Ive looked at Kyle's about me but I have no history in this area so is there a formula that comes across with similar effect without selling too much

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MarineMom Premium
Here are additional suggestions--You can also check out other people's sites to get ideas....Good luck!

What you put in your "About Me" page?
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TerrBarr Premium
Thanks MarineMom
I have concocted something to start with. I like that article and will change mine to be more like his with a story
What I came up with so far.
http://havingfunhelpingpeople.com/the-goss-on-terry
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tradert Premium
You want to come across as personable,and an expert on the subject matter. Research whatever it is you're writing about, but be yourself in your delivery. And don't worry about coming across as selling. As long as you are providing valuable information that assists the reader with whatever problem he/she is having, you'll be fine. Emphasize the solution, not the product. Your readers understand that you sell things for a living. They will respond as long as you make your content about their needs and not your profits.
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TerrBarr Premium
Thanks trader, I went away and wrote my ideas on paper then came back not anything like kyle's but maybe different Here it is if you want to give feedback
All feedback is welcome
http://havingfunhelpingpeople.com/the-goss-on-terry
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Sis Premium
sight is looking good. it has clean lines and you come across as personable. You need to fill in the blanks now. It needs more content. You talk about several generalities like helping people. Dial those down to specifics in some posts, keep going your doing good.
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Tungsten Premium
Hi Terry, great to meet you, you have made a great decision going premium, it's a whole new ballgame. There is no formula for an about
me page that I know of. I read you profile and you seem to have so much you could write about, you have many interests, you have a passion for helping people, just wright about yourself, what you have achieved just keep writing what comes into your mind and edit it after, add a couple of photos of you or your passion, Good luck, Allen.
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TerrBarr Premium
Thanks Allen. Not familiar with this it is like bragging. Been thinking and will apply the Husband (How) and his 4 wives ( What where When and Why) this way I can have a little structure.
Thanks again for your support.
Cheers
Terry
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