In fact, as a former rock/metal bass player myself, you had me with the top article. And the fact that you one of your recommended songs was Holy Diver -- literally the FIRST song I ever played with a band -- you really hooked me. It brought back some fond memories. lol

You're doing well. Keep up the good work. :-)

Thanks a ton, AJ. Your encouragement means a lot. Dio forever!

I like how easy your navigation through each post is. I noticed your home page was not very detailed, so maybe incorporate you message above your recent posts if your template allows it. I am about to purchase the full version of my template for better editing power so you might want to consider that too if you are looking for more capacity.

I enjoyed finding out how to play blue oyster cult, it looks way easier than I thought, so good links too. Keep up the good work! I would start doing instrument reviews or comparisons too.

Yes, the homepage needs work for sure. I'm just trying to get a lot of content up before I worry about the design details and all that. I appreciate your feedback, Rowan! Thank you.

Hi Connor, I would suggest to add a profile picture in the About page. probably with your guitar.

No prob, check out my website! Since you like electric guitars, you might like electric bikes! let me know what you think, I'm adding more content and I think I am ready to start adding my own comparison / products reviews.

https://radicalelectricbikes.com/

Fashion is a great niche to build. The only thing I could see is that in the home page under your photos it was very hard to read the text content. Other than that, really good.

thanks for your review, I will sure work on that

Hi Etuka,
Like your Theme Multipurpose-Magazine. Right away the Fashion Picture Jumps right out at you for a good splash into your site. Internal Links in orange are good. I like your big fonts although they train us not to use them as much. I prefer it. Trying to see what fonts you used ? Maybe messed with the Font Sizes ? Looks good anyway. I think a picture of yourself in the About Me is more trustworthy for customers. Great SIte.........Scotty B ♫

Hi Lerakinz, your picture is too large size, shrink it. Or else will take long time to download for some country with slower internet.

There is a uncategorized tag in About Lerakinz post. Maybe you want to named it some other things.

I like your website so far! There's one thing I noticed:

In your "how to sell dresses online" post, some of your images have captions that blend in with the article text. It can be a little confusing for the reader.

Other than that, it's a great start.

Hello there Twack! I have tried three times to load your site from the internet and I couldn't do so. Message I received was it is taking too long to load. Has anyone else commented on your site? David

Hi - sorry, I can't access your site.

Hello I have tried to access your site but couldn't access it.

I can't access to your website too. Issit becos your domain is located in some other place. DNS not set properly.

Thank you everyone for trying to access the site. I have changed the url as the .com domain isn't yet linked withing the platform. (Have to wait another 50 days before I can transfer) this link should work now.

Thank you for trying to access the site, should work now.

Appreciate you trying to access the site. Now it should work.

Now it should work. Appreciate you persevering to try and access the site.

Sorry for the issue, it should work now.

Well Twack, I've read your entire website postings this morning and I must say they are very deeply interesting, and wonderfully informative. You certainly go into detail about everything you write. I can't find anything negative, so keep up the assume work that you are doing.

David

Hi David,
Thank you ever so much for your kind words. It can be a bit...'Scary'? when you put your posts up for everyone to see, especially when some of them are full of personal details. 'Baring ones soul' I think the phrase is.
So I thank you again for making it worthwhile.
Be well.
Twack

Well written. Learn from u. Wish you success!

I love this idea, I never actually knew that you could buy special V-day clothes for your puppy! So cute, adorable. It's a great looking site, clean and easy to navigate.

Thanks for sharing!

Hi Donna, your website is really cute. Content is good and you do a bang up job I think with pre-selling your affiliate link products. However, for some reason your affiliate photos of the products that you are promoting are being smeared on your page. Please try to correct most of the photos or get help with someone else to help you with that because I'm not too sure why it is happening.
David

Wow I really enjoyed being in your site. I don't know much about dogs but u sure got me interested with the organization and the little red dress article you started with. Great job

Thank you so much for checking out my website post!

Thanks David I appreicate you telling me about that. They look fine on my computer, so I don't know why that could be happen either. I will check it out. Thanks again!

That's a very interesting article. A couple of things to think about.

It's your first article, so you may not be there in the training yet, and that's okay, but you will want to add in some images to help break up the text. Just make them relevant to whatever you are talking about in that part of the post.

Speaking of breaking up the text, I would break your paragraphs down more. Most people don't "read" on the web as much as they scan, so keep your paragraphs short -- two or three sentences at most. Give them plenty of white space to work with.

Hi Catherine! I left a comment on your site. Love your work so far! :)

I would love to see more photos in the actual content of the pages but I also like the clean clutter free look of this site. It's easy to understand and navigate. I really like the content as well!

Thanks for a great site!

Hi Catherine. What a great looking website! Your content is super and very informative. I think you should make your paragraphs a little smaller though and I couldn't find any affiliate links yet on your website for products. Nice job all around.

David

hello dear. so far the writing is good. I sure will be interested in natural healing. just try not to write very long paragraphs and use images in between text because seeing is believing

Hi Catherine, is a nice website. Maybe you can add more picture and headers. I think some pages has too much wordings. Wish you success!

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effie

Hi Ray, I found it very interesting as I am looking to promote in this niche but never considered hemp infused chocolate, so found this very interesting. I have followed you now and will keep this in mind. I will read your profile now to see where you are based as think I could possibly perhaps touch base in regards to the sourcing of hemp infused chocolate or can maybe do a guest post in future promoting your chocolate just for the sake of it being interesting, relelvant and niche related. I really enjoyed the video. If you do not mind sharing, what video creation software did you use?

Your website is fabulous!

Hello kevin, I have just checked out your site, and I love the interface.
Unfortunately, I have tried to read a post about "cognitive thinking" and I could not access, the system asked me about a password.


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Thank you Raulmalfita for the review. I'm still developing the site. I just needed someone else thoughts prior to completing it. Here is my observation of your phenomenal site.

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KevinR

Looks good Lars. I found it easy to navigate with all the content you have going on there. The one I found was the font color, looks a bit light. Otherwise, keep up the content. good work!

I love the website too!!! I love the graphics! It's easy to navigate and it has a purpose!

Hi - sorry, but I can't see this point of this post. At only 200 words, it won't be recognised by Google. It is targeted at Valentine's Day, and therefore only has limited appeal for a short timeframe. Plus, it is a special offer which could change at any time. Do you plan on checking it every day to make sure the offer is still available? I guess you are hoping it would be spotted by somebody who already happened to be on your site.

Hi Amber, your website looks great. The article is too short though, you need to elaborate more to rank in google. In the training Kyle states 1,000 to 1,500 words which can be challenging but worth it. I write about 500 to 600 words - short articles but more consistent.

Thanks for the comment!

Thank you for the feedback. I'm still figuring this out! I'm going to revise my post later in the day when I have time :)

Thanks for your feedback! I will make some revisions and add more words to this.

Perhaps, I have to figure out how to target the buyer in the buying state in a better way!

It is a party theme website so some of my content will be specific but I can see how that can cause limitations.

You have a wonderful site! Since this is a product review I do advise to write a longer post. You may want to think about sharing a recipe on it so it gives the customer an image of what they can make!

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wow i love your whole idea about your website and i will say keep it up , the idea of love and valentine and how contents are arranged is quite good, the only issue was about the welcome screen picture which looks too big and broad on the page covering the whole screen which can affect readers .
you can also check my content for me . thanks
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Correct. Short and sweet. Describing the product with why you like it and why you should get it but you have forgotten the most important part. No call to action so dont expect anyone to buy it off you. otherwise good

I love the festive header! Your site is clean and easy to read and the links lead where they should. Having a shopping category is good and you will be able to link many articles to it without having to add too many ads on each page.

I'm afraid that targeting an item on sale is going to require too much maintenance on your part. Amazon (and maybe others) do not allow us to list the price unless it is part of the link they created. At that price, the company can easily sell out and your readers might be ticked because they didn't get one.

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Thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it, and I love the recipe idea. I'm going to work a little harder on this post when I have time!

Thanks for the comment as well. And thanks for sharing your website with me! I'll have a look :)

Thank you so much for the comment! It's appreciated. I'll leave you one later today as well :)

Thank you! I appreciate the support. I'll look at adjusting the picture size.

I'll have a look at your website later in the day :)

Thank you for the tip! I'm going to expand a little more on this post and will keep that in mind :)

I really appreciate the advice thank you! I'm glad I posted this to understand everything better. I'm still in the learning stage and I you're very right, I didn't think about the maintenance. I'm going to adjust this post so that it won't require so much work :)

Thank you so much for leaving a comment! It's much appreciated. I will do the same later in the day :)

Hi Sav! I just looked at the website. I love the idea and the title! Free She! I love all of your varied pics too...athletic, social, young, younger (hahaha!). I love the topics too. So many of those topics we can't get real feed back on. The only thing that kind of threw me was that I think you need more background space around your texts and some of the word boxes (or text boxes) didn't seem to fit. Other than that, I think everyone will love the site!

Excellent niche! I love the header, colors, etc. If there is a way to keep the text from pushing out of the boxes, that would be good. In the article about peeing standing up, you mention a review about the Shewee but I couldn't find the review. I guess you are still working on that. I'm bookmarking so I can visit again later.

Thanks Theresa! Yes I'm still working on adding content, so a review is yet to come. At a bit of a delima trying to figure out how to adjust my margins. My template doesn't seem to want me to, but live and learn. Thanks again for your input.

Looks like you've done a good job with it. I see that you placed a few Amazon links near the bottom of the review inside the text which is perfect. You might also consider placing one at the top when you first mention the product.

One thing you may need to consider, though, is not quoting the exact price. I have not experienced this myself, but several members have reported recently that they've been dinged by Amazon for doing that. Instead, you might just make the link "Click here for the most up to date price" or something.

Just a thought. :-)

So I love your website!!! The theme is great and I love every aspect of what you shared. Great job!!!

Thank you.

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First, don't worry if it takes a few days. There's no rush. It's not about speed; it's about consistency.

As far as the site, you are doing quite well. You have a nice, clean layout that is fairly easy to navigate.

My wife will soon be starting a similar site based on her experiences, so I am relatively familiar with the subject, and I must say you're articles are extremely well done. Lots of quality information that is interesting the read, and you are making great use of images.

My only suggestion at this point is that you may want to consider using the "read more" tag in your posts. This will limit how long your home page is as well as allow you to get more posts displayed on there.

Well done, sir. :-)

Hello, I am full of admiration for your website. First the topic, I have never come across this topic as an article so we'll written and detailed. My first impression landing on the home page was "this for sure is spirituality related". The message of the image is loud and clear. The website is easy to navigate. Only one thing I could not really distinguish at first sight, is the title of each paragraph. In a live class here in WA it was advised to put title in Bold so they can be easily be identified. Really Great site.

Thanks so much. I don’t know how to do that but I’m going to figure it out

Thanks. I always mean to go back and add bolds and the am so relieved to finish that I forget. Also I need to fix some typos

If you are using the "Classic" editor -- which I recommend you stay with since that is what Kyle is using in the training videos -- pull up one of your existing posts in your site dashboard, or create a new one.

Along the top of the editor box where you type your content you will see a tool bar with different icons for things like bold, italic, etc. Near the middle you will see an icon that looks a bit like a cheesburger (lol). If you hover over that it will say "Insert Read More tag). All you have to do is set your cursor at the point you want to insert it and click that icon.

I usually set it after a few sentences, right at a point where I am about to reveal a tip or something, or right after I have asked a question. The idea is to create a "mystery" that makes the reader want to continue reading.

Let me know if this helped. :-)

Thank you sooooooo much. Worked perfectly

I like the fonts, layout, pictures, and color selections, however, on my screen it is very large and thus hard to read. Maybe it's my browser, but other sites' font isn't so large. Maybe check it out. Also, on your work party Ideas package, there seems to be some misspellings for stressful and schedule that you might want to correct. I know nothing about event planning if your prices are reasonable, but it seems reasonable to me. Overall, great job on your site. My site is just getting started and I too would love people's advice. My site is https://slowlyslimmer.com please give me some feedback.

Hi Amelia
I love your site- you are doing such a great job
Spot on
Vicki

Thank you

Hi Amelia,
I like the Niche Event Planning. Your theme Blossom is good too. Your Font is a little large. Most experts recommend paragraph and then H2 for Headings. Older folks may appreciate what you already have cause they can See it. I think someone can read more words more quickly if it is smaller. However, I personally find the larger font is fine. If you do cut down on the font then you could fit a right column in for your blog roll (posts and pages you have recently edited). I also think your Social Icons at the top take too much room for your "above the fold" text to show. Place those at the bottom. Also, you might want to include a "Leave a Reply" at the bottom to get engagement back and forth. This is good for the Rankings. All-in-all a great site !!...........Scotty B ♫

Hi Amelia

Love your concept and your site looks really clean and bright.
It's also good that straight away you give your clients an indication of price as a lot of companies try and get you hooked first then give you a ridiculous price therefore wasting your time and theirs.
One thing I think is really important for your online business especially for the Kids parties is to have many pictures of the parties you have had even maybe a couple of video clips showing the kids laughing and playing and enjoying t themselves as this will give you and your company credibility.
Lots of luck for the future
Kind Regards


Sean
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Hey I think the site looks great. It is professional and still fun. I agree with others about type size. I know you’re just starting, and so am I. But I would suggest some more details and illustrations of what they get. More photos of previous events you have produced. I am thinking of the Etsy sites I have seen with page after page of decorations for each theme. I bet you already have these as photos from suppliers. Even choices of colors, merchandise and paper goods. Something to make it look like you get a lot for your money. Also a long list of previous jobs and who and what they were. Like a resume. The overall look is great though. Exciting, which is what you want. Good luck with your business.
John
www.mymetaphysicalmind.com

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Regards
Billy

The site looks really good. And some good original content. My only thought was, a lot of your ideas are DIY things you can do without buying anything. That’s good for the reader, but not good to monetize the site. Unless maybe you write a digital book of your own to sell, which it looks like your are capable of. Also when I saw your site’s web link I thought it was about my healthy cat. I actually clicked off and the back again because I was more interested in my cat’s health than my own. (Unfortunately). So I am wondering if somewhere down the line you might want to change the domain. Although I guess you’d have to start over getting it ranked. Anyway it looks and reads great.
John
www.mymetaphysicalmind.com

You have a nice looking site. Clean and not too busy. Your articles are of a good length, and you are making great use of visuals.

A couple of things to consider...

1) You might move your Privacy Policy down to the Footer area. It's definitely a "required" thing for a site, but it's not so vital that you should be wasting valuable real estate at the top of each page for it.

Save that space for the important stuff -- like what your audience is actually searching for. Besides, if you've seen one privacy policy you've basically seen them all. lol

2) I like the clean look of your site, although it may actually be too clean. What I mean is that there is a lot of white space going on.

Don't get me wrong. Normally this is a good thing. Most people ruin a good design by cramming too much in there.

But in this case, I think just a splash of color near the top might do wonders. For example, maybe change the background of your header to red (so it matches the color scheme), and then changing the Slowly Slimmer title to white. This would help balance things a bit more.

3) And lastly, start thinking about what categories you might create. Currently, all of your articles are listed as Uncategorized. But if you start to group them now, before you grow too big to handle easily, you can have a nice "library" going for your audience.

For example, it looks like most, if not all, of your articles at the moment tend to focus on intermittent fasting. This is a perfect category. Specific enough to be grouped together, but also allows room for other potential topics to be covered later as your site matures.

I think you're off to a good start, my friend... keep up the good work. :-)

As far as plugins go, there are about nine-hundred and seventy-three bazillion out there (okay, I exaggerate... but only a little. lol). It really just depends on what it is you need the plugin to do.

For now, as you're just getting started, I recommend using the plugins Kyle recommends in the training. Later on, as your site grows and you decide that you need a particular function on it, come back to the community and tell us what you're looking for and I'm sure you'll get loads of suggestions. :-)

Thanks so much for the review! I will definitely put some of your tips to work soon. I really appreciate it. Especially the grouping of topics because while writing about Intermittent Fasting is fine, there are only so many ways to give the same information. I will need to branch out at some point. Also, I agree I need some more colors or something interesting. I'm just getting to the "Money" part of training, so maybe some of the other white space will be banner ads or something, but I really want to try not to overcrowd the pages.

Hi ItsRyan.
Like your Theme from Candid Themes Gist. Great weight loss Niche. I would try to get your blog roll of recent posts in that blank right column on your Home Post/page instead of at the bottom. Unless you are going to fill it with another content piece. Although that would be a bit overwhelming for the readers with 3 columns of content. I would stick with placing the blog roll (posts) in that right column. Too much empty space. Though, I do see this idea on other posts which is good. Your blue number 16 I feel is just too darn big. A "Leave a Reply" would be good at the bottom.......Scotty B ♫

Sounds good. Just don't get too hung up on the money part for now. It's good information to know so you can see where you're headed long-term. But for now just keep doing what you're doing and focus on quality content. You can have all the ads and links in the world on there, but without eyeballs to see it you still won't make a dime. The challenge is getting a steady stream of traffic... after that, monetizing is the easy part. :-)