I have completed my website could I get someone to look at it? Tell me what you think?
hey Bradley, I would suggest you break up some of your content in the pages into shorter paragraphs.
To be honest with you...when I was going through your site...i skimmed through the material when I saw the long paragraphs. Shorter paragraphs will get read more often. This will be the same thinking to your visitors as well.
A little confused though...the about me page says your name is "Michelle" with 5 children, but your WA profile says your name is "Bradley" with 6 children. Could be a site you made for your wife or just used her name...either way not my business ;).
Other than that...great site.
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Need someone to tell what they think?
I have completed my website could I get someone to look at it? Tell me what you think?
hey Bradley, I would suggest you break up some of your content in the pages into shorter paragraphs.
To be honest with you...when I was going through your site...i skimmed through the material when I saw the long paragraphs. Shorter paragraphs will get read more often. This will be the same thinking to your visitors as well.
A little confused though...the about me page says your name is "Michelle" with 5 children, but your WA profile says your name is "Bradley" with 6 children. Could be a site you made for your wife or just used her name...either way not my business ;).
Other than that...great site.
You can also always post here to get feed back on your sites and posts as well as share feed back for others. It's very active.
https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/authoring-writing-content/the-give-and-take-comment-thread-get-website-engagement
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the right side of my site is missing
Is it anything to do with your theme, ie your page width isn't enough to take the full astore. Can you give us your link to take a look please?
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Half my astore is missing what should i do??
the right side of my site is missing
Is it anything to do with your theme, ie your page width isn't enough to take the full astore. Can you give us your link to take a look please?
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left a comment on your site all the best