The banner up top is cute. Here are a few design critiques right off the bat:

1. Work on getting a logo. You can hire a logo designer from sites like Fiverr.com for extremely cheap ($5 + $2 fee).

2. Remove the top bar (where the phone number and email address are) since that information isn't necessary for the site.

3. For the articles themselves, try adding a stock image in the very beginning that is relevant to the article, and add an additional one in the middle that relates to the middle content.

4. Add proper categories that relate to the articles you're writing such as Puppy Training, Dog Training, etc.

5. Add an image of yourself to the About My Family page so people can feel more connected with your brand and like there's an actual person writing the content.

Great job on taking action! Keep it up!

Hello Amy a girl after my own heart... mine too is a dog site, perhaps you can review mine and add a comment to mine also,
I will add to yours once I have finished this review to you once I have reviewed your site and sent to you

I read the your blog "My Puppy or Dog is Ready to come home, so do I have everything", boy that was thorough, and once you start adding affiliate links you will be able to choose from a big market and making some monetary income stream. You will be able to do so many reviews on the little things right up to the big things.

I can see you are building it out so cary on doing what you do.

Just make it a little easier on the eye, some of our reasers only see in 140 characters at a time...

I think the Paragraphs are a little long, and could do with a little more direction on more sub headings. I also think you you could possibly do with some more related images. overall i was impressed well done

Amy please check out and website and make a comment on the site. https://yourhungryhound.com

Thank you that is really helpful. Sometimes it feels like it is hard to get in what needs to be said in so little words but I am trying to make them shorter.
I am working on getting links now; Im still trying to understand all this and feel overwhelmed. I do enjoy it.
Thanks Amy

I am not sure I understood all of that but I am going to do my best. I am still working through the trainings so hopefully I will come across these issues so I can work on them. Yeah, I am having an issue with the Word[ress Number they fixed a problem and its been there since. Thanks A lot.

Great site, and great article. For my taste, some of the paragraphs are pretty blocky. This may just be my opinion, but I really like using bullets more, or breaking stuff up into less rigid areas. Like yourself, my articles are usually long and wordy, so I try to think about how I can keep someone reading through the whole thing quickly versus just entertaining them.

The name at the top needs some snazzing up. I see someone recommended a logo, which is a great idea. You can even get free logos made too.

Until then, maybe make it something cool looking for now, in a different font, and a little bigger perhaps? Maybe Puppies &Dogs; + More

Definitely get those pictures into the articles! It will do wonders!
Good job though so far!!

No worries - I apologize if I wasn't descriptive enough! You'll definitely figure all of it out in due time :)

Very nice article on mindset. I whole heartily agree with this and think the same way. I believe its very important to have the correct mindset. You did a great job of keeping the content clean and easy to follow using bullets. The images were helpful also.

Hey Jackie! I read your post and seriously LOVED it! It spoke to me and I am so excited to read more from you! I don't know where you are in the training, but here are some notes I have:

1. Add pictures to your posts.
2. Categorize your posts so people can find topics they're interested in.
3. Change the author name from "admin"--this will be covered in the training if you're not there yet.
4. In your post where you have the check marks, two lines didn't format right. They have bullet points instead of check marks.

Great job so far! I'll be following you and I look forward to reading more!

Jackie,

I left you a comment on your page. I love your site and your purpose! Keep it UP!
My advice is about the same as "MichaelaEsp"

Definitely add some pictures within your pages and posts.

Your writing is fantastic though. I read your about me page and wanted to know more. So you have nailed that!

I am excited to see what your site becomes! Good luck!

Much Love,
Megan

The theme you have chosen is very exciting, but I would consider using a different cover image. The picture is important for communicating what the website is about. Now it becomes a bit unclear. In about part there is a lot of text. Perhaps you should consider dividing it into several themes. Wish you good luck!

A link to your website? ...

OPS! Oh my gosh!

www.thesavvygroom.com

Oh - I really like it, Ken! What a super niche, too!

Your images are well-chosen and attractive ... I agree that they should be larger.

Thanks so very much Laurie!! Please let me know if there is anything I can ever help you with in return!

I think your pictures look great. Your site is awesome, and I believe going to bring great success! Good idea and very creative writing skills!

Hey Man

That was a nice and informative post. I would like to point out a couple of things which I feel are missing. First, images - it is a wedding page, you need to have more images and the ones which you do are small in size, try increasing them for a better appeal.

Second - Try changing the theme you know. I really like your niche and you can do some amazing stuff. Fill it with content. Also, make use of the right side of your pages. They are blank, add search boxes and stuff.

I hope you find it useful :)

Cheers


If you want check out my site : www.tripodsforall.com
Would love some feedback :)

Thanks so much! I will check out your page.

I had a different theme, but it was not allowing me to center or right-align images for some reason. I like this one less, but its at least working. I can absolutely make the images bigger. I was afraid too big would reduce what you can visible read in a smaller resolution such as a phone, tablet, or even smaller laptop.

I am still learning about site development through WordPress. I would love to make each page more interactive. I'm not quite sure what to put on the sides, as there is already a search box, recent posts, etc. I will have to do some brain storming and figure it out.

Thanks so much for the feedback!

You are welcome :)

Hi ken,

Great post and great niche. I can see you doing very well within this niche if you keep this quality of content up.

I know you are still at the early stages of your site and it will develop as you move on through training and the help from everyone here.

I agree with what Shashwatprak said about your pic and not going to into to much detail as he has covered it and no point repeating what he has said.

Keep up the good work

lindsay

Hey

Would love some feedback on this: www.tripodsforall.com

hey,

no worries I will have a look and get back to you.

Great page, and brilliant idea. I think. I would have used more photos if I were you. The photos should fit the topics you describe. Wish you good luck!

Hi there Cordelia
You don't need to be apprehensive about your site. I thought it was packed full of information.
Now, saying that, there are a few areas that I believe could be improved.

1. Your content layout. Type your website directly into the browser and take a look at some of the layout of your posts - they just need a layout check and no type or fact check (as far as I could see)
2. The title of your 'home' page - Why not just call it 'Your Hungry Hound'? The way the current header goes onto 2 lines looks unfortunately very beginner-ish.
3. The images in the Bring Your Dog To Work post - they're all centralized (apart from one) - it might be worthwhile having some right-aligned, some left-aligned and some centralized - it's just nicer on the eyes.

To edit a post:
Go to your wordpress back office > Posts > All posts > Hover over the post you want to change and click 'Edit' > edit as required > Update and you're good to go.

I hope that helps

Thank you,

I liked the suggestions, that is just the sort of information I needed, I looked at mine and knew it looked amateurish but didn’t know how I got it looking better,

I will go through each of your suggestions one at a time (at a more reasonable hour 3:55am woke up and can’t sleep..ha ha)

Could you make a comment on my web site, (if not done so)

Cordelia,

Please don't be apprehensive. You are new to this, as many of us are and you SHOULD be doing it wrong! People are coming into WA and paying to learn because they DON'T know what to do and need the help! That's all of us!

The more comfortable you become with sharing and opening your work up, the more often you will get the feedback you need!

I love the topic and content. Some feedback:

To me, some of the articles seem a little long or over-worded. But that is possibly preference. There may be some benefit to reading through your posts and seeing if there is any "fat" to be trimmed away.

Inconsistencies. I am seeing some areas where there are large blank spaces between paragraphs, titles, etc. One example is within the service vs. therapy dog post at the end of the "does your dog have therapeutic skills" area.

I also see some paragraph titles in bold with all words beginning in a capital letter. Which is how I like to do it. But then I see some bold sentences with just the first letter capitalized. Not sure if these are supposed to be paragraph starters, but it's a bit confusing. I'd stick with bold and all capital and if its not, put it into the paragraph not bold.

Lastly, are any of your links affiliate links? If so, you need an affiliate disclosure statement. If not, then you are okay as is.

Best wishes,

and good luck!! Keep it coming!

Thank you so much for the feed back,
It is useful and yes once I get used to it then I can only but improve.

I certainly will take heed of the capitals and spaces, will have a bit of editing to do when I get home from work tonight, in fact all of your comments require me to look again, but the above will be an easy fix...

But once again thank you.
If you get the chance could could you also comment on the website... (sorry to be a bit cheeky) and am more than happy to return the favour, just add your chosen page

I think you covered all the bases in your lemon water post and left you a comment. I sent you a pm with a link to a revised post that I would love for you to check out. Thanks in advance for your read!

Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate. Remember To Activate Your SSL Certificate

i had a look at your site and i must admit that there is some great content in there, very thorough. I have a small suggestion you should take into consideration the theme of your site. Always remember that your site has to be user friendly and very inviting, but all in all great stuff.

www.get-its.com

That is true that lemon water does cause weight loss but you don't really go into much detail why. I placed a comment on the post about testosterone. Can you return the favour with the post on diet for the site www.thematterofsize.com

Hello, I have just posted a comment on your web site, I will pte message you.. :)
Who would have know that lemon and water could do all that. Am hooked.
I too am building my website and would love if you could comment on mine
https://yourhungryhound.com/
Latest blog is mostly images of "Take Your Dog To the Office Day" (Friday 21st June 2019)
, Normally larger word count

https://savemoneywithyourmicrowave.siterubix.com/money-saving-meal-ideas-quick-lunches-on-a-budget/

I posted a comment on your fat burning foods post. I found that one very interesting.

Hi Judy!
I left you a little comment on your post!

Some feedback for your article in general:
You give readers lots and lots of information, which is a good thing, but at some points, I lost concentration because I found it simply too long. Try to keep your information concise and to the point and avoid repeating yourself too much

Other than that, good use of photos and good sentence structure. I can definitely tell a lot of research went into this post!

If you have the time, would you mind taking a look at my website?
https://skincarementor.com

All the best
Melanie

I loved your site and posted a comment on your how to get started post. Thanks for the info.

Feel free to take a lot at my page and make a comment and/or give me some feedback. Thank you.

https://savemoneywithyourmicrowave.siterubix.com/money-saving-meal-ideas-quick-lunches-on-a-budget/

Hey Matthew
Here are my comments on your site
1. Wow! Your font (which may be theme-related) is very small and being a mid-gray is quite difficult to read.
2. You kinda jump around with your subjects - I'm not too sure why a post of belly fat is in a tech-related blog for instance - unless you can link it to people who sit all day at a computer for instance.
3. Paragraphs - these days it seems that the 'norm' for paragraph length is around 2-3 lines (about 3-4 sentences) - it makes them easier to read.
4. Undoubtedly, you'll be trying to promote products - it might be worth having an Affiliate Disclaimer on your site ready - it'll be mandatory when you actually do have something to promote.

Otherwise, excellent content, spelling and grammar - good imagery, yup, all ties together well.

Good job - a nice website to visit

Hey Arthur! Here are my comments on your website:
1. Your Privacy Policy page - call it the Privacy Policy - at the moment it just comes up as 'Policy' which is wonderfully dark but not very useful :-)
2. Is the 'Tokyo Ravens' the only content? OK if it is - you need a lot more content on your posts and a lot more images - is there a way of getting images for Yakao Tsuchimikado, Harutora Tsuchimikado or any other character so your readers can see the character as well as read about them?
3. You have yet to fill out the 'Character' block or the 'Staff' block
4. Who is 'Arthur Jenkins'?
5. What, do you think, are Anime fans looking for? Does your post answer a particular question? You are, obviously, an Anime fan - what questions do you have about the genre and can you supply the answers to those questions?
6. You could do with an About Me page - just so people know who's on the other side of the screen.
7. You have a button to take your visitors to Youtube to watch the trailer - why not embed the video on the site? That way your readers stay longer on your site rather than watching cat videos on Youtube and never returning to your website!

The only Anime I have ever watched was Urotsukidōji: Legend of the Overfiend which, I think, was a Manga series to start then made into a film. I didn't have a clue what was going on! :-)

The skeleton is there Arthur - now you need to put the fat, muscle, nerves and skin on it.

You can do this!

Thank you so much. Appreciate it. Ill fix up when im finished working!

What a nice topic. I'm sure there are plenty of dog, cat and animal lovers around the globe that would love to read your blogs. Yes indeed you need pictures. Just follow the chapters in the course and you will get to that topic pretty soon. But in short: if you click edit post, you see on top of the screen a button called "media" . Make sure your cursor is located in the text where you'd like to insert the photo, then click on that media button. It will lead you to your media library, which is most probably empty at this stage. You will need to fill your media library with royalty free photos that you'd like to use. Choose the photo that you'd like to insert on the specific spot and save. Good luck!!

My latest post is: https://morefun2run.com/running-makes-me-poop/
Please, could you comment in my post and give me useful feedback as wel? I would be very grateful! Thanks in advance!

Thank you for the feedback and I will do the same for you!

I am a newbie (when do you stop being one?), the photos you have are good, but I think you need more. It seems that has come to me loud and clear. I am on my cell so everything else is not to scale. I’ll get back. Nice and genuinely true. Happy Days. Laura

Hi URWRght,

I am sorry that you lost your old website.

Coming to this website , I see one post put up already. Keep up the great work.

Personally, I feel that the picture in your article is a little too small. It makes the article too wordy to read all at once.

There are plenty of beautiful free themes available. I believe you can easily find something better.

That's all for the suggestions I have for you for now.

Thank you!

Hello Laura, I'll be sending you a detailed private message on what I feel can help you and some great other things to consider on your website.

Thank you, I've read that several times, something I will work on.

Hi Frank,
I just looked at your about me page and it's great how you share your personal story. That will resonate with a lot of people.
A couple of suggestions if that's ok:
- I find your font size a little small. You should be able to adjust this in Appearance/Theme Options.
- If you're comfortable putting an image of yourself, that's always a great way to connect with your visitor.
- I would put all the headings in the first person, like "why I want to help people", and "the goal of my site".
Cheers,
Suzanne

Thank You so much Suzanne!

All very helpful. I had just followed the training Video to the T as much as possible. I too thought I need to do more with this page to personalize it. So I will indeed implement those suggestions.

PS. Congrats on being a 2 yr old Nana! I'm sure that 'it's too quiet' comment on your profile page is no longer applicable. LOL!

Peace & Blessings

Could your About Me be split into also About (my site). Nice job.

Alberto,

I will PM you with my comments and suggestions

Just commented on your article. Could you do me a return favour on my latest post : https://morefun2run.com/running-makes-me-poop/
All useful feedback is very welcome!. Thanks in advance!

Hello Edi, you really educated me on all the different tools of bike maintenance. I will private email you on my recommendations that I found.

Nice post. Will PM you with some comments and suggestions.

I would suggest capitalizing more of your headings throughout your website. Otherwise looks great!

Interesting site, your website is easy to navigate, I don't see any affiliate links in your articles, I guess you'll have those soon.

Hi Edi, nice post, I like the way you summarize the important stuff, I am a biker as well and think it has everything I need to know to buy a multitool. I would just put a line or something in between products because it would probably be difficult to tell where a review ends and the next one starts.

Hope you can give me feedback on this post as well.
https://topcoffeesecrets.com/what-is-the-best-french-press-the-top-buying-guide/

Hello! There's something wrong with your site/link. It says IP address can't be found.

There is a problem with your website. Nothing is coming up. Please add your site address or correct it. can't help you.

I enjoyed reading your blog. Straight from the heart. Best wishes to you on your journey here!

Jessica

coach,

Where do you plan to go from here and what is your plans for the site? Is this something you want to drive traffic to in order to make recommendations for x, y and z which you can then use affiliate marketing for?

I think it has real potential if so.

I really appreciate the perspective of your blog and agree with its premise. I am also in the health and fitness niche. I left you a comment and would love for you to check out one of my recent revised posts.

https://functional-strength.org/bosu-elite-and-centerline-strength

Thanks in advance.
Stacy

Yes that's true that there's a bigger picture than just losing weight and losing weight is just a part of the puzzle. In getting fitter you can reverse diabetes, improve cardiovascular health, improve mood etc. There's a lot of health benefits with fitness and a change in number on the scale doesn't give you enough information of your overall health.

If your not selling much in particular you can still do well with adsense

The site comments section is regularly out of sites needing comments but if you check back shortly there is usually a new request. Once you have left 2 comments on other sites you can start to request comments on your own.

Thank you Dave. Maybe i was always checking back when there were no site available. thanks again

Excellent website, Good grammar and punctuation, Great content. Excellent site.

Ok real! Thank you. Hoping i get ranked with these contents then. Thanks

Hey Dwight - here are my comments on your website
1. Color scheme: Could you adapt your color scheme to fit your content? It seems orange is a bit of a disconnect to my mind.
2. About page - A pic of yourself, or your favorite wine or your favorite course/green wouldn't go amiss here - it would add a bit of color.
3. The Learn To Play Golf post - it's packed with information but... could you just concentrate on the putting aspect for 1 post then the chipping, then the wedge - you've kinda used up 3 possible post titles under 1 post.
4. Your golf videos are packed full of videos and images - why not do the same for your wine posts? Maps of wine regions to show where your mentioned wines originate/come from, say - even a breakdown of a wine region into estates - Bordeaux down to St Emilion level.

Otherwise your content is solid and well laid out - no typos or grammar concerns that I could see.

All in all a good job - thanks for your hard work

Thank you so much. Very good suggestions.

Have been looking for and changing themes. Have not customized this one yet.

I owe you a In N' Out Burger!!

First of all my congrats for the site theme and organization, it's very professional and high end looking. The topic of goal setting resonates with me deeply as I'm working towards the same objective since long time without still having achieved it. I left you a comment, if you wish to visit my site and let me have your comments you can see https://familysecurityshield.com/

Hi Megan
Are you looking for feedback on the whole of the site, on the posts and pages in general or a specific post?

The site topic is amazing and touches me personally as dog owner since long time. I can also say that it was about time someone treated the theme of going natural with our four legs family members. the theme is amazing, and I won't change anything except the background color, which I suggest always to be white. Minimalism is the new standard in the sites world and white suits this best. I left you a comment on your site. If you wish to review mine and comment is https://familysecurityshield.com/

Thank you! I go back and forth with changing my background. I thought about leaving it white.. thank you for that advice.

Also, same to you on the theme, it seems to fit your site perfectly.

My only advice to you, is to maybe break up your post with some "white space"... it was advice given to me and it really did help make parts of my post stand out more.

You are a very good writer and people will enjoy reading your post, just make it as simple as possible. :)

Good luck to you,
Megan

Honestly, I will take feedback on anything within my website. But yes, it would be nice to know if I am presenting the products in a good manner or not, in the "Shop Brands" tab.
Thank you for asking!

Hello, I just left you a comment :-)
If you have time, I would love a comment on one of my articles :-)

https://myvegansausages.com/

Thank you! I will check it out as soon as I log on tonight.
Best wishes,
Megan

Hi Missmaygen,
Just left you some comments on your website.
Would love to hear from you on my latest post too!
https://healthylifestylehappyliving.com/top-10-healthy-lifestyle-tips-tip-no-4-of-10/
Cheers!
Sammie

I'm vegan since 2015 and I couldn't avoid to have a look at your side. Needless to say that I support and like everything you wrote. Fresh style and neat and clen theme. I like it very much. I just left a comment too. If you'd like to visit my site and give me your opinion it's https://familysecurityshield.com/

Hi Gianlum1976, I visited your site and you have a wealth of useful knowledge! A great website came as a result of a hard time for your family, but you are very gracious to pass your information along for others. I can tell you really care about others and want to help! We all are better for it. Thank you!
Kareb
Www.orangehealing.com

Hi - you don't have an affiliate disclosure, which is mandatory.

Not sure what you mean?

Hi - by law, you have to let potential customers know that if they click on an affiliate link, that you will earn a commission if they buy something.

You can find examples on the internet which you can use, but as you are an affiliate with Amazon, you also need to add this exact phrase:

"As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases".

Hi Diane,
You you need it on every post or can you do it on the top menu as a post or page? Thanks.

Hi - you can add it as a page to your top menu.

Thanks for the advice!

Diane,

You are a wealth of knowledge. Thank you.
I'm not there yet but good to know.

Gale

Thank you! I was unaware of this, as well. I posted it in my "About" page.
I have seen you post this on numerous feedback posts, and now that I am an Amazon Associate... I am grateful for you.
Best wishes,
Megan

Oh ok, thank you so much for letting me know. I really appreciate it.
Kind regards
Daisy

Hi Great a start and a good read - As you progress in the training you will learn to add photos which lift a post - i word recommend these . I would also recommend following the training but not being too hung up on missing feedback etc - I followed a rule to move forwards when i could to ensure i made the maximum benefit of my time and requested feedback when i had enough points to do so .

progression is key in my book - missing feedback initially will not have any detrimental effect on your site as long as you get it when you are able.

Excellent work your have an up and running site that can only grow as you learn more here at WA.

Much success

This is so helpful and encouraging. Yes, I had felt an absence because of not having the images yet and can't wait to put some. And I think I can now move at a good clip, now that I will read some of the emails, all of which I appreciate, but some were intimidating since I was nowhere near there yet. What I'm going to do about that is finish the training, and there are bound to be tons of more emails, and I will then read all of them. Right now, if I read the ones too far advanced, it slows me up, but I felt guilty at first. But I'll get to the point where I'll be able to learn something from all of them. Thanks again, this was a real boost.

Hi Patrick,
I just looked at your site. It's nice and clean and uncluttered which I believe is a plus. Also the theme is good. I do have a slight issue with your writing style, and I say this as an Englishman who has done lots of writing over the years. My motto is generally 'shorter is better'. By that I mean your sentence lengths. Also it would make easier reading if you got to the point within your sentences a little quicker, in my opinion. Judging by your multiple interests within the Arts, you may need multiple websites!

I think I will have to have several websites. Thanks for your response. Long sentences tend to come easily to me when I'm just being expressive in books or on blogs (the more personal kind), but I agree it needs to sound a bit more businesslike, which shorter sentence. I don't quite know how I would 'get to the point' quicker, because the whole post is about the same point; I don't have different points to make for each sentence, or even paragraph really, but I might see what you mean when I try to rewrite it. The 'making shorter' might take care of that too. That particular post-subject I tend to get a bit gushy about because it's literally one of my favourite things--which is why I knew I could get the full meaning of the content fulfilled, even though I need to work on a more succinct style. In the 'less is more' mode.

Yes it's a delicate balance between authentically sharing your passion and getting to the point.
Good Luck!

Great niche choice. Almost everyone loves dogs and they will love your photos. Good grammar, punctuation and content. No shortcomings i could see. Very well done.

Thank you! I am glad you like it! It makes me feel better to hear that.
Best wishes to you!
Megan

left a comment on your most recent post. Would love if you could return the favor: https://besttravelclothes.com/shoppers-remorse-5-big-travel-purchases-to-av

Thanks!!
I left a comment as well!
Best wishes! Good niche idea!

Great site! It was very well laid out and eye catching. I left a comment for you.

Thank you!
I will repay the favor!
Best Wishes,
Megan

Hey Don
The major gap I can see is that you need an affiliate disclaimer on your website - you can either put it into your widgets so it shows up on every page or you can put it at the bottom of every post that contains a link.
If you're an Amazon affiliate then you'll need their own disclaimer on your site - it's mandatory. Either check the Amazon Associates website for it or do a search for it.
Also, you've written around 500 words and you have 4 links - the word on the street is that you should have 1 link per 500 words (approx) otherwise your post looks a bit spammy. For your links you'd be looking at writing around 2000 words.
Perhaps you could add 2-3 more products such as Malwarebytes and/or Avast. You could even add McAfee and tell people why you don't like it.
Hope that helps

Thanks so much. Yes, that actual post is a work in progress. I like the idea on adding Mcafee and saying I don't like it. That adds additional words. So for links, I need to decrease my links it sounds like. Like removing one of the Amazon links for Bitdefender. I need to add ESET on there, my goal is to have 10ish?

I've also been watching training and some people seem to like making reviews on separate pages... I'm mostly just working to figure this out :) The difficult part is there is no easy button, or template that works every time.

Actually Don, doing a separate review for 1 product on its own age isn't a bad idea. You could leave your blog posts for more general info on cybersecurity and then, when some new virus comes out you could make a post about and point your readers to the product page that would best deal with that threat.

Sorry - 'page' not 'age' - if you do go down the 1 page per review path your reviews are going to have to be really in-depth, real nitty-gritty stuff

Thanks! I'll think on that too. I also like some of the other sites I've seen that are giving a rating 1-10 score on products. I think that might be something I need to hit on too. As always, it looks to be a work in progress.

Any suggestions on how to get Indexed by google? It's been about 4-5 days and nada... I could just be impatient, as always. I assume there has to be a way to get google to notice you faster.

Are you following the Online Entrepreneur Certification? If so, it would appear that there is training in phase 5 for doing exactly that - making Google notice us.

Haven't gotten there yet! I'm on Phase 3 right now.

that's my level too

Hi Keryn

Your website is very informative!

hello Keryn,your presentation is great and the content.you are doing a great job and am wishing you all the best.

Hi - let's talk about Amazon! You are breaking several of their rules which will get you banned from their program.

Your affiliate disclosure needs to have this exact phrase:

"As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases".

You cannot add the price of a product to your reviews.

You can only use the one image they supply you with. You can't pick extra ones from the selection on the left of the product on the Amazon page.

Wow. Very informative and very well put together. I read it and learned a few things. Wishing you all the best!

You've certainly been busy in two weeks! A lot of pages.

I notice that some of the colour schemes clash like the background colour and the text below a post ( you know where it shows to go to the last or next article), which may be worth changing.

The articles themselves are very well researched with tonnes of information which is great.

When you click on each of your page headings it goes to a page showing 'Nothing Found'. It'll be worth directing the link to a page showing all the articles within the topic so that it looks tidy.

I think your quote to the side "Come as a stranger, leave as a friend" is fantastic and a good kind of ethos to have for wheny ou write your articles.

Hope this feedback helps.
Dex

I like the images you added to your site and its a simple read easy to understand.

Hi - your site is not secure. You need to switch on your SSL Certificate using Site Manager.

As English isn't your first language, try and make use of the spell checker. There are lots of mistakes, most notably in your tagline where you have spelt kitchen incorrectly.

Moving forward, you should be writing posts, not pages.

Thanks so much, i tryed to do it easy to understand =)

I know that ther is mictakes, i cant write like master bicouse
i have writing disorder. and it doesn't pour my life if `. something is missing.. thanks anyway...

It's simple...anything related to cooking or baking! Even your recipe likes and dislikes.

Hi - if you are writing your posts using Site Content, there is a spell checker in there which you can use. It will help you get better with the English language.

Okay, thanks alot =)

Hi!
You guys are off to a great business!

I feel Jacky's "about me" page explains the purpose of your business nicely; a worthy cause to help Hmong tribal members make a living.

I might suggest a different theme--something really eye-catching. You might include pictures of Thailand, people creating the bags and accessories, etc.

Keep going! I look forward to following your progress!
Tamara

Hey Marc,

Really beautiful site and you really have some of the great collection of handmade purses and bags.
In a small period of time, you really created a wonderful website, I think if you add a logo to your site, it creates a brand.
I know you have "My chick ethnic" on all your products, and a great logo itself. You should add it to your header area as a logo. It will give your site branding.
Also, it is recommended to have a white background for website, but since your website is about ethnic products, I think you have selected it on purpose.
A really nice website.

Here is my latest post, would appreciate if you comment on my blog post.
https://advantageaffiliates.com/digital-income-system-review

Regards
jivita

Hi Jivita, thanks for your time and feedback, I really appreciate it. the issue I am having with the banner in the header is that it makes the text unreadable in my header and I was so far unable to change the text color. I think the issue is with the template I chose that doesn't give that option in the free version (?)
Big thank you for your review!
Kind regards,
Marc

Hi Tamara, thanks for your time and nice words as feedback.
we are working on the pictures of Thailand and other pictures of creating the bags.
I am happy for the positive and constructive comments !
Well received!
Thanks again and have a wonderful day
Marc and Jacky

Hi Jivita,

Good article ! it warns people for the potential spending of a lot of money if not well informed. It is well structured and has all the "dots on the i's" Also your call to action at the end is good.

The Captcha for leaving a comment is a bit "over the top" and I miss the "why" do you want to have that there.
Personally, the mandatory requirement to provide an email address, to be able to leave a comment, should be optional versus mandatory, it would have stopped me of leaving a comment if I didn't land on your article from WA.

I hope this helps

Hi Tamara, thank you for the feedback and suggestion for a different theme. Feel free to drop me a line what theme that could be ?
Thank you!
Marc

Hi, I receive the following when clicking on your link
Unable to connect, maybe you want to check and I'll try again later.

Hi - your article on food is 53% copied and pasted from various websites, mainly from prevention.com, and the one on pampering is 49% copied from kipkis.com. You can't do this. Everything has to be original and in your own words. I haven't checked your other articles, but if they are also copied, they need to be rewritten too.

Ok

Hi, I'm from a bycicle riding country (Belgium), we use the bike for nearly everything ;-), so I enjoyed checking out the products you recommend on your page. Very good products by the way. Right now I live in Mexico, where in some places riding a bike is dangerous (although it is getting better where I live). So, I hope to start riding a bycicle again some time soon :-) Your site certainly made me consider it ;-)
Your article was very well organized, as were the products. Very nice site, good work!

Hi Abigail,
I think your site is such a cool concept. The website looks good.
I read your post and I really like it. If I could say one thing, maybe if you could add a few more images throughout, always helps in breaking up the content.
Overall, I did like it.
Good job.

Hello Abigail,

I really liked the appearance of your website. It is pleasing to the eye. The colors are soft and the images are cool.

You almost make me want to go out and get some chickens. And I live in an apartment complex. LOL

Your content was very good, the flow was good also. I did find a few typographical errors so I want to point them out to you.

1. Where to get baby chicks
The second sentence does not make sense to me, but it could be me. "Feathered Friends is just one in hundreds of different places.
2. Caring for your chicks
Last paragraph first sentence I think you need to delete some spaces to put the all together.
3. Raising Chicken's - FAQ
#5 Says Should I was the eggs my hens lay? Sentence doesn't make sense.
#10 Sentence 3 It then starts it on its way down the oviduct. Not sure, but maybe it should say...It then starts on it's way down the oviduct. I'm not sure, it may be exactly as you want it.
4. Back Story
First paragraph, second line towards the end of the sentence until I figured out what I like (probably should be liked?) and wanted to raise.

If there are any grammatical errors or sentence structure errors, I can't help you with that, but other than that you have a really cool website.

Enjoyed reading the post. Interesting enough to hold my attention and at times that can be pretty hard to do.

Keep up the good work!

Blessings~
Brenda
P.S. I hope this is what I was supposed to do for the feedback. This is my first one;-)

Awesome website!

I grew up on a farm in Utah. We raised chickens, ducks, sheep, cows, goats, horses, and rabbits and grew apples, pears, peaches, plums, and cherries. It was a wonderful experience I have always looked back on fondly. I learned how to work hard and to love and respect animals.

I didn't know a lot of the facts and tips you've shared, so thanks! And I'll be following you.

Tamara

Hi - your site is difficult to read. White font on a blue background with a blurry green photo to each side of the article is very hard on the eyes. A simple black font on a light background is the recommendation to keep readers on your website.

Great article Hilary, if I wasn't already here, I'd be clicking on your link. The only thing I can add other than commend you on a great article, is to edit in Wordpress and create one or more categories, and untick Uncategorized. Otherwise, great work as I would expect with your pedigree!
For anyone who is interested in sharing a comment, my latest article is for guitar players and songwriters. I know there are some of you here
https://guitaraccessories.org/do-you-know-the-name-of-chords-you-are-playing/
Thanks as always
Luigi

oooh crap. I did forget to do the category menu thing on that site - thank you for the reminder! When I get home and can access other sites I will be happy to leave a comment on that article. Thank you for taking the time to read and review!

Thank you SO SO much for the awesome comment on that page! It's fab!! I returned the favor on the page you suggested. :) I hope you have a great night!

Nice one Martina, nice to have another Kiwi here. New Zealand is such an awesome place for hiking. So much of the countryside shouts to be walked or climbed on. The South Island is amazing, so many places to explore and so many different landscapes.
I look forward to visiting your site more often.
My site is https://guitaraccessories.org/
All the best
Luigi

Hi Luigi, thanks for your comments! I am actually not a kiwi (not yet) but been living here for almost ten years now.. My children are kiwi though.. Yes, we love exploring the outdoors around! So why not to share our experience right? ;) Love your page as well! Will definitely follow, maybe I get into playing again..
Have a great day
MArtina

Thanks Martina, I was born in Holland but have my NZ citizenship. Yes! Start playing again, it's good for the kids too, music is a family affair:)
Luigi

I loved your website those videos of the babies was very interesting and that is a really good reason to get a baby monitor. My only suggestion is that could you make the production description bigger?

What exactly do you mean make it bigger? Do you mean you would like to have more details on the product itself, features, etc?

Like the font bigger when you were talking about There Are Some Minor Issues With This Monitor and went and gave us the information on it.

Oh that is an image and is why it is so small. I tried to make that image bigger, but had some issues with getting it to be larger. I will work on that again. Hopefully I can get it to work. Thank you!

You welcome and thank you for you feedback as well.

Great site Kristen and what a good idea to set up a forum. I might have a think about that in the future too.
I like your bio and agree, they never stop being your kids. You never stop helping and guiding them or worrying a little about them:)
My site is https://guitaraccessories.org/ and I'd welcome any feedback thanks
Luigi

Luigi,

I absolutely have no constructive critics for you because your site looks fantastic. It looks clean and easy to read and find what you are looking for. I actually bookmarked it for my son who has decided that he would like to start playing the guitar.

Thanks so much Kristen. If you don't rent a guitar for your son (often they decide they don't want to again so it is a good idea), don't buy a cheap 'learners' guitar as I said in one of the articles, they are almost always terrible and put a lot of learners off.