Hey guys! so i did my first about me page and was hoping i can get some feed back from a few of you. please inform me of any change i should make or just your opinion...not afraid of positive criticism so please be honest as it will only help me...thanks :)

www.thebiblestudycafe.com

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nomda ploom Premium
clean, and simple theme- ensure that your images either contrast or complement, but the main thing is just to add content.
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RafiShachar Premium
Okay. That's better. I just read over the first paragraph. I also love that portion of the Bible. We sing it every friday night to our wives at the Sabbath dinner table before we start the meal.

Anyway, It all looks very well written, from the heart, compelling.

I saw a few typos:
becoming more advance (should be advanced)
and young adolescences (I think should be adolescents)

Good luck to you and continue to inspire!
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CharlotteH39 Premium
thank you Rafi for your feedback
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Gordi Premium
I really don't see any story about you on that page. Maybe it's too soon to bring it up for a review? Left you a private message
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CharlotteH39 Premium
sorry Rafi, i forgot the word "the"...lol
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RafiShachar Premium
I don't see an about me page. I see Steven Delaney Kendall's page.
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Gordi Premium
Me too Rafi. Is Kendall an author?
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