About bobbyacim
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I. T. professional who was looking to leave the "Rat Race" many years ago. Discovered day trading futures about 7 years ago. Thought to

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Dear fellow W.A. members,
Recently recorded over 30 videos relating to a day trading product I have yet to release. I received over 1000 views within the last 60 days howev

I think my main critique for the video is that it jumps in too fast. I'm not sure who your audience is.

You say it's a "day trading winning strategy", but personally, I have no idea what's going on.

Are you teaching experienced people? Are you teaching newbies? How did you navigate to that screen?

You could probably make 10 videos just showing how to get to your current screen! Then 20 more explaining the terms and the charts you used.

This needs way more detail for newbies, probably separated into individual videos for each major step.

If your audience is experienced people, then your video SEO needs to reach out to them better. WHAT are you teaching, other than just "how to make money". Experienced people will want to know how this is not a scam, and will be looking for specific reasons to watch the video. Hope this helps Robert!

Hey Robert,

There are two areas here at WA where you can ask for feedback.
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Critique my video please, I actually don't know whats wrong?

Critique my video please, I actually don't know whats wrong?

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Dear fellow W.A. members,
Recently recorded over 30 videos relating to a day trading product I have yet to release. I received over 1000 views within the last 60 days howev

I think my main critique for the video is that it jumps in too fast. I'm not sure who your audience is.

You say it's a "day trading winning strategy", but personally, I have no idea what's going on.

Are you teaching experienced people? Are you teaching newbies? How did you navigate to that screen?

You could probably make 10 videos just showing how to get to your current screen! Then 20 more explaining the terms and the charts you used.

This needs way more detail for newbies, probably separated into individual videos for each major step.

If your audience is experienced people, then your video SEO needs to reach out to them better. WHAT are you teaching, other than just "how to make money". Experienced people will want to know how this is not a scam, and will be looking for specific reasons to watch the video. Hope this helps Robert!

Hey Robert,

There are two areas here at WA where you can ask for feedback.
1.) 2.) https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/website-feedback see screen print below to see how you can readily access this option.

Hope you find this helpful.

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