The site comments section is regularly out of sites needing comments but if you check back shortly there is usually a new request. Once you have left 2 comments on other sites you can start to request comments on your own.

Thank you Dave. Maybe i was always checking back when there were no site available. thanks again

Hey Dwight - here are my comments on your website
1. Color scheme: Could you adapt your color scheme to fit your content? It seems orange is a bit of a disconnect to my mind.
2. About page - A pic of yourself, or your favorite wine or your favorite course/green wouldn't go amiss here - it would add a bit of color.
3. The Learn To Play Golf post - it's packed with information but... could you just concentrate on the putting aspect for 1 post then the chipping, then the wedge - you've kinda used up 3 possible post titles under 1 post.
4. Your golf videos are packed full of videos and images - why not do the same for your wine posts? Maps of wine regions to show where your mentioned wines originate/come from, say - even a breakdown of a wine region into estates - Bordeaux down to St Emilion level.

Otherwise your content is solid and well laid out - no typos or grammar concerns that I could see.

All in all a good job - thanks for your hard work

Thank you so much. Very good suggestions.

Have been looking for and changing themes. Have not customized this one yet.

I owe you a In N' Out Burger!!

First of all my congrats for the site theme and organization, it's very professional and high end looking. The topic of goal setting resonates with me deeply as I'm working towards the same objective since long time without still having achieved it. I left you a comment, if you wish to visit my site and let me have your comments you can see https://familysecurityshield.com/

Hi Megan
Are you looking for feedback on the whole of the site, on the posts and pages in general or a specific post?

The site topic is amazing and touches me personally as dog owner since long time. I can also say that it was about time someone treated the theme of going natural with our four legs family members. the theme is amazing, and I won't change anything except the background color, which I suggest always to be white. Minimalism is the new standard in the sites world and white suits this best. I left you a comment on your site. If you wish to review mine and comment is https://familysecurityshield.com/

Thank you! I go back and forth with changing my background. I thought about leaving it white.. thank you for that advice.

Also, same to you on the theme, it seems to fit your site perfectly.

My only advice to you, is to maybe break up your post with some "white space"... it was advice given to me and it really did help make parts of my post stand out more.

You are a very good writer and people will enjoy reading your post, just make it as simple as possible. :)

Good luck to you,
Megan

Honestly, I will take feedback on anything within my website. But yes, it would be nice to know if I am presenting the products in a good manner or not, in the "Shop Brands" tab.
Thank you for asking!

Hello, I just left you a comment :-)
If you have time, I would love a comment on one of my articles :-)

https://myvegansausages.com/

Thank you! I will check it out as soon as I log on tonight.
Best wishes,
Megan

Hi Missmaygen,
Just left you some comments on your website.
Would love to hear from you on my latest post too!
https://healthylifestylehappyliving.com/top-10-healthy-lifestyle-tips-tip-no-4-of-10/
Cheers!
Sammie

I'm vegan since 2015 and I couldn't avoid to have a look at your side. Needless to say that I support and like everything you wrote. Fresh style and neat and clen theme. I like it very much. I just left a comment too. If you'd like to visit my site and give me your opinion it's https://familysecurityshield.com/

Hi Gianlum1976, I visited your site and you have a wealth of useful knowledge! A great website came as a result of a hard time for your family, but you are very gracious to pass your information along for others. I can tell you really care about others and want to help! We all are better for it. Thank you!
Kareb
Www.orangehealing.com

Hi - you don't have an affiliate disclosure, which is mandatory.

Not sure what you mean?

Hi - by law, you have to let potential customers know that if they click on an affiliate link, that you will earn a commission if they buy something.

You can find examples on the internet which you can use, but as you are an affiliate with Amazon, you also need to add this exact phrase:

"As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases".

Hi Diane,
You you need it on every post or can you do it on the top menu as a post or page? Thanks.

Hi - you can add it as a page to your top menu.

Thanks for the advice!

Diane,

You are a wealth of knowledge. Thank you.
I'm not there yet but good to know.

Gale

Thank you! I was unaware of this, as well. I posted it in my "About" page.
I have seen you post this on numerous feedback posts, and now that I am an Amazon Associate... I am grateful for you.
Best wishes,
Megan

Oh ok, thank you so much for letting me know. I really appreciate it.
Kind regards
Daisy

Hi Great a start and a good read - As you progress in the training you will learn to add photos which lift a post - i word recommend these . I would also recommend following the training but not being too hung up on missing feedback etc - I followed a rule to move forwards when i could to ensure i made the maximum benefit of my time and requested feedback when i had enough points to do so .

progression is key in my book - missing feedback initially will not have any detrimental effect on your site as long as you get it when you are able.

Excellent work your have an up and running site that can only grow as you learn more here at WA.

Much success

This is so helpful and encouraging. Yes, I had felt an absence because of not having the images yet and can't wait to put some. And I think I can now move at a good clip, now that I will read some of the emails, all of which I appreciate, but some were intimidating since I was nowhere near there yet. What I'm going to do about that is finish the training, and there are bound to be tons of more emails, and I will then read all of them. Right now, if I read the ones too far advanced, it slows me up, but I felt guilty at first. But I'll get to the point where I'll be able to learn something from all of them. Thanks again, this was a real boost.

Hi Patrick,
I just looked at your site. It's nice and clean and uncluttered which I believe is a plus. Also the theme is good. I do have a slight issue with your writing style, and I say this as an Englishman who has done lots of writing over the years. My motto is generally 'shorter is better'. By that I mean your sentence lengths. Also it would make easier reading if you got to the point within your sentences a little quicker, in my opinion. Judging by your multiple interests within the Arts, you may need multiple websites!

I think I will have to have several websites. Thanks for your response. Long sentences tend to come easily to me when I'm just being expressive in books or on blogs (the more personal kind), but I agree it needs to sound a bit more businesslike, which shorter sentence. I don't quite know how I would 'get to the point' quicker, because the whole post is about the same point; I don't have different points to make for each sentence, or even paragraph really, but I might see what you mean when I try to rewrite it. The 'making shorter' might take care of that too. That particular post-subject I tend to get a bit gushy about because it's literally one of my favourite things--which is why I knew I could get the full meaning of the content fulfilled, even though I need to work on a more succinct style. In the 'less is more' mode.

Yes it's a delicate balance between authentically sharing your passion and getting to the point.
Good Luck!

Great niche choice. Almost everyone loves dogs and they will love your photos. Good grammar, punctuation and content. No shortcomings i could see. Very well done.

Thank you! I am glad you like it! It makes me feel better to hear that.
Best wishes to you!
Megan

left a comment on your most recent post. Would love if you could return the favor: https://besttravelclothes.com/shoppers-remorse-5-big-travel-purchases-to-av

Thanks!!
I left a comment as well!
Best wishes! Good niche idea!

Great site! It was very well laid out and eye catching. I left a comment for you.

Thank you!
I will repay the favor!
Best Wishes,
Megan

Hey Don
The major gap I can see is that you need an affiliate disclaimer on your website - you can either put it into your widgets so it shows up on every page or you can put it at the bottom of every post that contains a link.
If you're an Amazon affiliate then you'll need their own disclaimer on your site - it's mandatory. Either check the Amazon Associates website for it or do a search for it.
Also, you've written around 500 words and you have 4 links - the word on the street is that you should have 1 link per 500 words (approx) otherwise your post looks a bit spammy. For your links you'd be looking at writing around 2000 words.
Perhaps you could add 2-3 more products such as Malwarebytes and/or Avast. You could even add McAfee and tell people why you don't like it.
Hope that helps

Thanks so much. Yes, that actual post is a work in progress. I like the idea on adding Mcafee and saying I don't like it. That adds additional words. So for links, I need to decrease my links it sounds like. Like removing one of the Amazon links for Bitdefender. I need to add ESET on there, my goal is to have 10ish?

I've also been watching training and some people seem to like making reviews on separate pages... I'm mostly just working to figure this out :) The difficult part is there is no easy button, or template that works every time.

Actually Don, doing a separate review for 1 product on its own age isn't a bad idea. You could leave your blog posts for more general info on cybersecurity and then, when some new virus comes out you could make a post about and point your readers to the product page that would best deal with that threat.

Sorry - 'page' not 'age' - if you do go down the 1 page per review path your reviews are going to have to be really in-depth, real nitty-gritty stuff

Thanks! I'll think on that too. I also like some of the other sites I've seen that are giving a rating 1-10 score on products. I think that might be something I need to hit on too. As always, it looks to be a work in progress.

Any suggestions on how to get Indexed by google? It's been about 4-5 days and nada... I could just be impatient, as always. I assume there has to be a way to get google to notice you faster.

Are you following the Online Entrepreneur Certification? If so, it would appear that there is training in phase 5 for doing exactly that - making Google notice us.

Haven't gotten there yet! I'm on Phase 3 right now.

that's my level too

Hi Keryn

Your website is very informative!

hello Keryn,your presentation is great and the content.you are doing a great job and am wishing you all the best.

Hi - let's talk about Amazon! You are breaking several of their rules which will get you banned from their program.

Your affiliate disclosure needs to have this exact phrase:

"As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases".

You cannot add the price of a product to your reviews.

You can only use the one image they supply you with. You can't pick extra ones from the selection on the left of the product on the Amazon page.

Wow. Very informative and very well put together. I read it and learned a few things. Wishing you all the best!

You've certainly been busy in two weeks! A lot of pages.

I notice that some of the colour schemes clash like the background colour and the text below a post ( you know where it shows to go to the last or next article), which may be worth changing.

The articles themselves are very well researched with tonnes of information which is great.

When you click on each of your page headings it goes to a page showing 'Nothing Found'. It'll be worth directing the link to a page showing all the articles within the topic so that it looks tidy.

I think your quote to the side "Come as a stranger, leave as a friend" is fantastic and a good kind of ethos to have for wheny ou write your articles.

Hope this feedback helps.
Dex

I like the images you added to your site and its a simple read easy to understand.

Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate using Site Manager.

As English isn't your first language, try and make use of the spell checker. There are lots of mistakes, most notably in your tagline where you have spelt kitchen incorrectly.

Moving forward, you should be writing posts, not pages.

Thanks so much, i tryed to do it easy to understand =)

I know that ther is mictakes, i cant write like master bicouse
i have writing disorder. and it doesn't pour my life if `. something is missing.. thanks anyway...

It's simple...anything related to cooking or baking! Even your recipe likes and dislikes.

Hi - if you are writing your posts using Site Content, there is a spell checker in there which you can use. It will help you get better with the English language.

Okay, thanks alot =)

Hi!
You guys are off to a great business!

I feel Jacky's "about me" page explains the purpose of your business nicely; a worthy cause to help Hmong tribal members make a living.

I might suggest a different theme--something really eye-catching. You might include pictures of Thailand, people creating the bags and accessories, etc.

Keep going! I look forward to following your progress!
Tamara

Hey Marc,

Really beautiful site and you really have some of the great collection of handmade purses and bags.
In a small period of time, you really created a wonderful website, I think if you add a logo to your site, it creates a brand.
I know you have "My chick ethnic" on all your products, and a great logo itself. You should add it to your header area as a logo. It will give your site branding.
Also, it is recommended to have a white background for website, but since your website is about ethnic products, I think you have selected it on purpose.
A really nice website.

Here is my latest post, would appreciate if you comment on my blog post.
https://advantageaffiliates.com/digital-income-system-review

Regards
jivita

Hi Jivita, thanks for your time and feedback, I really appreciate it. the issue I am having with the banner in the header is that it makes the text unreadable in my header and I was so far unable to change the text color. I think the issue is with the template I chose that doesn't give that option in the free version (?)
Big thank you for your review!
Kind regards,
Marc

Hi Tamara, thanks for your time and nice words as feedback.
we are working on the pictures of Thailand and other pictures of creating the bags.
I am happy for the positive and constructive comments !
Well received!
Thanks again and have a wonderful day
Marc and Jacky

Hi Jivita,

Good article ! it warns people for the potential spending of a lot of money if not well informed. It is well structured and has all the "dots on the i's" Also your call to action at the end is good.

The Captcha for leaving a comment is a bit "over the top" and I miss the "why" do you want to have that there.
Personally, the mandatory requirement to provide an email address, to be able to leave a comment, should be optional versus mandatory, it would have stopped me of leaving a comment if I didn't land on your article from WA.

I hope this helps

Hi Tamara, thank you for the feedback and suggestion for a different theme. Feel free to drop me a line what theme that could be ?
Thank you!
Marc

Hi, I receive the following when clicking on your link
Unable to connect, maybe you want to check and I'll try again later.

Hi - your article on food is 53% copied and pasted from various websites, mainly from prevention.com, and the one on pampering is 49% copied from kipkis.com. You can't do this. Everything has to be original and in your own words. I haven't checked your other articles, but if they are also copied, they need to be rewritten too.

Ok

Hi, I'm from a bycicle riding country (Belgium), we use the bike for nearly everything ;-), so I enjoyed checking out the products you recommend on your page. Very good products by the way. Right now I live in Mexico, where in some places riding a bike is dangerous (although it is getting better where I live). So, I hope to start riding a bycicle again some time soon :-) Your site certainly made me consider it ;-)
Your article was very well organized, as were the products. Very nice site, good work!

Hi Abigail,
I think your site is such a cool concept. The website looks good.
I read your post and I really like it. If I could say one thing, maybe if you could add a few more images throughout, always helps in breaking up the content.
Overall, I did like it.
Good job.

Hello Abigail,

I really liked the appearance of your website. It is pleasing to the eye. The colors are soft and the images are cool.

You almost make me want to go out and get some chickens. And I live in an apartment complex. LOL

Your content was very good, the flow was good also. I did find a few typographical errors so I want to point them out to you.

1. Where to get baby chicks
The second sentence does not make sense to me, but it could be me. "Feathered Friends is just one in hundreds of different places.
2. Caring for your chicks
Last paragraph first sentence I think you need to delete some spaces to put the all together.
3. Raising Chicken's - FAQ
#5 Says Should I was the eggs my hens lay? Sentence doesn't make sense.
#10 Sentence 3 It then starts it on its way down the oviduct. Not sure, but maybe it should say...It then starts on it's way down the oviduct. I'm not sure, it may be exactly as you want it.
4. Back Story
First paragraph, second line towards the end of the sentence until I figured out what I like (probably should be liked?) and wanted to raise.

If there are any grammatical errors or sentence structure errors, I can't help you with that, but other than that you have a really cool website.

Enjoyed reading the post. Interesting enough to hold my attention and at times that can be pretty hard to do.

Keep up the good work!

Blessings~
Brenda
P.S. I hope this is what I was supposed to do for the feedback. This is my first one;-)

Awesome website!

I grew up on a farm in Utah. We raised chickens, ducks, sheep, cows, goats, horses, and rabbits and grew apples, pears, peaches, plums, and cherries. It was a wonderful experience I have always looked back on fondly. I learned how to work hard and to love and respect animals.

I didn't know a lot of the facts and tips you've shared, so thanks! And I'll be following you.

Tamara

Hi - your site is difficult to read. White font on a blue background with a blurry green photo to each side of the article is very hard on the eyes. A simple black font on a light background is the recommendation to keep readers on your website.

Great article Hilary, if I wasn't already here, I'd be clicking on your link. The only thing I can add other than commend you on a great article, is to edit in Wordpress and create one or more categories, and untick Uncategorized. Otherwise, great work as I would expect with your pedigree!
For anyone who is interested in sharing a comment, my latest article is for guitar players and songwriters. I know there are some of you here
https://guitaraccessories.org/do-you-know-the-name-of-chords-you-are-playing/
Thanks as always
Luigi

oooh crap. I did forget to do the category menu thing on that site - thank you for the reminder! When I get home and can access other sites I will be happy to leave a comment on that article. Thank you for taking the time to read and review!

Thank you SO SO much for the awesome comment on that page! It's fab!! I returned the favor on the page you suggested. :) I hope you have a great night!

Nice one Martina, nice to have another Kiwi here. New Zealand is such an awesome place for hiking. So much of the countryside shouts to be walked or climbed on. The South Island is amazing, so many places to explore and so many different landscapes.
I look forward to visiting your site more often.
My site is https://guitaraccessories.org/
All the best
Luigi

Hi Luigi, thanks for your comments! I am actually not a kiwi (not yet) but been living here for almost ten years now.. My children are kiwi though.. Yes, we love exploring the outdoors around! So why not to share our experience right? ;) Love your page as well! Will definitely follow, maybe I get into playing again..
Have a great day
MArtina

Thanks Martina, I was born in Holland but have my NZ citizenship. Yes! Start playing again, it's good for the kids too, music is a family affair:)
Luigi

I loved your website those videos of the babies was very interesting and that is a really good reason to get a baby monitor. My only suggestion is that could you make the production description bigger?

What exactly do you mean make it bigger? Do you mean you would like to have more details on the product itself, features, etc?

Like the font bigger when you were talking about There Are Some Minor Issues With This Monitor and went and gave us the information on it.

Oh that is an image and is why it is so small. I tried to make that image bigger, but had some issues with getting it to be larger. I will work on that again. Hopefully I can get it to work. Thank you!

You welcome and thank you for you feedback as well.

Great site Kristen and what a good idea to set up a forum. I might have a think about that in the future too.
I like your bio and agree, they never stop being your kids. You never stop helping and guiding them or worrying a little about them:)
My site is https://guitaraccessories.org/ and I'd welcome any feedback thanks
Luigi

Luigi,

I absolutely have no constructive critics for you because your site looks fantastic. It looks clean and easy to read and find what you are looking for. I actually bookmarked it for my son who has decided that he would like to start playing the guitar.

Thanks so much Kristen. If you don't rent a guitar for your son (often they decide they don't want to again so it is a good idea), don't buy a cheap 'learners' guitar as I said in one of the articles, they are almost always terrible and put a lot of learners off.

It looks very nice to me. Just keep it simple and clean, as this is what I was advised to do.

Very nicely done I thought you gave some good information. If you have time please give some feed back on my site.
http://savemoneyonpetsupplies.com
To your success
Thank You
Paul

Hi Weinkea it looks cool too me, keeping it simple and straight to the point.

I think it look very clean and i like the videos you have on there as well.

Your site does look very clean & the gifs are a great addition! I may have to follow your lead & add some of my own to my site!

I like the article and your page. Pretty straight forward. people get the info they need. and the videos are amazing to have there too! Great work!

Thanks for the feedback!

Your site looks good, looks like you've been putting out some consistent content, and good content too. Nice quality pictures to go with. One easy way to improve your site would be to add a more related banner picture at the top. The highway picture doesn't really fit the pet supplies theme.

There's no shortage of writing material on your website. If you wrote it all that's quite impressive. Good display of pictures and good to see an extensive menu down the side with recent posts and previous posts. I would make the top menu button stand out more.

Very informative web site I enjoyed reading it. The only thing that I would suggest is adding a leave comment block at the end of your post.This will make it easier to get reply's back.

If you get the time please check out my new post.And my web site
thank you.
http://savemoneyonpetsupplies.com/border-collie-breeds/

To Your Success
Paul

I hope the honesty is not hard to hear. I will point out both positive and negative points, and give you an idea for a solution.

Very nice job on the design of the website. It's a good theme, and it is done up very attractively.

Categories. You need to be more careful how you categorize your articles. You have chosen good category names for the theme, but I don't see a lot of articles written in the direction of helping workers stay safe and protected. The theme chosen is work safety.

As for gardening, bbq's and wasps, perhaps you can start a category called Yard Safety?

Argan Oil Benefits, while a very well-done article, definitely does not fit into the theme of Work Safety, neither the category, nor the main theme of the website, at all. If you like writing about health benefits of food, or specialty foods, or skin care, you can start another blog within that theme.

It's good to stay within a given theme or else people will be confused about the purpose of a website.

Hope this helps.

Hi,
thank you very much for your detailed answer! I very much appreciate that!
You are right - I will change the structure of the categories.
Maybe I can come back to you when I'm done?
Thanks again!
George

I did some changes already... Maybe you could have a glance?
Best,
George

Hi George! I took a look at your website and it's fantastic! It looks very professional and there is a some great design and eye catching choices like the scrolling banners :)

You are further along than me but if you want some really expert feedback Privately Message Kyle and he will get back to you :)

Alex

Hi Alex,
many many thanks for your compliment! Wow! :-)
I will write some comments more and then contact Kyle I thought.
It's really necessary to know if I'm on track :-)
All the best!
George
PS: If you need a comment just let me know!

You are very welcome George :) Yes I would greatly appreciate any comments you would like to share on my site!
Thank you :)

www.naturesteaspoon.com

Done :-)

Looks to me like you are a web designer I wish my site looked that good.But you can look at it any way. It is my first try.

http://savemoneyonpetsupplies.com

Keep up the good work
Paul

Hi - have you purposely chosen to have your menus on the left-hand side of the screen? Or does it come that way with the theme? The eyes are naturally accustomed to read from left to right, so it makes reading your post somewhat awkward.

Hey I took a look at your website and it was great post. Yes, I could see myself there chilling.

Please take a look at my website and let me know what you think. I'm just building it;
https://possiblehomebusiness.com

It's the theme. Thanks for the feedback.

Hey Charity, love your Wordpress theme it looks great - I left a comment and a question on your cookware post.

Just a small thing - the misspelling of Copper as item 2)
I randomly checked navigation - working fine.

My hiking website if you care to leave a comment on any post:
https://lightenthehike.com/
Thanks in advance!

Chrissie

This is a fantastic website! I like to cook, so i will keep coming back to your website for advice. I also like the family touch. It gives your website personality. If there was one thing that I would change, its the banner on the home page that automatically moves from one subject to another. For me, it moves a little too fast from one subject to the next. I would slow it down. But that is a personal preference. Someone else might like it just as it is, but something to think about.

I actually agree with you on the speed. I can only change it if I buy the pro version. I am going to see how this continues to flow with me for about a month and see if its worth the money. Thanks for the feedback.

Always happy to fix something spellcheck misses lol. Happy to leave a comment for you as well.

Hi - your affiliate disclosure is worded incorrectly for Amazon's purposes. This phrase, in particular, will get you banned from their program "Each of your purchases via our Amazon affiliation links supports our cause at no additional cost to you."

This is what you need to say "As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases"

Hi - I couldn't find a way of closing the pop-up without having to subscribe. This may be annoying to some visitors, who will leave your page without going any further.

It doesn't open in a new tab, it remains in the centre of the screen, obscuring your content. I am using the Chrome browser on a desktop PC.

hello, I post a comment on your site, good info but the beginning of the page, the Title is to long its like the introduction of your page and I cant really read it well because the side bar is blocking them. But there is some good information in your website. Thank you.

Thanks for your feedback! I have implemented changes to the design thanks to your input. It does look cleaner. Also, if you are interested, my roommate read and gave me some honest critiques on the same blog post that you commented on, I made some changes to the text. Thanks for your help!

I just had a read and also left you a comment I do love my make-up too. Post looks good to me and I see what you mean about the disclaimer on the bottom I better put that in now.

Thank you very much for taking the time!! 🤓🙏 Yes, disclaimers are superimportant as I understand that affiliate networks can deny you commisions etc. If you are not compliant w. Regards to these regulations 😱

Oh gosh, okay I updated to say 'affiliate links attached' and hope that's okay to be compliant. I never noticed it before on anyone else's or heard this , maybe I missed that part in the training. Thanks again for pointing it out. Good luck with your website.

Hi Richard, I've just posted a comment on your website about the best affiliate program.
If you want, please return the favor and comment at my website:)
https://mybasketballequipment.com

Hi Dwight, just commented on your red wines article, as I'm not a golfer myself. But I do like wine!
Like you I'm a nit-wit when it comes to blogging. So it takes me forever too to write a new article with the right SEO keywords and finding the right photos. I guess it's a matter of practice to gain more and more experience. Time will tell!

I think that the combination of wines and golf is great. Play some golf, make use of your helpful tips & tricks on golfing techniques and afterwards enjoy wines at hole 19, following your recommendations. It might be helpful to somehow link the two topics more. Now it's almost like its two different websites in one.
Keep up the good work. Add some pictures, as you already mentioned, because that makes the site more appealing.
Good luck with the next articles!

Thanks so much for your comments. The linking is coming. Video is critical and images are also helpful. No one wants to just read a bunch of words. BORING!!!!!

Hello KristenaC. I left you a comment on your site. I loved the information that you had on there. I know it will help a lot of people. Thank you!

Hey, I took a look at your site and looks pretty good. My only advice is to include several mini titles in your articles to make it for easier reading and easier to transition from one topic to the other because it can get a little confusing and make it seem as if you are a bit all over the place. Helps is flow better. Now this is just my opinion on the matter so please don't take it as me putting your writing down at all. I also noticed that some of your photos overlapped some of your wording to where it cut a letter or two off the word. I would highly recommend proofreading and previewing how it is going to look before and after you publish it. Hope this helps a little!

Thank you so much. I'm going to go back and move those pictures. I'm also going to possibly do some sub headings. I appreciate you looking at it and providing me some feedback. Thank you again.

I would just check your title. i think you have a 1 rather than a 2.
i would add a link to a subscribe page - make it easy
your example birth chart doesn't link anywhere
i take it you are not indexed in google.
and don't forget to activate your ssl certificate - giving you https (under sitemanager where it has 3/x click on the siteplus and activate the ssl)
good luck with the site
phil

Thank you Phil I have clicked everything on under the site manager and gosh how did I miss the title!? I can't actually link to a subscribe page as I used a widget box so just mentioned to look there. I can't think of any other way to do it. Thanks for the feedback on this, if you want to leave a comment on the post itself...knock yourself out and feel free!

easy to do - confused me a bit at the start till i worked it out.
can you not have a page or a popup for the subscribe as well and link to that.
this way you can use the space above the fold but under the subscribe to advertise your personal horoscope service.

Nice match to my starsign! :-)
I left a reply.
If you like in return - just choose something you are interested in please.
www.wofety.com
Best,
George

Thank you I just saw it I am so glad that the horoscope resonates with you! I am checking you out now.

I'll take a look at this and see if I can do it, thank you!

Thanks George the article on child safety online was informative for me I did reply. Also the layout of your site is very visually pleasing! Good luck, good articles up there.

I submitted a site map to Google, does that help with the indexing? I find this stuff rather complex to understand fully. I hope I've followed the right thing to do do rank?

Thanks a lot!

submitting the sitemap is the first thing you do.
and when you add content you can then ask google to index it.
if you haven't got that far in the training yet, don't worry keep going.
but using the url inspector in search.google.com will get google to add your content to its database quicker than allowing it to find it naturally.
when you add content to your site then your sitemap will change - it is like an index of your site. but the all in one seo tool will tell google that it has changed.
there is a lot to take on board at the start, but you will soon get comfortable with the method.

Thanks I can see the the page you have sent, but when I put a link in it tells me to get some DNS settings organised and paste in a code. I am looking though the training now to see how to do this. It's a lot to understand I am not the most technical or IT savvy person but I will get there. Thanks for the help.

ah... this is registration for google search console.
the best tutorial is from the all in one seo guys
https://semperplugins.com/documentation/google-search-console-verification/
others have asked and found this to be good.
if you need any more help then shout.
but take your time and ask questions - take frequent breaks to absorb the information.

Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate using Site Manager.

Hi there, I have just put a comment on one of your posts for you. Great job, the site looks great.
Could you return the favor and put a comment on my new post for me. My link is just above your post.
Thanks
Coralie

Very good article on the weight loss! And Smart.

Thankyou! I read yours and I must say it is a very good start however it did feel somewhat jumbled up the top where the headings are. But keep up the great writitng

You're welcome. I will look at the jumble on the headings also. From looking at your site I like that you have written about things that can draw in people like me, who are not body builders or naturally would research this BUT I do research general weight loss. I would say keep articles that will attract non-body builders also. Lastly, some of us are very visual and may be drawn to an article via the picture. On your site, see if you can enable a function that will allow your feature picture to also show with the text maybe? Otherwise it's just text, and some may really gravitate to your work with the pictures also, before they open the actual articles if that makes sense. All the best and good luck.

100% I'll see what I can do

Hello, I read this particular blog: 10 Sources of help to stop drug use. Overall I like the knowledge that you put into the blog, it shows that you have real understanding of the topic.

A few points of consideration. You list the 10 sources twice. You may consider the explanation under the main identification with a further indented bullet. Secondly you use "we" throughout the article which leaves an impression that you are currently a struggling addict. I understand the message you are trying to convey but perhaps try a sentence or two expressing your understanding then transitioning to their personal state and responsibility. Identify, understand, and show yourself as an authority not in the middle.

Looks like your off to a good start. There only a few of things you could do to make it better. Add some pictures, make at least four headings, and put your post into categories. This will break up the reading. By adding categories make it look more professional.
And at least three links to what ever you are promoting. I hope this will help you.
To Your Success
Paul
savemoneyonpetsupplies,com

Thank you very much. I will make changes ASAP.

Thank you very much for your time and response. I will make changes as needed.
I will definitely check your site out.

Hello Lisa.
I have read your last post. It is very interesting because it can help anyone to know where and how to find aid with drug addiction. I think you can improve a lit bit your text by checking the spelling, putting more subtitles, and adding some images that can do it more appealing. Read it more times and you can see small things you can improve.
I would appreciate if you can visit https://weightliability.com and give me some feedback about the site and the Posts. Thanks a lot, and good luck with your progress.

Hi - your review contains three things which break Amazon's rules and will get you banned from their program.

Some of your product description is copied directly from Amazon.
You have mentioned the price which is not permitted.
You are only allowed to use the 1 image per product they supply you with. You can't copy any of the other photos.

Hi - you don't have an affiliate disclosure which is mandatory.

You cannot add the price of an Amazon product to your review. Doing so will get you banned from their program.

It seems pointless saying how many reviews a product has received, as this will change constantly. Imagine if somebody is reading it in a year's time.

Because you have added two affiliate links to each product, that means you have 14 links in this post, yet only 165 words.

You should only have 1 link for every 500 words, or Google will see your site as a "spammy" selling site.

Each chair really should have its own full review of at least 500 words before you add a link to it.

The info on this post is great. If you want to get your spacing right, try using a table. This way you have a column with all of your images that can be centered, and a separate column for the data for each of your items that can also be formatted separately.

I also checked this page out on my mobile device, before you get too much farther into your website design, you might want to look at switching to a responsive wordpress theme. That way your site will look good on mobile devices, and desktop/laptop systems.

Last thing, in your site, your name is "admin". You can make a much more personal connection to your potential customers by changing that to your actual name. You can do this in Wordpress your wordpress dashboard. Go to Users -> Edit admin -> make sure "First Name", "Nickname", and "Display Publicly as" are all set to your real name. Your posts should now all say your name, instead of admin.

Great site, I really liked your post about giving yourself a massage anytime anywhere. Awesome niche idea!

Thank you so much for all your information!! You probably saved me!! I'm going to fix it right now!!! Thanks bunches.