No website ?.......Scotty B ♫

Sorry brain fade. Have added it

Hi C-Lab
My 2 cents advice.
Nice site your know your stuff
Now my recommendations
1. Create categories for different kinds of posts and put in the menu. eg guitar techniques, Strings models etc
2. Get an auto responder collect emails for lead to create a newsletter to offer your products
3. Would suggest a photo of you playing the guitar to create your brand image. Also include that in the post.
4. Are you selling this in your store or are you an affiliate for another store
5. Become an amazon affiliate and offer products from amazon also
6. You can offer private lessions, an ebook on guitar selection etc
Remember the end goal is to make money from your site also
Create your audience and with emails give them value and information it is all about the readers
Cheers
Jake

That is some truly excellent advice Jake!

Thank you for taking the time to really think that stuff through.

I'll definitely be taking steps to improve my site along the lines that you mention in your comment.

Hi Derrick,
Right away I like the 'Lifestyle-Magazine' theme you have. The scrolling line in the banner is clever. The filament in the lightbulb and the colored lips stand out to catch your eye. Nice 'Leave a Reply' at the the end for social engagement.
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It is an emotional topic that may appeal to the female audience especially but I feel everyone can relate. Reaching out to the homeless is a true noble act.
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You need a Home page tab at the top so that readers do not have to click the back arrow. You need 'right aligned' pictures throughout you content to keep readers interested. Some very emotionally grabbing ones like a shot of a sad homeless person or a crying one may help. I see you use the emotional lead with the homeless story to eventually get to the Wealthy Affiliate idea. Never thought of that. Could be an effective idea to make something of themselves. Your social icons should only be at the bottom for less distraction. Also there may be too many. Just the main ones like facebook, twitter, linkedin, and Google+ is sufficient unless this is your theme doing this then I would just leave it. Hope this helps..............Scotty B ♫

Hi Derrick,
I have to say, honestly, I haven't read such a moving article for a very long time (though I am pretty emotional by nature:) Every time I see a homeless person I always wonder what their story is. There are so many sad stories and personal tragedies behind those faces we pretend we don't see.
you have my respect for chatting to that poor guy. I never had the courage to do that. maybe because I don't drink :)
btw, love your writing style, too. Bookmarking your blog, will read more.

take care
Eva

Excellent content. My only problem was when I clicked on link and it said " Oh No ". After a bit I noticed the top bar with titles and went to them. They looked great and worked fine. I'm still pretty new at this and have a site I'm working on. Its an instruction process and I'm trying to make it work and not miss any steps. I still need to print and read it for proper sequence. Well, If you wouldn't mind you can let me know what you think I've done so far.
Steve

Sorry my site is : bestdiysolar.com

Hi Harmmah,
I saw your comment on my website. We both started the same month. I joined on Oct 19 this year and I'm learning a lot. Thank you for your comment, but I think we're not supposed to approve to post a comment when we're talking about the website itself. What I gathered here is we post comments about articles that members write.

Your observation was right about the "About Me" to be on top navigation only. Thank you and I took care of that right away.

Your site looks very professional to me. Did you purchase that them or is it one of the free ones? One thing you can do is perhaps add capture photos of your desktop when you do the steps to do something on their computer like checking their hard drive space. Lastly, your domain name comes with email accounts, so you can change your Gmail to something like myname@myhkvybo.com.

Feel free to ask for any help. Have a great day

Thank you very much for that brilliant idea. I am working on it.

Hi Orient,
I like your top scrolling banner with the fountain. It changes also from time to time. A good niche for people seeking backyard water and plant decorative ideas. Only thing is I would right align the pictures for ease of reading due to eyes moving left to right. Very good assortment of pictures. This keeps the reader interested and stay longer on your page.
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Only thing I see is there is no "HOME" tab to get back to your main page. This is important for a part of your internal links need to be organized for the search engines when they crawl your site. Also, a "HOME" page tab eliminates hitting the back arrow to go back. Some may not know to hit back arrow. Also, your main landing page does not have a right column for your recent posts and a comment section at the bottom. This may or may not be a problem depending on how you want it set up. I prefer to have these included. Hope this helps :)................Scotty B ♫

Hi Scotty, thank you so much for your opinions. I will consider and work on them.

Let me know if i can help you? I will feedback in 24 hours. Thanks!

I think one of the things that struck me right off the bat about your website was your color scheme. It just screams "garden." It has a light springy feel to it, and it's a bright color that doesn't become overbearing. There was no problems reading the words or getting headaches from flashy colors that make my eyes hurt. Very well done.

Hi Heitsty Tom, thank you very much for taking time checking my website. And i'm indeed very glad to hear that the color scheme on me web looks ok. I have been trying to make the color and layout of my web as simple as possible, to create a more smooth reading experience.

And feel free to let me know if there is anything i can help to return your favor. I will feedback in 24 hours. Thanks!

Hi Ralph,
Your site has a good amount of content for a start. Most of what I am hearing in your story sounds like High School Acceptance difficulties. Like not "fitting in". This is what usually happens when we are younger and we are more sensitive to it then. But, throughout life it can happen also but we are not as focused on it depending on our sensitivity and the people involved.
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I do like your pictures nice and big. I was taught to align them right in order of eyes moving left to right when reading. And let the words wrap around the pictures but I tend to like the way you have them nice and big.
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☼ I would break up your main landing page because it is so long. Put tabs titles at the top to the right of your home page tab to better organize. Start with a "Breakups" tab, "Healing" tab, "About Shyness" tab, "Exercise for Confidence" tab, " And a "Vitamins" tab. You could also do some Read Mores to shorten the articles and they can read more IF they like that paragraph. Then they either click it or move down the page to the next topic.
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I like your site. It Really is all about building your Self-Esteem and Confidence. It is a good focus. Very insightful words and helpful for people going through these troubles. You could be a psychologist ! Hope this helped..............Scotty B ♫

Hi Ralph,

Well done on a great start with your website.

There are a couple of ways you maybe able to improve the readability of your posts.

Only use relevant images, and also you don;'t need to link back to places such as pixabay when using their images. Every external link will get people clicking away.

The posts on your home page and category pages are set up to show the whole page change this to just an excerpt, that way people can more of your posts and then click on the one they may want to read further.

Maybe not put so many ad boxes up, in fact if your site is new I would get regular traffic before showing any ad boxes.

But this said a good solid start just some tweeking needed maybe ... hope this helps you :)

Martin

Thanks Martin! Yeah, I noticed the ads as well. I'm still quite new to google adsense. Plus, I am not sure how to do that with the front page and posts. Thanks for the feedback!

If you go to settings from your dashboard , then click on reading and choose summary that may help you with your posts.

Hi Ralph,

I went to your site. It has some great information but I see numerous posts on one page.
1. I suggest you break each subject up and make each one a post. This is actually a good thing because you have written enough content for 5-7 posts.

The pictures are good and relevant to the content.
2. I suggest you delete the by pixabay words under the pics. They are free domain photos so you don't really have to put that there.

You landing page photo is nice. I did have some trouble deciding what your page is about at first.
3. I suggest you write something on the landing page to tell people what your blog is about.

Overall you are off to a good start and I know with some tweaking you will do well.

If I can be of further assistance to you please let me know. You can also PM me if you would like with questions or if you need more feedback after you tweak some things.

Laura

Thanks for the feedback Laura! The front page is kind of messy. I am still new to this, so I need help. I just don't know how to organize the first page. May you assist me?

Also, thanks for the follow Laura

Thanks Scotty! I really appreciate your feedback! That's the one I am still working on, the landing page haha. Anyways, thanks for bringing it up to me.

Ralph,

Really enjoyed the article and left a comment as well. Very relatable to many people and this seems that you are writing from the heart.

The things I think could help with the website layout
- Making it easier to leave a comment, maybe after the post, I had to search for a minute to do so.
- The calendar might just need to be excluded. I feel like your writing about... time and we all need time, possibly the calendar can exude immediate results.

Anyway, I bookmarked your page and hope your best success!

Hello Derrick,
You know that was a story that really touched my heart. The way your sensitivity unleashed at that moment you felt like you understood what he must have felt. You never could have known that someone named Derrick was a trigger for someones unhappiness.

But, here's the thing, you were meant to meet that person if for no other reason but to feel what you did. Maybe these emotions have been building up for a long time. Then someone who is less fortunate than you, came to you and spilled his guts. You felt his hurt and you had compassion.
Do you ever remember feeling compassion in such a way that your reaction was uncontrollable?
Because you met this person you have decided to volunteer for the homeless.
Sounds like maybe someone there had his hand on your shoulder, yes.

Very nice personal story. I have one but you will have to wait for my book to be finished.
Thanks, your website is coming along nicely.
Cyn

Derrick,

I really connected with your story because I have been in that same place. You are a good writer for sure.

As for Feedback on your website.
-The design is excellent! I want my website to look this good.
- Photos are good, but one I saw at the top said Shutterstock, not sure if you wanted that, but maybe start taking your own pictures as well to increase the awareness of the experiences. Maybe some from your travels etc. (no people obviously)but the place could bring light to that story as well as you go through telling to grab a better image.!

-Highly organized to find your articles, also I d suggest you write on medium! its free I believe.
- Good luck

Sincerely
Wolf

I just read your latest post about tuning kits and how to go about getting them and I’m glad I took the time to read it. I’m no snowboarding expert in the slightest bit, I’ve actually never been, but for those thinking of snowboarding this is a very enlightening post. It’s always best to read reviews about products before you spend your money on them, I absolutely appreciate your honesty which I know will resonate to many people who have a snowboarding interest.

Thanks for the great read!

Great content about being all about music. If can, try make your website more colorful and more music oriented! The content is all there.

Another thing is your sub headers, try bold the text! Other than that, it looks good!

Hi Marcus, I have had a look through your website and can provide you the following feedback:
1. The header image of the piano keys is great and really fits in with the theme of your site.
2. On your Home page, you include the entire contents of each post which makes it a long scroll through the articles (and this will get even longer as you add new articles). I would recommend changing you settings to only use excerpts on the Home page.
3. Use Categories in your posts to differentiate different types of posts and then use these categories in your top menu.
4. Move your Privacy Policy to the footer bar.
5. Overall, a great start for your website.
Wishing you much success in your online endeavours, Gary

Thanks heaps Janelle!!
I wasn't sure if I was going in the right direction!!
Some great ideas there, i will definitely look into some sketches!!
Cheers!!!

I left a comment on your post.

Please see my site
https://iexercisejazzyworld.com/

Thanks
Jasmin

Hey Jasmin,

are you being inspired by God?
This is exactly what I need to know about.
PM me and I'll tell you more.

Thanks for your post, my comment is coming.

Veit

Hey Madyibi,

Great start, well done.

Site is clean, well laid out and easy to read and navigate.

You might want to create some more categories such as Laptops, Laptops Bags etc ... As your site grows you can then have more detailed categories in your main menu or sidebar, making it easy to find.

keep going :)

HI Madyibi,

1.) I had the same comments as mcb247 about the categories. You should add more categories.

2.) You should change the admin user to some sort of a name, either your own name or wildbreaktech to make it more personal.

3.) You should try and get comments on all of your posts.

Overall this is a great site.

Nathalie, Your website looks great, its clean, easy to read and navigate and plenty of white space well done...

The only thing I may look at changing is the main image as its a bit bland. This of course can be done at any time and of course your choice, just something that might catch the eye more.

Your website will evolve as you move through the course, in fact it will continue to change as you build your business, that's the beauty of building on Wordpress.

Well done great start ... I have followed you and if you need any assistance just shout.

Martin

Thanks a lot, Martin.

Yes! You are absolutely right about the main image. I admit that I was in a rush when I got it and have been busy with other things since then. Your comment makes it come up to the top of my to-do list. :-) Thank you!

And thank you for your offer to help.

Blessings to you and your family,

Nathalie

Hi Joel,

For someone who says he is demotivated this is really good.

This feels like a website about interior design. The look and feel are just right.

The logo and header image are clean, neat and unobtrusive. If I was looking for information about interior design and I came to this website I would think, "Yeah, I'm in the right place here."

This is a really good looking, professionally written post with relevancy and authenticity. As a customer, I would trust this post as an authority in the field. The writing is controlled, passionate and literate. The font style is clear and legible. The images convey the message expressed in the text and look good.

Just a small point, but I would capitalise the heading using camel hump capitalisation.

I hope this helps.

Warm regards,

Robert.

P.S. Here's mine:

http://andromedacricket.com/

I am interested in what you make of the theme, the layout, and the overall look of the website. Thanks

Hi Joel,

I love your website and found your personal story very inspiring.

The part about how you begged your parents to take you around to visit the big expensive houses for sale in your neighborhood immediately got me to like you as person. It even spurred me to leave you a comment on that page. I think there is power in talking about childhood experiences...

I also love the photos you use in your post. They look VERY professional and it definitely makes me believe in your hands-on experience and in your authority in the subject.

The header image and logo also gave me a very good and professional impression.

I see that your posts don't have comments... why don't you request one or two comments for each on the WA comment platform?

I hope this helps

All the best,

Nathalie

Hi Jojo87, Your website is awesome. I love the content. I've never considered a built in before, although, I've definitely seen them before.

I don't really have much to say. All I have is an opinion. I generally like the content and pictures to be smaller to that I can skim as much information as possible in a single shot. Even so, the website looks great.

Thanks for the feedback Nathalie. I appreciate it! And definitely going to take your advice RE requesting comments. Will hopefully help with engagement and look like people are actually reading my content. Thank you!

Thanks for the feedback! Will definitely consider making the text and images smaller. Totally agree about having more info in one shot and being more easily readable. Thanks :)

Hi Robert! Thanks for the detailed feedback regarding my website. Definitely found some more motivation having reached out to people here, just need to get myself posting on a more regular basis.

Clicking around on your website I love it. The first impression is great, I love the use of the image gallery with changing photographs and how neatly organised your headings are. Great use of images within your content which are all relevant to what you're talking about.

It's a very professionally laid out website and if I was looking for suggestions and tips about cricket I'd fully trust what you'd have to say based on how smart your site looks.

Thanks again :)

Hi Joe,

Your site is coming on really well I think. I did like that particular article as it is angle to look at the benefits of the game on health etc, nice angle to look at.

Have left you a comment there as well.

Good Luck and Keep up the Great work

Keith

homeofthebusybee.com

Thank you for that Keith, and thank you also for leaving a comment on my article.
I will be sure to take a look at your website and leave a comment too!

I gave you a comment :) If you want to return the favour, here is my link: https://thebookscatcher.com/7-best-web-sites-for-books-online/

Done!

Thank you :)

Hey Fellow Guitarist! I like the layout, it is easy to focus on the subject matter. I did spot one spelling mistake for granddaddy (grandaddy), but otherwise, it looks pretty good.

I think it was smart to save the big names for individual posts as this also gives the reader something to look forward to and a reason to come back to the site.

Great Job so far!

Thanks Renton! Keep on rocking in the free world!

Hi Christian,

I like your sense of humor in the post and the videos. I am not looking at buying a guitar myself but the videos you embedded in your post make me want to click on them and listen, just to relax and enjoy, which would make me stay longer on your page. I believe search engines like that, right?, when people stay longer on your page...

I also like the footer about the previous post and the next post. I shall look into this for my own website. :-) Thanks for the inspiration.

Why did you choose grey as a background color? Personally, I find it more difficult to read on anything else but white so I am always interested to hear why people choose other colors like black or grey... is this good for your niche?

I hope this is helpful.

If you'd like to leave some feedback in return that would be great:
nathalieu.com

Thanks a lot in advance.

All the best,

Nathalie

Hi Nathalie, thanks so much for the feedback!

After seeing your website, I think I might just have to move to white because it looks so darn clean and organized! That picture also kinda draws me in and makes me feel at home, which is perfect for your niche (I think)!

Constructively, I think it would be cool for you to add a side bar menu that had different categories that your posts were lumped under. I know you might now have that much content as of yet, but moving forward that would make it much easier to find what I'm looking for. I also think you could include more songs in your 80's vibration music post. So much amazing music from that decade, you could definitely hit a few more. Maybe even add a small comment or caption about each with a humorous angle.

Thanks again and good luck with everything!

-Christian

Hi,
When I go to your website, it asks me to login as an admin. I think you need to post the public url for your website.

best.

Let me check it out ,sorry about the inconvenience

Hello Christian, thank you for putting up your website for feedback so that we can all learn together. I am very new to building websites so i will be giving my feedback based on the little i have been able to learn myself.
I have been through your site and i really like the vintage look of the site,i think this is from the black and white picture of the musical instruments,love it.
The general lay out is simple and your content is easy to access.
I noticed a two, things that i wanted to bring to you attention,
1,i did not see your privacy page.
2,i also noticed the use of too many videos and media, i remember hearing some where that they can slow down your site but not too sure how but thought i should mention it so you can ask those with more knowledge to avoid it being a problem as your website grows.
Apart from these i enjoyed reading some of your content and they are really detailed ,i absolutely enjoyed the visit ,thank you.

Hi Kayin,
I just took a look at your website.

A couple of things for you to consider moving forward.
Your posts are showing as "uncategorized". Before you get too many more posts done, you might want to consider how to categorize them going forward.
Having your posts categorized will help people search for posts and help keep your site organized.
For example, an obvious category I think that you could use right now is "Acne".
As well, on the right menu, you might also consider putting in a category widget so that people can view the different topics you are addressing on your website.

Hope this helps. Keep up the good work. Looks like you are making some good progress.

Kayin, good site overall. Imagery is good, articles are easy to access, ditto for recent articles. Relevant menu pages, always a plus. Good sidebar displaying comments and thorough content.

https://getprofootballapparel.com/

Here's my budding site!

I like where you are going with the site.
I think that once you get more content on it, it will rock.
I can definitely see the potential for a great "go to" site for NFL apparel.
Nicely done and keep it up.

Thanks a bunch!

Hi Dana,
It looks like you are getting quite a few articles posted. Good work.

A couple of suggestions to help you along:
Your posts are showing as "uncategorized". Before you get too many more posts done, you might want to consider how to categorize them going forward. Having your posts categorized will help people search for posts and help keep your site organized.

I also noticed that many of your posts do not have comments yet. When you have a chance, take advantage of the Site Comments feature and also take advantage of the give and take thread Need website comments? the give and take comment thread Having comments on your posts will help with Google Indexing as you move forward.

All the best as you move forward.

Hi, Thank you for the suggestions.

I was wondering what the category was all about. I have just recently seen that when I switched my theme yesterday.( I have had so many issues with the switch, I want even get started.) To my knowledge I have not come across any thing about categories in my training so far. I will work on that this weekend.

Yes, I have actually just finished that part of my training and I have summited a couple of post for comments. I have to earn some more credits to summit a few more.

Thank you again for your suggestions.

Dana

Good start, Dana. I like the imagery more than anything else. It seems you're on the right track as of now with imagery more than anything else. Navigation appears easy and menu is relevant to the niche. Awesome niche, by the way, it's one of my favorites. So far, great site. As for the disappearance of link text, I think it's theme-related. I had the same issue with my own site and changed the entire theme so the link text would show.

I had a look and am very impressed, I like the captivating way you write! Its not easy to captivate people instantly and you managed to do it. A very big well done!

You have a great service here, it looks like you could use more pictures though. I like how you started out. Very organized and professional.
Nurse Becca

Looks like your page is doown . This site can’t be reached The webpage at http://the-write-guy.com/freyja might be temporarily down or it may have moved permanently to a new web address.

Hi Tiffany,

I really like your site! I like all of the photos you chose, they are relevant and everything looks clean and professional. It was funny seeing one of the photos on your site, because it's also on mine. Good job so far.

TaN

P.S. I am also continuing to build my website. Please take a look at it and let me know what you think. Also, please leave a comment on the site. https://procrastinationaffiliate.com

Hi Alisha, nice niche you've got here. My house recently got a new dog so I can relate to the topic in general too.

Some things I've noticed:

-I think the header would look better with less white space. Either by adding pictures to it (maybe one on each side of the title), or simply decreasing the height of that area so the white space is compressed. (especially since the title takes up 33% or less of the overall height of that white area)

-Maybe have a bit more spacing between the blue background on the sides of the page and the actual text of the post. Right now the text is bumping right up against the color; a little extra spacing there could help with how nice it is to read the post.

The content looks good overall - I like the ratio of providing your own personalized advice versus the product.

Ben

Thanks Ben. Much appreciated! I have gotten comments back about the blue being too wide, I'm honestly not sure how to fix that if you have any tips? I absolutely agree it would be more reader friendly. I also do not know how to add images or fix the white space in my theme. I appreciate you taking the time to checkout my content as well. Will return the favor :)

Alisha

I think both the blue and the header would both depend on the theme. I have the option to make pages and posts "full width", and with or without a sidebar. In the Wordpress Dashboard I can also go to Appearance>Customize to make various changes to the site's appearance (including the theme header's height). My theme is Vantage and I'm not sure how the settings work with other themes.

The header of your theme should be customizable. You may have to play around with the settings - Appearance>Customize was how I edited mine.

Images in the header might be trickier - it might be all or nothing. The theme settings will be key, maybe you could do one solid picture as a background or just one solid color - but there could also be more customization options. Appearance>Theme Settings may also be of use.

Ben

Hi Alisha,
I left a comment on your site. I like the colors and especially the doggie line up. :)

I also am working on a site. Will you please take a look, let me know what you think and if you think the site is useful leave a comment?

Thanks.

By the way, here is the link: https://procrastinationaffiliate.com

Thank you! I appreciate that! I will for sure check yours out :)

I will check it out and play around thank you! much appreciated.

Hey!
I really like your site, I believe it has great growth and potential. The only issues in on your homepage, none of the pictures were showing up, just boxes with question marks in them.

Very good site. I like the content and the overall niche. Navigation is easy which will not only drive but will also keep traffic and will grow your site in time. Excellent imagery in the articles as well.

If I have one complaint, it's the fact that the sub-title in your website's header on the first page is hard to read, but that's about it.

Here's my new site which is one month old. Feel free to tell me what you think!

https://getprofootballapparel.com/

nice website I personally think you layout and everything looks good to me

Hi Kirsten,
I love your site especially getting started page. I know exactly where to go and click. Good navigation menu. All the best with your site.

Hi!, love your site, very easy to go through. I would probably add categories instead of having 'uncategorized' above every post. Other than that it looks clean and very appropriate to the topic you are discussing.
https://objectsandmore.com/

Hey Kirsten,
left a comment on your site. Very informative site on Ayurveda,

Would you like to give a comment on my site: https:advantageaffiliates.com.

Regards,

Hi Keith,just had a quick look at your site and came up with the following:
1.Great simple layout
2. Good easy to read conversational writing style
3.Great images used here
4. Some good technical stuff in here e.g. bee house dimensions and explanations on bee behavior
This is my favorite part.I love honey and love eating the stuff daily and I am convinced that its kept alot of illness away for me.I have had half a mind to start keeping bees but I've always been a bit scared about getting bitten or them getting out and attacking the neighbourhood lol.The other reason why i have thought about it is the recent media stuff on honey being mixed with other stuff and then sold as pure honey.A site like yours is good in that by educating folks it can probably take the fear element out of it and help folks to just get on with it.
I have copied and pasted this comment onto one of your blogs and save your page to my favorites.
Excellent work here Keith,please do keep it up :))
Billy.

Nice work!

Wow thanks for that fantastic review Billy,

As I mentioned in my earlier post, it is aimed at people who may be interested in the hobby but don't want to be too overwhealmed with the information right from the start. So I was very happy to hear that you think by breaking it down into simple terms, it might take away some of the fear of doing it.

As for keeping bees yourself, there really is no need to worry overly about being stung or the attacking the neighbours, they really do not just randomly attack unlike wasps for example, as long as you a gentle with them and talk to them they are happy, don't open the hive unless there is a reason to and they will pretty much take care of themselves, I currently have 4 hives and during the height of the summer spend about 2 hours a week taking care of them. With regards to the Honey, I suspect it is something that has happened for many years, the only way to ensure you are getting the pure genuine honey is to find a local keeper to you and buy direct from them. All my honey goes to people within about 5 miles of where it comes from.

Once again thanks for your kind words. And good luck in your endeavours.

Keith

Thanks Tj11, a long long way I am aiming to add at least 2 posts a week and develop the information in more depth in the future.

Good luck to you with your business.

Hi, Keith, so far, I like what I'm seeing. Good theme, good imagery, excellent niche and each article is related to this niche. This is putting you on the right track for something big in the long run.

Here's a link to my site you can provide some feedback on if you'd like. It's still new, like yours, only about a month old, and about half the content that I want is on it, but it has some content already.

https://getprofootballapparel.com/

Great job really easy on the eye website. Love it how on your homepage there is a lot of information. You can see exactly wht your site is about from the first page. Awseom job

OMG Thank you for those kind words Sheila, That is exactly what I was hoping for when I decided on my niche, overtime I will be going into much more detail about the actual keeping of bees. Of course the bees are the ultimate decision makers, they decide what they want to do (Because they don't read the books!) and hopefully I can show people how to react to any situation.

Thank you once again, and good luck in all your current and future endeavours

Keith

Very nice site, the layout is clean and simple and easy to navigate. It's easy to see what the niche is and the articles are clear and easy to read, with good text spacing. Your font is a nice size too which makes it easy on the eye (small fonts are a pet hate of mine!).
Very nice pictures throughout the site too, I think you are doing really well so far and I can't find anything negative to say.

Helen
https://follow-your-dreams.com.au/

Thank you for your kind words Helen, that is really what I was aiming for, something that is clear and easy on the eye. Small fonts are a pet hate of mine as well, although in my case it is an age thing! hahaha.

Love your site, it is very intuitive to find the information to find the information and written in a nice relaxed easily understood style.

I have a lot to learn, but thanks to people such as yourself I know I will get there with all the help available here.

Thanks again
Keith

Thanks for the kind comments Todd. Much appreciated.

Have just been to your site...wow you have been very busy in that month!!

I found it easy on the eye and very informative (being a brit I am afraid my knowledge of American Football is sadly lacking).

I did notice that you mention prices on some of the store pages I checked out, do you think that this is a good idea, my reasoning being that if the price changes you then have to go back to your post and change it?

Apart from that you have done brilliantly in the short time you have been here.

Good luck and keep on trucking

Keith

I love the layout...what theme is that? wonder if I could incorporate it into my site without messing everything up!
I did notice that in your affilate disclosure you are missing an s in commissions. I look forward to following you. My son does this also as a hobby. He has trouble keeping his...but oh I love the honey when he has it! You will do well with this...super great in my opinion.

Thanks for you kind words, The theme I am using is Poseidon, I like it because it is so clean and easy on the eye I think. Nice to hear your son keeps bees, unfortunately they do not always do what we want or expect them to do and things can change very quickly...tell him to stick at it...it is a fantastic hobby, I find it so relaxing, although I am sure that some people would think handling 40,000 bees in a hive is far from relaxing hahahaha. Enjoy the honey when you get it, you know the provenance of it and know it is pure and unadulterated.

Thanks again for the kind words
Keith

Hi Keith, Nov 8th, 2018
Very Good Start. I think your explanation of the actual building of the beehive is good. I like how you go into detail like how they go into black and white vision when flying to conserve energy. Nice touch. YOu seem to convey a certain intelligence that bees DO possess ! Probably mainly for survival.→ Only thing I would do is position the pictures to the right of the text. Eyes tend to move left to right when reading ending up at the picture. But I do like how the responsiveness of the text wraps around the pictures. That's Your call.
____________________________________________________ I am a vegan and although from pollen in a flower; Honey is something they say stay away from because it has been in the live belly of a living organism. I lean toward maple Syrup from a tree myself but I feel Honey originates from a flower SO I may try Both:)...............Scotty B ♫

Hi Keith,

Nice blog. I love it. While reading your blog, I can get the feel that you are really knowledgeable about the topic.

The layout is easy to navigate, font size is right and great content.

My suggestion is, you add your profile photos and your photos while enjoying your hobby. This will give great impact to your blog.

Have fun, enjoy your interesting hobby and all the best with your blog.

Azaliha

thank you and thanks for the suggestion. That is on my to do list...I'd like to have like a family album page I just haven't yet figured out how to do that yet! It's in the plans though.

Hi Scotty,

Thanks for your nice comments. I am pleased that hopefully the content I will be publishing will convey that feeling of knowledge to build the trust required for a successful website.

I have been thinking that when I get more used to Wordpress that I might have some kind of rolling banner or something on each page to display a random fact about bees, and there are many strange facts! but that is something for the future, until then I will probably put them all together of a separate page.

Regarding the Pictures, your suggestion is something that crossed my mind but I think for the moment I will run with the way they, maybe run a couple of pages with them all to the right alongside the existing ones and see if that affects the page visits.

I understand and respect your reasons for staying away from honey, but have to say that is Veganism is something that I personally have no experience of other than a couple of friends that are vegan, I guess on my part it probably has a lot to do with growing up on a farm.

Once again, Thanks for the comments, And I wish all the best for the future.

Keith

Thank you for your comments,

I fully take and agree to your comment about adding photos of myself enjoying the hobby, unfortunately there are not very many of my friends me at the apiary! I can see bribes being exchanged to help!! I am glad that my knowledge on the subject is coming across as I know how important trust is to get a good solid following, I hope it isn't a little over simplistic? But as I go further into the hobby it will become much more in depth and technical.

Once again, Thank you so and good luck in the future.

Keith

Hi, Holly, first off I want to state you have an excellent site with easy navigation, which will garner you a lot of traffic in the long run. I also like the slides under the site header that gives the reader a few article choices too, as well as the product under these articles. The imagery is fantastic.

One thing I would change though is the header imagery, if you want to use the tan color as your writing. I didn't get enough contrast there but that's the only gripe I've had.

Overall, good site, easy navigation, and lots of diverse avenues.

Here's a post on my site that might need some feedback. Feel free to give me your honest feedback on this post! Much appreciated!

https://getprofootballapparel.com/ending-the-debate-whos-the-best-nfl-team-of-all-time/

Todd, what great feedback! Thank you so much for taking the time to have a look and give me your honest opinions. I agree about the header, trying to figure out the best display options there at the moment.

I'm going to have a look at your site right now.

I just checked out your site. Todd, you're doing a great job! Everything you could possibly need is right at your fingertips and easy to find.

You're a talented writer with clarity in what you describe. How you link to products available should definitely bring you more conversions to paying customers. Not to mention, you're offering a lot of valuable information in each post you've made. I can tell you've put in a lot of time and work.

I enjoyed reading on your webpage very much and have left a comment on the page you linked to :)

Easy navigation, which is always a plus. Exceptional imagery, too, and easy access to the articles. Very well written, too. I'd say you're on the right track to succeeding in the yoga niche. Here's a look at my site that I recently changed the theme on that's in definite need of some feedback.

https://getprofootballapparel.com/

Hey Todd,

Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it :)
I like the overall look of it, suits the theme of your website!

Just a quick thing on the different football teams at the top of the page, it can look a bit messy. Since you already have the same at the left sidebar, perhaps you can cancel out the one at the top?

& maybe insert a featured image on the post, so it will come out more brightly on the homepage.

Just my two cents! :D

thanks!

It is a really nice theme for what you are discussing. However, it think the graphics are over powering the text. Maybe you could make them smaller or remove some of them. People will learn more from reading than viewing a stationary picture.

Thank you for your response. Yes I think I agree with you - the images need to be smaller. I originally wrote this post in Site Content and had the text to the left of each image. but when publishing it to WA they became centred and I think bigger.

Will try to sort this out and thank you for your comments
Paula

When I transfer content from WA to my site I also go back and re-edit it. Even text at times will get typo's and missing sentences during the transfer. I am not sure how or why that happens but it has for almost every transfer that i've made.

Wow, you are an amazingly talented writer. I see bright things ahead for you. But, guess I don't understand how the story writing ties into affiliate marketing. I can clearly see the ads on the pages but they just don't seem to tie together.

Enxhi, you have a LOT of material there, I'm thinking you have probably 4 posts worth of info. So first you might want to break it down into four different webpages. Also you advertise stating it's for free, but everything you offer costs money. The people going to the site are looking for something for free. I had the same issue with WA, I was advertising a free trial to all the countries that aren't allowed to get a free trial. Heck, my traffic thru WA was GREAT, except it was people who couldn't sign up for free! Zilch on the referrals! Good luck with your site!
Here's my site, a comment would be great!
https://baby-boomer.net/create-business-website-free

Steve

Excellent article. I left a comment and I'm sharing this one with my social media friends. It really hit home. Here's one of my articles on my newer sites that's sort of related to your niche. Feel free to check out and comment.

https://traindailywithtodd.siterubix.com/the-best-way-to-lose-belly-fat-and-keep-it-off/

As for the site itself, I love the layout, spacing, imagery, and navigation. There's a lot of good with this site and it looks as if you have an awesome niche as well, one that's in high demand. Keep it up!

Hi Nic, I love the layout and the selection of spacing/images/fonts. congrats on that. I can't comment on the copy (wording) as much because i'm completely not accustomed with this market.
You are doing good bud

I left a comment too but I can't see it now.

Just left a comment

lovebirdladyme.com

Just commented on yours. Would be great if you can return the favor on my post: https://newvegan.org/how-to-transition-to-a-vegan-diet

Thanks

Commented!

Hi Nic,
I have to say doing feed back here at WA Iam so impressed at the great ideas everyone comes up with. Your is unique and one of a kind. I left you a feedback comment on your site..
Very well done. Thanks very much for letting me give feedback.
I enjoyed to links to the videos, also.

My website and article is: https://cbnewsbodycameras.com/https://willdashcamseverruletheworld

Liked your site very much. Good content, well-written, good use of images. Keep going and best wishes

Hi Todd,
First thing I see is the Tab Titles at the top. I would Trim the wording to "Pro Football Apparel" and "Pro Football Store." Even to the point of just 'Apparel' and just 'Store' possibly depending on the growth of the tabs. This way there is more room for other Tab Titles up there. I like the Football Helmet Pictures. I also like your Breaking News Scroller. Nice touch.........Scotty B ♫

Hey Todd.
Your site looks awesome. I think you are doing a pretty good job. I did notice the name you used for your about me page is pretty long. It's taking almost the entire space of your head tab. You should try making it short.
I also noticed that for your get pro football apparel store you don't have contents on any of the items listed.
When I clicked them I felt there might be some contents written under each of them but there wasn't.
These are my opinions but maybe you might like to make a little bit of adjustments. But great job on your site.
Do check out mine and give me your feedback on my content.
https://realbackpacks.com/backpack-safety-for-kids-help-kids-stay-healthy/

Hi Maureen
I think your site is wonderful, it is laid out nicely, i love the post on pans and that you offer direct links to your top 3 sets... I am well impressed, i have just done my first few posts on mine.
www.yourlifewithdiabetes.com , i still need to do some research on how to better design my home page. Regards
Garry

Hi Laz !
Very good use of pictures. I like the (for the most part) one column set-up with the side widget that holds your Social Media buttons, Recent Posts, Recent Comments, and Archives.
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I would reduce the picture size to about a third and put more content. Main problem is your home Tab. If you click on any of your tabs at the top and then try to click on your home tab it takes you back to the Sneaker Releases Page ? Gotta fix that. Also, I usually put my Privacy Policy as a Sub-Item underneath the About Me tab. Otherwise→ Nicely done..........Scotty B ♫

Hi Jonathan,
You're website is great!! Here's all the stuff I really like:
1. The visuals
2. The intro is engaging
3. It is very well written on a complex topic.
4. The quotes you cite.
5. The idea that Winners are actually part of the minority
6. The idea of forgiveness of yourself and move on
I could go on and on. It's that good. It's actually hard to come up with ideas to improve but here is something I hope is helpful:
1. Under the "This is Not Easy" section, it looks like there may be two typos (End of 1st paragraph it says, "caThis is not easy," and at the end of the 4th paragraph there is a free floating letter "A."
2. The only other thing I can think of is that since this is a complex, somewhat abstract topic, do you have any personal examples or examples from other people that demonstrate some of your points? For example, a short story of someone who took responsibility and how it changed life for them.
Hope that helps.
Jen

Wow, how awesome that you took the time to make me such a feedback. I really appreciate that.

I will look into the typos immediately, thanks for mentioning. And about your second point, I tried to do that with the guy I met who walked from Syria to the Netherlands and it was my intention to get back at that in the closing paragraph but I think I didn't.

I will keep it in mind and re read my own article, thanks a lot!

Let me know how I can return the favor, I'll be glad to help you out as well.

I’m just starting out so any feedback would be really helpful! Thank you. Here’s my website: overthehillrunning.com

Yeah, I can see how you did that with the guy from Syria. That’s a great example. Really engaging to the reader.

Hi! On the article that you provided, here is what I like:
- good design
- good content
- good pics

Here is what I don't like:
- not having headlines
- paragraphs too long

I would add some headlines, just to make it more interesting and the paragraphs need to be somehow separated, because it makes it hard to read.

Here is my website:
wetravelaccessories.com

I agree with the above in that you should break up the posts with smaller paragraphs and more sub-headings for sure.

Another thing i'd mention is the URL slugs to your individual posts are really long.

You should cut down just the slugs themselves to only the keyword perhaps. For example, that post could just be http://techrolla.com/video-game-programming-courses

You can and should still have the extra bit on the actual page but the url looks a lot better shortened!

Hey Stefania how's it going,sorry I couldn't respond to you sooner I haven't been able to get to my computer in a few days I just got back on it today. I really appreciate the feedback it was very helpful. I made some adjustments to my content based on what you mentioned and I must say I like the adjusted format of the article better. In Fact; I'm going to make those same adjustments for another post I have as I think it will benefit from those changes so thank you.

I also took some time out to check your site and I really like it the design, the categories, the pictures, and the product promotions. I also find your content pretty informative and timely. The only thing I have to say about the site and this is minor is to try and correct a few of the typos on your Osprey Bag article it will help the paragraphs to flow a bit more smoothly. Other then that I have nothing else to say other then keep up the excellent work and again thank you for the honest feedback.

Paula,
I think so far you are doing a great job - you have it laid out well and instructions with photos make things clear for crafters - the last post on embellishments could possibly use a couple of more images on how you took apart the necklace if you did and how you attached it to the other piece of material to sew on.
More content keep it coming other than this I think you are working into a great website :)
Susan

Thank you Susan. Im still working on the last post. Need to stitch and take photos, then edit through canva, etc etc. time consuming but now Im back Im going to get into it.
Thanks for your feedback = Super appreciate it. Can tick that one off now and move on.

It does not look Mickey at all, and I do like Mickey but I can see you are more serious than a cartoon. The layout is great! I absolutely love the spacing of your pictures, that is challenging to me. It looks as though you've learned how to successfully barter your brand. I think that is a catchy phrase. This was informative even for someone who is not well versed in this particular subject. The font is easy for my poor old eyes. Very nice work here. I will revisit to see what is added. I think I might know someone through linked in with more knowledge of the subject, so I'll also ask him.
I hope my notes find you well.
Thank you & kind regards,
Nurse Becca

I think it looks amazing and very professional. Very nice and straightforward.
Very nicely done

I had a happy tear, so grateful:') how sweet of you and thank you kindly!
Nurse Becca

Hi Cathy,

Great review and I left a comment.If you feel like looking at mine here is the link.http://dontsweatthebills.com/how-to-make-a-blog-to-make-money-today

Have a wonderful day
Phyllis