It's called "we are mirror of each other ...". Your feedback would be much appreciated. Thanks a lot!
Ok, now I understand your question...:-)
I thought you literally wanted to say: "can you read my blog" and not "is my blog text understandable"... ;-)
Because I clicked on your blog and saw the text, but I did not read it at that point...
Now I have read it.... Well, I have to say, it is not an "easy to read" text in all several ways...
I am not native English myself, I live maybe very close to you.
I am from the Flemish part of Belgium...
So, I did not understand everything you wrote, some words I did not know and the structure of your sentences is also wrong on places....
You can see you have used google translate. ;-)
I would not expect a lot of reaction on this blog for 2 reasons, indeed it is badly written, but it is only by exercise that you will improve, so please, keep writing blogs and communicate with everybody on this platform, everybody understands how difficult it can be when English is not your native language.
The second reason is: your text layout is not attractive, it looks like the layout of a book and people are not used to reading those things, we live in the world where you communicate in messages of 140 - 160 characters (Text message - Twitter).
But probably you did not have had this lesson yet...
So just follow the lessons, you will learn how to write an attractive text.
It is not difficult, but it is thru what they say: when I see a text like yours I am gone. (Did not know or realise this before those lessons)
And example (on this blog post I had good reactions about layout) After one month WA - some progress I also tried to answer you now in the way "it should be done"...
I hope you like my answer because I just want to inform you and not be critical or anything like that....
And again: Keep posting blogs, you will always get better at it...
Grtz,
Bert
As you can see I also make errors (I read my answer again and I see several things that are not correct.) but that's normal...
What I wanted to add is: I use the Grammarly extension in Chrome and that helps me a lot! Check www.grammarly.com.
You have a free and a paying version. I have the free one and it already helps me a lot, but I would like the paying version, but don't want to spend $130 (I think) for a year on it now...
Other and last tip: You can use google translate, but not for complete sentences... You always end with a wrong sentence, but to translate a word or 2 words it is perfect...
By the way, when you translate this sentence "Sometimes my English leaves a lot to be desired" to french with google translate you get: "Parfois, mon Anglais laisse beaucoup à désirer" (actually he translated the sentence really good) but I think that your initial sentence was something different?
If so: please let me know, cause I am a curious guy...
Bert, you are a tough critic :)
After reading your comment, I second guessed myself, and went back to read Fabien's post again.
I still enjoy it.
I do recognize how it is difficult for you to read.
Honestly, I don't know what to say.
Does grammarly.com rearrange sentences? In this case, even if it does, I don't think it would because there are minimal grammar mistakes in Fabien's post.
It is just awkward for you (Bert) to read, and that means, it is likely awkward for others to read too.
My suggestion to you, Fabien, is to take my words as great encouragement, and to also look closely at Bert's critisism.
I trust his judgement.
All the best!!
Val
Your Welcome and KrazyKat is correct: I can be a tough critic, but always with the best intentions...
I know Val, I can be... But that has it advantages also...
Regarding the Grammarly: The free version has his limitations, the premium version does it all...
And I am already happy with the free version, but know I decided I want the premium one and I have requested a free premium version... :-) I will see what happens...
You know that on an average blog that I send there are more then 20 things the premium version would change?
That's a lot!
But like most of the times I completely agree with your comment...
Grtz,
Bert
Bert, have you not see this free Grammar and Spelling Checker Link that is on my website? http://spellcheckplus.com/
Hello TA,
No, I did not.
And what I miss in those tools in is the integration with chrome...
But thanks for the tip!
Grtz,
Bert
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Is there anyone out there who could read and like my latest blog?
It's called "we are mirror of each other ...". Your feedback would be much appreciated. Thanks a lot!
Ok, now I understand your question...:-)
I thought you literally wanted to say: "can you read my blog" and not "is my blog text understandable"... ;-)
Because I clicked on your blog and saw the text, but I did not read it at that point...
Now I have read it.... Well, I have to say, it is not an "easy to read" text in all several ways...
I am not native English myself, I live maybe very close to you.
I am from the Flemish part of Belgium...
So, I did not understand everything you wrote, some words I did not know and the structure of your sentences is also wrong on places....
You can see you have used google translate. ;-)
I would not expect a lot of reaction on this blog for 2 reasons, indeed it is badly written, but it is only by exercise that you will improve, so please, keep writing blogs and communicate with everybody on this platform, everybody understands how difficult it can be when English is not your native language.
The second reason is: your text layout is not attractive, it looks like the layout of a book and people are not used to reading those things, we live in the world where you communicate in messages of 140 - 160 characters (Text message - Twitter).
But probably you did not have had this lesson yet...
So just follow the lessons, you will learn how to write an attractive text.
It is not difficult, but it is thru what they say: when I see a text like yours I am gone. (Did not know or realise this before those lessons)
And example (on this blog post I had good reactions about layout) After one month WA - some progress I also tried to answer you now in the way "it should be done"...
I hope you like my answer because I just want to inform you and not be critical or anything like that....
And again: Keep posting blogs, you will always get better at it...
Grtz,
Bert
As you can see I also make errors (I read my answer again and I see several things that are not correct.) but that's normal...
What I wanted to add is: I use the Grammarly extension in Chrome and that helps me a lot! Check www.grammarly.com.
You have a free and a paying version. I have the free one and it already helps me a lot, but I would like the paying version, but don't want to spend $130 (I think) for a year on it now...
Other and last tip: You can use google translate, but not for complete sentences... You always end with a wrong sentence, but to translate a word or 2 words it is perfect...
By the way, when you translate this sentence "Sometimes my English leaves a lot to be desired" to french with google translate you get: "Parfois, mon Anglais laisse beaucoup à désirer" (actually he translated the sentence really good) but I think that your initial sentence was something different?
If so: please let me know, cause I am a curious guy...
Bert, you are a tough critic :)
After reading your comment, I second guessed myself, and went back to read Fabien's post again.
I still enjoy it.
I do recognize how it is difficult for you to read.
Honestly, I don't know what to say.
Does grammarly.com rearrange sentences? In this case, even if it does, I don't think it would because there are minimal grammar mistakes in Fabien's post.
It is just awkward for you (Bert) to read, and that means, it is likely awkward for others to read too.
My suggestion to you, Fabien, is to take my words as great encouragement, and to also look closely at Bert's critisism.
I trust his judgement.
All the best!!
Val
Your Welcome and KrazyKat is correct: I can be a tough critic, but always with the best intentions...
I know Val, I can be... But that has it advantages also...
Regarding the Grammarly: The free version has his limitations, the premium version does it all...
And I am already happy with the free version, but know I decided I want the premium one and I have requested a free premium version... :-) I will see what happens...
You know that on an average blog that I send there are more then 20 things the premium version would change?
That's a lot!
But like most of the times I completely agree with your comment...
Grtz,
Bert
Bert, have you not see this free Grammar and Spelling Checker Link that is on my website? http://spellcheckplus.com/
Hello TA,
No, I did not.
And what I miss in those tools in is the integration with chrome...
But thanks for the tip!
Grtz,
Bert
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Has anyone had much experience with Traffic Monsoon? I am promoting WA through it and it is thanks to TM, I signed up on WA. Because of the various WA banners on the site and a
I don't promote SCAM COMPANIES LIKE TRAFFIC MONSOON . WHY? I HOPE NOBODY JOIN THIS COMPANY ANYMORE IT WILL COLLAPSE SOON.
READ HERE WHO THE OWNER IS:
Trafficmonsoon is owned by Charles Scoville, a serial scammer responsible for few closed scam sites including: Infinitybux.com, BuxSecure.com, TviPtc.com, Powerfulbux.com, Foreverbux.com, BuxUnleashed.com, Banrev.com, Ultimatepowerboost.com, Wealthenginex.com, ULaunchFormula.com. These sites are dead, gone, no longer online, improperly closed down without paying out pending and current balances. I was member on most of these sites and I remember very well how they ended. Few hundred thousands members remember too. Few months ago Charles Scoville launched Trafficmonsoon, another investment scheme of his. We do not endorse or promote sites managed by previous scammers, thus we wouldn’t recommend Trafficmonsoon. This is our principle. We don’t support serial scammers. There is no 6th, 7th or 10th chance for past scammers. By giving them another chance you are just allowing them to scam you again. Anyway it is your choice and you should decide for yourself whether it is worth or not. We give warnings, it is up to you to decide whether to listen or ignore our warnings.
TRAFFIC MONSOON WILL GIVE TO JOIN FOR FREE AND YOU HAVE TO CLICK OR WATCH ADVERTISING FOR MANY HOURS TO GET 00000001 MONEY UNTIL YOU GET INVOLVED INVESTING MONEY FOR MONEY . IT WILL CLOSED SOON BECAUSE I SEE MANY OF THEIR HEAD LEADERS OF TRAFFIC MONSOON JOINING ANOTHER FRESH COMPANY .
To answer your question here is the true answer on how TM works...
Do not get it mixed up with any pyramid schemes or other often illegal business...
I hope the quoted paragraphs below help you to understand and please feel free to PM me for more info and help...
FAQ (From TM site) :
2. Is TrafficMonsoon a hyip, ponzi, pyramid scheme, or illegal?
No, this is not an investment site nor is it illegal in any way, shape, or form.
We sell ad services.
TrafficMonsoon offers quite a lot of advertising services of the highest possible quality, and delivers them quickly.
When people buy these services, the revenues are held by the company.
When you buy an adpack and receive 1000 visitors to your website, and 20 clicks on your banner advertisement -- you'll also receive a sharing position.
By clicking a minimum of 10 ads in a day, you qualify to receive share in the revenues generated from sales of services.
This isn't a cycle, and there's no time frame affixed, nor guaranteed, because it's completely related to the revenues generated from the sales of services.
(first sales of services generate revenues, then they are shared)
You'll receive 10% commissions when someone you refer buys a true and legitimate advertising service.
3 How do I make money with TrafficMonsoon?
Think of Traffic Monsoon as a traffic exchange mixed with a paid-to-click site.
But instead of rental referrals, we have adpacks that give ad service + sharing positions that share up to $55 .. You must click at least 10 ads in the traffic exchange to qualify for referral click earnings & sharing each day.. Qualifying lasts 24 hours, just like needing to qualify for referral clicks & rental earnings on a paid-to-click.
Some have wondered--- can earning on a paid-to-click site be profitable? If so, how?
More referrals will be more money for you.
10 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 30 days = $30 from your referral clicks
10 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 365 days = $365 from your referral clicks
500 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 30 days = $1,500 from your referral clicks
500 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 365 days = $18,250 from your referral clicks
1000 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 30 days = $3,000 from your referral clicks
1000 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 365 days = $36,500 from your referral clicks
This is not a guarantee of income, but an example of what you can earn by referring new members to Traffic Monsoon who click on cash links.
There are really 4 opportunities to earn with traffic monsoon.
-- paid to click
-- using ad services to generate leads to make money in your primary business
-- revenue sharing
-- direct sales commissions
Each one can be your main focus, or all of them. Naturally, the more you utilize all 4 of these ways to earn money, the more you'll earn.
You'll receive 10% commissions from all your referral purchases, except for cash link purchases. There's no commissions from cash link purchases, because all the money from those purchases are divided up to be rewarded to clickers and the sponsor of the clicker.
(SOURCE: TM WEBSITE)
If anyone would like more info on TM, or wants one to one questions answering, please do not hesitate to ask,
I have been using it for a little while now as well as other friends and associates, I have helped teach them the ropes and I even have an info pack available to those that are serious about joining,
You can view my profile and see my website which is a landing page for those to view, fill out and request information about this long term life shanging experience!
You can earn money while gaining traffic to your sites, So easy to do once setup and I promise for support the whole time your a part of it.
I look forward to helping anyone out and to make a decision for yourself.
Best Regards,
Bryan
Thanks Brian, I have been using the service since August. My sponsor loves me. He's earning daily commission of over $400. Yes every single day! As for me well, I haven't looked back. I love it! The support I've had from our team and our "secret" group on Facebook has been astonishing!
I'll be honest, i signed up on the CHANCE of getting things done... I've found out... it's a LONG TERM project. Capable of making money YES! Absolutely... But... If you're like me in my current circumstance... I spent the $20 to buy premium, and it's more beneficial for me to cancel my transactions monthly for $40 for one month than to pay the subscription until i make money. Just because... Unemployed, Divorce + Lawyer fees... Something's gotta give and this isn't a priority atm. it's a matter of time and a waiting game. eventually you win, the question is... are you at a point in life where you can wait on that?
I'm considering joining TM but I haven't decided what I think of it. I'm excited by the prospect of the website just as I was with Wealthy Affiliate but I see more risk associated with it, but only if people leave the site drastically. As long as people continue to join and the members who are there remain in the community of TM it seems to me a good earning for all those involved as well as a great help to promoting one's business.
Some things I would consider good to keep in mind is that the traffic you would receive would really be best traffic to "The Make Money Niche" but after thinking about it, I realize that out 1000 people even in other niches you are bound to find one person who strikes a cord with your content, especially if its a more popular niche.
I don't think its a MLM I believe its a PTC + revenue share website just as jude said.
Thanks for the starting this discussion. :)
TM is a great system. I measured the pros and the cons ... I love it and it is thanks to TM once again I signed up to WA and thus my sponsor (whoever that might be???) has pocketed $175 on the back of my yearly subscription! Not to mention he will get it every year! Not bad for a little banner which must have taken barely 2 minutes to set up!
It is a revenue sharing paid to click site. However, many reviewers are calling it a ponzi scheme operated by a serial scammer who has had at least ten sites shut down due to unsustainability.
I hope for your sake he got it right this time.
"Hundreds of hits" is a mere drop in the ocean when it comes to traffic. ~Jude
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Would you consider traffic monsoon a mlm?
Has anyone had much experience with Traffic Monsoon? I am promoting WA through it and it is thanks to TM, I signed up on WA. Because of the various WA banners on the site and a
I don't promote SCAM COMPANIES LIKE TRAFFIC MONSOON . WHY? I HOPE NOBODY JOIN THIS COMPANY ANYMORE IT WILL COLLAPSE SOON.
READ HERE WHO THE OWNER IS:
Trafficmonsoon is owned by Charles Scoville, a serial scammer responsible for few closed scam sites including: Infinitybux.com, BuxSecure.com, TviPtc.com, Powerfulbux.com, Foreverbux.com, BuxUnleashed.com, Banrev.com, Ultimatepowerboost.com, Wealthenginex.com, ULaunchFormula.com. These sites are dead, gone, no longer online, improperly closed down without paying out pending and current balances. I was member on most of these sites and I remember very well how they ended. Few hundred thousands members remember too. Few months ago Charles Scoville launched Trafficmonsoon, another investment scheme of his. We do not endorse or promote sites managed by previous scammers, thus we wouldn’t recommend Trafficmonsoon. This is our principle. We don’t support serial scammers. There is no 6th, 7th or 10th chance for past scammers. By giving them another chance you are just allowing them to scam you again. Anyway it is your choice and you should decide for yourself whether it is worth or not. We give warnings, it is up to you to decide whether to listen or ignore our warnings.
TRAFFIC MONSOON WILL GIVE TO JOIN FOR FREE AND YOU HAVE TO CLICK OR WATCH ADVERTISING FOR MANY HOURS TO GET 00000001 MONEY UNTIL YOU GET INVOLVED INVESTING MONEY FOR MONEY . IT WILL CLOSED SOON BECAUSE I SEE MANY OF THEIR HEAD LEADERS OF TRAFFIC MONSOON JOINING ANOTHER FRESH COMPANY .
To answer your question here is the true answer on how TM works...
Do not get it mixed up with any pyramid schemes or other often illegal business...
I hope the quoted paragraphs below help you to understand and please feel free to PM me for more info and help...
FAQ (From TM site) :
2. Is TrafficMonsoon a hyip, ponzi, pyramid scheme, or illegal?
No, this is not an investment site nor is it illegal in any way, shape, or form.
We sell ad services.
TrafficMonsoon offers quite a lot of advertising services of the highest possible quality, and delivers them quickly.
When people buy these services, the revenues are held by the company.
When you buy an adpack and receive 1000 visitors to your website, and 20 clicks on your banner advertisement -- you'll also receive a sharing position.
By clicking a minimum of 10 ads in a day, you qualify to receive share in the revenues generated from sales of services.
This isn't a cycle, and there's no time frame affixed, nor guaranteed, because it's completely related to the revenues generated from the sales of services.
(first sales of services generate revenues, then they are shared)
You'll receive 10% commissions when someone you refer buys a true and legitimate advertising service.
3 How do I make money with TrafficMonsoon?
Think of Traffic Monsoon as a traffic exchange mixed with a paid-to-click site.
But instead of rental referrals, we have adpacks that give ad service + sharing positions that share up to $55 .. You must click at least 10 ads in the traffic exchange to qualify for referral click earnings & sharing each day.. Qualifying lasts 24 hours, just like needing to qualify for referral clicks & rental earnings on a paid-to-click.
Some have wondered--- can earning on a paid-to-click site be profitable? If so, how?
More referrals will be more money for you.
10 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 30 days = $30 from your referral clicks
10 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 365 days = $365 from your referral clicks
500 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 30 days = $1,500 from your referral clicks
500 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 365 days = $18,250 from your referral clicks
1000 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 30 days = $3,000 from your referral clicks
1000 referrals X $0.10 earnings from cash links X 365 days = $36,500 from your referral clicks
This is not a guarantee of income, but an example of what you can earn by referring new members to Traffic Monsoon who click on cash links.
There are really 4 opportunities to earn with traffic monsoon.
-- paid to click
-- using ad services to generate leads to make money in your primary business
-- revenue sharing
-- direct sales commissions
Each one can be your main focus, or all of them. Naturally, the more you utilize all 4 of these ways to earn money, the more you'll earn.
You'll receive 10% commissions from all your referral purchases, except for cash link purchases. There's no commissions from cash link purchases, because all the money from those purchases are divided up to be rewarded to clickers and the sponsor of the clicker.
(SOURCE: TM WEBSITE)
If anyone would like more info on TM, or wants one to one questions answering, please do not hesitate to ask,
I have been using it for a little while now as well as other friends and associates, I have helped teach them the ropes and I even have an info pack available to those that are serious about joining,
You can view my profile and see my website which is a landing page for those to view, fill out and request information about this long term life shanging experience!
You can earn money while gaining traffic to your sites, So easy to do once setup and I promise for support the whole time your a part of it.
I look forward to helping anyone out and to make a decision for yourself.
Best Regards,
Bryan
Thanks Brian, I have been using the service since August. My sponsor loves me. He's earning daily commission of over $400. Yes every single day! As for me well, I haven't looked back. I love it! The support I've had from our team and our "secret" group on Facebook has been astonishing!
I'll be honest, i signed up on the CHANCE of getting things done... I've found out... it's a LONG TERM project. Capable of making money YES! Absolutely... But... If you're like me in my current circumstance... I spent the $20 to buy premium, and it's more beneficial for me to cancel my transactions monthly for $40 for one month than to pay the subscription until i make money. Just because... Unemployed, Divorce + Lawyer fees... Something's gotta give and this isn't a priority atm. it's a matter of time and a waiting game. eventually you win, the question is... are you at a point in life where you can wait on that?
I'm considering joining TM but I haven't decided what I think of it. I'm excited by the prospect of the website just as I was with Wealthy Affiliate but I see more risk associated with it, but only if people leave the site drastically. As long as people continue to join and the members who are there remain in the community of TM it seems to me a good earning for all those involved as well as a great help to promoting one's business.
Some things I would consider good to keep in mind is that the traffic you would receive would really be best traffic to "The Make Money Niche" but after thinking about it, I realize that out 1000 people even in other niches you are bound to find one person who strikes a cord with your content, especially if its a more popular niche.
I don't think its a MLM I believe its a PTC + revenue share website just as jude said.
Thanks for the starting this discussion. :)
TM is a great system. I measured the pros and the cons ... I love it and it is thanks to TM once again I signed up to WA and thus my sponsor (whoever that might be???) has pocketed $175 on the back of my yearly subscription! Not to mention he will get it every year! Not bad for a little banner which must have taken barely 2 minutes to set up!
It is a revenue sharing paid to click site. However, many reviewers are calling it a ponzi scheme operated by a serial scammer who has had at least ten sites shut down due to unsustainability.
I hope for your sake he got it right this time.
"Hundreds of hits" is a mere drop in the ocean when it comes to traffic. ~Jude
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I am driving Traffic to WA. I was wondering if there was a place on WA where I can see the stats? Thanks!
That's awesome. Thank you honey. Had hundreds of clicks but not one yet have resulted in a single sale. I am patient as it is thanks to this traffic generator site I joined WA. :-)
:) that would be a great sign for your success in the coming days-weeks-month and year :). Good luck.
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How popular is my landing page?
I am driving Traffic to WA. I was wondering if there was a place on WA where I can see the stats? Thanks!
That's awesome. Thank you honey. Had hundreds of clicks but not one yet have resulted in a single sale. I am patient as it is thanks to this traffic generator site I joined WA. :-)
:) that would be a great sign for your success in the coming days-weeks-month and year :). Good luck.
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Just wondering if there are some banners for WA with url I could use for my traffic generator website? I came across WA thanks to it. It is a very powerful site and would love
hi, welcome and congrats for stepping up as a premium member.
you can find your WA URL banner, in the top of your profile click the airplane icon and go to BANNER.
Hope it helps you. good luck looking forward for your progress.
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Are there any banners with an url and different size format?
Just wondering if there are some banners for WA with url I could use for my traffic generator website? I came across WA thanks to it. It is a very powerful site and would love
hi, welcome and congrats for stepping up as a premium member.
you can find your WA URL banner, in the top of your profile click the airplane icon and go to BANNER.
Hope it helps you. good luck looking forward for your progress.
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I read and enjoyed it. I would not have known that English is not your first language :)
How kind of you! Thank you so much!!!