Hi. Kyle has written this https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/training/how-to-create-an-about-me-page

Your about me page is fine, what I would say is this though, your first posts talk about you and not your readers, I would put your second post first because people want there problems solved don't start a site just talking about you, start your site empathizing with your readers it will draw them in because they are in pain and they want someone to say "I get you pain"
Lots of people think that they have to tell their life story's to get trust, you don't need to, but you do need to offer simple and effective solutions, and do it on the first page because you only have 8 seconds to keep someone on you site and if they don't see a solution to their pain, in that time they will leave your site

Barry

Hi, this may help :-) BIS is awesome, if you haven't already followd and read some of her blogs you should :-)

https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/bis/blog/mistakes-to-avoid-on-your-about-page

It is a good about me page, the only problem is that it's more of a WA promotional page than it is about credit repair.
What do you know about credit repair and why should a reader trust your advise about that? That's what readers are thinking when they look at an about me page.
That doesn't mean you should throw the whole thing out, but maybe you could find a way to write about credit repair and WHY you created a site on that subject.
I hope I don't seem to critical here, you are doing a great job so far :)

Hey Danica looks good to me! Just change "hear" at end of paragraph one to "here". May want to consider adding a profile pic like you have here. Hope this helps. ~Joe

I think it is excellent. You do have some typos. Just put whatever you feel is your true authentic self and don't over think it.

Third paragraph should be, "that they cover" You missed a "y" there as it is. Otherwise looks pretty good. If anything just maybe a little more about who you are and what your likes are.