As we are building out our websites, it is always nice to get some feedback and insights from "others" as to how we are doing. It can lead to us getting a better understanding of the process and it will lead to a much higher quality website.

If you are needing a website review, post your website URL here for feedback.

Example:

Hey guys, I am just building a website in the weight loss niche and am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website. Here is my domain:

http://howtolosebellyfattoday.com/

Thanks!

But remember, this is a community here at Wealthy Affiliate and don't just post your link and leave. Offer others the same sort of help you are about to get. Whenever you post your website here, make sure that you offer your opinions and insights on at least two other websites.

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BenjaminGonz Premium
Hey everybody!

I am building a powerful website about creating passions in life. I really believe that this world will be much better if the people have the opportunity to create an incredible future at the same time they do what they love.

We are different and it's impossible to determine one way to follow but my purpose is to provide the tools for each one so they can use it and create their own dreams.

Anyway, I would love some real and honest feedback! I am just starting so I know I have tons of things to improve so let me know what they are! ;D

All the best!
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AmyStoskopf Premium
Hello. I published a new post and would feedback on it. Plus any feedback regarding the website I will appreciate as well. I am working on adding images to the posts just an FYI. Thank you!!

I will be doing the same on some below.

Thanks a lot it will help a great deal and be appreciated!
Amy
puppiesanddogsplusmore.com
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thomasadams Premium
The banner up top is cute. Here are a few design critiques right off the bat:

1. Work on getting a logo. You can hire a logo designer from sites like Fiverr.com for extremely cheap ($5 + $2 fee).

2. Remove the top bar (where the phone number and email address are) since that information isn't necessary for the site.

3. For the articles themselves, try adding a stock image in the very beginning that is relevant to the article, and add an additional one in the middle that relates to the middle content.

4. Add proper categories that relate to the articles you're writing such as Puppy Training, Dog Training, etc.

5. Add an image of yourself to the About My Family page so people can feel more connected with your brand and like there's an actual person writing the content.

Great job on taking action! Keep it up!
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CordeliaN Premium
Hello Amy a girl after my own heart... mine too is a dog site, perhaps you can review mine and add a comment to mine also,
I will add to yours once I have finished this review to you once I have reviewed your site and sent to you

I read the your blog "My Puppy or Dog is Ready to come home, so do I have everything", boy that was thorough, and once you start adding affiliate links you will be able to choose from a big market and making some monetary income stream. You will be able to do so many reviews on the little things right up to the big things.

I can see you are building it out so cary on doing what you do.

Just make it a little easier on the eye, some of our reasers only see in 140 characters at a time...

I think the Paragraphs are a little long, and could do with a little more direction on more sub headings. I also think you you could possibly do with some more related images. overall i was impressed well done

Amy please check out and website and make a comment on the site. https://yourhungryhound.com
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AmyStoskopf Premium
Thank you that is really helpful. Sometimes it feels like it is hard to get in what needs to be said in so little words but I am trying to make them shorter.
I am working on getting links now; Im still trying to understand all this and feel overwhelmed. I do enjoy it.
Thanks Amy
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AmyStoskopf Premium
I am not sure I understood all of that but I am going to do my best. I am still working through the trainings so hopefully I will come across these issues so I can work on them. Yeah, I am having an issue with the Word[ress Number they fixed a problem and its been there since. Thanks A lot.
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captgeech21 Premium
Great site, and great article. For my taste, some of the paragraphs are pretty blocky. This may just be my opinion, but I really like using bullets more, or breaking stuff up into less rigid areas. Like yourself, my articles are usually long and wordy, so I try to think about how I can keep someone reading through the whole thing quickly versus just entertaining them.

The name at the top needs some snazzing up. I see someone recommended a logo, which is a great idea. You can even get free logos made too.

Until then, maybe make it something cool looking for now, in a different font, and a little bigger perhaps? Maybe Puppies &Dogs; + More

Definitely get those pictures into the articles! It will do wonders!
Good job though so far!!
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thomasadams Premium
No worries - I apologize if I wasn't descriptive enough! You'll definitely figure all of it out in due time :)
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FlorianHoff Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋

I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙

And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)

Thank you and keep pushing for Greatness people! 😇

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-focus-on-yourself/

PS: It's actually a quick & short Article about Focus. So if you have trouble right now to get where you want to go, this article could help you maybe :) Anyway would love to hear your feedback guys!

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-focus-on-yourself/
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AffilateMT Premium
Very nice article on mindset. I whole heartily agree with this and think the same way. I believe its very important to have the correct mindset. You did a great job of keeping the content clean and easy to follow using bullets. The images were helpful also.
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JackieRogers Premium
Hey WA community!

I'm working through the trainings to get my site up and running. There's just one thing I need at the moment...feedback!

My niche is self improvement. I'd like to help people overcome obstacles so they can level up their life. If you could please let me know how your experience is on my site, I'd truly be grateful.

ladyalchemy.org

Thank you!

Jackie
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MichaelaEsp Premium
Hey Jackie! I read your post and seriously LOVED it! It spoke to me and I am so excited to read more from you! I don't know where you are in the training, but here are some notes I have:

1. Add pictures to your posts.
2. Categorize your posts so people can find topics they're interested in.
3. Change the author name from "admin"--this will be covered in the training if you're not there yet.
4. In your post where you have the check marks, two lines didn't format right. They have bullet points instead of check marks.

Great job so far! I'll be following you and I look forward to reading more!
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Missmaygen Premium
Jackie,

I left you a comment on your page. I love your site and your purpose! Keep it UP!
My advice is about the same as "MichaelaEsp"

Definitely add some pictures within your pages and posts.

Your writing is fantastic though. I read your about me page and wanted to know more. So you have nailed that!

I am excited to see what your site becomes! Good luck!

Much Love,
Megan
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Vellingo Premium
The theme you have chosen is very exciting, but I would consider using a different cover image. The picture is important for communicating what the website is about. Now it becomes a bit unclear. In about part there is a lot of text. Perhaps you should consider dividing it into several themes. Wish you good luck!
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captgeech21 Premium
I've gotten some feedback on the images in my first few posts. Are they too small, too big, too many, or not enough?
I would love it if a few people could check my posts for images and give me quick feedback on what would look best.
No need to scour the site, just a quick image recommendation from the wonderful WA mass!

Thanks!
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NewLaurie Premium
A link to your website? ...
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captgeech21 Premium
OPS! Oh my gosh!

www.thesavvygroom.com
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NewLaurie Premium
Oh - I really like it, Ken! What a super niche, too!

Your images are well-chosen and attractive ... I agree that they should be larger.
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captgeech21 Premium
Thanks so very much Laurie!! Please let me know if there is anything I can ever help you with in return!
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Missmaygen Premium
I think your pictures look great. Your site is awesome, and I believe going to bring great success! Good idea and very creative writing skills!
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captgeech21 Premium
Howdy everyone,

Chugging along with the training. I just wrote my 3rd or so post for my site, and would love some feedback or comments on the new article if possible.

https://thesavvygroom.com/marriage-proposal-ideas-unique-and-romantic-ways-to-propose/

Besides those, any tips or feedback in this channel would greatly be appreciated.

I will now scour the thread to help some others =)!
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ShashwatPrak Premium
Hey Man

That was a nice and informative post. I would like to point out a couple of things which I feel are missing. First, images - it is a wedding page, you need to have more images and the ones which you do are small in size, try increasing them for a better appeal.

Second - Try changing the theme you know. I really like your niche and you can do some amazing stuff. Fill it with content. Also, make use of the right side of your pages. They are blank, add search boxes and stuff.

I hope you find it useful :)

Cheers


If you want check out my site : www.tripodsforall.com
Would love some feedback :)
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captgeech21 Premium
Thanks so much! I will check out your page.

I had a different theme, but it was not allowing me to center or right-align images for some reason. I like this one less, but its at least working. I can absolutely make the images bigger. I was afraid too big would reduce what you can visible read in a smaller resolution such as a phone, tablet, or even smaller laptop.

I am still learning about site development through WordPress. I would love to make each page more interactive. I'm not quite sure what to put on the sides, as there is already a search box, recent posts, etc. I will have to do some brain storming and figure it out.

Thanks so much for the feedback!
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ShashwatPrak Premium
You are welcome :)
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Blackantan Premium
Hi ken,

Great post and great niche. I can see you doing very well within this niche if you keep this quality of content up.

I know you are still at the early stages of your site and it will develop as you move on through training and the help from everyone here.

I agree with what Shashwatprak said about your pic and not going to into to much detail as he has covered it and no point repeating what he has said.

Keep up the good work

lindsay
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ShashwatPrak Premium
Hey

Would love some feedback on this: www.tripodsforall.com
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Blackantan Premium
hey,

no worries I will have a look and get back to you.
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Vellingo Premium
Great page, and brilliant idea. I think. I would have used more photos if I were you. The photos should fit the topics you describe. Wish you good luck!
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CordeliaN Premium
Hello lovely WA People,
I am very new and apprehensive about adding my website for critique, but it has to be done. Please note it is the bare bones.

My website is mostly going to be Dog Nutrition, with other doggylicious stuff.
Last blog was all about Bring Your Dog to Work Day, so forgive the many images and short word count https://yourhungryhound.com/
I will happily return the favour.. :)
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DValentine Premium
Hi there Cordelia
You don't need to be apprehensive about your site. I thought it was packed full of information.
Now, saying that, there are a few areas that I believe could be improved.

1. Your content layout. Type your website directly into the browser and take a look at some of the layout of your posts - they just need a layout check and no type or fact check (as far as I could see)
2. The title of your 'home' page - Why not just call it 'Your Hungry Hound'? The way the current header goes onto 2 lines looks unfortunately very beginner-ish.
3. The images in the Bring Your Dog To Work post - they're all centralized (apart from one) - it might be worthwhile having some right-aligned, some left-aligned and some centralized - it's just nicer on the eyes.

To edit a post:
Go to your wordpress back office > Posts > All posts > Hover over the post you want to change and click 'Edit' > edit as required > Update and you're good to go.

I hope that helps
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CordeliaN Premium
Thank you,

I liked the suggestions, that is just the sort of information I needed, I looked at mine and knew it looked amateurish but didn’t know how I got it looking better,

I will go through each of your suggestions one at a time (at a more reasonable hour 3:55am woke up and can’t sleep..ha ha)

Could you make a comment on my web site, (if not done so)
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captgeech21 Premium
Cordelia,

Please don't be apprehensive. You are new to this, as many of us are and you SHOULD be doing it wrong! People are coming into WA and paying to learn because they DON'T know what to do and need the help! That's all of us!

The more comfortable you become with sharing and opening your work up, the more often you will get the feedback you need!

I love the topic and content. Some feedback:

To me, some of the articles seem a little long or over-worded. But that is possibly preference. There may be some benefit to reading through your posts and seeing if there is any "fat" to be trimmed away.

Inconsistencies. I am seeing some areas where there are large blank spaces between paragraphs, titles, etc. One example is within the service vs. therapy dog post at the end of the "does your dog have therapeutic skills" area.

I also see some paragraph titles in bold with all words beginning in a capital letter. Which is how I like to do it. But then I see some bold sentences with just the first letter capitalized. Not sure if these are supposed to be paragraph starters, but it's a bit confusing. I'd stick with bold and all capital and if its not, put it into the paragraph not bold.

Lastly, are any of your links affiliate links? If so, you need an affiliate disclosure statement. If not, then you are okay as is.

Best wishes,

and good luck!! Keep it coming!
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CordeliaN Premium
Thank you so much for the feed back,
It is useful and yes once I get used to it then I can only but improve.

I certainly will take heed of the capitals and spaces, will have a bit of editing to do when I get home from work tonight, in fact all of your comments require me to look again, but the above will be an easy fix...

But once again thank you.
If you get the chance could could you also comment on the website... (sorry to be a bit cheeky) and am more than happy to return the favour, just add your chosen page
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luzkee00 Premium
Hello Everyone,

I am building a website on weight loss and general health and would love feedback on it. Any advice you are willing to give is much appreciated. My website address is

http://lozitall.com/

Please provide your website address as I would like to comment on it.

Thanks

Luz
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somg Premium
I think you covered all the bases in your lemon water post and left you a comment. I sent you a pm with a link to a revised post that I would love for you to check out. Thanks in advance for your read!
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate.
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sherman3 Premium
i had a look at your site and i must admit that there is some great content in there, very thorough. I have a small suggestion you should take into consideration the theme of your site. Always remember that your site has to be user friendly and very inviting, but all in all great stuff.

www.get-its.com
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AndrewIvan00 Premium
That is true that lemon water does cause weight loss but you don't really go into much detail why. I placed a comment on the post about testosterone. Can you return the favour with the post on diet for the site www.thematterofsize.com
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CordeliaN Premium
Hello, I have just posted a comment on your web site, I will pte message you.. :)
Who would have know that lemon and water could do all that. Am hooked.
I too am building my website and would love if you could comment on mine
https://yourhungryhound.com/
Latest blog is mostly images of "Take Your Dog To the Office Day" (Friday 21st June 2019)
, Normally larger word count
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c2hearts Premium
https://savemoneywithyourmicrowave.siterubix.com/money-saving-meal-ideas-quick-lunches-on-a-budget/

I posted a comment on your fat burning foods post. I found that one very interesting.
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Judy007 Premium
Hi,
Here is the link to my post that I'd love to get comments for:

https://livingwellwithketo.com/keto-diet-plan-weight-loss

or the link to my site, where you can decide which post to comment on:

www.livingwellwithketo.com

All comments will be greatly appreciated, and I will comment on the post of your choice in return.

Also if you could spare the time to pm me with some comments about my site that would be very useful for me, and again I will do the same for you.

Thanks
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MBakker Premium
Hi Judy!
I left you a little comment on your post!

Some feedback for your article in general:
You give readers lots and lots of information, which is a good thing, but at some points, I lost concentration because I found it simply too long. Try to keep your information concise and to the point and avoid repeating yourself too much

Other than that, good use of photos and good sentence structure. I can definitely tell a lot of research went into this post!

If you have the time, would you mind taking a look at my website?
https://skincarementor.com

All the best
Melanie
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c2hearts Premium
I loved your site and posted a comment on your how to get started post. Thanks for the info.

Feel free to take a lot at my page and make a comment and/or give me some feedback. Thank you.

https://savemoneywithyourmicrowave.siterubix.com/money-saving-meal-ideas-quick-lunches-on-a-budget/
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itman941 Premium
What's going on, everyone? I've just added a new post to my site about editing YouTube videos, and I was hoping that there are some very thoughtful people out there willing to praise/criticize my content!

I would be very appreciative if you guys would take a look and let me know what you think with your feedback!

https://www.atthevantage.com/

Thanks in advance to all of my friends on here at WA, and I hope to get to know you guys more!
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DValentine Premium
Hey Matthew
Here are my comments on your site
1. Wow! Your font (which may be theme-related) is very small and being a mid-gray is quite difficult to read.
2. You kinda jump around with your subjects - I'm not too sure why a post of belly fat is in a tech-related blog for instance - unless you can link it to people who sit all day at a computer for instance.
3. Paragraphs - these days it seems that the 'norm' for paragraph length is around 2-3 lines (about 3-4 sentences) - it makes them easier to read.
4. Undoubtedly, you'll be trying to promote products - it might be worth having an Affiliate Disclaimer on your site ready - it'll be mandatory when you actually do have something to promote.

Otherwise, excellent content, spelling and grammar - good imagery, yup, all ties together well.

Good job - a nice website to visit
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DeesreX2374 Premium
Hey guys. I have once again started a whole new website from scratch! This new website is going to be about the newest release of Anime and Manga!

I would really appreciate it if you give me feedback!

www.kmau.siterubix.com

I can't do this without you! My WA Family!
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DValentine Premium
Hey Arthur! Here are my comments on your website:
1. Your Privacy Policy page - call it the Privacy Policy - at the moment it just comes up as 'Policy' which is wonderfully dark but not very useful :-)
2. Is the 'Tokyo Ravens' the only content? OK if it is - you need a lot more content on your posts and a lot more images - is there a way of getting images for Yakao Tsuchimikado, Harutora Tsuchimikado or any other character so your readers can see the character as well as read about them?
3. You have yet to fill out the 'Character' block or the 'Staff' block
4. Who is 'Arthur Jenkins'?
5. What, do you think, are Anime fans looking for? Does your post answer a particular question? You are, obviously, an Anime fan - what questions do you have about the genre and can you supply the answers to those questions?
6. You could do with an About Me page - just so people know who's on the other side of the screen.
7. You have a button to take your visitors to Youtube to watch the trailer - why not embed the video on the site? That way your readers stay longer on your site rather than watching cat videos on Youtube and never returning to your website!

The only Anime I have ever watched was Urotsukidōji: Legend of the Overfiend which, I think, was a Manga series to start then made into a film. I didn't have a clue what was going on! :-)

The skeleton is there Arthur - now you need to put the fat, muscle, nerves and skin on it.

You can do this!
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DeesreX2374 Premium
Thank you so much. Appreciate it. Ill fix up when im finished working!
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AmyStoskopf Premium
Good Afternoon. I am working on my website and figuring out getting images in my post and want to work on more posts and get some pages going. Before I continue to move along I would like some feedback and I will do the same in return.
Thank you!
puppiesanddogsplusmore.com
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APascaud Premium
What a nice topic. I'm sure there are plenty of dog, cat and animal lovers around the globe that would love to read your blogs. Yes indeed you need pictures. Just follow the chapters in the course and you will get to that topic pretty soon. But in short: if you click edit post, you see on top of the screen a button called "media" . Make sure your cursor is located in the text where you'd like to insert the photo, then click on that media button. It will lead you to your media library, which is most probably empty at this stage. You will need to fill your media library with royalty free photos that you'd like to use. Choose the photo that you'd like to insert on the specific spot and save. Good luck!!
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APascaud Premium
My latest post is: https://morefun2run.com/running-makes-me-poop/
Please, could you comment in my post and give me useful feedback as wel? I would be very grateful! Thanks in advance!
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AmyStoskopf Premium
Thank you for the feedback and I will do the same for you!
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URWRght Premium
I am a newbie (when do you stop being one?), the photos you have are good, but I think you need more. It seems that has come to me loud and clear. I am on my cell so everything else is not to scale. I’ll get back. Nice and genuinely true. Happy Days. Laura
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URWRght Premium
Good morning! I have had quite the struggle to get to this moment. I lost my website I had worked on for two months with four posts (my carelessness). Sulked for a minute, then started over. One month later I have the website and one post. I know I can improve it, can you help me? I’m not sure my niche is good, I’m competing with medical experts but I’m giving it a personal insight. Please look at ABOUT pages. Thank you.
apdscriber.com/
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BrewHappy Premium
Hi URWRght,

I am sorry that you lost your old website.

Coming to this website , I see one post put up already. Keep up the great work.

Personally, I feel that the picture in your article is a little too small. It makes the article too wordy to read all at once.

There are plenty of beautiful free themes available. I believe you can easily find something better.

That's all for the suggestions I have for you for now.

Thank you!
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BElliott56 Premium
Hello Laura, I'll be sending you a detailed private message on what I feel can help you and some great other things to consider on your website.
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URWRght Premium
Thank you, I've read that several times, something I will work on.
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frankyfive01 Premium
Hi All,
Still going through training and just finished my "about me post" and privacy page. No where near a finished site but I am hoping to get feedback on my about me post.
Also I published the privacy page and it does not show up on my site. I see it in my dashboard and can search but it is not a tab or anything in any menu. Could it be just the template theme I chose?
Thanks
reachmobility.siterubix.com
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suzieq Premium
Hi Frank,
I just looked at your about me page and it's great how you share your personal story. That will resonate with a lot of people.
A couple of suggestions if that's ok:
- I find your font size a little small. You should be able to adjust this in Appearance/Theme Options.
- If you're comfortable putting an image of yourself, that's always a great way to connect with your visitor.
- I would put all the headings in the first person, like "why I want to help people", and "the goal of my site".
Cheers,
Suzanne
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frankyfive01 Premium
Thank You so much Suzanne!

All very helpful. I had just followed the training Video to the T as much as possible. I too thought I need to do more with this page to personalize it. So I will indeed implement those suggestions.

PS. Congrats on being a 2 yr old Nana! I'm sure that 'it's too quiet' comment on your profile page is no longer applicable. LOL!

Peace & Blessings
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URWRght Premium
Could your About Me be split into also About (my site). Nice job.
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AlbertoJaber Premium
Hi everygone, it would be great if I could get some feedback on this post, it's my first list of product recomendations and I would love to know how to improve it.
If anyone has a post on which they would like feedback I will be very happy to return the favor.

https://topcoffeesecrets.com/what-is-the-best-french-press-the-top-buying-guide/
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mizzou72 Premium
Alberto,

I will PM you with my comments and suggestions
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APascaud Premium
Just commented on your article. Could you do me a return favour on my latest post : https://morefun2run.com/running-makes-me-poop/
All useful feedback is very welcome!. Thanks in advance!
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Edilaufer Premium
Hello there WA friends, I recently publish a new post on my new website, so feedback and comments would really help me understand if the direction I'm taking is good; it's an article about multi tools for bicycles in which I compare different products, and so far the post that took the longest research time.

https://myridetools.com/find-your-next-bike-multitool/


thanks in advance for the support!

Edi
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BElliott56 Premium
Hello Edi, you really educated me on all the different tools of bike maintenance. I will private email you on my recommendations that I found.
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mizzou72 Premium
Nice post. Will PM you with some comments and suggestions.
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Grace360 Premium
I would suggest capitalizing more of your headings throughout your website. Otherwise looks great!
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hassas27 Premium
Interesting site, your website is easy to navigate, I don't see any affiliate links in your articles, I guess you'll have those soon.
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AlbertoJaber Premium
Hi Edi, nice post, I like the way you summarize the important stuff, I am a biker as well and think it has everything I need to know to buy a multitool. I would just put a line or something in between products because it would probably be difficult to tell where a review ends and the next one starts.

Hope you can give me feedback on this post as well.
https://topcoffeesecrets.com/what-is-the-best-french-press-the-top-buying-guide/
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FlorianHoff Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋

I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙

And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)

Thank you and keep pushing for Greatness people! 😇

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/9-ways-to-improve-productivity/

PS: It's actually an Article about Productivity. So if you have trouble right now to get where you want to go, this article could help you maybe :) Anyway would love to hear your feedback guys!

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/9-ways-to-improve-productivity/
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adonis94 Premium
Hello! There's something wrong with your site/link. It says IP address can't be found.
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GUARDpage Premium
Hi my fellow WA members, I would like to get some feedback on a website about security officers roles and responsibilities an article about conflict resolution and dealing with the public. The site is :

http://guardpage.org

Thank you I will be glad to reciprocate, just put your link on your response, thanks Joseph
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BElliott56 Premium
There is a problem with your website. Nothing is coming up. Please add your site address or correct it. can't help you.
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ZiggyZ-0419 Premium
HI everyone! My name is Zack and I've just recently created my first website. My website focuses on the vaping niche and primarily product reviews.

I would greatly appreciate any general feedback on my website design, content or any other aspect of my site. To visit my site go to https://vapewithmeziggyz.com/

Thanks in advance for the help!

P.S. If you review my site and leave feedback I will gladly return the favor. Just link your website as a comment to this post.
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CoachNestor Premium
What's up everyone!

Man, this blog building is exciting stuff.

I've been wanting to do this for a while now but always found a reason not to do it.

I've been cramming away at building my site.

So far I don't have a ton of content other than just two posts where I let people know more about me.

My goal with my first 2 posts is to get people who read them to Trust me by telling them about me and why I want to help them.

I'll be adding more actual content based posts moving forward.

If you can give me a bit of feedback on how the first two posts come across, i'd love to hear it.

Thanks!

screwtheweightloss.com

Coach Nestor
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JSharma4 Premium
I enjoyed reading your blog. Straight from the heart. Best wishes to you on your journey here!

Jessica
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captgeech21 Premium
coach,

Where do you plan to go from here and what is your plans for the site? Is this something you want to drive traffic to in order to make recommendations for x, y and z which you can then use affiliate marketing for?

I think it has real potential if so.
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somg Premium
I really appreciate the perspective of your blog and agree with its premise. I am also in the health and fitness niche. I left you a comment and would love for you to check out one of my recent revised posts.

https://functional-strength.org/bosu-elite-and-centerline-strength

Thanks in advance.
Stacy
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AndrewIvan00 Premium
Yes that's true that there's a bigger picture than just losing weight and losing weight is just a part of the puzzle. In getting fitter you can reverse diabetes, improve cardiovascular health, improve mood etc. There's a lot of health benefits with fitness and a change in number on the scale doesn't give you enough information of your overall health.
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AndrewIvan00 Premium
If your not selling much in particular you can still do well with adsense
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FaithGabriel Premium
Hello All,

Please i need comments on my website www.foihub.com ? Please looking forward to your comments on my articles too? Still learning though.

If you are following the lessons you need to earn 2 WA credit to request feedback on your website through sitefeedback. I have just earned 1 credit because there are no website available to give comments.

Kyle and Carson should look into this so people can regularly get website to comment so not to stale the process since its a necessary box to tick moving forward. Thanks a million for your comments. I hope i am doing things right?

www.foihub.com
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Dave07 Premium
The site comments section is regularly out of sites needing comments but if you check back shortly there is usually a new request. Once you have left 2 comments on other sites you can start to request comments on your own.
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FaithGabriel Premium
Thank you Dave. Maybe i was always checking back when there were no site available. thanks again
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web58master Premium
Excellent website, Good grammar and punctuation, Great content. Excellent site.
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FaithGabriel Premium
Ok real! Thank you. Hoping i get ranked with these contents then. Thanks
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mizzou72 Premium
Happy Friday to Everyone,

I submitted a request for feedback on my latest post on "How to Learn to Play Golf" and on my new theme, Ignite, for my website yesterday:

https://redswhitesandgreens.com

Since I have not received any responses, as a small inducement, anyone who replies with some "nice" comments today, I will buy them an "In N' Out Burger" next time you are in W. LA.

Maybe even a "Double Double" with fries Animal style.

(Since that is close to 2,000 calories, you will have to sign an "Hold Harmless Agreement").

Have a great weekend. Hope to hear from you soon.
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DValentine Premium
Hey Dwight - here are my comments on your website
1. Color scheme: Could you adapt your color scheme to fit your content? It seems orange is a bit of a disconnect to my mind.
2. About page - A pic of yourself, or your favorite wine or your favorite course/green wouldn't go amiss here - it would add a bit of color.
3. The Learn To Play Golf post - it's packed with information but... could you just concentrate on the putting aspect for 1 post then the chipping, then the wedge - you've kinda used up 3 possible post titles under 1 post.
4. Your golf videos are packed full of videos and images - why not do the same for your wine posts? Maps of wine regions to show where your mentioned wines originate/come from, say - even a breakdown of a wine region into estates - Bordeaux down to St Emilion level.

Otherwise your content is solid and well laid out - no typos or grammar concerns that I could see.

All in all a good job - thanks for your hard work
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mizzou72 Premium
Thank you so much. Very good suggestions.

Have been looking for and changing themes. Have not customized this one yet.

I owe you a In N' Out Burger!!
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FlorianHoff Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋

I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙

And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)

Thank you and keep pushing for Greatness people! 😇

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/11-tips-on-how-to-reach-the-goal/

PS: It's actually an Article about Goal reaching. So if you have trouble right now to get where you want to go, this article could help you maybe :) Anyway would love to hear your feedback guys!

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/11-tips-on-how-to-reach-the-goal/
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gianlum1976 Premium
First of all my congrats for the site theme and organization, it's very professional and high end looking. The topic of goal setting resonates with me deeply as I'm working towards the same objective since long time without still having achieved it. I left you a comment, if you wish to visit my site and let me have your comments you can see https://familysecurityshield.com/
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Missmaygen Premium
Good Morning friends!
Yesterday was my day off from my "9-5 job", and I spent most of the day creating pages to shop the brands of my niche... If you have time could you please give me some feedback or suggestions. Of course, I will repay the favor.
Thank you and Good luck to everyone!!

https://alldogsdeservenatural.com

Thanks,
Megan
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DValentine Premium
Hi Megan
Are you looking for feedback on the whole of the site, on the posts and pages in general or a specific post?
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gianlum1976 Premium
The site topic is amazing and touches me personally as dog owner since long time. I can also say that it was about time someone treated the theme of going natural with our four legs family members. the theme is amazing, and I won't change anything except the background color, which I suggest always to be white. Minimalism is the new standard in the sites world and white suits this best. I left you a comment on your site. If you wish to review mine and comment is https://familysecurityshield.com/
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Missmaygen Premium
Thank you! I go back and forth with changing my background. I thought about leaving it white.. thank you for that advice.

Also, same to you on the theme, it seems to fit your site perfectly.

My only advice to you, is to maybe break up your post with some "white space"... it was advice given to me and it really did help make parts of my post stand out more.

You are a very good writer and people will enjoy reading your post, just make it as simple as possible. :)

Good luck to you,
Megan
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Missmaygen Premium
Honestly, I will take feedback on anything within my website. But yes, it would be nice to know if I am presenting the products in a good manner or not, in the "Shop Brands" tab.
Thank you for asking!
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ChristineDu1 Premium
Hello, I just left you a comment :-)
If you have time, I would love a comment on one of my articles :-)

https://myvegansausages.com/
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Missmaygen Premium
Thank you! I will check it out as soon as I log on tonight.
Best wishes,
Megan
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Sammie9 Premium
Hi Missmaygen,
Just left you some comments on your website.
Would love to hear from you on my latest post too!
https://healthylifestylehappyliving.com/top-10-healthy-lifestyle-tips-tip-no-4-of-10/
Cheers!
Sammie
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gianlum1976 Premium
I'm vegan since 2015 and I couldn't avoid to have a look at your side. Needless to say that I support and like everything you wrote. Fresh style and neat and clen theme. I like it very much. I just left a comment too. If you'd like to visit my site and give me your opinion it's https://familysecurityshield.com/
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Kareb Premium
Hi Gianlum1976, I visited your site and you have a wealth of useful knowledge! A great website came as a result of a hard time for your family, but you are very gracious to pass your information along for others. I can tell you really care about others and want to help! We all are better for it. Thank you!
Kareb
Www.orangehealing.com
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FlorianHoff Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋

I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙

And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website! :)

Thank you and keep pushing for Greatness people! 😇

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-change-the-habit-you-feel-bad-about-4-steps/

PS: It's actually an Article about CHanging Bad Habits. So if you have trouble right now to get where you want to go, this article could help you maybe :) Anyway would love to hear your feedback guys!

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/how-to-change-the-habit-you-feel-bad-about-4-steps/
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DaisyK78 Premium
Hi everyone
I recently changed the name of my website, so had to rebuild. I would love feedback about my site https://ourworldmotherearth.com/
Sadly I lost the 53 comments I already had on my site. All is not lost, I am still connected to helpful and lovely people in WA,
Thank you kindly
Daisy
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - you don't have an affiliate disclosure, which is mandatory.
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DaisyK78 Premium
Not sure what you mean?
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - by law, you have to let potential customers know that if they click on an affiliate link, that you will earn a commission if they buy something.

You can find examples on the internet which you can use, but as you are an affiliate with Amazon, you also need to add this exact phrase:

"As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases".
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KDoshi Premium
Hi Diane,
You you need it on every post or can you do it on the top menu as a post or page? Thanks.
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - you can add it as a page to your top menu.
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KDoshi Premium
Thanks for the advice!
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GALEH Premium
Diane,

You are a wealth of knowledge. Thank you.
I'm not there yet but good to know.

Gale
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Missmaygen Premium
Thank you! I was unaware of this, as well. I posted it in my "About" page.
I have seen you post this on numerous feedback posts, and now that I am an Amazon Associate... I am grateful for you.
Best wishes,
Megan
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DaisyK78 Premium
Oh ok, thank you so much for letting me know. I really appreciate it.
Kind regards
Daisy
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pmullinsj Premium
Hi all-- I would appreciate some feedback on my rather basic website (just from doing the first few lessons up the Feedback, but I cannot leave Feedback on any site for the two credits I need to ask for feedback for myself. https://balletcinema.com/ I don't know if I can continue with the lessons if I can't complete the 2 Feedbacks required. Thanks.
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BVince Premium
Hi Great a start and a good read - As you progress in the training you will learn to add photos which lift a post - i word recommend these . I would also recommend following the training but not being too hung up on missing feedback etc - I followed a rule to move forwards when i could to ensure i made the maximum benefit of my time and requested feedback when i had enough points to do so .

progression is key in my book - missing feedback initially will not have any detrimental effect on your site as long as you get it when you are able.

Excellent work your have an up and running site that can only grow as you learn more here at WA.

Much success
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pmullinsj Premium
This is so helpful and encouraging. Yes, I had felt an absence because of not having the images yet and can't wait to put some. And I think I can now move at a good clip, now that I will read some of the emails, all of which I appreciate, but some were intimidating since I was nowhere near there yet. What I'm going to do about that is finish the training, and there are bound to be tons of more emails, and I will then read all of them. Right now, if I read the ones too far advanced, it slows me up, but I felt guilty at first. But I'll get to the point where I'll be able to learn something from all of them. Thanks again, this was a real boost.
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RNL Premium
Hi Patrick,
I just looked at your site. It's nice and clean and uncluttered which I believe is a plus. Also the theme is good. I do have a slight issue with your writing style, and I say this as an Englishman who has done lots of writing over the years. My motto is generally 'shorter is better'. By that I mean your sentence lengths. Also it would make easier reading if you got to the point within your sentences a little quicker, in my opinion. Judging by your multiple interests within the Arts, you may need multiple websites!
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pmullinsj Premium
I think I will have to have several websites. Thanks for your response. Long sentences tend to come easily to me when I'm just being expressive in books or on blogs (the more personal kind), but I agree it needs to sound a bit more businesslike, which shorter sentence. I don't quite know how I would 'get to the point' quicker, because the whole post is about the same point; I don't have different points to make for each sentence, or even paragraph really, but I might see what you mean when I try to rewrite it. The 'making shorter' might take care of that too. That particular post-subject I tend to get a bit gushy about because it's literally one of my favourite things--which is why I knew I could get the full meaning of the content fulfilled, even though I need to work on a more succinct style. In the 'less is more' mode.
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RNL Premium
Yes it's a delicate balance between authentically sharing your passion and getting to the point.
Good Luck!
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Missmaygen Premium
Hey everyone,

I have dedicated a lot of time and effort into building an eye-catching website and I would love some opinions on whether you enjoy my site or not.

I am an avid dog-lover and my niche is natural dog food. My goal is to promote natural dog food and provide the right information regarding such.

Any feedback is welcome.

alldogsdeservenatural.com

Thank you,
Megan
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web58master Premium
Great niche choice. Almost everyone loves dogs and they will love your photos. Good grammar, punctuation and content. No shortcomings i could see. Very well done.
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Missmaygen Premium
Thank you! I am glad you like it! It makes me feel better to hear that.
Best wishes to you!
Megan
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TIfafore Premium
left a comment on your most recent post. Would love if you could return the favor: https://besttravelclothes.com/shoppers-remorse-5-big-travel-purchases-to-av
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Missmaygen Premium
Thanks!!
I left a comment as well!
Best wishes! Good niche idea!
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Specialk3749 Premium
Great site! It was very well laid out and eye catching. I left a comment for you.
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Missmaygen Premium
Thank you!
I will repay the favor!
Best Wishes,
Megan
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drobe26 Premium
Hey all,

I just started here, and opening my first website. I only have 1 post so far, and I'm also waiting for google to crawl my site (TAKES FOREVER! Any suggestions?) Since I am new, I feel like I'm not doing this right, and planning to add additional posts that are more helpful, but figured I'd get some reviewing in first.

https://www.security-bytes.com/best-antivirus-software-2019-the-search-for-virus-protection/

and https://www.security-bytes.com in general.

Thanks in advance for checking it out,
Don
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DValentine Premium
Hey Don
The major gap I can see is that you need an affiliate disclaimer on your website - you can either put it into your widgets so it shows up on every page or you can put it at the bottom of every post that contains a link.
If you're an Amazon affiliate then you'll need their own disclaimer on your site - it's mandatory. Either check the Amazon Associates website for it or do a search for it.
Also, you've written around 500 words and you have 4 links - the word on the street is that you should have 1 link per 500 words (approx) otherwise your post looks a bit spammy. For your links you'd be looking at writing around 2000 words.
Perhaps you could add 2-3 more products such as Malwarebytes and/or Avast. You could even add McAfee and tell people why you don't like it.
Hope that helps
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drobe26 Premium
Thanks so much. Yes, that actual post is a work in progress. I like the idea on adding Mcafee and saying I don't like it. That adds additional words. So for links, I need to decrease my links it sounds like. Like removing one of the Amazon links for Bitdefender. I need to add ESET on there, my goal is to have 10ish?

I've also been watching training and some people seem to like making reviews on separate pages... I'm mostly just working to figure this out :) The difficult part is there is no easy button, or template that works every time.
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DValentine Premium
Actually Don, doing a separate review for 1 product on its own age isn't a bad idea. You could leave your blog posts for more general info on cybersecurity and then, when some new virus comes out you could make a post about and point your readers to the product page that would best deal with that threat.
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DValentine Premium
Sorry - 'page' not 'age' - if you do go down the 1 page per review path your reviews are going to have to be really in-depth, real nitty-gritty stuff
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drobe26 Premium
Thanks! I'll think on that too. I also like some of the other sites I've seen that are giving a rating 1-10 score on products. I think that might be something I need to hit on too. As always, it looks to be a work in progress.

Any suggestions on how to get Indexed by google? It's been about 4-5 days and nada... I could just be impatient, as always. I assume there has to be a way to get google to notice you faster.
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DValentine Premium
Are you following the Online Entrepreneur Certification? If so, it would appear that there is training in phase 5 for doing exactly that - making Google notice us.
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drobe26 Premium
Haven't gotten there yet! I'm on Phase 3 right now.
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DValentine Premium
that's my level too
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KerynS Premium
Hello, everybody. I hope you all are having a wonderful weekend.
I have been working on our new website for the past two weeks and was hoping to get some honest, insightful and helpful feedback for it.

https://lovebodyfatsolutions.com/

Thank you so much in advance. If you ever need anything just let me know below.

Extremely grateful.

Sincerely,

Keryn
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siucao Premium
Hi Keryn

Your website is very informative!
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Tanko77 Premium
hello Keryn,your presentation is great and the content.you are doing a great job and am wishing you all the best.
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - let's talk about Amazon! You are breaking several of their rules which will get you banned from their program.

Your affiliate disclosure needs to have this exact phrase:

"As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases".

You cannot add the price of a product to your reviews.

You can only use the one image they supply you with. You can't pick extra ones from the selection on the left of the product on the Amazon page.
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Ikaria Premium
Wow. Very informative and very well put together. I read it and learned a few things. Wishing you all the best!
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Dextorious Premium
You've certainly been busy in two weeks! A lot of pages.

I notice that some of the colour schemes clash like the background colour and the text below a post ( you know where it shows to go to the last or next article), which may be worth changing.

The articles themselves are very well researched with tonnes of information which is great.

When you click on each of your page headings it goes to a page showing 'Nothing Found'. It'll be worth directing the link to a page showing all the articles within the topic so that it looks tidy.

I think your quote to the side "Come as a stranger, leave as a friend" is fantastic and a good kind of ethos to have for wheny ou write your articles.

Hope this feedback helps.
Dex
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Fowolabi Premium
Hi, I am just building a website in tackle chronic diseases niche. Will I be able to get feedback on my website please to see how I am doing please? No tech experience. I need to make sure I am doing it right before I move too far.
www.tacklechronicdiseases.com

Thank you.
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ElinaHei Premium
Hello, here is my website im working with, it is about Bake and cooking so i named it like this http://elinasdreamkitchen.com/

Hope you enjoy it.. Remember it isn`t ready yet :D
i have lost my thought and i dont know wath i should still be writteing on pages or posts so im a litle stuck with it

Elina
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JohnHall1 Premium
I like the images you added to your site and its a simple read easy to understand.
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate using Site Manager.

As English isn't your first language, try and make use of the spell checker. There are lots of mistakes, most notably in your tagline where you have spelt kitchen incorrectly.

Moving forward, you should be writing posts, not pages.
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ElinaHei Premium
Thanks so much, i tryed to do it easy to understand =)
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ElinaHei Premium
I know that ther is mictakes, i cant write like master bicouse
i have writing disorder. and it doesn't pour my life if `. something is missing.. thanks anyway...
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Uniquecus Premium
It's simple...anything related to cooking or baking! Even your recipe likes and dislikes.
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - if you are writing your posts using Site Content, there is a spell checker in there which you can use. It will help you get better with the English language.
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ElinaHei Premium
Okay, thanks alot =)
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Marcm247 Premium
Hi Guys, as part of my training I'm building a website.. If you could be so kind and check it out and feel free to give me some feedback / ideas..... And while you are on my site, feel free to leave a comment if you see something you like ;o)
Thanks you so much !

https://mychicethnic.com/

PS. Jacky is the Mrs, just in case you would be wondering
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TAM3 Premium
Hi!
You guys are off to a great business!

I feel Jacky's "about me" page explains the purpose of your business nicely; a worthy cause to help Hmong tribal members make a living.

I might suggest a different theme--something really eye-catching. You might include pictures of Thailand, people creating the bags and accessories, etc.

Keep going! I look forward to following your progress!
Tamara
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jivitaa339 Premium
Hey Marc,

Really beautiful site and you really have some of the great collection of handmade purses and bags.
In a small period of time, you really created a wonderful website, I think if you add a logo to your site, it creates a brand.
I know you have "My chick ethnic" on all your products, and a great logo itself. You should add it to your header area as a logo. It will give your site branding.
Also, it is recommended to have a white background for website, but since your website is about ethnic products, I think you have selected it on purpose.
A really nice website.

Here is my latest post, would appreciate if you comment on my blog post.
https://advantageaffiliates.com/digital-income-system-review

Regards
jivita
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Marcm247 Premium
Hi Jivita, thanks for your time and feedback, I really appreciate it. the issue I am having with the banner in the header is that it makes the text unreadable in my header and I was so far unable to change the text color. I think the issue is with the template I chose that doesn't give that option in the free version (?)
Big thank you for your review!
Kind regards,
Marc
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Marcm247 Premium
Hi Tamara, thanks for your time and nice words as feedback.
we are working on the pictures of Thailand and other pictures of creating the bags.
I am happy for the positive and constructive comments !
Well received!
Thanks again and have a wonderful day
Marc and Jacky
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Marcm247 Premium
Hi Jivita,

Good article ! it warns people for the potential spending of a lot of money if not well informed. It is well structured and has all the "dots on the i's" Also your call to action at the end is good.

The Captcha for leaving a comment is a bit "over the top" and I miss the "why" do you want to have that there.
Personally, the mandatory requirement to provide an email address, to be able to leave a comment, should be optional versus mandatory, it would have stopped me of leaving a comment if I didn't land on your article from WA.

I hope this helps
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Marcm247 Premium
Hi Tamara, thank you for the feedback and suggestion for a different theme. Feel free to drop me a line what theme that could be ?
Thank you!
Marc
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AltheaMc Premium
Hi guys, I am building a website in the "mature woman" niche. I am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am doing with this website. Here is my domain name:
https://thematuringwoman.com

Thanks, guys.

Please also note that if you need my assistance in doing the same for you or any other way that you feel I may be able to help please share your link, or let me know how I may assist you.
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Marcm247 Premium
Hi, I receive the following when clicking on your link
Unable to connect, maybe you want to check and I'll try again later.
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - your article on food is 53% copied and pasted from various websites, mainly from prevention.com, and the one on pampering is 49% copied from kipkis.com. You can't do this. Everything has to be original and in your own words. I haven't checked your other articles, but if they are also copied, they need to be rewritten too.
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AltheaMc Premium
Ok
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FlorianHoff Premium
Hello everyone! 🙋

I'd love to hear some comments about my new blog post and how it turned out. I really got personal with this one, so I would appreciate every comment. If you are interested in all sorts of mindset things, I think you would like it 💙

And if you love it, I would really appreciate it if you could share it, it would help a lot! I always return the favor with a comment & share, so just PM me and I'll happily comment on your website twice! :)

Thank you and keep pushing for Greatness people! 😇

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/11-tips-on-how-to-reach-the-goal/

PS: It's actually an Article about Goal reaching. So if you have trouble right now to get where you want to go, this article could help you maybe :) Anyway would love to hear your feedback guys!

https://www.mindsetboosting.com/blog/11-tips-on-how-to-reach-the-goal/
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WAA1 Premium
Hello WA community! I will be online for the next 45 minutes reviewing your newest pages and posts!

If you get a comment from me it means I have left a comment for your approval on the page / post you just created.

My latest is right here as well! Please consider reading and let me know in a comment here what you think needs improvement or other work. And leave a comment on my new post for my approval which helps with my interaction on pages (Helps get more traffic and you can do this too!) I always reply to comments within 12 hours :)

This is my first recommended products type of page. I am still working on the formatting / spacing, it's quite difficult!

https://radicalelectricbikes.com/trip-checklist-best-tips-for-the-best-ride/
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ChristineDu1 Premium
Hi, I'm from a bycicle riding country (Belgium), we use the bike for nearly everything ;-), so I enjoyed checking out the products you recommend on your page. Very good products by the way. Right now I live in Mexico, where in some places riding a bike is dangerous (although it is getting better where I live). So, I hope to start riding a bycicle again some time soon :-) Your site certainly made me consider it ;-)
Your article was very well organized, as were the products. Very nice site, good work!
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AbigailRash Premium
Hey all! I am not new but I started and then ran in a different direction. I need feedback on what you think before I go any further. I have so much more I want to post, just want to make sure that I am doing it right.

Thank you all for your help.

https://featheredfriends.siterubix.com/
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Coraliej Premium
Hi Abigail,
I think your site is such a cool concept. The website looks good.
I read your post and I really like it. If I could say one thing, maybe if you could add a few more images throughout, always helps in breaking up the content.
Overall, I did like it.
Good job.
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bellison0828 Premium
Hello Abigail,

I really liked the appearance of your website. It is pleasing to the eye. The colors are soft and the images are cool.

You almost make me want to go out and get some chickens. And I live in an apartment complex. LOL

Your content was very good, the flow was good also. I did find a few typographical errors so I want to point them out to you.

1. Where to get baby chicks
The second sentence does not make sense to me, but it could be me. "Feathered Friends is just one in hundreds of different places.
2. Caring for your chicks
Last paragraph first sentence I think you need to delete some spaces to put the all together.
3. Raising Chicken's - FAQ
#5 Says Should I was the eggs my hens lay? Sentence doesn't make sense.
#10 Sentence 3 It then starts it on its way down the oviduct. Not sure, but maybe it should say...It then starts on it's way down the oviduct. I'm not sure, it may be exactly as you want it.
4. Back Story
First paragraph, second line towards the end of the sentence until I figured out what I like (probably should be liked?) and wanted to raise.

If there are any grammatical errors or sentence structure errors, I can't help you with that, but other than that you have a really cool website.

Enjoyed reading the post. Interesting enough to hold my attention and at times that can be pretty hard to do.

Keep up the good work!

Blessings~
Brenda
P.S. I hope this is what I was supposed to do for the feedback. This is my first one;-)
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TAM3 Premium
Awesome website!

I grew up on a farm in Utah. We raised chickens, ducks, sheep, cows, goats, horses, and rabbits and grew apples, pears, peaches, plums, and cherries. It was a wonderful experience I have always looked back on fondly. I learned how to work hard and to love and respect animals.

I didn't know a lot of the facts and tips you've shared, so thanks! And I'll be following you.

Tamara
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WAA1 Premium
Hello everyone ! I have been away from posting and finally back into the swing of things. I put more product research and mindfulness towards realistic writing and how to engage the audience :)

Here is my link to my latest post, I would love to review yours as well!

https://radicalelectricbikes.com/trip-checklist-best-tips-for-the-best-ride/
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ChristineDu1 Premium
Hi everyone, I wrote a new article today. At first I didn't know what to write (which doesn't happen to me often, lol, so, I was a little worried about the lack of inspiration), but then it came to me, and I wrote something slightly different, no recipes, no product reviews, but something I just improvised on the spot yesterday. Let's see what you think ;-)

I always gladly return the favor, Just leave me your website in the comments :-) and I will comment on your website too :-)
Have a great weekend!

https://myvegansausages.com/cooking-is-an-art-cooking-challenge-included/
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ConnorG5 Premium
Hello everyone!
I would appreciate if you would read my post and give it a review. Today I wrote about procrastination and a few ways one can overcome it. Any feedback is welcome. Thank you for your help!
If you want me to reciprocate let met know.

theanxiousforeigner.com/3-ways-to-overcoming-procrastination/
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - your site is difficult to read. White font on a blue background with a blurry green photo to each side of the article is very hard on the eyes. A simple black font on a light background is the recommendation to keep readers on your website.
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LuigiCappel Premium
hey folks, racing through the third set of training and guess what, time for another post. This one is for guitarists about the value of knowing the names of chords and being able to share them, especially if you want to play with other people. https://guitaraccessories.org/do-you-know-the-name-of-chords-you-are-playing/
I'll be looking at yours:)
Thanks heaps
Luigi
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HilaryJo Premium
Hi everyone! I wrote my first blog to market Wealthy Affiliate! Can I please get some feedback about the writing, mostly that the communication is clear, and it's not too salesy? Thanks so much! I'd really appreciate constructive criticism :)
I will return feedback or comments. Thank you!

https://passiveincomeincrease.com/creating-passive-income-a-road-to-true-financial-freedom/
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LuigiCappel Premium
Great article Hilary, if I wasn't already here, I'd be clicking on your link. The only thing I can add other than commend you on a great article, is to edit in Wordpress and create one or more categories, and untick Uncategorized. Otherwise, great work as I would expect with your pedigree!
For anyone who is interested in sharing a comment, my latest article is for guitar players and songwriters. I know there are some of you here
https://guitaraccessories.org/do-you-know-the-name-of-chords-you-are-playing/
Thanks as always
Luigi
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HilaryJo Premium
oooh crap. I did forget to do the category menu thing on that site - thank you for the reminder! When I get home and can access other sites I will be happy to leave a comment on that article. Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
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HilaryJo Premium
Thank you SO SO much for the awesome comment on that page! It's fab!! I returned the favor on the page you suggested. :) I hope you have a great night!
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mmartanek Premium
Hey guys! Im just trying to build up my blog atm. Not much in there yet, but getting there.
My niche is family traveling, traveling with children, outdoor activities with kids.
Your feedback and a comment would be much appreciated!
I sure return your favor!
https://wanderwithkids.com/is-roys-peak-track-near-wanaka-suitable-for-children/

Thank you
Martina
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LuigiCappel Premium
Nice one Martina, nice to have another Kiwi here. New Zealand is such an awesome place for hiking. So much of the countryside shouts to be walked or climbed on. The South Island is amazing, so many places to explore and so many different landscapes.
I look forward to visiting your site more often.
My site is https://guitaraccessories.org/
All the best
Luigi
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mmartanek Premium
Hi Luigi, thanks for your comments! I am actually not a kiwi (not yet) but been living here for almost ten years now.. My children are kiwi though.. Yes, we love exploring the outdoors around! So why not to share our experience right? ;) Love your page as well! Will definitely follow, maybe I get into playing again..
Have a great day
MArtina
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LuigiCappel Premium
Thanks Martina, I was born in Holland but have my NZ citizenship. Yes! Start playing again, it's good for the kids too, music is a family affair:)
Luigi
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KristenaC Premium
Hey wealthy affiliate fam! Hope everyone is rocking it so far. I have made some changes to my site (like adding a forum) and would love some feedback on what you think about the whole thing. Let me know you if you would like some feedback as well after leaving me some (make sure I have a link to your site) and I will be happy to leave you some as well. https://zerototwentyone.com
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Shane34 Premium
I loved your website those videos of the babies was very interesting and that is a really good reason to get a baby monitor. My only suggestion is that could you make the production description bigger?
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KristenaC Premium
What exactly do you mean make it bigger? Do you mean you would like to have more details on the product itself, features, etc?
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Shane34 Premium
Like the font bigger when you were talking about There Are Some Minor Issues With This Monitor and went and gave us the information on it.
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KristenaC Premium
Oh that is an image and is why it is so small. I tried to make that image bigger, but had some issues with getting it to be larger. I will work on that again. Hopefully I can get it to work. Thank you!
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Shane34 Premium
You welcome and thank you for you feedback as well.
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LuigiCappel Premium
Great site Kristen and what a good idea to set up a forum. I might have a think about that in the future too.
I like your bio and agree, they never stop being your kids. You never stop helping and guiding them or worrying a little about them:)
My site is https://guitaraccessories.org/ and I'd welcome any feedback thanks
Luigi
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KristenaC Premium
Luigi,

I absolutely have no constructive critics for you because your site looks fantastic. It looks clean and easy to read and find what you are looking for. I actually bookmarked it for my son who has decided that he would like to start playing the guitar.
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LuigiCappel Premium
Thanks so much Kristen. If you don't rent a guitar for your son (often they decide they don't want to again so it is a good idea), don't buy a cheap 'learners' guitar as I said in one of the articles, they are almost always terrible and put a lot of learners off.
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Weinkea Premium
Hey everyone!

Just finished adding pics and gifs to one of my posts.

https://teeoffdiscgolf.com/4-essential-tips-for-how-to-get-better-at-disc-golf

What do you think about how the page overall looks? Does it look too simple or do you like the clean look of everything. Just trying to gauge if I should change the site look at all.

Thanks!
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siamjerry Premium
It looks very nice to me. Just keep it simple and clean, as this is what I was advised to do.
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PaulBenedict Premium
Very nicely done I thought you gave some good information. If you have time please give some feed back on my site.
http://savemoneyonpetsupplies.com
To your success
Thank You
Paul
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EricF1 Premium
Hi Weinkea it looks cool too me, keeping it simple and straight to the point.
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Shane34 Premium
I think it look very clean and i like the videos you have on there as well.
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Lizbit77 Premium
Your site does look very clean & the gifs are a great addition! I may have to follow your lead & add some of my own to my site!
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mmartanek Premium
I like the article and your page. Pretty straight forward. people get the info they need. and the videos are amazing to have there too! Great work!
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Weinkea Premium
Thanks for the feedback!

Your site looks good, looks like you've been putting out some consistent content, and good content too. Nice quality pictures to go with. One easy way to improve your site would be to add a more related banner picture at the top. The highway picture doesn't really fit the pet supplies theme.
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steve250 Premium
Hey guys, I am just building a website about telling another narrative from what many are used to hear about my dear continent Africa and I am wondering if you can give me some feedback on how I am coming along with my website. Here is my domain:

https://africanwealthexposed.com/

Thanks!

Of course, reply with your domain and I'll leave a feedback on your website too!
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AndrewIvan00 Premium
There's no shortage of writing material on your website. If you wrote it all that's quite impressive. Good display of pictures and good to see an extensive menu down the side with recent posts and previous posts. I would make the top menu button stand out more.
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PaulBenedict Premium
Very informative web site I enjoyed reading it. The only thing that I would suggest is adding a leave comment block at the end of your post.This will make it easier to get reply's back.

If you get the time please check out my new post.And my web site
thank you.
http://savemoneyonpetsupplies.com/border-collie-breeds/

To Your Success
Paul
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OldGeorge Premium
Hi family :-)
I'm working on my website and I don't have ANY IDEA if I'm on track or completely lost in universe already :-)

If someone could give me an idea please. Just an idea in general.
This is the link: www.wofety.com

Of course I will do it in return if wanted!

Thanks and all the best for all of you!
George
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EN4Freedom Premium
I hope the honesty is not hard to hear. I will point out both positive and negative points, and give you an idea for a solution.

Very nice job on the design of the website. It's a good theme, and it is done up very attractively.

Categories. You need to be more careful how you categorize your articles. You have chosen good category names for the theme, but I don't see a lot of articles written in the direction of helping workers stay safe and protected. The theme chosen is work safety.

As for gardening, bbq's and wasps, perhaps you can start a category called Yard Safety?

Argan Oil Benefits, while a very well-done article, definitely does not fit into the theme of Work Safety, neither the category, nor the main theme of the website, at all. If you like writing about health benefits of food, or specialty foods, or skin care, you can start another blog within that theme.

It's good to stay within a given theme or else people will be confused about the purpose of a website.

Hope this helps.
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OldGeorge Premium
Hi,
thank you very much for your detailed answer! I very much appreciate that!
You are right - I will change the structure of the categories.
Maybe I can come back to you when I'm done?
Thanks again!
George
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OldGeorge Premium
I did some changes already... Maybe you could have a glance?
Best,
George
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AlexGray7 Premium
Hi George! I took a look at your website and it's fantastic! It looks very professional and there is a some great design and eye catching choices like the scrolling banners :)

You are further along than me but if you want some really expert feedback Privately Message Kyle and he will get back to you :)

Alex
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OldGeorge Premium
Hi Alex,
many many thanks for your compliment! Wow! :-)
I will write some comments more and then contact Kyle I thought.
It's really necessary to know if I'm on track :-)
All the best!
George
PS: If you need a comment just let me know!
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AlexGray7 Premium
You are very welcome George :) Yes I would greatly appreciate any comments you would like to share on my site!
Thank you :)

www.naturesteaspoon.com
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OldGeorge Premium
Done :-)
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PaulBenedict Premium
Looks to me like you are a web designer I wish my site looked that good.But you can look at it any way. It is my first try.

http://savemoneyonpetsupplies.com

Keep up the good work
Paul
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JEatmon1 Premium
Howdy! I hope everyone is having a great holiday weekend. I've used this time to try to add a bit to my site. Please review this recent post and let me know what you think. Drop me a line and I am glad to review your site also! Happy holiday!
https://campingequipmentdeals.com/your-camping-goals/
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - have you purposely chosen to have your menus on the left-hand side of the screen? Or does it come that way with the theme? The eyes are naturally accustomed to read from left to right, so it makes reading your post somewhat awkward.
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LethaK1 Premium
Hey I took a look at your website and it was great post. Yes, I could see myself there chilling.
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LethaK1 Premium
Please take a look at my website and let me know what you think. I'm just building it;
https://possiblehomebusiness.com
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JEatmon1 Premium
It's the theme. Thanks for the feedback.
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CK5687 Premium
Hey everyone,

So over the past week I have updated my whole theme and posted several new things up on my page.

Pretty please can I steal some comments from you on whatever catches your eye!!!

And if you notice anything that seems adrift in the new layout I am open to hearing about it :)

Appreciate you all!

https://elite-professional-grade-kitchen.com/
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ChrissieDM Premium
Hey Charity, love your Wordpress theme it looks great - I left a comment and a question on your cookware post.

Just a small thing - the misspelling of Copper as item 2)
I randomly checked navigation - working fine.

My hiking website if you care to leave a comment on any post:
https://lightenthehike.com/
Thanks in advance!

Chrissie
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btclark34 Premium
This is a fantastic website! I like to cook, so i will keep coming back to your website for advice. I also like the family touch. It gives your website personality. If there was one thing that I would change, its the banner on the home page that automatically moves from one subject to another. For me, it moves a little too fast from one subject to the next. I would slow it down. But that is a personal preference. Someone else might like it just as it is, but something to think about.
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CK5687 Premium
I actually agree with you on the speed. I can only change it if I buy the pro version. I am going to see how this continues to flow with me for about a month and see if its worth the money. Thanks for the feedback.
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CK5687 Premium
Always happy to fix something spellcheck misses lol. Happy to leave a comment for you as well.
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - your affiliate disclosure is worded incorrectly for Amazon's purposes. This phrase, in particular, will get you banned from their program "Each of your purchases via our Amazon affiliation links supports our cause at no additional cost to you."

This is what you need to say "As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases"
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OfficialPRAB Premium
Hey guys, I just put an opt-in plug-in on my website. I need some feedback on these new changes.

I was wanting an opt-in for my page, but this was because I didn't think that people were seeing my product. I know that I don't always click on embedded links while I'm reading a blog post.

By the way, it opens in a new tab so the reader is still able to read the blog.

https://princess-rachel-angelica-beanum.com/applying-maslows-heiarchy-of-needs-what-level-are-you-on/

Thanks, guys, I could also use some comments. Message me with your links & I will return the favor.
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - I couldn't find a way of closing the pop-up without having to subscribe. This may be annoying to some visitors, who will leave your page without going any further.

It doesn't open in a new tab, it remains in the centre of the screen, obscuring your content. I am using the Chrome browser on a desktop PC.
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JAngele Premium
Hi Kyle and Carson,

The one important thing that is missing on your website is a Search. This is a very dense, intense program, and easy to forget where to find what I want to see or work on.

For example, I want to look at my email address and forward that I created recently, without having to watch the video over again. It is a question of efficiency and saving time. I want to look at where I put this email and forward address, but I do not have a Rubix Section on my left column (different from what you show in your video.

I am 84 and to remember all the details I created or am following, or is part of my education is very difficult, as you can imagine.

Thank you for considering fixing this as requested.

Sincerely yours

J. Angele Kuchukian
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EN4Freedom Premium
Hey, I just finished my first post and played around with the design of my blog, I'd really like to get some feedback. Positive feedback is nice but if you see anything wrong I really want to hear about it so I can fix it!

https://Online4Freedom.com

Looking forward to any insights I might gain from this!
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Mathessa40 Premium
hello, I post a comment on your site, good info but the beginning of the page, the Title is to long its like the introduction of your page and I cant really read it well because the side bar is blocking them. But there is some good information in your website. Thank you.
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EN4Freedom Premium
Thanks for your feedback! I have implemented changes to the design thanks to your input. It does look cleaner. Also, if you are interested, my roommate read and gave me some honest critiques on the same blog post that you commented on, I made some changes to the text. Thanks for your help!
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Alena10 Premium
That was s very good piece, short and sweet right to the point and I live with a gammer,all Grammer was good and the only thing I could say about it is it was a little dark ,but very good, I was wondering when I would see something about gameng but very good . Good luck .
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AnyaL111 Premium
HEy guys!! I got tasked with asking for feedback on the first post i made with an affiliate link in it. Would someone please have a look and tell me if it looks ok? I put the disclaimer on the bottom of the article, as I have seen a lot of blogs do that, but maybe I should have it in the beginning? Also, I am going to put a menubutton in the menu bar, that is called disclosures (or do you have better suggestions? )
Link:

https://luxxemakeup.com/makeup-brush-cleaning-solution-my-cheap-micellar-shampoo-trick/

Thanks alot!! I hope to hear from you :))
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Kae3 Premium
I just had a read and also left you a comment I do love my make-up too. Post looks good to me and I see what you mean about the disclaimer on the bottom I better put that in now.
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AnyaL111 Premium
Thank you very much for taking the time!! 🤓🙏 Yes, disclaimers are superimportant as I understand that affiliate networks can deny you commisions etc. If you are not compliant w. Regards to these regulations 😱
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Kae3 Premium
Oh gosh, okay I updated to say 'affiliate links attached' and hope that's okay to be compliant. I never noticed it before on anyone else's or heard this , maybe I missed that part in the training. Thanks again for pointing it out. Good luck with your website.
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iamrichard Premium
Hey guys, we recently changed the theme of our website. If you're willing, please check it out and provide us with some feedback on the look and feel of it. If there are any improvements that need to be made, please let us know. The favor will be returned! Thanks for your help!

https://yourewealth.com/
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JonathLee Premium
Hi Richard, I've just posted a comment on your website about the best affiliate program.
If you want, please return the favor and comment at my website:)
https://mybasketballequipment.com
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Kae3 Premium
Hello everyone! We have a key astrology transit happening Mercury enters Gemini on the 21st May. I just quickly wrote and article on how this could impact us before I go to bed. Basically it's time to focus on goals perfect for all of us at WA. Anyone interested in esoteric subjects please take a look and please drop a comment on the article. I will be returning this favour

https://thespiritualparlour.com/sun-and-mercury-conjunction-in-gemini-time-to-focus-on-goals/
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mizzou72 Premium
I am working on my webiste about golf and wine, and I will be tying the two together as I go forward.

I don't know about you guys, but it is taking me forever to write each post. I tend to do a lot of research.

Anyway, I would appreciate any feedback from the Community on my site and/or on my latest post, "How to Stop Slicing Your Golf Ball".

www.redswhitesandgreens.com

I will be changing the theme, once I find one that I like. I know this theme is not supported any more, but I was just following along with the one Kyle was using in his training.

I know I need to add images to my article on white wine.

I would be happy to review anybody else's website or posts if you provide me the URL.

Thanks, ..... and be kind:)

Dwight
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APascaud Premium
Hi Dwight, just commented on your red wines article, as I'm not a golfer myself. But I do like wine!
Like you I'm a nit-wit when it comes to blogging. So it takes me forever too to write a new article with the right SEO keywords and finding the right photos. I guess it's a matter of practice to gain more and more experience. Time will tell!

I think that the combination of wines and golf is great. Play some golf, make use of your helpful tips & tricks on golfing techniques and afterwards enjoy wines at hole 19, following your recommendations. It might be helpful to somehow link the two topics more. Now it's almost like its two different websites in one.
Keep up the good work. Add some pictures, as you already mentioned, because that makes the site more appealing.
Good luck with the next articles!
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mizzou72 Premium
Thanks so much for your comments. The linking is coming. Video is critical and images are also helpful. No one wants to just read a bunch of words. BORING!!!!!
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Maximus343 Premium
Overall I was impressed, it is far superior to my own infant site - some nice links too. There are a number of spelling errors but they will soon be resolved - I did particularly like, "I'd love a Birth Chat".

Being a sailor I could not help but notice that the explanation of time was weak. Remember always that Longitude is a function of time so because the earth revolves 360 degrees in 24 hours, it turns 15 degrees of Longitude in 1 hour - or 4 degrees in 1 minute. Consequently, because each sign is 30 degrees or 2 hours, it is important to give your birth time as accurately as possible.

Good luck
Yours aye
Maximus
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KristenaC Premium
Hey everyone, I have just posted an article about remaining calm during stressful situations and would love some feedback on it. I will return the favor.
https://zerototwentyone.com/how-to-remain-calm-in-stressful-situations-is-it-really-that-easy/

You can also just give me some feedback on the overall look and feel of my website if you would rather do that instead.

Thank you.
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GingerC1 Premium
Hello KristenaC. I left you a comment on your site. I loved the information that you had on there. I know it will help a lot of people. Thank you!
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KristenaC Premium
Hey, I took a look at your site and looks pretty good. My only advice is to include several mini titles in your articles to make it for easier reading and easier to transition from one topic to the other because it can get a little confusing and make it seem as if you are a bit all over the place. Helps is flow better. Now this is just my opinion on the matter so please don't take it as me putting your writing down at all. I also noticed that some of your photos overlapped some of your wording to where it cut a letter or two off the word. I would highly recommend proofreading and previewing how it is going to look before and after you publish it. Hope this helps a little!
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GingerC1 Premium
Thank you so much. I'm going to go back and move those pictures. I'm also going to possibly do some sub headings. I appreciate you looking at it and providing me some feedback. Thank you again.
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APascaud Premium
Hiiii, I've launched my site not so long ago and looking for useful feedback. It's about Runners and how to tackle typical runners "issues"....for now the articles are mainly about injuries and how to cope with them, treat them and a post on rehabilitation after injury. But soon I will also discuss other topics related to running. Hope you have some time to have a look and let me know what you think. Thank you in advance for your feedback and comments. Have a lovely day, regards,
Angelique
www.morefun2run.com
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Kae3 Premium
Afternoon all! I have written this week's astrology horoscopes for all zodiac signs. Calling all esoteric lovers or those who wish to see what's happening this week. Please have a look, drop me a comment on the blog post!
http://thespiritualparlour.com/free-daily-horoscope-next-three-days-20th-15th-may/

I'll be doing some rounds now and returning the favour from what I see has been posted.
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feigner Premium
I would just check your title. i think you have a 1 rather than a 2.
i would add a link to a subscribe page - make it easy
your example birth chart doesn't link anywhere
i take it you are not indexed in google.
and don't forget to activate your ssl certificate - giving you https (under sitemanager where it has 3/x click on the siteplus and activate the ssl)
good luck with the site
phil
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Kae3 Premium
Thank you Phil I have clicked everything on under the site manager and gosh how did I miss the title!? I can't actually link to a subscribe page as I used a widget box so just mentioned to look there. I can't think of any other way to do it. Thanks for the feedback on this, if you want to leave a comment on the post itself...knock yourself out and feel free!
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feigner Premium
easy to do - confused me a bit at the start till i worked it out.
can you not have a page or a popup for the subscribe as well and link to that.
this way you can use the space above the fold but under the subscribe to advertise your personal horoscope service.
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OldGeorge Premium
Nice match to my starsign! :-)
I left a reply.
If you like in return - just choose something you are interested in please.
www.wofety.com
Best,
George
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Kae3 Premium
Thank you I just saw it I am so glad that the horoscope resonates with you! I am checking you out now.
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Kae3 Premium
I'll take a look at this and see if I can do it, thank you!
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Kae3 Premium
Thanks George the article on child safety online was informative for me I did reply. Also the layout of your site is very visually pleasing! Good luck, good articles up there.
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Kae3 Premium
I submitted a site map to Google, does that help with the indexing? I find this stuff rather complex to understand fully. I hope I've followed the right thing to do do rank?
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OldGeorge Premium
Thanks a lot!
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feigner Premium
submitting the sitemap is the first thing you do.
and when you add content you can then ask google to index it.
if you haven't got that far in the training yet, don't worry keep going.
but using the url inspector in search.google.com will get google to add your content to its database quicker than allowing it to find it naturally.
when you add content to your site then your sitemap will change - it is like an index of your site. but the all in one seo tool will tell google that it has changed.
there is a lot to take on board at the start, but you will soon get comfortable with the method.
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Kae3 Premium
Thanks I can see the the page you have sent, but when I put a link in it tells me to get some DNS settings organised and paste in a code. I am looking though the training now to see how to do this. It's a lot to understand I am not the most technical or IT savvy person but I will get there. Thanks for the help.
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feigner Premium
ah... this is registration for google search console.
the best tutorial is from the all in one seo guys
https://semperplugins.com/documentation/google-search-console-verification/
others have asked and found this to be good.
if you need any more help then shout.
but take your time and ask questions - take frequent breaks to absorb the information.
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KerynS Premium
Hi, everyone. My goal is to help people with weight loss problems and associated diseases (both physically and mentally), to regain hope, confidence and motivation to lose their excess body-fat. I’m a fitness, nutrition expert and a spiritual healer. My website will concentrate on both topics since the total alignment of body and soul is the key to all over well-being. I’d really love to get some feedback from you, just to see how I’m getting along with my website. I’m still trying to work out my issue with the alignment of text and photos. It’s the toughest part for me, but I’m learning. Please, forgive the somewhat disorganized appearance, it’s just not exactly the way yet that I pictured it. Here’s the link to one of my posts:
http://lovebodyfatsolutions.com/how-to-lose-upper-thigh-fat-against-all-odds/

Thank you
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate using Site Manager.
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OfficialPRAB Premium
Hey, if you are interested in the latest in SAAS and SEO, I have some articles here https://want-cash-now.com, but if you are interested in facts and the Laws of Attraction I have some articles here https://princess-rachel-angelica-beanum.com.

All feedback is welcome. I am however looking for content based feedback.
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Coraliej Premium
Hi there, I have just put a comment on one of your posts for you. Great job, the site looks great.
Could you return the favor and put a comment on my new post for me. My link is just above your post.
Thanks
Coralie
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Shredder97 Premium
Hey guys! Have just added email marketing to my website and looking to grow my contact list. I'd be forever grateful if you guys could try it out, subscribe and let me know:
1. The ease of signing up
2. Any technical issues you run into

We are currently ranked 43 in google which I never thought possible! getting some awesome traffic but ain't stopping there. If you guys could test out my subscription service that'd be awesome. It should be a pop up box as soon as you hit the page

Cheers!!

https://ironwarriorfit.com/
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Kae3 Premium
Very good article on the weight loss! And Smart.
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Shredder97 Premium
Thankyou! I read yours and I must say it is a very good start however it did feel somewhat jumbled up the top where the headings are. But keep up the great writitng
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Kae3 Premium
You're welcome. I will look at the jumble on the headings also. From looking at your site I like that you have written about things that can draw in people like me, who are not body builders or naturally would research this BUT I do research general weight loss. I would say keep articles that will attract non-body builders also. Lastly, some of us are very visual and may be drawn to an article via the picture. On your site, see if you can enable a function that will allow your feature picture to also show with the text maybe? Otherwise it's just text, and some may really gravitate to your work with the pictures also, before they open the actual articles if that makes sense. All the best and good luck.
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Shredder97 Premium
100% I'll see what I can do
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Melissacamp Premium
Hello everyone! I just finished another post in site and really need feedback on how I am coming along.

https://signsofdrugaddiction.net and my new post is 10 sources of help to stop drug use.

I really appreciate it and would love to do the same with your posts or site.
Thank you in advance, Melissa
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CK5687 Premium
Hello, I read this particular blog: 10 Sources of help to stop drug use. Overall I like the knowledge that you put into the blog, it shows that you have real understanding of the topic.

A few points of consideration. You list the 10 sources twice. You may consider the explanation under the main identification with a further indented bullet. Secondly you use "we" throughout the article which leaves an impression that you are currently a struggling addict. I understand the message you are trying to convey but perhaps try a sentence or two expressing your understanding then transitioning to their personal state and responsibility. Identify, understand, and show yourself as an authority not in the middle.
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PaulBenedict Premium
Looks like your off to a good start. There only a few of things you could do to make it better. Add some pictures, make at least four headings, and put your post into categories. This will break up the reading. By adding categories make it look more professional.
And at least three links to what ever you are promoting. I hope this will help you.
To Your Success
Paul
savemoneyonpetsupplies,com
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Melissacamp Premium
Thank you very much. I will make changes ASAP.
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Melissacamp Premium
Thank you very much for your time and response. I will make changes as needed.
I will definitely check your site out.
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AuraTioni Premium
Hello Lisa.
I have read your last post. It is very interesting because it can help anyone to know where and how to find aid with drug addiction. I think you can improve a lit bit your text by checking the spelling, putting more subtitles, and adding some images that can do it more appealing. Read it more times and you can see small things you can improve.
I would appreciate if you can visit https://weightliability.com and give me some feedback about the site and the Posts. Thanks a lot, and good luck with your progress.
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ranner19 Premium
hello, guys, I have created a post about this device so please check it out and tell me how is it give me suggestion and feedback
PS:- my account is in Amazon.in but what if I want to create affiliate link into http://amazon.com and share those link from http://amazon.com, not Amazon.in
thank you very much
https://lifestyleandgadgets.com/hp-sprocket-portable-photo-printer/
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - your review contains three things which break Amazon's rules and will get you banned from their program.

Some of your product description is copied directly from Amazon.
You have mentioned the price which is not permitted.
You are only allowed to use the 1 image per product they supply you with. You can't copy any of the other photos.
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MassagQ Premium
Hi y'all. I made a page, not a post. please check it out and let me know what you think. It's a short post, but let me what you think, otherwise. It does need some more work, but I can't seem to get the spacing right, no matter how many times I've done it.
Here's the link:

https://massagequota.com/the-best-massage-chairs/
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - you don't have an affiliate disclosure which is mandatory.

You cannot add the price of an Amazon product to your review. Doing so will get you banned from their program.

It seems pointless saying how many reviews a product has received, as this will change constantly. Imagine if somebody is reading it in a year's time.

Because you have added two affiliate links to each product, that means you have 14 links in this post, yet only 165 words.

You should only have 1 link for every 500 words, or Google will see your site as a "spammy" selling site.

Each chair really should have its own full review of at least 500 words before you add a link to it.
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thecompyoda Premium
The info on this post is great. If you want to get your spacing right, try using a table. This way you have a column with all of your images that can be centered, and a separate column for the data for each of your items that can also be formatted separately.

I also checked this page out on my mobile device, before you get too much farther into your website design, you might want to look at switching to a responsive wordpress theme. That way your site will look good on mobile devices, and desktop/laptop systems.

Last thing, in your site, your name is "admin". You can make a much more personal connection to your potential customers by changing that to your actual name. You can do this in Wordpress your wordpress dashboard. Go to Users -> Edit admin -> make sure "First Name", "Nickname", and "Display Publicly as" are all set to your real name. Your posts should now all say your name, instead of admin.

Great site, I really liked your post about giving yourself a massage anytime anywhere. Awesome niche idea!
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MassagQ Premium
Thank you so much for all your information!! You probably saved me!! I'm going to fix it right now!!! Thanks bunches.
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MassagQ Premium
Thanks for your feedback! How do you add a table in Wordpress? Much appreciated.
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thecompyoda Premium
In the worpress editor, there is an icon that should say “table” when you hover over it. When you click on it it will ask how many rows and columns you want. Let me know if you have any problems finding it. I will write a much more in depth guide if you need.
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Melissacamp Premium
Thank you for allowing us to view your site. I had a little trouble following the site. The wording seemed redundant for the first part of the page.

I love massage chairs and it is good to know which ones are the best, but I know what Diane is saying and think each chair deserves its own review.
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AnnDreams2 Premium
This is a great page, I don't see anything wrong with it at all. Lots of good pics. Spacing looks good too. The only small suggestion I have is to use bullet points where you list things instead of the dashes. Good job!

If you wouldn't mind, commenting on my newest blog? I'd appreciate it! https://highfiveaffiliate.com/how-to-earn-money-through-internet
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BlueJasmin Premium
Hello, everybody!

I am a new member and finishing my 1st month of the Super Affiliate Challenge. I am building a website in detox niche which I am very passionate about.

If you have time, can you please have a look and share with me your general feedback. I haven't set up any social media links yet. One step at a time.

Thank you very much! I really appreciate your help.

https://www.detoxgeneration.com

Should I make text color black and possibly to change the font?

Sincerely,

BlueJ
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web58master Premium
I have seen it and it looks really good. In my opinion you have a winner here. No errors that I could see. Also the font is ok.
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BlueJasmin Premium
Thank you very much!

I really appreciate your time and feedback. It is very nice of you.

I worked really hard and followed step-in-step with Kyle training.

Taking this baby off the ground is quite a challenge! :-)

But I love it and it is a lot of internet mambo-jumbo learning.

Sincerely,

BlueJ
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DianeScorpio Premium
Hi - you don't have an affiliate disclosure which is mandatory.

As regards Amazon products, you can only use the 1 image they supply you with, you can't copy any of their other photos. For example, in your trampoline review, you have a photo showing the edge of the product and another showing its dimensions. You cant use these. Doing so will get you banned from Amazon's program.
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BlueJasmin Premium
Good to know.
Thank you very much.
Boy, this is strange...

Sincerely,

BlueJ
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AnnDreams2 Premium
Honestly, I wouldn't change a thing. The site looks great, easy to maneuver and understand. I read the post on detoxing the lymphatic system. Well written. You definitely on the right track! Congrats!

I'd really appreciate a comment on my new post if you have some time. Thanks! https://highfiveaffiliate.com/how-to-earn-money-through-internet
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BlueJasmin Premium
I will, Ann!

I am on the train back home from DC and get it done when I am settled.

Thank you very much. I really appreciate it!

Sincerely,

BlueJ
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BlueJasmin Premium
Good morning, Ann!

O'K. I am done with my reading. I loved it and I learned a few things. Thank you!

Content is well-written and you have a good command of the English language for digital media. Good job!

Now - my comments and a couple of questions:

1. CONSISTENCY. As we know, it should be present throughout all the posts. This is what our readers are accustomed to. When we use stats, numbers or other factual data, we should always refer to a source. In this case, we sound VERY CREDIBLE and PROFESSIONAL. Visitors know that you are the SME - subject matter expert - since you've done your research and know how to put two together.

In the post, you presented amazingly interesting statistics but referred to the source--Forbes--only once. As a nosy reader, I would like to know where other numbers and facts came from.
Also, it goes back to the issue of consistency.

2. ABBREVIATIONS. Even though English is not my first language, I figured it out quickly what VR is. Virtual Reality. Right? But it took me quite a few seconds. Trust me, some people will stumble. I happened to be a very curious person. Other people are NOT! Our job is not to let me "stumble."

So, when you use an abbreviation, if I were you, - I would make a quick reference to what it means. Also, in the digital words, we have an international audience. It will help them to breeze smoothly through your post. WE MUST GET THEM OCCUPIED!

3. LINKS. When you mentioned "Envato," why it was not highlighted? You should take full advantage of your efforts and earn $$$!

Also, I would have ordered that book "Launched" you referred to by Jeff Walker but there was NO LINK! You just lost a sale!!! :-)
Or is it something not working on my side? I guess not!

Well, you've got to receive every penny and every dollar of your efforts and your fabulous work! We are here to educate, to help and to earn!

CONCLUSION: very interesting, right to the point, no blah-blah-blah and gives practical advice how-to. I love the "Coming Soon" idea.

Sorry for long writing. In fact, I will include this reply into my 1500 words post about WA as a part of my month 1 Super Affiliate Challenge. Don't worry, no mentioning names. I am very discreet.

Well, thank you for listening, Ann. I hope it helped. And, of course, thank you for your review.

Kind regards!
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Nanda11 Premium
Are there WA members here that would like to give feedback on my website www.anandasoultravel.com

I was wondering if people like how they enter the page, if it is clear what the page is about and if you have any suggestions about changing the theme. Or do you think this theme works well for this purpose?
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Nanda11 Premium
Anyone??
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Idris10 Premium
Hi everyone!

Need help for some comments or feedback for my site, which looks more like my personal hobby site than an affiliate website for now 😅

Dropping some comment on my posts would be appreciated too!

Https://stillfigurineout.com

I'll return the favour of course 😄
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caljones6750 Premium
The "personal touch" can work in your favor. People relate to that.
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EllieMisc Premium
Hello, first time using this page. I've added Amazon affiliate links for the first time and run into problems - why no photos of the products? The message says there's no need to download as it will automatically be included in the link.
https://pluspinkpearls.com/best-plus-size-bras-be-a-knock-out/
Any and all feedback is most welcome.

Also if anyone out there is using the Elegant Pink theme please get in touch - I can't seem to add photos to post headings on the home page, etc (although hopefully all this will be covered later in the training). One day it'll all come together :)
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EllieMisc Premium
Forgot to say that the links don't work!
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EllieMisc Premium
Links and photos cracked thanks to a video by @Ramenriches :)
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Ambuj1 Premium
Hey Ellie,

Just visited your website and I absolutely love the color and theme of your blog. It's very relevant to the niche you are in.

Personally, I've two suggestions that you might consider.

1. You could add a signup form in your blog. Your blogs are well written so you might consider adding a form at the end of your post. And another one on the home page.

2. The header looks great but it can be a little smaller so that your first few blog posts are visible when any visitor lands on this page.

I would have loved to comment on your post but it's not anywhere related to me so it's better not to leave a fake comment.

Best of luck on your journey!
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EllieMisc Premium
Hi Ambuj1,
I think you have visited the new and improved website! Thank you so much for taking the time to look at it. After posting late last night, I managed to fix the Amazon links AND make a logo on Hatchful from 2 training videos from the WA community. Against all odds, I was able to add the logo to the site and put in a background colour. Still have no idea how to add photos to the posts on the homepage (think that's maybe only in the Pro version of Elegant Pink).
As for your suggestions, they're excellent. Is a sign-up form to get email addresses and add to a potential mailing list?
Hopefully this will be covered further on in the training (I'm halfway through level 3).
Not sure what 2 is but having put that logo last night will mean everything has been pushed down a bit. No idea yet how to make it mobile friendly!
I'll add your suggestions to my to do list. Thanks a million. Here's to your success too!
Ellie
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PositivelyMe Premium
Hi everyone!

I hope you all are having a great day! I just published a post on magnet save the dates. I would love to receive some feedback on the page and get some comments on it. I will do the same for your page
https://itsadiywedding.com/cheap-save-the-date-magnets-for-your-wedding/

Steph
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EllieMisc Premium
Hi Steph,
I think it's a great site. The posts are friendly and well-written. Love your step-by-step instructions for everything and your top tips (hiring a cake display and just having the top part as a real cake to cut into - who knew!).
Also really like your photo on the posts. I think it encourages readers to contact a real person and leave comments. I'll do this when I'm brave enough!
Ellie
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steve557 Premium
hello guys! below is a link to my blog. would u please pick a post and leave a great feedback in the comment section? i would really appreciate for your time to genuinely read and leave feedback. I hope to get some 'regular' visitors from u! ahaha thanks! i will return the favor.

https://myhealthandfitnessfirst.com/
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EllieMisc Premium
Hi Steve,
I enjoyed reading about things I never knew existed - mucoid plaques and water fasting! Very interesting site. The layout was easy to navigate. I like the sidebar/menu with recent posts, comments and categories (didn't realise this could be done, good idea). Related posts at the end of the main post are good to. I don't have the expertise (yet!) to comment on any technicalities - all looks good to me!
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neksummi Premium
Hi friends,

I've got some few posts on my website and I'd appreciate your feedback on my website. It's far from being good because I plan to come back and edit some things but all the same, I'd like to read what you think about my work so far.

https://affiliatedominationtips.com/
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ElaineR1 Premium
Hi. This is a really good site. You have put a ton of work into it. Everything seems to link up fine. Nice work! Best wishes for your success.
Elaine
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neksummi Premium
Thanks. I appreciate your kind words. Wish you the best in your work too.
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Will40 Premium
Hey everyone, I just finished another step in my process to building my website by created another post with plenty photos this time. If I can get some feedbacks on the post and website as a whole I would greatly appreciate it every bit. I will give feedback to every page that does the same to me. Thanks!

iknowpricemusic.com
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ChristineDu1 Premium
Hi, I just left you a comment. I really liked your article :-)
Could you help me with a comment on my site?

https://myvegansausages.com/forks-over-knives-the-cookbook-a-product-review-vegan-cooking-rocks/