As we are building out our websites, it is always nice to get some feedback and insights from "others" as to how we are doing. It can lead to us getting a better understanding of the process and it will lead to a much higher quality website.

If you are needing a website review, post your website URL here for feedback.

Example:

Hey guys, I am just building a website in the weight loss niche and am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website. Here is my domain:

http://howtolosebellyfattoday.com/

Thanks!

But remember, this is a community here at Wealthy Affiliate and don't just post your link and leave. Offer others the same sort of help you are about to get. Whenever you post your website here, make sure that you offer your opinions and insights on at least two other websites.

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ClarkLudahl Premium
My niche is encoders. You might be saying, "What is an encoder?" Well that makes you a great candidate to read my post becasue the title of the post is "What Is An Encoder - Turning Motion Into Electrical Signals". It is a bit technical, but it would be interesting to see if the post makes the subject a bit more understandable for the average non-techie type. Techie types are welcome to read it too. Thanks in advance.

Here is the link:

http://encoders101.com/what-is-an-encoder-turning-motion-into-electrical-signals
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THOMAS54 Premium
Hey guys I am just building a website in the health services niche and wondering if you can give me some feed back on how I am coming along with my website. Here is my domain:
http://healthyresourcecenter.com/


Thanks and I will very readily give you a feedback on your site in return for the favor.
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Bonfan Premium
Hello thank you for sharing your site. Is always scares me to do that here with so many really experienced designers here at WA I always feel like such a newbie. Anyway, I would suggest that your landing page title "healthyresources" be split up and capitalized as it is the title so Healthy Resources. Maybe you can create a nice slogan Healthy Reasources, "Providing you the tools for a better life" Or your own statement is cool in your about me post "A healthy nation is a wealthy nation" or something to get rid of the just another wordpress site.

If you have trouble thinking up stuff I found the WA community is always willing to help and brainstorm ideas. I really like the layout of your landing page I like how you have some nice color, big bullet points, and I know your name shows up on the landing page and top of the article but may I suggest that you also put your name at the end of the post.

To me it just adds authority and a more personal touch to it. As I read more and more articles and see your name at the bottom then I will almost feel like I know you (it really is just my opinion on this). The paragraphs are broken up nicely but maybe you should add some more images?

Theres a ton of free images you can search for when editing your post. Maybe for example your job seeking post could have an image of a guy holding his head looking frustrated, then the middle of your post an image of something else relevant to your overall post or a specific paragraph and then at the end a happy image maybe a smiling guy with a caption saying found the job etc.

It might also serve you to have maybe a few bold headers as discussed in the training. You know, something to divide up or highlight different ideas.

I didn't pay much attention to these until the training here at WA. Now when I read a post I feel like it's in bite sized pieces when theres bold headers throughout the post.

Last thing is maybe add a link to something that your affiliated with. If your going through the bootcamp maybe you are promoting WA which I think would be a fantastic fit to your site because the life someone builds here can really translate into a better life.

I think WA would be the perfect link for you to include in your posts also if you use WA images that would help break up your paragraphs with more visuals.

I guess that's it I hope you receive this post in the manner in which it is intended. I mean no insult or negativity at all. I just want to be a part of helping everyone out that is asking for it and hope my 2 cents can help you out.

Im trying to dress up this specific page on my site so if you have ideas please let me know. I'd like to know what would make you click on a specific link when your reading about something.

Thank you
Aaron

https://bestaffiliateideas.com/how-to-increase-your-unique-content-100-fold-easy-not-trick
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AlanJE Premium
Hi Thomas, I left you a comment, its a great site, Best Alan
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DonnieK2 Premium
Thomas54 I have a question for you, how are you planning on tying job searching and healthy eating together over the life of your website? What is the direction you are going with this?
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DecAnt Premium
Okay, so I have been working flat out trying to churn out content on my new site. For example, https://goalstalgia.com/the-first-premier-league-season-remembered

I am sure there are loads of things I can do to improve, but I want to prioritise. So I would be really interested to hear what issues stick out for you kind reviewers.

FYI, I anticipate that I will aim for affiliate links related to classic soccer merchandise, such as shirts.

I will be delighted to offer feedback on your site in return. Thanks
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Bonfan Premium
well, this one is going to take someone with great expertise to suggest some upgrades. Maybe Kyle would look at it. I loved everything about it. I really have no suggestions only praise. I love the embedded video content, the slanted blue boxes give you the feeling of movement like you'd expect on a sports page.

You already said you were going to add soccer related links.
So yeah I'd be interested to see what type of "improvements" someone might suggest for you.

Thank you
Aaron

Heres a link to a page of mine i'd like to dress up so any suggestions you may have would be great.

https://bestaffiliateideas.com/how-to-increase-your-unique-content-100-fold-easy-not-trick
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monspaben Premium
Hey all, I've just started Lesson 3 about making money so no affiliate links or ads yet. But I'd love to hear comments. We are doing it a bit different from most everyone - we aren't targeting one specific item but rather right now blogs about various topics. Some of these I will be able to add links to (once I learn about it) and we do have plans of having some of our posts targeted to specific products. We figured we would do it this way to keep it interesting and to keep Google interested. I just checked and it's been only 2 weeks since Google indexed us but we have almost 90 views on every page. In fact the latest one we posted just today already has 90 views, so I feel like we may be doing something right? Anyway, honest opinions please!

www.mediamusesca.com
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Vickic3 Premium
Hi Mon. I am doing something similar with my website - and it is working as is yours.
Keep up the great work
Vicki
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Jadatherapy Premium
Hi Monspaben,

Just went over to your website and left a comment. Love the look and feel of your site. Keep up the good work.

http://healthynaturally.siterubix.com/what-are-the-health-benefits-of-oregano
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monspaben Premium
Thanks so much, it's such a learning process.
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JSimmons3 Premium
Great website overall it looks good the images match the topic and I really don't see anything that was off. Keep up the good work.
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jjwahl44 Premium
Tracy & Yvonne,
Looking at your website, it is interesting. I did find you both unique and definitely a lot of randomness from Star Trek to pets to vacations. I enjoyed this article the most, about your road trip on HWY 1. I live in Redding, CA and have done that same road trip before. Staying at Bodego Bay and going to the "The Birds" restaurant then heading north to Fort Bragg, seeing the Redwoods and then off to Eureka. Very beautiful and fun drive (and windy :)). Reading this brought back many memories for me as it was a special trip for me when my parents came to visit me.

I think you have a great start here but I will say your website is a little to random for me. My brain is more linear so I like the main topic/niche when coming to a website. I know this will work for some people as their brains are different. It's not that I didn't enjoy it, just not sure what would bring me back. Another question to think about is how are you going to make money? I didn't see any affiliate links which would mean not much of a source of income. Also, please make your pictures bigger!!!! It was hard for me to see the beauty of what you were posting and made me less into your story.

Please do not take my criticism to hard above, I did enjoy many parts of it! I know your just getting started and figuring out what you want to go with your business, again I think you have a great beginning! Keep going and don't give up, more and more people will come and new ways of making money will be found!

Hope this helps and stay blessed!

Jesse
http://getabetteroption.com/
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monspaben Premium
thank you so much for your honest critique - hearing that it brought back a memory made me smile as that is what we want to do. I am currently on the lesson to now add myself to two affiliate programs (just added myself to two affiliate networks). So hopefully I'll be starting to add some links that might start earning some money.

I decided to start with a random one like this to get used to writing in the first place and to get the hang of all of this. I'm already now beginning to think of specific niches and may be creating new domains specific to one niche but pretty sure I will be keeping this one too.

Thank you again - honest critique can only help me be better!

Tracy
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amc20414 Premium
Hey everyone! I am building out my website in the athlete diet and recovery niche. The link to my website is below. Please leave comments on my actual website, or on this thread tell me what you like and what you think needs some improvement (site design/ navigation/ etc). Thank y'all!
http://allthingsathlete.com/
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Jadatherapy Premium
HI
One thing I would suggest is that you get your menu sorted other wise it is one long scroll down.

apart from that your website is very informative and I can see that you have been very hard at work. The rest will come with the training. But so far so good.

Here is my website, I have a lot less articles than you.

http://healthynaturally.siterubix.com/
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mattmike Premium
Very interesting article. Well put together. Lots of great information to help young gymnasts in their quest for success, Thanks, Deanna
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rigby38 Premium
You have one long page of post after post. I would change it to excerpts.
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amc20414 Premium
Thanks for the feedback... will do!
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amc20414 Premium
Thank you for the feedback!
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amc20414 Premium
Thank you for the feedback! Will go and comment on your website now.
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DarrenPitman Premium
Hi there, My niche website is football shirts. I have applied but not been accepted into affiliate programme just yet so bear in mind no links to buy football shirts just yet! Hopefully very soon though!

Would love feedback on my site though:-)

https://footballteamshirts.com/

I will be leaving feedback on at least 2 websites too.

Thank you kindly:-)
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Emendoza10 Premium
Hi, just dropped you a comment on your site. Im glad i saw this post I have a site dedicated to the same niche and i was struggling in the beginning about what to write about.

thesoccerjerseyhub.com
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DarrenPitman Premium
Thanks Esteban. I will check your site and comment back over the weekend when I am off work:-) I struggled like you knowing what to write about in this niche so I understand!

Really appreciate your comment and it seems we have both picked a great niche:-)
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amc20414 Premium
Just commented on your site! Would appreciate if you returned the favor :)

http://allthingsathlete.com/
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Jadatherapy Premium
Hi Darren

Your website is very informative and well put together.
I left a comment.

Here is my website. Would love your opinion.

http://healthynaturally.siterubix.com/
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kgordin Premium
Hi you guys!

I would really love some genuine feedback on my website/s. If you have a moment please check them out and let me know.

I feel like I have been a little repetitive trying to get out content.

Thank you and I will be happy to do the same. :)

thealldayyoga.com
uniquekitchenutensil.com
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Kschoendorf1 Premium
Your sites are nice!
on the yoga one, the blog being on the right kinda confused me, we are so trained to read left to right that I almost was confused as to what was going on. I love all your photos though very captivating and the content is great as well.
On your kitchen utensils, I love that niche very unique~ I did find it kind of bare though, maybe make a menu where people can reach all your blog posts instead of having to scroll. All in all you are on the right track
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SirDantes Premium
Left you a comment. The only Feedback I can give is that, try and make some of your take-away points standout with different format or fonts. You can also use the site quotation marks in WP

Here is my link, looking forward to your comment and feedback
https://mysimplelivn.com/how-to-release-stress-6-common-activities/
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Kschoendorf1 Premium
site quotations where is that located in WP, thanks for the feedback. I am reading your site now!
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Kschoendorf1 Premium
Your site is very well put together, I really don't have anything to complain about. I loved your article about releasing stress very informative.
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SirDantes Premium
I would love your comment about the article please, I'm checking yours out at the moment.
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kgordin Premium
Yes okay! Thank you so much for the feedback. I can definitely work with that.

I really appreciate it too so thanks again. I will check out yours as well :)
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kgordin Premium
Great thank you! I will definitely work on that :)
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kgordin Premium
Hey, I just read your article. It was great very well written.

I went to leave a comment and I had to sign up to be a member on your page. I'm not crazy about that feature but I'm sure a lot of people will enjoy it.

Thanks!
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SweetAngel Premium
My website has now grown big enough to bring on a partner. My vision is to help people with depression and anxiety and parents (especially mums) trying to juggle everything in their lives. It's all about learning how to create balance and harmony in your life. Wellness, Lifestyle, travel and tips on how to love what you do, follow your passion and start your own business

I would love your feedback


www.sweetangelcleaning.com

Jodie
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tinaandjohn5 Premium
Hello Jodie,
I left you feedback on your site

Tina:)
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Ers32 Premium
Jodie,

Wow! I love this quote: "Take charge of your life. Don’t be afraid. Live the life you’ve always wanted. Chase those dreams. Love, laugh, play. Be proud of yourself!
Recharge your batteries and see your entire life becoming beautiful, one day at a time".

Great website! I just have one thing to say, the main photo with the lady reading I do not get that Sweet Angel Cleaning vibe. You may need to mediate on it.

I would love for you to give me feedback too.

Website: https://my-health-benefits-of-essential-oils.com/

God Bless,
Emily
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Kate1984 Premium
Hi Jodie, I really like the look of your website as well as the content (both in terms of writing and organization). The paragraphs are appropriate lengths with enough subheadings to make it easy to follow. In particular, I enjoyed "How to Flow with Sensitivity" and found the tips really useful. I also like the banner image. However, I found the name of your website confusing as it immediately made me think of housecleaning services. As soon as I read the tagline and visited the website, I understood that you meant energy cleaning, but you might want to reconsider the website name since some people base their decision on whether or not to visit a website on that factor alone.
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SweetAngel Premium
Yes, I fully understand with my name. It started as a cleaning business and it still is one, but used it in this situation as 'cleansing' or 'energy cleaning/clearing. I have bought lots of domain names to play around with and will sell the ones I have no need for. A work in progress :)

Jodie
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Mitala Premium
Hello guys. I would like to get some relevant comments on a post I just made on my website . Please follow the link and drop me some comments in my comments section .
When you are done, kindly leave me your link here so that I can return the favor.
Thanks in advance :)

http://newdayaffiliate.com/how-do-you-start-a-blog-and-make-money-all-you-need-to-know
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tinaandjohn5 Premium
I left you feedback on your site.


Take Care,
Tina P
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JoseReyes9 Premium
Hello Wealthy Affiliate Family!

I have few awesome posts within my website that is targeted in the affiliate marketing training niche but excuse my most recently published posts, it still has no visuals or affiliate links, not yet!

But if you like, feel free to browse through it and give me your most honest and valuable opinions and ideas on what may improve the value of my website!

I will definitely be going through each site feedback individually and I am looking forward to repay the favor for all of those who provide me with their site feedback for my website as a thank you so that I can be notified when you did it so that I can visit your website and do the same for all of you!

I am in the affiliate marketing training niche:
https://www.newaffiliatesguide.com
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tinaandjohn5 Premium
Your site said there is an error and it is not private. I was unable to access it.

Tina
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Ers32 Premium
Jose,

I tried to view your website, but when I clicked on your link I get a message. The message reads," This site is not secure". Check with Kyle about it.
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Mitala Premium
Hello guys, I would like some relevant comments on a post I just made on my website. Please leave me some comments in the comment section on that post.
When you are done, kindly leave me your link here so that I can return the favor .
Thanks in advance.

http://newdayaffiliate.com/how-do-you-start-a-blog-and-make-money-all-you-need-to-know
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EliaDesoba Premium
Hi everyone, I am building a website in the classic literature niche. I never asked any feedback but now is the time. My site is in french but don't be scared, you'll find the translation plugin on the top right corner (even if I think it is not that good and that it makes a lot of mistakes (how can I improve that?). Feel free to read and leave a comment, I'll make sure to return it if you provide me with the link :)

https://litteraturepourtous.com
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jffinley2 Premium
The site looks great, I like the slideshow at the top. The stories are well written. Don't worry about the translator, I think it did just fine.
Nice job on your site.
Jim
http://mycleanseplan.com
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Vickic3 Premium
Bonjour Elia
I have left a comment on your website
Here is my link if you could return the favor, please
https://coolchange4u.com/coaching-online-funny-questions-people-ask

Merci a toi
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SydneyMac Premium
Hey WA Community! I've got some new blog posts and I would love to have some comments for ones that would be of interest to you. Also, if you have any constructive criticisms for my site I'd love to have them here.
I will, of course, return the favour!
Regards,
Sydney
https://thecrueltyfreeface.com
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Kate1984 Premium
Hi Sydney, just left a comment on your blog about summer reading. I would recommend making the title more specific to your blog, though, like "Cruelty Free Summer Reading" rather than just "Summer Reading" which is rather general. Also, although the blog post about water is definitely aligned with healthy living, I thought it was a little off-topic for the website. Overall, I do like the look of your website and the photos of animals definitely tug on the heartstrings. As a vegetarian myself, I certainly support your mission. This is my website: https://www.generatemagic.com/
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jffinley2 Premium
Hi Sydney, I just read your article on What’s New in Cosmetic Animal Testing Laws and Regulations?
I thought the article was well written. It does point out a lot of recent legislation.
I did leave a question in the comment, not sure if you covered that in a previous article.
The summer reading title threw me off.
Not really sure what the water article has to do with your site?

Jim
http://mycleanseplan.com
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SydneyMac Premium
Hi Kate, thanks so much for your comments and suggestions. I will definitely make the change to my reading post as it's a great suggestion.
I will need to re-think the water post; you're the second person confused by it.
I appreciate your input, thanks again! I'll go to yours shortly.
Regards,
Sydney
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SydneyMac Premium
Thanks Jim, I appreciated your question in my comments and I hope I answered it to your satisfaction. There is info on that elsewhere on my site but it never hurts to have it in a Q and A.

Oh dear, I got the same input from two people on 2 of my posts. I'll rename the reading post and rethink the water post. I really appreciate the constructive criticism as I sometimes get lost in my own forest. I'll have a look at your site shortly.

Regards, Sydney
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SydneyMac Premium
Hi Jim,
Your site is clear and concise. I like your ads down the right side and the format/layout you built fits your content really well.

You have great body toxin and cleansing posts. It would be nice to have something on gut health and its impact on the rest of the body sometime in the future.

My only other comment is that I would switch the Where to Start and About Jim in the menu. Clearing the body of toxins is your first recommended step so I think having it at the start rather than the end of the menu makes more sense to me.

Well done on your 25 lbs BTW!

Sydney
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jffinley2 Premium
Thanks, I had that there originally, but I must have moved it. That also sounds like a good article for the future.
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SydneyMac Premium
Hi Kate, I just left a comment on your blog.

Your site is beautiful. I love how you write and how you've separated your blog posts under different topics, great idea!

I didn't expect such inspirational content based on the title of the site. I was sort of expecting a tarot card reading type blog if that makes sense. One thing I would do, and Kyle touched on this in training, is to adjust the position of the first photo on your welcome page. It has to do with the picture taking up the entire screen and you need to scroll down to see the first words of text.

I'm wondering if you can adjust the timing of the email pop-up. It shows up just as I'm getting into that article and I'm wondering if it should be delayed a bit so it's not interrupting the reader so early in.

I hope that is of help to you.

Sydney
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Jadatherapy Premium
Love the look of your website. A lot of engaging visuals, some so cute. easy to locate articles.

I have commented on one of your articles. You have been busy.
I have been inspired by your website.

healthynaturally.siterubix.com

Regards
Jennifer
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Vickic3 Premium
Hi Sydney

What a gorgeous website - Very informative also. I left a comment for you and here is my link if you could do the same for me, please.
https://coolchange4u.com/coaching-online-funny-questions-people-ask
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Kate1984 Premium
Thanks, Sydney! Great tips, and I definitely agree about the pop-up.
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SydneyMac Premium
Hi Vicki, thanks so much and I just left a comment on your site as well.
I enjoyed going through your site, there is a lot to take in and your main photo is dreamy!

If I may and you don't mind, I have one constructive comment. I noticed some grammar/spelling issues which is something that I struggle with catching after spending so much time writing. I ended up downloading Grammarly which has been a big help. It's shocking how much I miss when proofreading my own material!

Sydney
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SydneyMac Premium
Hi Jennifer, thank you and I just left a comment and question for you.

I really like your site and I think it's a terrific niche! Once you're ready to get some Affiliate links there is some great opportunity.

You're posting on Guinea Hen Weed is compelling and I would've bought some on the spot haha.

Keep up the great work!

Sydney
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Kate1984 Premium
Hi everyone, I write in the personal development genre and I would appreciate feedback on the website as a whole as well as the blog posts (mainly the two most recent ones). I'm am curious how well the content aligns with the product I'm promoting and how effective my CTA is. This is the URL: https://www.generatemagic.com/
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Mitala Premium
I think you write beautifully, with that kind of writing I hope you author a book someday about creating magic within oneself. I think the website can look livelier though.

Kindly visit my website and leave me a comment on this post.

http://newdayaffiliate.com/is-wealthy-affiliate-a-scam-review-from-an-insider
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Kate1984 Premium
Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to look at my website. I read your review of Wealthy Affiliate and I think it is very persuasive. In particular, I like how you compare your experience of WA with other affiliate programs and point out how in terms of costs and support, WA is far superior. I think your review would benefit from even more specific examples such as this one, especially since you have tried other affiliate programs so you are in a good position to compare and contrast. I would also reword the title because currently it's a little confusing. I'd suggest rewording it as "Is Wealthy Affiliate a Scam? A Review from an Insider". Hope that helps!
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Kate1984 Premium
also left a comment on your post
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Jbicknell1 Premium
a nice clean website, with lots of information, however, I do feel that your popup comes up too soon and too many times, I think it might put people off, also a few more images that are relevant to the content, it will liven it up, everything else I thought was excellent. Keep the good work up.
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Kate1984 Premium
Thanks for the feedback. I completely agree about the popup, it annoys me too! I'm not sure how to fix it, but I will reach out to Sumo for help because I think it's through them that I originally set up the pop-up.
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SydneyMac Premium
Hey WA Community! I've got some new blog posts and I would love to have some comments for ones that would be of interest to you. Also, if you have any constructive criticisms for my site I'd love to have them here.
I will, of course, return the favour!
Regards,
Sydney
https://thecrueltyfreeface.com
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SirDantes Premium
I left you a comment :)
Here is some feedback as well
Your page is amazing and you have great content.
I noticed that you have a large blank space after your "footer" on the homepage. Perhaps you can make it shorter.

Also, your ads run only on your Hompage but not on the posts. You can fix that with a plugin called "Ad Inserter". It enables your ads to be seen on all your pages and posts.

And your ads appear to be bigger than your post excerpts on the homepage making them thin and long. Check the dimensions for both ads and posts/pages and resize them maybe.

I hope you found the above useful. Here is my page, you can pick any of them and have at it.

https://mysimplelivn.com

Thank you :)
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SydneyMac Premium
Awesome ideas for me to tweak. I appreciate it very much! Off to check your comment and I'll have a look at your site as well.
Thanks a bunch!
Sydney
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SydneyMac Premium
Hi Edmond, I liked your site content, and I commented on the new language post. Your categories are all relevant to your niche site, and everything flows nicely.

Some constructive criticism:
Your logo is difficult to see. It would be nice to be able to see your "Simple Living" title more prominently.

I was a bit confused by the Best Buy logo at the top of your homepage posts.

I like how your other affiliate links run down the side of your posts; they are very accessible and nicely displayed.

I noticed the odd minor grammatical error, nothing serious. I started using Grammarly in my writings as a double check. It's so easy to miss the occasional oops. I was managing to miss some even after numerous proofreads, and Grammarly helps a ton!

Hopefully, this has been useful to you.

Regards, Sydney
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RAMarketing Premium
Hey Folks! I am building a website in the home recording studio niche and am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website.

https://tech-savvymusician.com/

In turn, I will be more than happy to offer whatever feedback I can on your sites! Just leave a reply below and I will gladly check it out!
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SirDantes Premium
I left you a comment and here is my feedback.
I found the Header to be too large and it makes the reading screen very small and hard to read, at least for me. Maybe tweak the header size a bit and also have it be transparent or scroll with the page.

Also, I think if you can the images of the items you are talking about in the posts, it will be very helpful rather than just clicking the link to find out.

And the homepage is rather long when scrolling down, maybe some form of pagination will be a good idea.

I hope these are useful to you.
Here is my link, please feel free to leave a comment and also any feedback is greatly appreciated

https://mysimplelivn.com/how-to-be-involved/
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RAMarketing Premium
Thanks for the feedback! I made all those fixes, and it seems to flow much better now. I also really appreciated your comment - hopefully my answers helps you out!
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RAMarketing Premium
Just commented on your post. Here is some feedback.

Towards the end of the article, there is a header "Knowledge is Power", a pretty big picture, and then the text for that section. Perhaps making the photo a little smaller, or readjusting it to populate after the article text. Try tweaking it a little bit for better readability.

Keep up the great work!
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HudsonS Premium
Fellow members of the grind and WA family! I could really use some feedback, not only on this recent post but in general as well! Please let me know if any links are acting up and if the content is genuinely helpful. (I have not used any affiliate links yet, only links to other sites, posts within my site, and my book).

Any feedback and/or comments are greatly appreciated. Please let me know if you need some in return and I would be honored to oblige!

http://notjustadegree.com/common-mistakes-while-taking-online-classes-in-college

Let's grow wealthy together!
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SirDantes Premium
I left you a comment on the page, here is my feedback.
You have great information. what I saw is that, the colors, both background and posts are somewhat the same. Perhaps, you can add more colors to distinguish or have a variety.

Also on your posts, some key points/call to action tips like "Also, put your phone on “Do Not Disturb” for an hour while you grind. Then, give yourself fifteen minutes at the most to check everything before going back in the dark." should be in a different format. Either Bold and Italics or H1, 2 or 3 formats.

You can also use site quotations to make them stand out so people that like to skim through posts for tips will find them easily.

Your links are working great, but the last link does not open in a new tab. The inboxPause link does open in a new tab.

Lastly, I found that you do not have a footer. Not sure where you are in the training, but you should add a footer to the page so you can add you about me and Privacy policy, as well as a Contact us and some Social media, Share Icons in the footer.

I hope you find this useful, here is my link. Thank you and I look forward to your comment :)

https://mysimplelivn.com/achieve-your-goals-easily-the-right-mindset/
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Crysta1809 Premium
Hi,

I quickly went through your articles in a general way. I like the way you are communicating with your audience. The way you are delivering the info is sincere and I can feel that you really care about your audience.

I think once you have more articles, then you should start to categorise them so they are in a more manageable format. The other thing is that I thought we are allowed to use images on Unsplash without crediting the authors? Yes, I know it's a way to show courtesy to the authors, but I find it a bit distracting when I am reading your article. Anyway, it's just my humble opinion.

If you have some spare time, would you mind quickly have a look on mine in a general way as well? I am not a native English speaker, so I am always worried about my grammars. If possible, could you please help me to proofread one of my articles (anyone), just to check if I am making myself clear to my audience? I would really appreciate it!

https://thecakeblogger.com/

Many thanks,
Crystal
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HudsonS Premium
Thank you for your attention to detail, effort and advice! I loved your post and left a comment!
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HudsonS Premium
Thank you for your insights and I will definitely use them! I will have to pick and choose with the Unsplash images because I feel bad not giving credit, but if you feel it is distracting then others probably feel similarly!

I could not tell that you are not a native English speaker! Your site is very well done and while I did not go through every post, your grammar is great! The ONE thing I found is that the title of the post, "Top 5 Turntable" seems like it should have the plural form of "Turntables". Other than that, nothing jumped out at me and I enjoyed seeing the many instruments and techniques for creating cakes that I never knew of before!
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Crysta1809 Premium
Thank you for your feedback!

I am so relieved to know that I am doing okay! I will fix that title soon!:)
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marbleswords Premium
Hi All! I have a new (longish) post up and I've included an affiliate link. My niche is writing and the post is a review of a popular novel writing software. Comments on the post would be great. Also, any feedback here is appreciated, but specifically, could you tell where/what was clickable and did it actually take you to the buy page for the product. I've tested it and it seems to work: http://writethefirstword.com/novel-writing-software-review-scrivener

Please leave your link and I'll comment back. :)
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Rama132005 Premium
Your review was very well written. As for you links, I was able to click them. I would recommend that you edit how the links open up. Have them open in a new window so you don't lose your consumers/readers. I also left you a comment. Please delete the first one, as I did not complete one of sentences.

If you want, you can check my site out. It's all about learning by the means of play.

https://justsensorydiscoveries.com

If you don't like any of my comments feel free to let me know so I can do them again. I wish you all the best. I can't wait for the release of your novel!
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marbleswords Premium
Thank you! I removed the comment you asked me to remove. ;) I commented on your site as well.

Thanks for the great call out on the links not opening in a new tab. I've fixed that now.
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Vickic3 Premium
Hi Marsha
Have left a comment and it would be great if you could do the same for me
https://coolchange4u.com/coaching-and-the-benefits-how-will-your-life-change
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Rama132005 Premium
Yay!!! Thank you!!!!
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marbleswords Premium
Thank you and done!

I noticed you didn't mention a cost for the coaching programs you mentioned. It says something like "will cost $..." I didn't know if that was intentional.
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JackyKong Premium
Hi, I chose the health niche in my site and am still growing it . Just barely 1 week old .

Need your opinion : Should the homepage be a page where you write stuff / a collection of latest posts / or a static about you page ?

Would really appreciate honest feedback on how I can improve further.
https://healthafter40.com/

Jacky
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HannaC Premium
Hi Jacky, you have a great start! Very good niche (we have almost the same niche, but a decade older:
https://healthywomenover50.com/ (i started this site more than 2 months ago)

First of all, would you like a magazine-ish like website? or a would you like a straight-forward, clean site which you have right now.

In my opinion for a health blog, i find it nice to have a static page which will include latest posts, your categories, or things you have in your site. This will take a lot of pictures though, to entice readers.

But, i think, the most important thing is you have good contents to share. That`s what really matters.

I hope you find this helpful somehow:)
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nate6640 Premium
Hi Jacky, you've done a lot for your website being created barely a week ago. Major props!
1. I recommend your home page listing only a couple recent posts.
2. Also, you can create your own simple logo for your site thats easily recognized. I used https://logomakr.com for mine.
3. If you look on my website, I only use 3 colors that match my logo, that are easy on the eyes and blend well together. Like gray, white, and orange.

I really recommend having an overall theme for your site that's again, easy on the eyes and is pleasant to look at.
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JackyKong Premium
I am so glad you saw my message and reached out . It’s very reassuring to know someone in a similar niche as me . Means I am in the right path . Do you mind going through my site to see if it’s ok ? Could use some honest feedback .
www.healthafter40.com

Thanks !
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JackyKong Premium
Thanks for your comments .
Will start building a logo .
Can I take a look at your site to have a feel on what I can do on my own site ?
Please give me your site url
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Irishjohn Premium
I'm disabled and don't know how to start & Not looking for Sympathy as my spell checker can give me that, I just want something I can show my family I can still make cash, even though I'm living from my disability pay slip to pay slip.
can some PLEASE Help/Advise me??.
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brettbrtsk Premium
HI
im just wondering if you have started going through the training?
its the best place to start and if after that be sure to drop me a line and ill help if i can
Brett
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Robert-A Premium
You have been here since last December, have you actually started the training and progressed through it.
I only ask because it really is step by step and you are shown how to get started creating a website and all that goes with it.

You will have to give some more specific info.
Robert-A
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Irishjohn Premium
no, I only went through the first few training packages. but being in pain 24/7 its hard for me to focus?. sorry.
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Robert-A Premium
No need to apologize, we all have our cross to bear.
Mine is RA for the last 4 years and eventually it will put me in a wheelchair but until that day comes I will soldier on.

What do you need to get started specifically?
Robert
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ShylaE Premium
https://sinceremommy.com

Here I have listed a link to my new website. I've been working on it for just under 3 weeks. I've accomplished quite a bit but I really would like some honest feedback. I have done a lot on my own before I joined wealthy affiliate but I am going through the training step by step anyhow to make sure I didn't miss anything critical to my success. Please have a look.

Best Regards.
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jffinley2 Premium
First, very interesting article. A couple of things that I others have pointed out to me is to only show a part of the article and use "read more". Keeps your page from getting too long when you have more articles.

I am also not a fan of the justification or block style. The words get too spread out. May be harder to read and doesn't give a natural neat appearance.

In your second paragraph "According to Scientific American, children ages below 2 and under should not have". I stumbled over this one, children ages below 2 and under?

Hope this helps,
Jim
http://mycleanseplan.com
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ShylaE Premium
Thank you very much. I updated some things and I will fix those grammatical errors.
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Lazarus-n Premium
Hey WA folk!

I just published a new article on my website about the top shoe brands for men

If any of you could take a look at it and give me your opinion then I would highly appreciate it! I will, of course, return the favour.

thanks in advance!

https://boxesforshoes.com/nikos-guides-top-shoe-brands-for-men
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RobertDoyle Premium
Just left a comment for you.
Robert
http://mystorybookdolls.com/
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Heidi9 Premium
I just left you a comment on your page. That was an interesting article. I think your page looks nice. Relevant images and it's easy to read and follow.

I have a new post that needs some comments as well if you wouldn't mind returning the favor.

https://theunexpectedhomeschooler.com/the-homeschool-buyers-co-op-11-reasons-to-join
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myrealityck Premium
Hello! Your article is great and informative. Overall, I liked it very much. I did notice a few typos...in the first few paragraphs and in your final words paragraph. I posted a comment for you. If you wouldn't mind reviewing my newest post for an overall opinion, I'd appreciate your feedback.
https://myplusgals.com/top-rated-smart-bottles-get-hydrated-drink-smart/
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Lazarus-n Premium
hey Robert!

i appreciate the comment and i went and left you one too
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Lazarus-n Premium
Hey Heidi

Thanks and of course
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Lazarus-n Premium
of course
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RobertDoyle Premium
Supper! Appreciate it much!
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Eric33 Premium
Greetings to all, I just finished my latest post. I would really appreciate someone who is in the same niche as myself to review the post for me. If you would like I can do the same for you.
I am in the Hemp niche.
https://wearehempstore.com/industrial-hemp
Regards
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rosay95 Premium
What pic should I use for this page? I was thinking of people doing creative things but I could also use a pic with crafts and stuff. Also, should I add a vid? The vids are on the tabs of this page. I'm not completely happy with the description, I do need some opinions on that too, and I will most definitely be appreciative with any feedback. I'll return the favor too!
http://girly4me.com/diy-any-age
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ThongN Premium
Hmm...maybe a picture with words "fun creative crafts" and the background of that picture might some tools...Oh sorry, I'm talking what I would design in Canva.com website. It's free to sign up and design for your own. Just use free account is enough I guess :) I suggest you should go to Canva and take a look :)

About the video, you can go to Youtube and find the button share or embed code-> that would allow you to copy the link of the video and then past the URL code to your website. I know one channel on Youtube that would help you as a resource. I think the name of that channel is 5 minutes of crafts for girls, or main channel "5-minutes crafting"

Or you can use your phone and record a short video by yourself.

If I were you, I would like to take all pictures for every step that I craft -.- Sorry I'm not very "pretty" and crafted hand so just take pictures. And you as a lady, you can record a video with your hand and your face while you are crafting :) anyway your domain is girly for me :3 so I have little expected to see some pinkly, cute stuff and some make you unique :)

Good luck with design on Canva
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deeanne59 Premium
Love the site, and love your template! I agree that say a craft picture, or maybe a picture of craft items or tools might bring across your idea of DIY.
Especially since it is for kids...something colorful. Awesome job!
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rosay95 Premium
Thank you (:
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rosay95 Premium
Thank you so much (: I will most definitely try and use it.
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ThongN Premium
your welcome :3 good luck with your design :)
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SweetAngel Premium
Good morning everyone. I have been really quiet here because I have been very busy taking my website to the next level and have brought on a partner to help with SEO and to get my google rankings up much higher.
Could everyone please take a look at my site and let me know what you all think.

www.sweetangelcleaning.com

Thanks

Jodie
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deeanne59 Premium
Awesome site. I was especially interested on your post about a minimalist lifestyle. Our apartment is just cluttered with "memorabilia" and junk! I need to learn to thin out and cut back :-)
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Majorka Premium
Hello everybody! I build blog posts about book reviews that is gonna be educational. It is hard to write as english is not my mother tongue language and I am aware that I need to stretch my mind and brain in order to be a good writer
I just wrote today my fourth post, and please feel free to wisit my site, and let me know whatever is on your mind: https://fraudiller.wordpress.com
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Majorka Premium
I will review your site in return even though don"t know how has to look like. Many many thanks!
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RussellO1 Premium
Hi guys,
I linked two of my posts from my website to Google+. Recently when I revisited those sites I realized that I have two pics at the top now, instead of one.

I tried deleting it but I'm unable to do so.

Is there anything that I did wrong? How can I correct this?

Thanks for your help.

Russell
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Triblu Premium
Hey Russell,

Your having not shared your website URL on your profile under your "Follow Me on" section makes it difficult to help you when I cannot view what you are describing.

However, if you inserted an image at the very top of your post PLUS you added a Featured Image, then this is why you have 2 images displayed.

Always kack up your website BEFORE you begin making changes: Then... sign into your Dashboard... locate the post you are referring to... click to edit that post... click on the Text tab... locate the script between the greater than and less than symbols... highlight everything from the greater than to the less than symbol and delete it... then check Preview to see that nothing else beyond your image was deleted... then click Publish and all should be okay.

Example of what an image link looks like shown in screen print below.

Hope this helps you.
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RussellO1 Premium
Hi Trish,

Thank you very much for answering my question. I will follow your suggestions and see how it goes and let you know.

I haven't yet learned how to share my website URL under my 'Follow Me". As soon as I have figured that out I will do so.
Russell
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Coucka Premium
Hi WA.

I have written a blog on an amazing opportunity to work from home fundraising. The money is good and you will be helping out your community.
I would love some feedback on this article or a comment on the website would be awesome too.
https://wealth.karencouchman.com/abc-fundraising-review

I am happy to do the same for you. Just leave your URL and I will look at it ASAP.

Cheers Coucka
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Priya15 Premium
Hi Coucka
I have left a comment on your website.

I loved your website and it is very useful for people aspiring to become successful in the online world (like me !). I read your post on millionaire mindset too and it gave me a lot of motivation ! I liked the iceberg effect - didn't know about it!
Priya
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Coucka Premium
Thank Priya
All the best with your website. I think you are onto a winner.
Cheers Coucka
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Coucka Premium
https://wealth.karencouchman.com/abc-fundraising-review

Hi WA.

I have written a blog on an amazing opportunity to work from home fundraising. The money is good and you will be helping out your community.
I would love some feedback on this article or a comment on the website would be awesome too.

I am happy to do the same for you. Just leave your URL and I will look at it ASAP.

Cheers Coucka
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amp987 Premium
Hey everyone I just made a new article on the German occupation of Czechoslovakia by Hitler in World War 2 and I would really appreciate it if one of you can check it out and leave me a review of how I did and what I can do to make it better and just in all offer constructive criticism.

Here is the link to the article I hope you enjoy it and learn something from it GOD Bless.
https://worldwariiuntold.com/world-war-2-timeline-the-german-occupation-of-czechoslovakia/
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Coucka Premium
https://wealth.karencouchman.com/how-to-use-tailwind-for-pinterest-instagram-free

Hi WA,

I have a post on how to use Tailwind for FREE to schedule pins for Pinterest and Instagram. If you leave a comment on my website I will be happy to do the same for you.

Just leave your URL where you would like a comment and I will get to it ASAP.

Cheers Coucka
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Lilsusk Premium
Comment posted and great article and video. I'm going to be checking out Tailwind as I start getting more into pinterest.

Would love if you could post one on mine as well. http://notsosimpleliving.com/how-to-lose-the-last-10-pounds-for-real
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Coucka Premium
Hi,
I left you a comment on your website.
I only found one typo at the end of your blog in this sentence " If you force yourself into a diet, you will likely wind up HANGRY, annoyed and upset. " I am guessing your mean HUNGRY.

It was a great article and very revealing of you as a person. You put your soul on the table and that is a brave thing to do.
You have a nice clean website that is easy to follow. Great job!

Peace and Love Coucka
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eliteam1 Premium
very interesting site.well done
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SophiaMia Premium
https://goodnightmybaby.com

This is my website that is primarily geared toward baby sleep but lately I have branched out to other baby topics, but closely related towards baby sleep / baby care

I would like some feedback, please and leave me your links and I will retun feedback to you too :) thank you
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JohnTurco Premium
Hi Sophia,
I took a look at your site.

I love the way you draw in the expectant and new mothers with interesting topics and good content. Your hard work shines through.

I think in your affiliate program, you have "Cellercise" in 2 places on the same page. I would replace one with another product. Maybe select one good quality mid-priced baby stroller ?

Your Baby Corner Amazon link at the bottom should get you some good business conversion. Perfect banner for your niche....
Good Luck!

Please return the favor. I could use some comments on the site content. Please post your comments on any of the pages or posts, rather than this forum..

Thanks!
John
stopforlife.com
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SophiaMia Premium
Hi John, thank you so much for your feedback.

You know you have a great website so you don't need feedback but I went ahead and left you two comments. I appreciate your help! Thanks again!
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JoelMangin Premium
hello everyone,
I just started my website on the coffee and tea niche. I would really appreciate if you can give me some feedback ( feel free to post your website url as well and i will be pleased to review it).
If you feel like commenting some posts, it would be great!

https://everythingaboutcoffeeandtea.com/

Thanks and cheers guys!
Joel
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Joes946 Premium
Hi Joel.
Your website contains loads of great information. Everything I ever wanted to know about coffee and tea!
Only one suggestion: Ad links to your articles for additional resources and evidence.
Always use the spell and grammar checker.
Great website and great success on your journey.
Joe
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JoelMangin Premium
Hey joes,

Thanks for your feedback I really appreciated!
I got to confess, English is not my native language and building this website is an amazing challenge in that sense!

Do you know any website where i can have my post checked on syntax and grammar ?

I hope it wasn't too difficult to read, you can be honest with me :), let me know ;).

Have a good one!
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Joes946 Premium
Hi Joel.
I totally understand.. Before you submit, in the upper right corner is a button with ABC on it. It does a pretty good job of catching most spelling and grammar errors. I can imagine me trying to write in French! Another excellent tool is: grammarly.com. Little pricey but is good.
Let me know if I can help..
Best wishes.
Joe
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chender684 Premium
Your site is coming along nicely. I like this theme.

You do need to add an Affiliate Disclosure to your site.

You Menu buttons all work properly.

Your pictures are relevant to your posts.

Definitely try to check your article with spell and grammar checkers so it looks more professional. There are plugins for wordpress that will help with that.

Keep it up and follow the training step-by-step and you will do great.
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ceplan Premium
Start by trying the free version of grammarly.com
If you can afford it take the paying one. I think it will be worthed.
I am actually using the free one plus the ABC spell check in SiteContent.
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Lilsusk Premium
Love this! I did not know how many options there were - Comment posted on how to pick a coffee machine.
Would appreciate the help as well
http://notsosimpleliving.com/how-to-lose-the-last-10-pounds-for-real
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JoelMangin Premium
Thanks, Chender684!
I added grammarly plugins, it's doing a pretty good job!
I am grateful you took some time to check out my website!

All the best to you!
Joel
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JoelMangin Premium
Just returned the favor! ;)
Take care!
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JoelMangin Premium
Thanks, ceplan, I installed it yesterday: it's great!
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Sylvii Premium
Hey guys,

I am at the beginning of building my website in motivation, self-improvement niche which is my own personal interest (love this topic) and am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website.

Here is my domain: http://lifechangingsteps.com

Many thanks!
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tpietro91 Premium
Hey Sylvii,

I've just checked out your site. I would look at making your home page a little more visual and easier to navigate through your site and maybe a little more visual.

Tom
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Sylvii Premium
Thanks Tom for your feedback. Working on it :)
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Mommy2tucker Premium
Hello... I desperately could use some feedback on my post
https://bettersleepformommy.com/swaddling-newborn-babies-and-all-babies-the-need-to-know
I haven't gotten any feedback thus far in regards to my website and it's content so if you could take the time and help a sista out with some constructive criticism I will be sure to give you some (or just comments if you prefer).

Thank you in advanced.
Jessica
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Pattytzkh Premium
Hi Jessica
Great article, I left a comment.
Content is very rich and very informative. I found it very interesting and really enjoyed it.
The look of your Site is warm and inviting so it was easy to connect with you through your choice of colours as well as the pics (Pics are super cute). Overall, Its a great site, good layout, easy to navigate around and just a pleasure.
I wish you all the best.
Patty
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muhsayy Premium
Brought back memories. Please give a comment on https://theartisticview.com/in-honor-of-mothers-everywhere. Thanks.
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MBreece Premium
Jessica, Love the site. In the portion of why swaddle your baby. Do you really mean to say longer restless sleep? I would think you would want longer restful sleep and less restless.
While I like the purple color it feels a bit over whelming. Perhaps some blocks of background color around some of the text to break it up? Maryann
https://loreplaycorner.com/
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RileyJohnson Premium
Hey WA team! I'm a work in progress on this, but growing slowly but surely my content / website for my sustainable fashion niche. Please take a look & let me know what you think.
http://strawbana.com/

Comment your URL with your feedback and I will gladly check yours out as well and give you some feedback.

Thanks in advance!
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ecocatherine Premium
Hi, great post!

I left you a comment and would really appreciate one in return!

http://aboutgoinggreen.com/how-to-convert-to-led-lights-go-green-and-save-money

Take care,

Catherine.
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mlisbona Premium
done :)
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DennisDave Premium
Love the Concept. I find the colors a little hard to see but I am old. One thing I would change is to move your content up so you can see it when the page loads instead of having to scroll down. Good luck!
This is my URL Thanks!
drugfreeneckandbackrelief.com
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Dwyan Premium
Hi there. I like the color of your site - pink rose i like the color a lot. I love your font as well although the size is a bit challenging but its ok if you like it like that.
I think you need some more images in your posts.
That's really it because I can see it's a new site but it looks promising.
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MBreece Premium
Love the color scheme. It strikes me right away. Not sure about just the large blocks of color at the top. Would suggest either small blocks or an image with them.
Your website name and style is a great branding technique. Love it.
All of the recent comments that are showing are yours. It is possible that you replied to too many at once and over took the feed. Perhaps try to reply to people more one at a time. even if you just do it throughout the day. So their comments also show.
Here is my site for you to poke sticks at if you wish. I have tough skin.
https://loreplaycorner.com/
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Deividir Premium
Good day WA community!

I'm still on the way climbing the ladder of success, getting better and better each day. I've gone far in the past month and a half, and my website is up and running. I need your help giving your point of view, especially constructive criticism. Here is my link:

https://coopgamezone.com/

I will 100% return the favor with a constructive feedback on your website too.

Thank you. :P
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Aria-Len Premium
You're awesome and have an amazing mindset! I really like your site layout and I think you'll do a great job and your dreams will become reality as long as you continue to work at it and keep the positive attitude.
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ecocatherine Premium
Hi, great post!

I left you a comment and would really appreciate one in return!

http://aboutgoinggreen.com/how-to-convert-to-led-lights-go-green-and-save-money

Take care,

Catherine.
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Deividir Premium
You didn't leave a website for me to comment on :)
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Aria-Len Premium
I know. I sometimes just comment on blogs just to encourage and engage with others. I don't always ask for comments :-)
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mgranados2 Premium
Hi everyone,

How are you guys?

I would greatly appreciate it if I could get feedback on my overall content, and on the opt in forms for the email marketing side of things if you can please... Like what can I improve? I'm focusing on Building my list too. Leave me your link here or PM me.

http://removebackpain.com

Thank you,

Michael Granados
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Heyday Premium
Website looks fantastic and has tonnes of useful information.
The only bug-bear for me, are the pop-ups when you’re trying to read the article, but I understand why you’ve done that
Very professional looking site though
Best wishes
Heyday
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Dehghanian Premium
Hi Guys! I just published a new post on my site about 10 ways to get new email subscribers. I would appreciate feedback especially about my comments section because I keep having issues with my plugins. Any comments would be great, and I'll gladly return the favor. I'm having difficulty receiving notifications when someone replies to my threads, so feel free to PM me if you like. Thanks everyone!

http://justaddthat.com/10-unbelievable-ways-to-get-more-email-subscribers-in-minutes/
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oantoine Premium
Good Afternoon WA family. I would appreciate if you could review my site mywearwystyle.com and provide me with some feed back. In addition I just post an article titled "cute wide width sandals, where to get yours", I would be happy if you could leave a comment. I will be sure to the same. Thank you!
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Coucka Premium
https://wealth.karencouchman.com/what-is-the-millionaire-mindset-the-iceberg-effect-psychology

Hi WA,

I have written an article called What is the Millionaire mind-set?
I would love a comment on that page... or some feedback here.

I am happy to do the same for you. Just leave me your URL and I will visit your page.

Cheers Coucka
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Labman Premium
I like your article. I don't know that I would feature a scammer on my page.
This Guy Jason uses the classic " I was a struggling ..., now I'm not, look at all my expensive stuff" video to promote his product.

We see this over and over again online and anyone that is wanting to work online thinks that they can have this overnight success too. Just buy his product.

Better to paint a true picture and give them the real story.
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Coucka Premium
Do you know for a fact Jason Stone is a scammer?
Do you have any facts to back up that opinion?
I did a google business review on Jason Stone and I did not find anything negative?
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WhitneyEl Premium
hello, i would like to share my website and get some reviews, it is more of a blog site so focus your attention there, also i do not intend on making a bunch of random post as content. i research and publish what i have learned or experienced. secondly my website will be the store front from the customized items i create. i began this site in May (deleted the first site upon reaching level two, this name and layout feel better) but i very much will accept all tips of improving my ability to gain traffic.


asabovesoareyou.com
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BillMarshall Premium
hey guys and gals I am producing my new website justfairwaysandgreens.com if anyone has any thoughts on how to improve this so maximum traffic can be achieved. I would be sooo greatful. My niche is golf equipment and playing skills. I want to help people to get better and LIKE the sport before a bad round turns them of a great sport in golf
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jchapman203 Premium
You are off to a good start Bill. I think you have chosen a good niche that you are passion about. I am a lover of the sport of golf as well. I would encourage to push for a 1000 word count when you are writing your posts. I think you have a lot of good insight that would be easy for you to get to 1000 words.
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Rama132005 Premium
Hello again, I forgot to tell you all what my niche is for: http://justsensorydiscoveries.com/

My niche is: sensory toys and products. My site is geared toward helping both children and adults who may or may not be on the autism spectrum understand how to tap into and explore their senses. It is also for parents who want to explore their options of play and find new ways to engage in play with their families.
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phakacha8 Premium
Do not forget to write https. Yours was found without 's'. This is mandatory to allow visitors visiting your site.
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Rama132005 Premium
Oh, yes... Thank you!!! I can't believe I left out such vital information.
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Duhaelmardi Premium
Wow Rama what an awesome website! And a very noble cause too! Love it!
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Pattytzkh Premium
Hello, just checked out your site, and it is great. Visual is good, layout and structure. I left you a comment.

As a mum with a child who has a disability, There are not many spaces available to us where we can explore different ideas on how to overcome certain barriers online. So thank you

Here is a my post for today. If you could leave me a comment, i would much appreciate it.
http://majesticmummas.com/exercise-5-tips-to-get-you-started

Patty
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phakacha8 Premium
Very good.
:)
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Tabsmark Premium
Hi there,

Nice work you are doing.

My one thought was that your featured pictures for your posts are all different sizes. Make them the same and you will look super professional. :)

Also, your blog roll shows all your content. Your need to add the read more button in your post.

Looks like you are doing great. Have you experimented with other colours in your theme? I wondered if a bright sunny yellow wouldn't look awesome!

All the best

Tracy
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ariesight Premium
The colours are easy to the eye.
Clear paragraphs, not very long.
Enough images to complement the article but not overwhelm the user.
You may want to leave out the Categories section until you have more than one.
In general, it's a great site!
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Ers32 Premium
Hello WA Community! I am building a website on the health benefits of essential oils. I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website. Here is my domain: https://my-health-benefits-of-essential-oils.com/

Here is my newest post: https://my-health-benefits-of-essential-oils.com/lavender-essential-oil-benefits-and-uses

P.S. I look forward to helping others. :)

Thank you,

Emily S.
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Rama132005 Premium
Hello All,

I would love it if I could get feedback on my site. Specifically on my posts. A comment on my page wouldn't hurt either ;-)

http://justsensorydiscoveries.com/

I will be sure to do the same in return. Thank you in advanced!

I wish you great success!!!

Best,
Rama
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xmarye11 Premium
I like your website! Really simplistic and tons of good info. I really enjoyed your content. What I can offer for advice from my point of view:

- The placement of many titles don't fit or align correctly. This is easy to fix. You might want to rename titles so that the length makes sense with the width of the page. This is much more visually pleasing.

-In one of you blog you listed different points and then added "Those are the ones I can think of for now.'' I feel like this makes it look like you could have come up with more but didn't take the time to. Doesn't give the most professional vibe. Even just saying ''to name a few'' makes it sound like there are more but it's not the focus and you're moving on to better things.

- The size of the pictures could be more even. There seem to be lots of different placements and sizes and that doesn't help create a sense of uniformity.

This is all I can think of because I honestly love your website. I can only think of how great it will get overtime. Good job oxox
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Rama132005 Premium
Thank you so much for your feedback. I love the name of your company and just in the name it's, gave me comfort. I am very happy to have had access you your site. It is well organized and easy to follow. The content is captivating and doesn't let go. Your site was very helpful to me as I struggle with many of the issues you touched on in your posts! I can't wait to see more!

I love your site design also. Keep doing what you're doing.
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eblystone Premium
Hello everybody! I hope you're all having an awesome day! I'm in the process of building out my website thesurvivalistguide.com. It's a site I'm using to educate people on being prepared for emergency situations and for anything else that might pop up to catch you off guard.

Would you mind giving me some feedback on one of my posts? I'm open to all suggestions!

http://thesurvivalistguide.com/go-bag-survival-kit-what-youll-need-to-pack

Thanks everyone!
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Ers32 Premium
I just left you a comment!
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Rama132005 Premium
Hello, I just commented on your post, "Go Bag Survival Kit'. It was really good and I learned a lot.
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Tiffjack18 Premium
hiya WA community! My website niche is not really a niche but its my lifestyle blog and I'm wondering if i can get some feedback from a few of you.. It's not perfect i know, I still kind of having trouble with formatting for my pics and such but tell me what you think overall.
My domain is:


http://sweethumility.com/

Thanks! (:
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Pattytzkh Premium
Loved your site. I left you a comment. <3 I don't know why you think it's not perfect. I personally loved it. It was refreshing and clean and bright and attractive. I felt a personal connection with you in your pics and your content. IT's real, it's you and its great.
Well done.
Patty
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pinkthistle Premium
I love the idea of a lifestyle blog - when I started my site I was going to do jewelry - as an artist I do a lot of things, jewelry being one of them but as soon as I began to write I went blank. it was too one dimensional for me. I changed it to an art/design/jewelry in order to incorporate more of what I do and now I cant stop coming up with ideas - besides my own work - I promote all other work I love.... so I am especially drawn to your site because it is not so one dimensional - incorporating who you are and your own life experience I find absolutely wonderful. I am sure everyone here has work to do on an imperfect site, but that is no big deal. love your multi faceted site. even though they recommend a single topic, you are an expert in your own life and lifestyle so therefore an expert in writing about it. love it!
corey
www.WeAreByPinkThistle.com
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Vickic3 Premium
What a wonderful site- you have put such true emotion into your work and you can feel the love when you go in there
People are going to really relate to this site and you can definitely monetize it with maybe travel companies, food specialists etc
You will know whats right for you
Enjoy your journey

Be great if you commented on my new post too :)
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Tiffjack18 Premium
Aww Thanks so much for the kind words Patty!
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Tiffjack18 Premium
Thanks a lot Corey! Really appreciate the kinds words (:
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Tiffjack18 Premium
Awesome! I'm so glad you like it! I would love to chek your post out. please paste it down below!
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Coucka Premium
https://wealth.karencouchman.com/paid-viewpoint-online-review

Hi WA,
I have done a review for a company called Paid Viewpoint. It is about earning money online doing quick survey's.

If you leave a comment on the site... I am happy to return the favour if you leave me your URL I will look at your page ASAP.

Thanks :-)
Coucka
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Pattytzkh Premium
Hi Coucka, Great review.
The look of the page is great, The structure and overall look of it was good for me to read and understand.
Loads of info that i would take into consideration if i was looking for something like viewpoint.
The colours and pics is good also, and the video was good too.
Above all, i loved your honesty in your review.

Awesome stuff. I left a comment

Patty
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SherwinB1 Premium
Hi, I left you a comment.

here's mine:
https://myhelpfularticles.com

Thanks
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Coucka Premium
Thanks Patty,
Let me know if you would like feedback or a comment on your site. I am happy to oblige.
Cheers Coucka
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Coucka Premium
Hi there,
I saw just a couple of problems

1. The image of the earbuds has a single bullet point item in the middle of the image. It looks messy, but it should be easy to fix. :-)

2. You have written "Win buyer’s thrust by assuring them of their “buyer’s protection”. You may want to correct the spelling on trust.

3. You have also written "buying stuffs online." you may want to correct this sentence.
Otherwise, is it a nice fresh looking website. The font is interesting and easy to reading and I keep expecting wildlife to suddenly appear in the background.
Great job.
Cheers Coucka
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SherwinB1 Premium
Hi, thanks for the feedback. I have them noted so I will fix them.
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dmark Premium
Hey Everyone!

I've been working on a site in the natural stress relief niche. I'm currently focusing on providing great content to visitors who can benefit from information like this in today's stressful world. I haven't really decided on how I want to monetize it just yet, but there are several options I can use moving forward.

I hope a few of you can take a look around if you have time, maybe raed a few of the posts and let me know what you think.

https://mynaturalstressrelief.com/

Thanks WA Community,

Mark
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muhsayy Premium
@Dmark, I am very interested in this topic, and have attempted to deal with it myself. I would be happy to give your site a look.
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dmark Premium
Thanks muhsayy, I hope you find some useful information. I will be adding lots more in the coming months! The link is up above:)
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muhsayy Premium
@dmark, I have just reviewed your blog and have only good news for you! It is very engaging, the writing is impeccable and on point. Your layout is compatible with your topic. Expand your shop and try to fill out your categories with compatible products. I left you a few comments on your pages. Fine job. Go for it! Take a look at my old site (https://muhsayy1.blogspot.com/) and feel free to use any ideas. You are not obligated to, just might help.
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Pattytzkh Premium
My favourite Website thus far. Absolutely loved it.
The landing page made me feel relaxed. The picture is so good and the whole layout is great too.
Content is so relevant and very informative.
As a victim to stress and anxiety myself, it's sometimes difficult to find ways to deal with. So seeing the remedies here is something that will help me. What makes it even more better and beneficial for me, is that its all Natural.

Thank you
Awesome Stuff
Patty
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dmark Premium
Thank you so much Patty, that really means a lot to me. I've worked so hard on this site and I would just like visitors to get exactly what you described out of it:)

I'll take a look at your site by this afternoon...

Best Regards,

Mark
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dmark Premium
Thank you very much for your kind words on my site. I appreciate you taking the time to review it. I'm so glad you found the writing engaging, it's exactly the type of experience I hope to provide to visitors. I am having a little bit of trouble with the Shopify section, and I may have to cancel that and go a different route towards monetization. I love the shop and would like to expand it, but the whole shipping charges thing on this platform confuses me a bit.

I checked out your blog and have been goig through some of the content on there. You certainly have some inspiring and motivational posts on there. I really like the one titled "MAKE YOUR DREAMS WORK FOR YOU - How to Unleash Your Entrepreneurial Spirit." NIce job!

And thank you very much for the comment on my "relaxing vacation" post. It's a very helpful addition to the information in the article.

All The Best To You, My Friend,

Mark
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Coucka Premium
https://wealth.karencouchman.com/rss-traffic-rocket-2-0-ebook-review

I have just posted a review on RSS Traffic Rocket 2.0 which is an Ebook on how to completely automate your blog post to 15 social media websites... It is a huge time saver and it also will automatically generate targeted leads for your niche.

I would love to hear your comments on my site and I am happy to do the same for you if you leave me the URL you want me to visit.

Cheers Coucka
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balletdad Premium
Comment posted! Thanks if you can offer one back.
http://balletpointeshoessale.com/should-i-buy-ballet-shoes-online
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Handyc7 Premium
I was drawn to this purely by the concept. Thank you for the "cons" section especially. These things rarely happen as fast as advertised. Feel free to look at my recent article on the health benefits of walking when stricken with illness. Thank you!

https://rockandreadrecovery.com/a-walk-to-recovery
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Coucka Premium
Loved your website and I agree with the article. I left a comment for you to moderate.
Cheers Coucka
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Coucka Premium
Your website is looking good and your blog post was long with images to help break it up. Which is great.

I only have one suggestion and that is to shorten your paragraphs to make it easier to read. Big blocky paragraphs with small text are difficult to read especially for us oldies.

I left a comment on the site for you.
Peace and Love Coucka
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GMcLaren Premium
Hi Coucka,
Very informative material you have. I will defiantly follow you and read all on your website.

Cheers,
Glenn
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RahsaanJ Premium
You wrote a very informative and honest review. I really like how you pointed out how that a newbie could not set up the system in 30 minutes by giving your own experience with the product. As I was reading the blog I felt that you were giving a real unbiased review.
When you have the time could you take a look at my latest post an give some feedback. http://knowyourstix.com/ping-drivers-which-one-will-work-for-you
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Coucka Premium
Hi
Thanks for the follow I really appreciate that and I am glad you enjoyed the review.
Cheers Coucka
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Coucka Premium
Hi,
Wow, that so-so technical and I am afraid I did not understand a lot of it.
I suppose if you are not a golfer then it is a little hard to follow. However, I did like the summary at the end for dummies like me that have no idea about golf. That does make the choice a lot easier. I would go for the cheap model.

You know what would look amazing on that page. A beautiful image of the golf course and someone making their shot off the Tee.

Great job.
Cheers Karen
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RachelF2 Premium
I've been going through piece by piece to see and make sure my page is coming along good. I pick a good niche that's popular today which is hair. its all about the woman. If i can get all feedback on page would be great . What can i do to make better

http://www.HerHair101.com

p.s if i can get a quick intake on how to find my link for certain shares , how would i do so ?
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MBreece Premium
I like the article so far. Couple of points. If you are doing an article on hair I would stick to hair. No make up and such. Save those for another topic.
You mention picking the right style but do not list much in the way of info for the styles. I would go in to that more.
What type of shares are you looking for a link for?
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fotarderrick Premium
Hi guys, new article on my website. I will be taking an objective look at insecurities, and how they affect our behaviour. I use personal humorous situations in order to make certain points. I hope you all enjoy it :). Don't forget to leave a comment!
Thanks :)
http://the-write-guy.com/insecurities
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SHinrichsen Premium
Hi everyone. I'm very new to WA (only 2 weeks), so I would really appreciate feedback on my website from some of you pro's out there. My niche for this site is 'making money online' with the main intention of reaching people globally for my Zija business, even though I have included links to 2 affiliate programs as well. Thanks, I appreciate the time you take to check it out and any honest feedback. https://earn-money-online.org/
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RobertDoyle Premium
I just looked at your website. Very nice for only having been here two weeks! You have a very professional-looking site. Everything looks clean and clear and easy to find. Nice photos too. Like how you put your About Me post at the bottom. The only thing for now that I can see might enhance it is to put the popular social media icons to follow on Twitter, Facebook, Pinterest, Google+. I have yet to do it on my site, but I know I need to do that soon. And keep creating lots of content regularly--something I am still in the process of doing (creating lots of content).
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SHinrichsen Premium
Hi Robert. Thanks very much for the feedback. Excellent suggestions about the social media icons. I just don't know where to find them in the template I'm using. I guess I could paste logo's and hyperlink.. Once again, thanks
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RobertDoyle Premium
You are quite welcome. I think putting them in can vary, depending upon the theme you are using. I am going to do a search here at WA and see if there are any training videos on this topic. You may want to peruse the WA search bar as well.
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SHinrichsen Premium
Thanks again. I found a plug-in
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Kaydoo Premium
Hi everybody!! I hope youre doing good tonight....I just finished my third post....and I would like to have some feedback or about my website. Be very honnest I want to know if going in the right direction. There is still so much work to do.

Thankssssss Guys! and of course I will return the favor ;)

Cath

getsportswears.com
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Sherises Premium
Hey Cath, the main navi categories like "women", "mens", "kids" etc, dont link to anywhere. Maybe it's not up yet?
Also, not sure if you got to the section yet, but it would help to add images to your post, currently it's just a bunch of text. Keep going! there's a lot of Wordpress plugins and widgets to add that can help to improve the appearance of the site :)
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SHinrichsen Premium
Hi Cath. Your site is nice and neat. I can see you're still building it up. I would suggest some pictures on your landing page (home page) and also a picture of you in the 'About me' section. Well done on a good job so far.
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RachelF2 Premium
You definitely have a great idea going and of course who doesn't need sport wear for all gender and sizes . way to stay on topic. I'm sure as time goes by and continue to put the work in , your website is going to be great. Cant wait see it when its done. Way to go #WA
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ThongN Premium
Hello all

I'm doing the task on Course 3 lesson 6. I just finished my first time ever post about review products. In my first review, I choose to review two books (that are not very popular -.- ) which related to my previous post. Since Kyle said in the training that his review is just for the frameline, a guide,so I would like to hear feedback from all of you.

Here is the URL: https://well4littlehappiness.com/review-two-books-about-genetic-causes-autism

Thank you in advance.
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SirDantes Premium
Hello everyone, while it is so great receiving feedback and comments on your sites, it is only polite and respectful to do the same in return for at least the ones that do it for you, if not all.

Here is a link I would like to get feedback and comment on
https://mysimplelivn.com/im-not-good-at-anything/

I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR!

Thank you all in advance and looking forward to reciprocating.
- SirDantes
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katlyngr Premium
I just reviewed your website and LOVED it! It had great flow and your article "I'm not good at anything" definitely hit home for me.
I did notice however some misspellings in the article. I would do another grammar check and update.
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SirDantes Premium
Thank you for the feedback I updated the post after checking the grammar again. :)

Care to leave a comment on that post for me, please :)
I left you one :)

Thank you
Success Always!
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internetpay Premium
Hi Dante I have added a comment if you could please do the same on my site would be greatly appreciated!

https://nbabreakdown.com/why-lebron-is-better-than-jordan-in-my-opinion
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SirDantes Premium
Left you a comment as well, sorry I have not been on here for some time now.
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Herman8 Premium
Hey everyone.

My site is still quite new and I am still finding my feet, but I was hoping some of you can tell me if my site and specifically this last post looks ok?
I have been under a lot of stress lately due to some financial issues, so just want to make sure that it does not reflect in my site.

I have paid it forward before posting this.

Here is the link to my latest post.

http://newtoguitar.com/should-you-buy-this-guitar-epiphone-sg-400-pro-reviews

Thanks a million guys
Harry
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Jukkah Premium
I just posted a reply but it vanished when I refreshed the site. Weird.

Anyhow I like your site and content, I'd suggest maybe a bit longer word count on your posts. In guitar reviews I would use a video when possible or link to a YouTube review (not sure if you need permission, if you give credit, maybe?). I like your layout and would love to know what theme you are using as I might consider it myself. Thanks
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SirDantes Premium
Great page you have there. What I can say is that, try and make some key points stand out with either site quotations or H1, 2 or 3 characters or even bold and italics.
I also left you a comment. Here is my page pls
https://mysimplelivn.com/how-to-be-involved/
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Herman8 Premium
Thanks a million for the feedback! The goal is definitely to make videos for my YouTube channel as well to tie in with my content, so glad to hear that it is a good idea! Ha ha! Appreciate it!
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Herman8 Premium
Thanks for the feedback! Such a simple idea and yet I can already see in my mind how much nicer it will look. Thanks!
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thomhee Premium
I think you should have a featured image set up with each post so those images show up on the front page. It makes each post more interesting and will will urge the viewer to click on it to read it.
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DavidLabrana Premium
Hey guys, I have worked hard for my first two weeks here at WA. I have a whole website to show for it.
Next I want to make another one in the next two weeks using the training.
Just wondering if I am getting burnt out or not. Any feedback on my website..?
Thank you

http://theemssupplier.com
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SBannister Premium
Hi David, I like your site ad have left a comment, could you return the favour?

familyonline.org

I would recommend you continue with the one website and continue the training as Kyle has so much more to teach you.

Sharon
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DavidLabrana Premium
I did finish the training, I am 1 task from being a Level 5!
I may work hard at another website following the training over again.
I'll continue to work on my first website, just less often, maybe about 3 posts a week vs. my new site which I will do more like 2-3 posts a day.
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DavidLabrana Premium
Thanks, it is too late for me tonight. I will definitely look at your site and comment tomorrow though.
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Calvinator63 Premium
Hi David,

I am wondering as to if you are making money with your fist website yet or not? I would not start a second website until the first is making money.

If you put all your writing efforts into the first site it will increase your potential of starting to make money, by adding 4-5 posts a week. I think this would definitely increase your SEO ranking rather fast increasing the possibilities of earning an income from it, or even increasing the income form it if it is already making money.

From what I have gathered from Kyle's training and others here on WA, concentrate on one site until you get it to the point that you are happy with its earnings it provides you then start others if you desire to.

Hope this helps,

Calvin
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SirDantes Premium
Page looks incredible for your first 2 weeks. Keep it up. I also left you a comment. Here is mine
https://mysimplelivn.com/how-to-be-involved/
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DavidLabrana Premium
OK i left a comment on your website Sharon. Some of the newer posts did not open to a valid page for your information.
I did get to see one of the older posts, which I do need to use to research my ancestry a well.
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thegreycat Premium
Hi everyone! I would like some feedback on my latest post. Feel free to check out the rest of the site if you want to or have time. I know it could use some pictures and reviews and such. I would like some feedback more centered toward my writing, both in style and readability. Also if you notice any errors or typos, please do not hesitate to point them out.

I have paid it forward in advance. Thank you for your time.

https://golftalktimes.com/dustin-johnson-wins-fedex-st-jude-classic-shot-clock-masters-and-other-tour-results

Good luck and future success!
Jeff
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Slickvic1 Premium
Hi personally I'm not into golf. But for someone who is should enjoy this site. I looked it over find nothing wrong that I can tell.
Hope I've been some help.
Good night.
Victor
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Herman8 Premium
Hey Jeff.

I have to agree that your site could use a picture or two, but in a way the more plain looking site kinda works for me with regards to Golf, so please don't overdo the pictures when you get to it.

It is a heck of a lot of information in one post, so I reckon job well done! The rest of the site looks decent.
All thumbs up from me!
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thegreycat Premium
Thanks! I sort of agree with you on the picture thing. I personally enjoy the newspaper like feel. But I do think I need at least some pictures for help with search rankings.
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thegreycat Premium
Thanks, Victor.
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Slickvic1 Premium
Your welcome
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Coucka Premium
https://wealth.karencouchman.com/mind-mapping-for-online-article-writing

Hey WA,
I just finished this article on mind mapping for creating new content for your websites. I am very excited about it and I would love, love, love to hear your thoughts either in the comment box on the page or here.
This is an amazing online tool that you really should look at.

Cheers Coucka
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nicolecarol Premium
This tool is very helpful and I am glad I read it. The pictures are very informative and help break apart the text. The structure of your website is easy to follow and appealing. Nice work!
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malpal101 Premium
This article was very helpful, and I am happy I read it. The pictures make it easier to understand, and everything else on your website is structured out nicely. Keep up the good work!!
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Coucka Premium
Thank you so much for your time I do appreciate it.
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loweryourtax Premium
Hi - Left a comment and tweeted to my 10k twitter followers

Here is my latest

http://taxsavingsblog.com/maximize-up-to-7985-with-the-new-tax-law

Thx
Steve
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itsmeFebbie Premium
Hi Guys and Gals,
Would appreciate any feedback on my new site - layout, content, etc.

https://holiwellness.com
http://earnwhileyoulearn.holiwellness.com

I also wrote a Wealthy Affiliate "Free Membership" Review
https://earnwhileyoulearn.holiwellness.com/learn-and-earn-at-wealthy-affiliate-for-free/

Just joined premium about an hour ago so I still have to go thru to have a full on review. :)
If you leave a comment, I'd be happy to leave one for you too :)

Thanks a bunch!
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tobocrs Premium
Hello friends and colleagues; I've added a new post to my site, http://rovingretirees.org, and I'd welcome some feedback on the content and layout. Also, if anyone knows how to get a photo (or other graphic) onto the landing page I'd love to know that as well.... As you'll see, one of my posts has the photo but none of the others does! Don't know what I did for that one, nor what I DIDN'T do for the others!
Tim
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itsmeFebbie Premium
Hi Tim. I'll be happy to check it out. Would appreciate if you can also review mine @ http://earnwhileyoulearn.holiwellness.com

As for the picture, you can customize that by putting a "Featured Image" in Wordpress. Bottom right corner when you're editing your post :) Hope that helps
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muhsayy Premium
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itsmeFebbie Premium
Thanks. I left you a comment as well.
I like the layout you've chosen for your site, and love seeing all the personal pictures and beautiful art works. I think it would be great if you can incorporate related ads, like poetry books and art tools off of amazon, or affiliate course learning how to write poetries etc so it's more relatable to the readers :)
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muhsayy Premium
Thanks, will do.
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tobocrs Premium
Thanks, Feb, good and useful comments. I'm just at the point of signing up with affiliate organizations, and I like your idea of poetry books and art works!
Will implement in future modifications, for sure!
Tim
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Coucka Premium
https://wealth.karencouchman.com/how-does-wealthy-affiliate-work-secrets-for-creating-wealth

Hey WA,
It is Saturday here in Oz, and I just finished my review for Wealthy Affiliates.
I can hear you groaning in my mind saying "Oh no not another Wealthy Affiliate review!"
To sweeten the deal if you leave a comment on my site. I will leave 2 comments on your website on different pages.

Cheers Coucka
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CDevonshire Premium
Hi Karen, same boat! I've just done the same, and I'm very happy to review other peoples pages.
See what you think, please be kind! http://strokecouldnotkillme.siterubix.com/if-you-are-readi…ou-have-survived
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Coucka Premium
Hi there,
I would love to give you a review and I am always kind. However, I clicked on your URL and the page would not open.
Check your link and let me know then I will try again.
Cheers Coucka
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muhsayy Premium
Hey@Coucka, that sounds like a great deal> I'll take you up on it. I am developing a computing site and I can use any tips you can give here: http://freecomputertrainingforbeginners.com/how-the-lessons-are-structured.
I'll be over in a sec.
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Coucka Premium
Hey there,
As promised I have asked questions on your site on two separate pages. I am actually really interested to hear back about the computer viruses.
Cheers Coucka.
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muhsayy Premium
Thank you. I have moderated you comments and replied. Were my comments useful to you?
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FranchescaK Premium
Hi Karen,
I left you a comment. Great website I really enjoyed looking at it!

If you could do the same that would be great.http://hotbeautylooks.com/short-hairstyles-for-women
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Coucka Premium
Hi Franchesca,
I loved your website. It is clean, fresh, and easy to read. You had great advice for the two articles that I left comments on. Keep up the great work.
Cheers Coucka
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manahale Premium
Hello friends,
I've built a couple of websites and would like to get some reviews and feedback on one of them. Feel free to choose which one resonates with you.
www.steppingstonestofinancialhealth.com
www.steppingstonestohealth.com
www.rolfobdyworks.org
Many thanks ahead of time and I'll spend an hour now reviewing some other sites as well. Peace and be well.

Rob
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CDevonshire Premium
Hi Rob,
I will read your -tohealth site, I'm interested to see what others are doing, as you can see, a lot of learning to do!
http://strokecouldnotkillme.siterubix.com/if-you-are-readi…ou-have-survived
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JohnTurco Premium
Hey guys, I am just building a website in the stop smoking niche and am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website.

If you could reply in the site comments, that would rock !

Here is my domain:
stopforlife.com

Thanks !
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Irisje Premium
Hi John, I liked it. There's a lot of information on your site that is very usefull for people I think.
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RB46 Premium
You have a great deal of information on your website. It is a way to help many people and things they will find useful. The main thing that stands out to me, is where you have the links placed good spot, but they don't look like they are put in properly or something. You can review some of the training to better do your links. You can search how to apply links to word press in the search bar at the top of this screen. Good Luck!
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JohnTurco Premium
Thanks Irisje !
Can you put your comment on the site to show Google activity ?
Thanks !
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JohnTurco Premium
Thanks Irisje !
Can you put your comment on the site to show Google activity ?
Thanks !
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SirDantes Premium
Great info and great design.
I agree with @RB46 on the "links". If you can install the" Custom HTML plugin or place those links in the "text" form of your page or posts, that will enable the banners and links to be in their right format.

Great work on the information provided
Success Always!
Sir Dantes
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PdRogers Premium
Hello. I'm starting a website full of this and that...I have a lot of things I'm into & I may be stretching myself out to far. But I want to know what you think of my website. Any comments will be appreciated. It's still a work in progress.
My website is: https://paulas-place.com
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emmelinegb Premium
Hi there! I love the layout/visuals on your site, and I think your writing style is good. I agree though, that the topics could use a little more focus. Not that you necessarily need to choose just one of the topics, but it's all about how you present those topics. For example, maybe the post about men/women in uniform could be organized under a "my family" Category. I think your site would create a less confusing first impression if the subtopics were organized under categories like "my health struggles", "my business journey", etc. so they feel more cohesive. Just an idea!
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PdRogers Premium
Thank you. I will try to clean it up a little. I knew there was a little something I couldn't put my finger on. You may have helped me decide. Thanks again.
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JRush1 Premium
Sooo, a little "controversial" post here today. I'm still plugging along in the training trying to find my way working into the affiliate marketing section now. I'm finding I think I'll need to start turning the tide on posts like this from an "opinion editorial" type deal to more product related items....................I think anyway.

Anyway, any feedback, good or bad would be appreciated. Again, I know the topic is controversial, but if it baits traffic in, I'll set the hook!!!

http://triplecrossresources.com/the-bible-and-voting-you-cant-pick-and-choose
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yfaz Premium
Hi John,

Yes - controversial! I don't agree with everything you write about but I do respect your beliefs and applaud you for writing about your passion. I'm not sure how people make money with controversial material as I am new to this but assume you could advertise for Christian schools, bookstores and authors.

I hope that helps and wish you success.
All the best,
Nora
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Loverboymk Premium
Hello everyone.

I would appreciate your feedback. I have just created new page onto my website, and would love to hear from you what you think about.

I will definitely return the favor as long as you let me know about.

https://get-rid-of-belly.com/workouts-and-exercises

Thanks so much guys.

Krzysztof
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nikolina23 Premium
Hi Krzysztof

Where are you from? I'm from Croatia, and it seems both of us have issues with our sentence structure. It's so much different to form a sentence in English than in someone's native language.
I suggest you should install Grammarly, it's a browser add-on, and it has a free version you can try out.

For instance - you can't say "to not burn out" - it could be said "not to burn out", and I saw several mistakes like this one on your page.

You have a quality content, it could use more headlines, but most of all you have to correct the sentence structure in your article if you want English native speakers to take you seriously.
I also struggle with this and proofread my posts many times to correct it.

This is my opinion and I hope it was helpful.
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PamCole05 Premium
Hi Krzysztof,
The content is great, engaging and personable. But there are sentence structures that have to be adjusted. I understand that writing in English, may be a little different than speaking it for someone that is not a native speaker. So I would suggest either having someone review and make the changes or use a program that will arrange the words for you, as you write. See my sample here:

I understand that it is hard to lose weight, it is not easy to get rid of stubborn fat. “Losing weight” should not be treated as another job on the road to success, as if it were compulsion. All you have to do is approach it in the right way, and everything that will initially be difficult will be easier.

Try that...
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DenverS Premium
Hi everyone! I'm the guy who keeps leaving too lengthy of feedback posts lol.

Check out my website if you have the time and let me know what you think! It's focused around using a video game called Dance Dance Revolution to improve fitness and have fun doing it!

https://ddrlife.com/

I've been working hard on this, so I hope it shows. Thanks in advance!
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Joes946 Premium
Hey Denver.
Wow...your website certainly grabs you! Good job. Loads of good posts. Graphics are spot on. Got me to thinking, at 80 years old, could I do that?
Not sure but you sure gave me food for thought.
Great job. Remember, it's a journey, not a destination. Enjoy the ride.
Joe
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DenverS Premium
Thank you very much! I'll take your words to heart :)
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HannaC Premium
Hi Denver!
I love DDR!! I am glad you found that niche:)
I like your choice of the theme.. very clear and straightforward.
Browsing is easy.. which is great!
You did a good job!
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DenverS Premium
Thank you! Glad to see fellow DDR enthusiast here!
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ravihansar Premium
PropellerAds is getting popular as a PPC revenue generating model.
But, is it really worth it? I DON'T think so, and this is why...
I would really love to hear from you. Please leave your comments on the post and I will surely return the favor.

https://sleekearner.com/propellerads-reveiw/
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Apoorva7 Premium
Nice article and good explanation of propeller ads. I enjoyed while reading it and left a comment too.
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ravihansar Premium
Thanks for the comment mate. Please let me know your webpage so I can leave a comment on yours too.
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ravihansar Premium
Left a comment on yours :)
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Apoorva7 Premium
Thank you so much...
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ravihansar Premium
No probs!
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SweetAngel Premium
Good morning everyone. Today I have started a FREE LIFE COACHING forum on my website.

I would really love if anyone could help me by asking me some questions or telling me their stories on there, so that it isn't just a blank forum.

https://sweetangelcleaning.com/community/main-forum/open-discussion-for-any-self-improvement-or-coaching-topic-you-wish#post-1

Thanks in advance

Jodie
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JAustin66 Premium
Hi Everyone, I am at the point where I would appreciate some feedback on one of my recent posts. This post has apparently made to the Google rankings. I also have an affiliate link within it. Let me know what you think. I am also ready to give some feedback on your efforts and see how well you all are doing.

Here is the link:

http://mypaleoforlife.com/paleo-recipes-for-beginners-how-do-i-get-started

Thanks for all your help!
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ThereseMarie Premium
Hello Everybody, I am working on a decorating niche and would appreciate some input as to what you think. I have no affiliate links in there yet but I'm getting close as I follow this process. My site is decorateourlives.com. Here is my link to my last post, but feel free to look over the other posts too. I really appreciate the help. Thanks.

http://decorateourlives.com/decorate-with-little-or-no-money-4-simple-tips
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JAustin66 Premium
Therese,

I must say I was so impressed by your work. I actually got lost in the purpose of reading for feedback. Which, I see as a good thing, as I viewed your post as a website visitor. I loved the flow of the post, the imagery and showing of the finished product. I don't know how old your son is, but his apartment is classy, not a dump like one would expect of a millennial. The only offer of improvement I would say is that decorating in my mind is the use of design, imagery, which you had and color, which was lacking. Perhaps a little more color in your post content, fonts, background or banner. Pops of color might make your site in general more eye pleasing. Hope that helps.
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ThereseMarie Premium
Thanks for the input. I'm still figuring out some things, like how to change a font color or add a banner. But I hope as I continue to grow those things will follow. I agree and thanks for the confirmation.
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SharonMorin1 Premium
Great content! I really learned a lot just reading your website, makes me want to eat Paleo from now on
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ThereseMarie Premium
Sharon, my site is about decorating, maybe you messaged the wrong person back? hehe
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KasaBoutique Premium
Hi guys, Here is a link to a post of my website. Please give me some feedback. and if anyone could answer my question then that would be amazing!
Question - Website
http://whyshouldiplaythisgame.com/sea-of-thieves-the-hungering-deep-details-and-release-date

Thanks!
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Everlight Premium
Hello,

I am looking for someone to give feedback (or if you want to help, comment) to my website. It is written in my local language (Indonesian/Bahasa), so you may want to use google translate web tool: https://mas-kulin.com/

If you are so kind to leave a comment, feel free to write using English. I will translate it manually.

I'll return the favor to you (feedback and/or comment).

Sincerely,
Ferdinand
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Jayde97 Premium
Hey guys, so ive just uploaded my first content, eek. my website is for my own book reviews on fiction books, if you guys could check out my site and give me feedback that would be amazing. im not quite there with changing the design or anything just yet

Thank you so much guys :)

FindUsABook.com
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Dunvant Premium
left you a comment
https://myipsisearch.com/cots-cribs-moses-basket
would love a comment on mine
thanks
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Jayde97 Premium
thank you!
just left mine on yours :)
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ryansun Premium
I've written my comment. Keep it up.
You may comment my site too...
https://mydietandweightlossunited.com

I have followed you also.
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TNewkirk Premium
Hi, I read your post. When I am looking for a good book to read (I love to read) I prefer books written in the 3rd person POV. I have a hard time connecting with the characters in the 1st person POV. The excerpts on the back of books do not always clarify this. I would love to see this in Book reviews. I have bought books in the past that were written in the 1st person and I tend to not finish them. Otherwise, the post pretty much told me all I needed to know when considering whether to buy or not. Of course, the design and layout will come in time. I believe you have a pretty good start.
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pinkthistle Premium
been working on my site and spending hours trying to figure out how to work out all the bugs. learning how to write is harder than I thought - anyway, its only been up a month - my site is art/design/jewelry - an extension of what I have done most of my life and now trying my hand at writing about it. I would appreciate any feedback and/or comments on my site. thank you and have a great day!
Corey
www.WeAreByPinkThistle.com
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WendyLR Premium
Overall, I like how you have your posts set up. Colorful pictures related to content. I do think having a sidebar might be more helpful for navigating your content instead of having it all on the bottom of your page.
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SylviaMG Premium
Posted a comment. Cool site!
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pinkthistle Premium
thank you. I will post for you as well....
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uncommon3 Premium
Okie dokie, folks! So I started moving some stuff from another program/server where I had two sites (one domain). Some of the old stuff I am just gonna toss. Some of the other stuff goes along with a ministry I am in, who has links to my articles about cases we work. I have only 4 posts up so far, but here it is and I appreciate all the feedback I can get on *content*. Thanx!! http://simpletruth.siterubix.com/
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CrisTravis Premium
Hi all!

I am still pretty new to this and while I know what my passion is, I’m not truly sure how I’m going to monetize my niche yet. My site fakerichandtired.com is about our journey to a Betts marriage, mindset, and bank account. I just started a few weeks ago so there’s not much content but it I would love your feedback.

Thanks!

http://fakerichandtired.com/staying-positive-what-to-do-when-marriage-gets-hard
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Jbicknell1 Premium
I just looked through your site you have a solid base to work from the pictures ties it all in plus the lesson does show how you can make it monetize through google adsense
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BenjaminJL Premium
Hello WA Community!

I built a website around computer programming for beginners and would love some feedback on it.

My website can be found at https://helloworldprogramming.com

And my latest post can be found at https://helloworldprogramming.com/python-if-statement-a-how-to-guide-with-practice

Feedback on the website as a whole or just the article would be greatly appreciated!

Thank you!
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CrisTravis Premium
Great content! I haven’t programmed in over ten years so it was great to read through. I would suggest internal links when you reference other articles you’ve written. That way your reader can easily get to them.
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Coucka Premium
https://wealth.karencouchman.com/how-to-build-an-email-list-for-free

Hi WA,
I have just posted a new page on how to create a subscribers list for free. If you can leave me a comment on the site, I am more than happy to do the same for you. Or, if you just want to give advice on how to improve my page here on this discussion panel, I would also be grateful and will do the same for you.

Please leave your URL if you are interested in reciprocal backscratching? ;-)

Cheers Coucka
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sgaitan1101 Premium
This is a good post. I like that you keep it simple short. People like to get right to the point, especially when building a website that may bring in revenue. What's funny is that the same method you suggest in your post is one that has been used on me before. Now I see their tactic. Your use of imagery is great, especially the screen shot because it gives a picture of what you're talking about
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brekmilo Premium
Super informative! I don't really know how helpful this is because I'm still pretty new to the community but I honestly was a little confused on the front page with the big picture of the car at first.

I like how you layed out your information with spaces and highlights. Your articles are organized in your menu very clearly. I might be checking on your site more often for my own list. Thank you for sharing your knowledge!
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