I have visited your site.
I don't know much about your niche, but I will say reading through the content was very easy. I like that you have it set up as "tutorials", with photos right after the description. So someone like me, who knows very little, can easily learn. You obviously know what you are talking about.
I think the appearance of the site is conducive to the content, however being a visual person myself, I would like it to grab my attention on your homepage. Maybe add a photo to your heading? (I sent some of my suggestions). Or maybe a picture of you and your dad with your gear on working together. People really like that kind of thing, where they can connect with you personally and add a lot of credibility.
Other than the visuals, I think the site aligns with the niche and you are an obvious expert, so I expect it will do very well. I hope that helps. Keep up the great work!

I would appreciate some feedback on my site as well if you would be so kind?

https://bestcoffeeconnoisseur.com/

Thank you!

Hi Lyn,

I have just looked at your site. It is a very narrow niche, but is important for women to know about.

Site Design; There is a very large white header which takes up almost half a page. It leaves your header text and top menu looking as if they are floating in white space.

The next element is a beautiful colour and would look better as a header image to replace the white header.

You can also make your top menu text font larger to 14. If your theme will not allow that, I suggest you use another more responsive theme that will still keep your sidebar WA widget.

Apart from a few grammatical errors - for example, 'loose' instead of 'lose' and 'cesarian' instead of 'caesarian', most people will be able to get the drift of your article messages.

Well done and keep it up Lyn!

Hi Stella,

Thank you so much for your kindness and patience in reviewing my site.

I definitely take all your feedback seriously to improve my site and I do really appreciate it.

Thank you once more, Stella and I'm wishing you a beautiful day.

Warm regards,
Lyn

My pleasure Lyn.

And thank you...

Stay blessed,
Stella

I wonder if there's a problem with it. I asked for feedback a month or so ago and never got any. Just finally took it down yesterday hoping to get my 2 credits back.

Oddly enough, Site Feedback was working fine yesterday!

I offered 8 requests and got several feedback requests about my own sites. There was no interruption and I did not see the red sentence for a whole day.

Very strange. Maybe people use it more on a Tuesday than the rest of the week!

Kyle and Carson started their 20 free credits for website feedback yesterday, so any glitches would've been worked out. Glad to know it's working so good--thanks!

Yes, I did notice the 20 free credits incentive. Phew!

Hi, The priority would be follow up all the trainings here at WA.
In respect of custom menu,This is Kyle's training and I hope this helps you out
Creating Custom Menus, Navigation, & Widgets All the best
Shirian

I've been building websites for well over 10 years now in different niches, but only recently on the WA platform.

If you've already done research on your niche, identified what you want to write about and started filling out the SEO information for your site, you need to ensure it is appropriately designed.

Think about your customer journey - how does your site visitor get to your site and what is the first thing they see? How can you give them a good impression? How can you make it easy for them to find what you want them to see or take the actions you want them to take.

Once I've figured out the basics of my content and SEO, I'll put quite a lot of effort into the following:

1. Getting the right look (finding the perfect theme)
2. Content engagement (deciding how to layout my posts/pages to increase engagement - eg. adding video, table of contents, call to action buttons, etc.)
3. Identifying representative images (your visitors will interpret pictures before they ready any text, so every post and page needs pictures that represent their contents).

Just a question out of curiosity. Do you do any overnight hikes? If so, I'd love to read some of your thoughts on camping (eg. leave no trace principles) while on the trail.

I would also second shirian's suggestion and check out the training on navigation.

If you have time, I'd love some general feedback on my site (it's been up for about 6 weeks) at https://cookgreatfoodanywhere.com

I know this site covers some topics that are new to a lot of people, so I'm particularly curious about what you'd like to learn more about.

Awesome my friend, thank you so much! This was exactly the answer i was looking for. There is always so many replies 'just stick to the training'. Yes of course i'm going to stick to the training!

So i really appreciate a really concise priority list like you've posted. I've added your website to my Tuesday to do list!

Thanks again!

Colin

Happy to help, Colin!
There are a lot of people here who write short, general answers like that, but there are also people here who will put more effort in. It just varies. That's the downside of having low barriers to entry.

Also, thanks for taking the time to have a look at my website. I look forward to your feedback!

Hi Sara,

I like the way ;you designed your site. It starts with a picture then the background colour of the site becomes black as ;you scroll down the page.

You do not use ads which would cause a distraction, but prefer to keep your visitors on your site instead.

The only thing I can suggest is a space to collect emails if you want. Then you can connect to the people who want to understand more about solar cooking and being off-grid.

I like the idea of that as though I spend a lot of time in my home, when I take short breaks, I prefer to eat food I have prepared myself.

So solar cooking utensils are very useful. It is also a very narrow niche, but as you are used to building sites, that is probably not a problem for you at all.

Which is good.

I would like some constructive feedback from you about this site page:

https://cleareczemanaturally.com/argiletz-clay-review-works

Thank you Sara.

Stella

Thanks for the feedback, Stella!

At the moment, my priority is to get people to my Patreon page, rather than sell stuff, so I have to focus on providing content that builds my credibility. I'll probably add affiliate links down the line.

The site's niche is "off-grid lifestyle", so it's a bit wider than just solar cooking (solar cooking's a great niche on it's own, though - I'm already an established thought leader in that field). I will be writing about all kinds of off-grid cooking methods on my site, but I had to start somewhere.

I'll certainly take a look at your page and get back to you with some feedback!

/Sara

I haven't had time to read the entire site, but I get the impression that the vast majority of your content is focused on informing your audience about different natural remedies and ways of dealing with their eczema.

I love your use of photos throughout the site. The page design is clean and simple, which helps the reader focus on the text.

Your writing is clear and you provide plenty of information. I'm confused though - is Argiletz clay a brand or a type of clay?

Don't be afraid to use featured images if your theme allows it. That will give you that lovely illustrative picture at the top of the page.

ADVANCED CREDIBILITY-BUILDING TIP

I would spend a bit more time and energy building a connection with my audience on this page. You can help them relate to you by sharing some stories about your life, experience, and lessons learned. In your "about" page, and the post about eczema-induced depression you do this quite well by sharing how your experience made you grow.

Try to do something similar here. In addition to mentioning that it worked for you, you can share how you found this brand, how you felt before using it and how you felt after.

You could also link to further reading or provide an author bio at the bottom of the post.

Hope all this helps!

You're doing a great job with your site! Keep up the good work!

Good article.But is it necessary to mention that you get commission especially in the beginning. Maybe in the end and then explain that it doesn't effect the price.it is only a reward that the company gives you for helping them to inform about this excellent filter.

Thanks for your feedback!
I do see what you mean, but would also like to be as transparent as possible with visitors. I have seen quite a few other successful bloggers (even in my own niche) adding the affiliate disclaimer at the start of posts. What would really help is if I could find a way to add it into a banner so that it doesn't show as the starting text to my articles in snippets.

I believe that people may not want to click my links if they don't trust me - as is natural. So, honesty shows I can be trusted, and even visitors who don't see the end of the page can acknowledge my transparency that way.
If I cannot create a banner (or other), I shall certainly consider your advice. :)

I am sure when get in the pictures your page will look great.the text was okay and you probably used Jaaxy to get the low hanging fruits

Hello Joe,

I would suggest adding some photos to your about me. You do not have to use a picture of yourself. You may use a picture of something else that relates to you as an individual. I love the images in the other articles. Your website should have a background. Either add a color or picture background to make it pop out.

Elephants

Hey Joe, I like the layout of your website. Very informative. I left a comment under Justin. Good Luck !

My suggestion is that your article titles are too big..

Okay Thankyou Elephants! I’ll be sure to act on it :)

Thanks so much Justin!

No dramas, Thankyou Peter!

I let my articles follow each other in the Home Page. If you wish you can pin one article at the top.

When you eventually have articles that fall into specific categories like training, reviews, demos, you can create menus for all of them.

Edwin

Hey Mike!

Your website is refreshing to browse... You could use the word 'grown-ups' now and then if you wish... I get that 'adult autism' is a more common term though...

I gather that this subject is close to your heart!

I like your glossary and acronyms post very much... I, personally, would never worry about how much traffic comes in as it is a very interesting subject!

You could also provide us with some lines on how angry it makes you etc. I don't know if this is a more emotive way of expressing yourself (yourself personally) or if you prefer to keep a cool heart on the subject.

Good luck with your website Mike... Bye for now!

Hi Mike,

Are you publishing each post as a page? I think this may be the issue.

If you go to appearances then menu, you can make a main heading (page) to go where you have all your posts (pages?) now.

Then each time you publish a new article, make sure its published as a post, and put it under your page (menu name)

If the list gets too long, you can use a scroll at the side of the menu.

Hope this makes sense, I'm not expert myself but this worked for my menu.

Judy

Hey Mike, Could be the theme you are using that can help clean up your site. I am using Kale www.cbdbubble.net and have used Lighthouse in the past. Both are free on wordpress but they're format is good for bloggers of sort.

I suggest going through your menus to consolidate some of your posts.

Justin

Nope, I publish each post as a post. Thanks.

I love your website! I love the design of it and the content. Not much useful feedback I know but just wanted to reach out and let you know I love it!

Taylor.

Wow, thanks a lot! That's great to hear, I appreciate you reaching out to me for that!

I notice you're new here, if you'd like any feedback feel free to message me. :)

Your site looks awesome ! I love the design.

Thank you! I've been a bit picky about it, but I guess that's a good thing haha :)

Very good, I was able to click open the home page and see a clear invitation to learn more "About Linda." First paragraph easily brought me to the second paragraph and I felt compelled to finish reading the page. Your first name, email address at tail end of the post works great. The clear invitation "to comment" feels good. Your banner buttons at the very bottom are very nicely placed. Sidebar of recent posts and search box is also placed very well. The simplicity of the heading area and menu of site links at the top is absolutely brilliant. I can imagine this title of website would pair up nicely with a monthly or weekly podcast.

Thank you very much. You are very expressive. You had a lot to say after a quick visit to my site. Those skills makes you a good communicator and I have no doubt you will achieve success.

Hi there, I like your website idea! I myself am in the health and nutrition niche, so can relate a little to your content.

I like your writing style - it's engaging and personable, but maybe some more research could go into your dieting advice. Not that I want to criticise; I wish only to provide constructive feedback which will help you to help others more, and is up-to-date with current research. There is a lot of nice information out there, and I am not an expert, but as someone who has read nutrition books and a lot of online studies (etc.), and spent a lot of time doing (non-primary) research, I would love to give you a little guidance as long as you are happy with that (please direct message me if so).

Additionally, it might help to break down some paragraphs a little more, just to add some white space and make it look more visually appealing. This will help readers and should encourage visitors to stay on your site for longer.

I hope this helps!
James

Hi Carol. I checked out your website and it is great, but I do have a few suggestions: Did you do the grammer and spelling checker before you posted? A picture of yourself on your "About Carol" page would be nice. You have lots of good content, but you might want to affiliate with Amazon so you could put their link on your posts.

I'm still new at this, but I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Good luck and much success with your business!

Virginia

Thank you Virginia. I appreciate your time and comment. Points noted. Do let me know if I can return the favor.

Carol

Hello Carol, welcome to the WA community. The people here are very helpful and insightful, so on your journeys asking for help or advice is sometimes one of the best ways to improve and learn.

First of all, I would definitely say you should add some featured images for your posts. In WordPress, you can find this option on the bottom right of the Post editor. Make sure to use relevant images, as this should help to increase click through rates to your posts and will make the site more visually appealing.

Secondly, I would recommend changing the site description so it doesn't just say "just another WordPress site" - you'll want to use something that describes your business idea, something that can act as a slogan.

Apart from that, adding some page categories and maybe some menu navigation for posts with help in the long and short run as well.

Hi - this is the correct website address:

https://drrobseducationsite.siterubix.com/

When you got to Appearance and Customize, does it give you an option of Site Identity, then Site Title? If so, this is where you can remove Blog.

Did the photo come with the theme? Or have you added your own? It may be better to replace it altogether. Go to Appearance, then Header Image.

Thanks, Diane. I will try this.
Howard

Sorry. That did not work.
-Howard

Have you considered changing your theme? As a premium member, you have access to over 7000! Go to Appearance, Themes, then click "add new" - this will bring up all the options for you to preview.

Ok. I will try that. Sorry to be a bother, but I can move on if I can just get past this snag.

Thanks,
Howard

Hey, my friend the link above doesn't take you to your site. It goes to mail as if I want to send you an email.

Hi shaun,
You have chosen a competitive niche, which is not a bad thing. It just looks like you are in the early stages of your site creation, so there isn't a whole lot. It looks clean and concise, my advise is just to keep building and requesting feedback like you are doing already. I am in the same niche, so please feel free to checkout my site and let me know what you think. https://bestwaystoearnpassiveincome.com/

Best regards,
Jefrey M.

Hi Tyler,

I left a comment on your website. It looks really nice, you did a great job on the redesign. Could you leave a comment on my recent blog post? Thank you! https://warcraftlover.com/corsair-scimitar-pro-review/

Thanks for the kind words. I went ahead and left you a comment on your article. It hung up on me the first time so if it didn't go through, just let me know and I'll be happy to do it again!

It went through. Thank you so much. =)

Just left a comment on your website Tyler. Excellent professionalism and awesome new redesign. Also great knowledge on the PC midi tower.

Thanks so much for the feedback Shaun. If you ever need the favor returned just let me know!

Hey Tyler,
I have to say, you did a great job although I never saw the previous design. I also read your article on the Full tower computer cases, and if they are worth it. Very interesting and informative, I am wondering with all your knowledge if you can build computers yourself? Thanks again for your information, I would appreciate some feedback on my site in the make money online niche https://bestwaystoearnpassiveincome.com/

Best regards,
Jefrey Mihedji

Hi Jefrey. I took a look at your website. Since I'm not taking the MMO boot camp, it would be hard for me to give you detailed critique. However, since I don't really know much about it, I can give you an honest first look opinion from the perspective of a potential customer.

The overall look of the website was pretty clean and I had no problem navigating it. I didn't think anything looked confusing or obstructive. It was a breeze to go through the pages and see what they were about.

The only real critique I guess I could give is your first picture on your main page or landing page with your face and with the "passive income for you" title. It's really a nit pick, but I think it might look better with the words photoshopped over a picture rather than your face being photoshopped onto a background. I just think that might look cleaner over all.

Hope that helps in some small way. And to answer your question, yes I most definitely can build computers! It's one of my passions!

We have that right here already :) anytime you need a comment on a new post you leave a few for others needing the same thing. It’s a win/win.

Got it. Thanks for the feedback. It is indeed a win/win. I have started doing with some who are willing and in need. It's good to help and be helped. all the best even more, ericcantu.

You can fix this. In your WordPress admin left menu, select

Appearance > Customize > Site Identity

Add your site title and/or tagline in the fields. Save it.

If the above doesn't work, follow this training by Trish. Some themes give a choice between using text, or logo image. Post again if this doesn't work for you. How to Change Your Site Title and Tagline ~Jude

Hi Howard, you could also go to the upper part of your screen and see there which specific concern you are in.

Thank you. I will try that.

Howard

Why does my website still have the word BLOG on in big letters?

Jude, my website opening page still has the word BLOG on it. Can I remove it?

Hi - have you tried following the instructions which Jude gave you a few hours ago?

I had a quick look. You are using the Education Institute Free WordPress theme.

http://wpplayers.com/education-institute-free-wordpress-theme/

The documentation is at:
http://wpplayers.com/docs/education-hubs-documentation/index.html

To change "Blog", to another site title, use the Customize option provided by the theme.

In WP admin, go to Appearance >Customize >education-hubs Options >Home Blog Section

Change the Title field in the Home Blog Section to whatever you want. See SCREENSHOT below.

Hope this helps. ~Jude

Hi, Jude. This information was VERY helpful. Thank you so much!
-Howard

I like the content and the images in the content look fine to me. The only thing I see visually off putting is too much white...maybe change the header color or something. The content background being white is perfect. Just my 2 cents, hope this is not too criticizing.

Overall a great job!

I just changed my theme and added photos as well. If you get a min stop by and take a look and let me know what you think.

https://ww.pringleswormfarm.com

Thanks
Brian

Hey

First thanks for your feedback. It is appreciated.

About your website: I like the theme. The color is also a good fit to your niche. The niche itself seems also great, as I am sure very few people have choosen it, and on the other hand the market is probably big.

Few things catched my eye.
1) On the About page you haven't changed the subheadings. Example: "What is the mission of your website?". Rename it "My/Our Mission" or "Why I want to help YOU". And do the same for the rest.
2) Again on About page. I would advise you to put a photo of yourself, so you can be trusted by visitors.
3) Insert some images in your articles.

That's the basic, my friend. With the time you will learn more. I am still learning. On my last post I used stuff that I had just learned.

Other than that, great job. I can tell you have put a lot of effort, and that's what is important. Because putting the effort on something you learn is the key.

All the best,
Teo

Teo, your site is coming up nicely but you have to change the header picture to something related to your niche. That pic there does relate to your niche.

And try to add a logo to make your site look professional. You can use Canva to do that. The contents are good and coming up nicely.
That was all I could gather for now.
thank you.

My site
https://skin-care-academy.com

Hey,

Thanks for the feedback and sorry for the delay.

Honestly at this point of my online education and the knowledge I have, I couldn't find anything that needs to be improved in your website.

Seems like you know what you are doing. Keep publishing, my friend.

Thanks again,
Teo

Hello,

I just visited Ashley Aquatics and was impressed with the great article. I do have some friends i will send the site link to.

I left you a comment and would appreciate it if you have a min to look at mine and leave a comment.

https://pringleswormfarm.com/process-of-vermicomposting-simplified/

Thanks!

Hi posted a comment on your site..hope I was not too criticle ...good content but I think your theme needs some work.
check my site at:
https://jimsgolfworld.com

Hi thanks, I already posted a comment on your site. Let's do it for self-improvement. btw, thanks for the suggestion, I know.

I think your site looks good, your content shares a lot of information about bodybuilding and how to do it right. The links allow people to do more research on your topics. I like how you have a bold theme and the pictures with the article underneath and the option to read more instead of just the post titles.

I like the citations too. Thinks it's important to backup content in the health and beauty niches. Plus saw that main competitors do that as well :)

Hey Mike, Like the niche and your site is very well put together. Keep up the good work!

thanks justin

Hi,
None of those works.

Hi - your Privacy Policy on your aquatics site, mentions your sobriety site, so its a bit mixed up!

Hi! aaronashley,

I have a proposition, I am going to read and comment on your work. I will appreciate it if you could do the same. Let's do it together. Yes, be brutally frank that would be for my improvement. Let's do it. This way we learn and grow together. Check my comment now at Ashleyaquatics.com.
btw, do not include the https:// it would not go to your site.

Yours truly,
Megawinner

thanks for letting me know. I reposted with links that work. ashleyaquatics.com and syringestosobriety.com
Thank you

Hi Diane, I just read through the privacy policy on both sites a few times and I can not find what you mention. Would you be a bit more specific as to where it is mentioned on the page please?

Hello! I saw your comment. Thank you for the advice about an outline of my lessons. Eventually, I want to add a place for people to register for lessons, but I am not quite there yet. I took a look at your site and I will personally message you with some advice!

Hi - I can't access your site as it is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate. Remember To Activate Your SSL Certificate

Hi there! Just updated my domain to a .com domain and activated sitespeed + SSL!

Should be a bit more trustworthy now! :)

Dearest regards, Torgny.

Hi - you don't have a Privacy Policy, which is mandatory. There is one in Site Content which you can adapt.

Hi Gabor,
Gorgeous website layout. I like the blue and white and the clear sidebar with pictures of the posts. I would suggest that you make a choice whether to use the popular post OR recent posts, as they seem a little too much now... more of the same. You could think about making a link to your about me page and a search bar in your sidebar. The categories will also help to navigate the visitors on your website. I suggest you place those in the sidebar too.

The next comment is about your about me page. A picture of you would be something that makes it more personal. What I found out reading your about me page, is that it not related a lot with your readers. Why is this website made? is that for you to keep yourself updated or did you write it to help out them not to get lost in the online world of courses and trainings?
Write why it's interesting and important for them to read your website and to bookmark it. You could even put down a question directly to them, so they are inclined to connect to you, place a comment or book a call / subscribe for your newsletter.

Hope this feedback helps you on your way.

I would really appreciate it if you would look at my website too and give me feedback on it. www.anandasoultravel.com

Thanks so much,
Love Nanda

Hello Lisa!

Your website is really great. Keep it up.

I only suggest you change your background. Pick a less generic simple color, maybe lighter blue?

Nick at your service ^^.

Awesome website so far.

The article has some good ideas to get running and keeping on track.

I would suggest getting rid of the comment box under the privacy policy as it isn't necessary.

Have a good'n- Jason
https://koipondinfo.com/

Thanks Jason, much appreciated!
I will head over to your site now...

Thank-you so much Nick, I really appreciate the time you've taken to have a look and provide feedback :-)
Do you have a site you'd like me to check out?
Thanks again, all the best :-)

If you feel like it, sure ^^

https://gyfnow.com

Wow Nick! Truly impressive website! Very professional and visually appealing layout and you certainly are a natural writer. I have signed up for your newsletter as I genuinely want to read future posts.
I'm sorry I can't provide any feedback for improvement at this point...
Keep up the great work!

Thank you so much

Hello Colleen,

I can't access your website at all. It never loads to me. I don't know whether it's on my end or your website's.

Nick.

https://puppytrainingplace.com/

It loads for me just fine. Try it again. :)

Thanks, working now. Must've been a server issue.

Well Colleen! Your website is so cute and the theme is perfect.

There's a Please install woocommerce plugin in the header bar, I'm guessing your theme header has the functionality to add a woocart. You can usually disable it in the customizer.

I just wished your posts had more pictures, colors, shape and depth in the content. Don't just keep it to just header and paragraph, use colors, italic, bold, and many other features in the WordPress editor, whilst keeping your website simple and cute.
Meaning don't overstuff the content, just a few out-of-landscapes little details that still stick out such as important facts and that kind of thing.

I really like it. Way to go.
Cheers, Nick.

I have just started Level 3 today so I am sure I will learn more about the requirements as far as Affiliate Disclosure goes.

Someone, please correct me if I am wrong on this.

I was looking through your website and noticed that your links go to Amazon. I know that Amazon is very particular about a Disclosure being posted either on the page or within the post. I do not find any mention of Amazon as far as a Disclosure.
Did I miss something?

Other than that, your site is quite a resource for anyone who needs help preparing for the future.

Nice article... :)

Hello cm4562,

The following comment is at the end of the first paragraph on the post:

"Disclaimer: Clicking on a product Title or name will redirect you to your local Amazon storefront."

I will check if that is enough or additional information needs to be added. May be it needs to be in a different location for better visibility.

Thank you for your feedback. It is greatly appreciated.

J

I went back and looked and could not find it.

Amazon likes their Disclaimer to be clearly visible and close to the top of the page so that the visitor sees it clearly.

You may want to follow up with Amazon on the Disclaimer.

Well, the first thing I will say; is stop the flashing or switching screen; I find that annoying on Websites in which they have a screen that sort of flashes; you should have a static screen display. You might want to work on the name too: Instead of "School Preps"; you might want to call it; for Instance: "Ace any Exam; whatever Grade." You might want to work on the title of your Website. You might want to use: "Student" in your sales pitch. Because on your Website; it`s not really saying who your target audience is: You might want to put Student in more.

And you might want to simplify and say: "Prep For Exams". You might want to just say: "Exam Prep."

But, I am going to say this again too; when I am Online; and I am interested in something; and this is Important; I hate a flashing and or changing screen; keep the screen Image Static. Don`t have the screen display keep changing; I think that that will turn off People too.

I think I said almost enough; but I am going to say this: Just like here at Wealthy Affiliate; you might want to offer a Discount too; for instance; you might offer a Discount for a month; or you might offer a Discount to new Members for a month. I am not saying the "Bait and Switch". I am just saying you; if you are charging; you might want to offer a Discount.

Thank You:
michaelw777

Hi - your site looks abandoned, with only having 2 posts which were added 8 months ago. This won't attract Google's attention. Ideally, you need to add 2 or 3 per week.

Your Affiliate disclosure doesn't meet Amazon's requirements. You need to specifically state that you earn a commission from qualifying purposes. There is a template in Site Content which you can adapt.

Thank you for your feedback DianeScorpio. I will work on my publishing schedule and will follow Site Content for the proper disclosures. I greatly appreciate you advise.

J

Thank you for your feedback michaelw777. I will work on this recommendations as I learn to better deal with this theme.

Hi David! You can use the page builder plugin from Wordpress. With page builder, you can add snippets(images, search, contact form, etc) as part of your article. What theme are you using? I'm using GeneratePress theme which Kyle suggested. It's easy to use and configure.

Thanks Elyo. I will have to have a play around with different themes. I just want my page to look more attractive to an audience.

Hi David -
I paid a visit to your website. I like the minimalist aesthetic along with the color scheme. It works.
Your posts cover important tools for one's puppy or dog as far as collars and leads. What I also like is that you are able to share your personal experiences with regard to either collars or leads and that will always be a positive because then people can know that someone is familiar with a particular collar or lead.

Thanks for the posts... Nice website for sure :)

Okay, first things first; off the bat; if you want to use the word: "marmite"; you should tell People what Marmite is; some People have said I am intelligent; I am just speaking frankly; and I don`t know what marmite is; that might turn off viewers right away; and I will say it again; if you want to use the word; marmite; in your first paragraph; tell People what it is: Or use another word that People know.

You might want to put in a second Paragraph to explain what: "Retractable Dog Leads" are; I don`t know what that is; and if visitors to your site don`t know what that is; then that might turn some People off; so you might want to take some space up explaining to People what some of the stuff you are talking about is.

Under "Dog Harnessing Size Guide.": You might want to remove where you say: "I have said time and time again." To Paraphrase; you might want to remove that; and just get to explaining what you want to say.

And I have to say here; I don`t have Images on my site yet; but I am going to say for your`s; you might want to add some Images of Puppies; if you wanted to; you could put them on a leash; but you might want to add some Images of Cute Puppies to your site.

And you might want to work on your Headings too; for me; and I don`t find I`m drawn in by them. I don`t have your expertise in this field; But, here is a Title: "Treating your Dog Right." "Making your Dog feel Comfortable." Or; "How to help your Dog adjust to a new Home." Or: "Being your Dog`s Best Friend.". Or also; "How to keep your Pooch Happy." Or: "How to keep your Canine Friend Happy." Or: "How to Love your Dog."

Thank You:
michaelw777

Hi Michael,
Thank you so much for your feedback its really appreciated. I am still learning and yes I need lots more pictures. Thanks for the good points ref the Marmite and the explanation of the leads.

Many thanks for your kind words :)

I actually work in this sector in real life! First thing I noticed is that you could do with removing the line at the start of your content on one post, it serves no real purpose and gets involved in your snippets. If you take a look at wired v wireless - you will see what I mean..

In terms of wired and wireless then new build or refurbs offer the opportunity to hide the wiring which may be the objection to placing wires in the first place.

In regards to jamming there has recently been an increase in jamming issues this has occurred with an increase in home devices also street lights can now contain wireless tech and when they are being set up can jam alarm systems. The jamming will only increase in all likelihood unless the industry takes real measures..

I love the family emergency plan it's a good touch and often an element that is missed - especially children as they can be the last one left standing and if you have equipped them with an action plan to take cover they may be able to assist in getting emergency services after the event. Everyone feels more secure with a plan - it's something I've had a lot of fun doing with my own family. Often an element that is missed on security systems. I hope you develop this area as well as an affiliate - is this an area you can add your real spin on - a set of prep cards - a plan making a set of tutorials. I'm sure that sort of thing may be in your wheelhouse.

I like the darker professional theme I think your site looks smart.. It is clear you know your topic and you will be developing a site with real value to your visitors. Good work.

I also meant to say Hello Brian - but I got carried away reading your site. Kay

We're on the same trade. But aside from security alarm, I also do fire alarm system for home and buildings. 10 or 15 years ago, you have to pay someone to monitor your home. Now, you can monitor devices yourself in your home through a smartphone. Yours is a great site, very informative with supporting video footages. For integrity, wired is better than wireless as we all know anyone can hack the wireless system. But technology advancement could solve this problem in the future.

Hi Kay. Good morning from Los Angeles, California. Thank you for the through review and feedback. You make some great points that I missed. Especially the "line." I'll change that immediately. And, the jamming and street lamps. Wow, I'm so glad our paths crossed. I followed you also 😊. Your actually my first review!

Thanks again,

Brian

Really glad I could help - keep up the good work. I value safety in the home.

Lol... No worries. That's a compliment 😊

Hi - you don't have an affiliate disclosure which is mandatory. There is a template in Site Content which you can adapt.

You are not using the 1 image which Amazon supply you with. You can't simply select your own from elsewhere, and add the Amazon link to it. This will get you banned from their program.

I added the affiliate disclosure in-text but will work on making it more obvious. Good catch on the image. I didn't know about that. Will edit it now!

Hi - I didn't notice your in-text disclosure but it is not fit for purpose as regards Amazon. You receive your commission from Amazon/eBay etc, not the pen company, therefore, you need the full disclosure.

Thank you for all the help! Really appreciate it!

Hey Nick,

I visited your website!
First of all, just wanted to let you know that the layout of it is very clean giving your pages filled with a fresh sense of relaxation.

Font is very clear to read, spaced out perfectly. As far as space placing of photos and the surrounding words of "wisdom" you shared with your audience, I find them to be very educational. I really do!

Your website, correct me if I am wrong, but I think its something into the field of psychology? ... "Every human being deserves happiness". Yes we all do, but there are times when we face difficulties in life, however, your "Grab your freedom | As simple as drinking coffee" metaphor takes me back to... let's have some coffee, my friend :)

Vinh,
Admin of https://victorslist.bsfvictor.com/

Hi Nick,

First of all that's a nice website and I love the creativity in it.
However, I was mislead with your website's concept until I read your "about" profile.

The home page had a lot to do with coffee, and my initial thoughts were to learn more on that. (thought coffee was your niche). But it actually about finding happiness in life. Great!

I suggest you replace the images with 'cups' on the home page section, with images that has to do with happiness in life, for clarity of your concept.

Interesting fonts but some of the pictures seemed too big for me eg, the choose joy pic. The colours to me are fine.

Summing up, I enjoyed your reads and I also gave a comment on a post. I will tag you to review mine too when I'm ready.

Cheers!

Thank you my friend! Indeed, it has a lot to do with psychology and philosophy.

I'll remember to visit your website.

I appreciate the feedback! I'll do some corrections asap, thanks.

Hi - first of all, white font on a black background is not recommended. It gives a poor user experience as it is difficult to read.

Your article on flip tricks suggests watching some videos but there are no clickable links.

Where are you getting your images from? You can't just copy and paste them from Google. You need to ensure they are not copyrighted, which brand names such as Fallen usually are.

Hi Diane,
the site is still under construction and I'm currently making the tutorials on how to do the tricks. The images are all free and are from Wikimedia, so there won't be any copyright issues.

Also, how can I change my font color? What are your recommendations on improving the user/visitor experience?

Thank you so much for taking the time to give me these pointers, Diane!

Best wishes,
Oggy

Can you change the fonts and background in the theme customizer?

In the training, Kyle suggest white background with black fonts, it is easier on the eyes.

You are off to a good start!

Cindy

The site is well established, however, try to get a modern theme going. Simple is good but it one looks outdated.

Your pics are small, why not try bigger pictures.

Check for grammar mistakes and also try having fewer sentences per paragraph, at most 3 or at least 2.

Your site is still in development, keep working on it, you'll get it bud. Best wishes to you.

I think this is a great idea!

I come from a family of truck drivers and let me tell you... I have heard some stories - some scary, some strange, some funny.

I will be letting everyone know about your site!
-Amanda

Thanks Amanda I appreciate it! I was hoping that this was a good idea, thanks for the support!!

I think the idea is super cool and very original.

A couple of my opinions and impressions.

1. The theme seems flat and bare, sort of dull colors.

2. The header has too much text. I'd like to see maybe a logo and the site title and a navigation bar. All that text below the site title I think would be better in an About section.

I think if you want a subtitle it should be brief. Something like, "A place for all things trucker." , or something like that.

3. I'm not sure if the Wealthy Affiliate advertisement on the right side fits with your niche. The site seems to be about truckers and trucking, not affiliate marketing. I suppose you could try to fit it in. How can truckers make extra money even while on the road??? Etc. But right now it seems sort of random.

Again, I think it's a cool idea and I hope you keep at it.

Hey Sean,
I like the idea of sharing personal stories from long hours on the road, but I think you forgot to add a "com" at the end haha! Also, there's better themes on wordpress for your niche, there's even one I saw yesterday coincidentally meant specifically for trucking business, so I'd probably check that out.

Thanks for the ideas! You were right the .com got cut off lol!! I reposted it correctly.

No problem :)

I found the theme you spoke of and changed it over. You were right it is better, thanks!

Hi - you don't have an Affiliate Disclosure, which is mandatory. You are not allowed to add the prices of an Amazon product to your review.

Thankyou!! fixed that asap!

Hi Keisha, I've read some posts of your website, at the first glance of the main page it's very sharp and colourful, the website layout is suitable for your makeup blog too. For the post, if you can add more relevant images in the post it will be even better for readers to understand too rather than use only the imagination to imagine the steps. Overall it's great, good luck to you to continue give out good content!
Welcome to pm me some feedback on my website too, thanks!
https://aerialdanceandfitness.com

Hey Beauty Boss! I love your site.
The drama of the red and black is very eye catching but not overwhelming.

I really enjoyed how your articles are displayed, the bold titles and related images made it very easy to decide what I wanted to read first.

I read the post regarding Natural Eyeshadow Looks and honestly enjoyed it more than I thought I would! I am not one to spend a ton of time reading fashion articles so i tend to skim them but not this time! Your writing style is open, personable and very humorous. It really connected with me. I also appreciated how you use your platform to promote self love and confidence in your own skin with comments like "WE are the artwork, and our makeup highlights different aspects of what is already a masterpiece."

I actually enjoyed your site enough to favorite it and plan to use it as a resource in improving my own makeup routine! Great job, can't wait for more content!

Thank you so much VeganMom! Your feedback assures me that my content is accomplishing exactly what I set out to do. I appreciate it. If you want me to reciprocate, PM me your link so that I can return the favor!

Thank for the feedback. You are right. My post could use some help with the imagery. Speaking of images....I absolutely love the pictures on your posts. They draw you in and make you want to read the content. I never really knew much about aerial dance but was intrigued by your post and am glad I read it. Thanks

Looks awesome to me. I can't think of much changes I would recommend. The logo is bright, colorful, and gets peoples attention. I enjoyed reading your content and learned a few things.

You already sound like an authority

I might put a "blog" menu item so people can click to read your posts. The title of your site might throw people. Tool Choose sounds like someone promoting Home Depot lol.

I'm not sure what your niche is. Is it affiliate tools? Promoting Clickbank products? Just asking out of curiosity.

Hope this helped a little

Thanks for the honest review!

I will build a home page soon and put a blog link on it. Thanks for recommending that.

I initially wanted to select the home improvements tools niche and purchased the domain for that. But then I decided to focus on affiliate marketing niche. Since it's somewhat close to what I do in my day job and went with the existing domain toolchoose.com.

I want to promote SaaS tools, software and learning resources for affiliate marketers on toolchoose.com.